God imagine if you could have done this between the ages of 6-11 while you were still watching these cartoons.https://imgur.com/a/z9GdhTzDoes anyone wish me to continue working on new panels and improve these existing backgrounds to be properly detailed?Leave suggestions for Fiona's backstory, background, parents, etc. since it isn't finalized. Except for the rollercoaster part - that stays.I already did what I wanted for myself and I have all my ideas vividly in my head, anything else is for others to enjoy.>What are your ideas and torn ups?1.2.3.Read in the next post if you want to>Anon: Naaah too lazy[Insert snappy kneejerk statement to activate your neurons]/co/ is love. :^) /co/ can't write. /co/ sucks their own /co/ck. :D Star Wars sequels weren't so bad, but a Pod Racing series would have been better./co/'s Weekly Creation thread is just as bad as modern DC & Marvel. You heard me.There are people out there saying Tartakovsky Grievous isn't the best Grevious, guess which "people" I am. And Animaniacs? It's actually funny unlike Tiny Toons.
1. Making her parents ground her seems counterintuitive to her backstory. So I can just refer to something else by "grounding" or just remove it.2. I want to give her more bite and give her a Swat Kats rivarly complete with backtalking, but if not written properly it just makes her look like a dick I mean a bitch, just like Jake & Chance look like they're ready to tear each other apart judging by their expressions if you're new to the series. The original Kid Vs Kat Fiona was a very charming character by not being a girlboss and ironically was what I call a fake mary sue. I'm thinking option A & option B: Option A: Murphy slips and falls and Fiona grabs him with a smile DURING the competition. Option B: Fiona grabs him before the competition even begins and gives a snide remark that she can't babysit her rivals, which makes her look like a bitch, but at the same time you understand pro of it, right?3. I leveled up Murphy, it's probably the most masculine and "cool" he's ever been.Unlike most folk I realize how much of a pain it is to write and come up with stuff. 50% of it is dead-easy and 50% is hard as hell if you don't know what you're doing. That's why ironically you'd best want to keep your nebulous ideas in your head unless you really are working on something people are going to see including yourself.The rollercoaster one was inspired by Mitzi's backstory. So ironically I followed a "guideline" when coming up with what I consider the good idea. Cliches are good if they're not gimmicks(trying to stand by themselves), it's why people use them in storytelling.
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