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You see this at the bus stop, what do you do?

>>154809704
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I love Jax
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Read 57 Measures of Restraint
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>>154818098

OC Anchor

whiteboard
https://r9.whiteboardfox.com/96304136-6287-3128
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/co/llection
https://co.llection.pics/post/list/the_amazing_digital_circus
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NSFW thread:
>>>/trash/84216459
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>>154818098
Daaaaaaammmmmmmmn Abigailadventures57 looks like that?!
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>multiple people improving themselves over Ragatha and one for Jobby
That's comforting actually
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I WANNA FUCK GANGLE
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This was literally the whole fucking show
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>>154818114
Lovely!
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I love Jax
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>>154818101
>>154818193
No you don't
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Touching the rabbit without his permission
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>>154818199
fight me
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>>154818210
Don't peel him wtf
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>>154818165
>fucking ribbons that'll scratch up your dick
That wouldn't even make you cum it would just be extremely painful
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>>154818221
I'll tie the bitch up to a life sized sex doll and fuck that.
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>>154818229
These are such cool designs.
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>>154818236
The appearance of the abstracted pendantz spawned some cool fanarts
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>>154818098
Pomni doesn't look like that.
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>>154818178
I dont remember this bit, why are they Jewish here?
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>>154818362
Abigail doe--- well, maybe not exactly...
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I like Jax

power is still out
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Does any dark ass depressing fanfic exist that covers the idea of the other main characters abstracting? I like the idea of viewing their psyche and emotions when it happens.
And I can't write.
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>>154818221
>ribbons that'll scratch up your dick
when's the last time you felt a ribbon
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>>154818118
Request time! Ocs, ships, fetish shit whatever!
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>>154818373
Lois learned her mother's side of the family was Hebrew, Babs may or may not have been a Holocaust survivor.
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>>154818496
Jax like this but the wind is actually getting under his skin
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>>154818496
Gangle on the stupid sauce
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>>154818496
Ragatha chilling and listening to music
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>>154818496
A bit self indulgent but Evil Pomni punching Pomni in the stomach (preferably with them wearing baseball uniforms but if you'd prefer to do their jester outfits that's fine too)
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>>154818496
gangle and anon holding hands
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>>154818496
I request Pomni and Gangle being detectives.
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This is now a Gangle thread
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>>154818496
Pomni lying down on Jax with her big head, making him unable to move
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>>154818562
But..

but.....

I like Jax....
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>>154818496
This but with Jax and Pomni, it's funnier if Pomni's suit is ridiculously too big for her
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>>154818573
COMPLETE
GANGLE
DOMINATION
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>>154818537
That's what she gets for trying to make her remember
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>>154818581
Maybe we can compromise?
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>>154818562
>>154818581
Finally, a good fucking thread.
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Alright, I guess Gangle can have one thread. As a treat.
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GANGLE
GANGLE
GANGLE
GANGLE
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>won't kiss her when she's wearing her mask
>will only kiss her when she's showing her true emotions
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So...did Jax actually genuinely believe Gangle liked being bullied by him?
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>>154818622
Who~ knows!
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>>154818639
It's not even just the Jax-mind thing. He seems genuine in ep 5 when he says "What? She likes when I'm mean to her!"
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>>154818622
Probably his way of justifying it to himself, like how he saw Pomni as some pickme girl and Zooble as some psycho
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Ok fine, I'll post Gangle
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>>154818496
Jax drinking milk straight from the jug at 2AM illuminated under the fridge light, wearing only boxers shorts. Maybe with Pomni pissed off because it's her milk she conjured for cereal.
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>>154818667
Addendum to this anons request. Hearts on boxers.
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>>154818703
This anon here, I approve if it's not much trouble to draw.
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>>154818496
the ragathugs waiting in the ragatha mini episode waiting room
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>>154818496
Ragatha leading the ragathugs
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>Caine makes a karaoke adventure
>makes Jax and Pomni duet
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dpv5G0747V4
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>>154818178
Whats with the kippa on the back of stewies head?
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>>154818416
Sad
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tumblr is an amazing place
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>>154818820
An Amazing Digital place
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>>154818820
Would to both
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>>154818780
me on the middle left
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Thank you to the anon that recommended everything everywhere all at once, fantasic film
Whoever recommended the devils playhouse a while back I'm loving but savouring it
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>>154818841
have some self respect anon
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>>154818496
FemJax with huge boobs
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>>154818755
Why is the baby so cute
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>>154818927
Because of cute papa
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>>154818936
Good genes
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>>154818496
Pomni and Transjax covering Ragatha with kisses
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>>154818820
Gangle and Zooble irl.
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>>154818978
Yeah, that's why I posted it
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>>154818764
Day 10 soon brother, after that it'll be clear skies till the Ragatha mini ep then season then show
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>>154819032
I hate to say this but, we are going to GTA 6 before we get a Ragatha mini ep
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>>154818820
>>154819000
yeah ngl im glad this sort of interpretation was shot down
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>>154819067
Anon, talk like that could get you assassinated around here.
Ragathugs are always listening.
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>>154818496
Pomni walks in on Jax trying to suck his own dick
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>>154818496
>fetish shit whatever!
In that case, Jax in the maid dress tied to a chair, gagged and looking terrified, while Pomni is putting makeup on him
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>>154819191
ADDENDUM: he is succeeding due to cartoon physics and his lanky-ass body

