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My first thread here.
I did this commission for a guy on the other side of the country, but I feel like it's still missing a few details.
He loved it, but what do you think I could add?
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>>154716249
Looks good to me. What do you think is missing?
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>>154716249
Anatomically it's fine. Perhaps a bit more muscles on the scapula? The vein also looks a bit flat, like it's not following the muscle contour.

Other than that it's, fine.
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>>154716249
>He loved it
It's good you want to learn to improve, but I'd say that's cased closed if that's the case.

Still, unless the guy insisted it be plane as possible, I think Bane's expression could use something. Not his facial features, it's fine not to exaggerate those under a mask, it's what they're for, but he seems to just be staring off.
Maybe could have shown him holding and looking at an empty Batcowl or a snapped in half Batarang in his left hand?

I'd even go overboard and put a little Bird, Caveman head, and Zombie head in the corners to reference Bird, Trogg and Zombie.
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>>154716249
A solid color background would have been better than this blurpaint
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>>154716249
Neat, you have any socials?
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>>154716249
How much did you get?
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Give him some dark blue veins popping from his arms and neck.
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Pretty good use of colors. I like the texturing for the Venom.
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>>154716249
Legs
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Something extremely painfull
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>>154716249
make him bigger



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