Also a Black Cat Thread>Why yes, it's another issue of the hottest Superheroine you know saving the day!
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Where's her sidekick?
Aww wtf I thought this was gonna be the actual classic ones
>>154716089Nice.There's a part of me that sees Black Cat as a noir-ish vigilante busting nazi skulls, but this cartoony approach is fun too.
>>154716377It's not that type>>154716392Sorry, it's a black Cat thread. Please feel free to post your favorite comic of her.>>154716432Thanks! Like a realistic take done by a render have artist? It would definitely look cool, but you need to have a visual striking Nazi villain. I wanted to test out how people respond to a more cartoonish approach to superheroes. Thanks again.
>>154716089Still needs a lot of work, but it's nice to see you actually completing a comic.
>>154716678Feels like a reimagining of Black Cat by way of the Fleischers. Great work anon! Maybe we should share more of our efforts on /co/. I'll repost my Superman thing in the other thread if you're curious.
OP's comic brought Femforce to mind again. Couldnt help but wonder how a Phantom Lady and Black Cat team up might go as a result.
>>154717203Hey, thanks for reading it. If you have any advice on improving, always looking to get feedback.>>154717374Exactly, I was going for a more animated take on heroes! I'll head over and check it out!>>154717407I read couple issues of Femforce back I the day. Colt was my favorite from the group. A team up has potential. You can never have enough beautiful women teams so it's something to think about.
>>154715927very cute
>>154715927>INSTITUE Typo?You have the right idea with the curves, but you should grind on your anatomy a bit more, then increase voluptuousness and exaggerate contours. The legs look a bit off, like they're broken below the hip.I don't think that background color works either.>>154715939Again, anatomy needs work. You shouldn't have her right foot floating like that. Either bring it flush with the ground, or prop it against something, or make the hovering action more pronounced.Street light beam should be more conical.Bricks may be a tad large and far apart on that wall.>>154715975While the first panel seems unnecessary, you will need to make it clearer that the shadowy figure is headed up the ladder. You could probably just start this page with the second panel. The third panel is a little weird. I think she's too far from the wall for the next panel to make sense.I like her hunting cat expression in the middle panel, but his fear should maybe be more apparent.
>>154716004Her speedlines in the middle panel don't make much sense, and the next panel, he looks too small.You may want to show the skylight more on the final panel, since the action follows into the next page through the skylight.>>154716070You should probably show them falling into the building in the same space as the broken skylight, instead of the glass shard panel (neat idea) right away.>>154716089Overall, you should grind your fundamentals more, practice perspective and fight choreography more.Keep it up, man.
>>154716089great stuff keep it up