heheheh
"succ"
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If you had a severe allergy to a food you loved, would you eat it in the digital circus since you can't die?
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>>154818098
Related to trans jax what is it about grown ass men that are so obsessed with lesbians in anime that they end up trooning out because of it, they consume so much yuri hentai and vns they want to be a cute girl too like how does that happen
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>>154818496
Skeletonjax choosing what to wear (his wardrobe is entirely identical purple rabbit skins with built-in overalls). Like a parody of the Ragatha pic you did but with skinnedjax
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>>154819191
>>154819210
This was not me.
Faggot.

I think he's likely to be successful, but do whatever is funniest
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>>154819221
Sounds like a chicken or the egg scenario. Did watching yurislop make them trans, or did their transness drive them towards yurislop?
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>>154818755
>Ugly zss bzby
>You're the pzrent btw
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>>154819221
Symptoms of a common cause (autism, fetishisation and obsession with femininity)
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>>154819219
I would consume copious amounts of hydrocodone and vodka just to see what happens.
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>>154819221
I like seeing a cute lesbian fictional couple every once and a while in media but I never once thought about actually being a cute anime girl irl and killing myself that I can’t be one, that’s just pure mental illness
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>>154819000
Does Zooble have body dysmorphia because they have prosthetics, or did they have body dysmorphia and then cut their limbs off?
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>>154818496
I already posted a request earlier but actually I just realised I wanna see you draw something funny with Kaufmo, if inspiration strikes you
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>>154818496
Dominatrix Pomni with a tied up Sub Jax
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>>154819161
the 'thugs need to hear the truth sometimes
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>>154819307
There's like 500 pics like that already
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>>154818496
Klaus Schwab forcing Ragatha to eat ze bugs (centipedes)
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>>154818496
Ragatha kissing Pomni while Bubble watches in excitement.
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We really need more drawfags to appropriately distribute demand
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Out of everyone in the circus, who do you think is the most racist?
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I know I'm late to the party, but Gangle is totally based on Kedamono from Popee the Performer, right? Maybe not personality but between the mask emotions and the nature of cgi themed circuses, I'd be surprised if this was entirely a coincidence.
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>>154819322
holy shit two cakes!
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>>154819221
There are generally two types of trans women. The medically/biologically trans ones who were born with a chemical imbalance in their brains that makes them think they are a woman trapped in a man’s body, which are fairly rare, the real 0.2%. Then the fetishists, which are much more common, who have a different set of mental illnesses which lead them to autistically fixate on “feminine” qualities and traits that express their sexual desires. They seek validation, which is why all of them are on twitter farming hate and likes, and posting their assholes and calling them pussies.
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>>154819360
I mean it's up to you anon, but I would have assumed that there might be something more specific/unique that you feel is underserviced rather than something you can already find on your own
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>>154819340
Jax. Caine cannot be racist, but that won't stop people from taking his data driven decision making on addressing the characters based on demographic statistics and treating him as racist, but he can't help that.
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>>154819340
Ribbit, because mormons
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>>154819340
Ragatha has strong opinions about blacks, Catholics and Jews.
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>>154819373
Oh I wasnt the requester I was just sayin like some people know what they want.
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>>154819340
Jax because of 4chan indoctrination, Ribbit because of Mormon indoctrination
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>>154819340
Jax, he is chud-coded.
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>>154818098
Who's that supposed to be?
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>>154819420
I can fix her about Catholicism
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>>154818134
>>154819445
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>>154819453
That doesn't answer anything
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>>154819221
I actually think this notion does more harm than good, it’s preaching as if men can’t like girly or feminine things without having to troon out which comes off groomery, instead of teaching them that they can be comfortable in their already existing gender and still be girly, this reminds me of Marco from Star vs.
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>>154819340
I like Hitler.
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>>154819340
Kinger is racist but only against white people
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>>154819426
I guess so
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>>154819464
I guess you'll just never know then
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>>154819470
Not true.
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>>154819467
The Namibian politician... right?
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>>154819431
..You think Mormons are racist? When the higher amount of members is South American and Pacific islanders?
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>>154819503
Whats Nambia?
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looliposting while in being driven around by my dad (were getting lunch, his treat)
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>>154819502
It’s incredible how many of my white supremacist friends have sent me dick pics and asked to fuck my brown ass
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>>154819555
Are you female?
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>>154819552
nambia balls
>vaporizes the rabbit
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>>154819555
How many white supremacist friends can you possibly have?
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>>154819555
it's called modern colonization
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to pry, or not to pry?
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>>154819591
look at the little tail wag!
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>>154819591
every single non-white you impregnate results in children that are increasingly less white, however white supremacists are too fucking stupid to realize that fucking anyone that isn't white is an active detriment to their proclaimed end goals
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>>154819514
Historically Mormonism is incredibly racist. Only until 1978 did they even allow blacks to enter temples and it was taught that black skin was a sign of a biblical curse. A lot of that has changed, but it is deeply rooted in racism against blacks.
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>>154819591
How can one clown personify sex so completely?
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>>154819608
This is why moids are beyond saving
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>>154819622
Actually racemixing damages the race that lives in that land and benefits the imported race.
If Whites were sending excess people around the world racemixing would benefit Whites instead.
Because its excess browns being sent here it damages Whites.
Racemixing is a weapon that hurts the side whos homeland it is.
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>>154819622
This problem fixes itself if you have more than one wife.
Also, how about sperm donation? You could have yourself a white wife and still breed brown chicks, and you don't even have to bother knowing them.
This is why it is okay for me to want to marry Ragatha, but still have Gangle on the side.
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>>154819646
You sound like one of my friends
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>>154819622
we will bleach the world
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>>154819625
Actually Black skin was considered cosmically neutral.
Whites sided with Jesus
Wolverine people sided with Lucifer
Blacks sat the whole thing out.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pgw-C_DTVo8
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If Jax had lived, TADC would be remembered fondly, not as a deeply flawed launch pad for fan works
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>>154819669
It sounds like your friend knows stuff.
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>>154819646
But you're not fucking them in their native lands right now.
Are you?
Unless you're gonna tell me you're posting from Africa right now or some shit.
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My power's back yay

