My first thread here.I did this commission for a guy on the other side of the country, but I feel like it's still missing a few details.He loved it, but what do you think I could add?
>>154716249Looks good to me. What do you think is missing?
>>154716249Anatomically it's fine. Perhaps a bit more muscles on the scapula? The vein also looks a bit flat, like it's not following the muscle contour. Other than that it's, fine.
>>154716249>He loved itIt's good you want to learn to improve, but I'd say that's cased closed if that's the case.Still, unless the guy insisted it be plane as possible, I think Bane's expression could use something. Not his facial features, it's fine not to exaggerate those under a mask, it's what they're for, but he seems to just be staring off.Maybe could have shown him holding and looking at an empty Batcowl or a snapped in half Batarang in his left hand?I'd even go overboard and put a little Bird, Caveman head, and Zombie head in the corners to reference Bird, Trogg and Zombie.
>>154716249A solid color background would have been better than this blurpaint
>>154716249Neat, you have any socials?
>>154716249How much did you get?
Give him some dark blue veins popping from his arms and neck.
Pretty good use of colors. I like the texturing for the Venom.
>>154716249Legs
Something extremely painfull
>>154716249make him bigger