Probably no SCM update tonight, and maybe not tomorrow but I'm gonna knock out a good chunk tonight and try to have it ready by Thursday
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>>154819555
I play a lot of assym games like dbd and tcm with women, American women particularly black ones will always message me telling me my accent melts them, a black one once requested a voice clip of me calling her my house nigger
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>>154819679
This is satire right? You people don't actually think thats what mormons believe right?
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>>154819703
I'm also not racemixing.
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>>154819679
Actual fucking gibberish
>>154819722
Hi Ribbit
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>>154819722
That is what mormons believe.
If you think thats crazy, check out scientology.
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>>154819622
It depends on the direction, but broadly I'd agree.
If your someone like that one french tourist dude who got like 500 africans pregnant though, you're skewing the demographics in a way that makes them incrementally more white. It's not really productive to any kind of supremacist end state though, because those people aren't going to identify as white or meet a reasonable criteria for whiteness
There's a lot of americans who are white passing and meet any reasonable definition of whiteness which can be scrutinized externally but are like 1/16th or 1/64th black so if that sort of thing is institutionalized/systematized it can work out eventually.

I Yakub can craft us once in our glory through eugenics, I believe we can follow his example again.
Or I guess we can all just digitize ourselves with white VAs and no clear cultural identifiers. Then it probably wouldn't matter as much.
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>>154819741
Howdy
>>154819750
Motherfucker I'm one of them no its not
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>>154819689
It's not often that I see a story pull something bold instead of the obvious and have it result in a significantly worse product
it's not even a "me likey jax so he should live :)" thing, the fact that the asshole rabbit stays dead causes complete moral and thematic confusion because doing the literal opposite of the show's stated thesis results in everyone's lives becoming significantly better
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>>154819764
Yes it is.
You just dont want people to know.
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>>154819679
So can black people be mormons or is that sancrosanct?
>>154819722
>>154819750
Basically every abrahamic religion after early christianity is a complete meme.
Well, earlier abrahamic religions are also a meme but Islam is when the whole thing jumped the shark
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>>154819772
I think it would have been more fine if they'd separated everyone's lives getting better more cleanly from Jax's suicide
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>>154819785
>can black people be mormons
They can, its believed that their skin will lighten if they become close to God.
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>>154819795
I maintain that everything after Jax's tent is built, including Caine's return, should have been it's own episode
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>>154819797
That's fucking hilarious
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>>154819795
Yeah basically the entire end credits could've removed Caine joining them on adventures and it would've been the same enjoyment because no one is being a cunt
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>>154819775
I can't believe I'm about to get ragebaited on 4chan into becoming a more dedicated church member cause there's no way I can allow people to go on thinking this
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>>154819358
I remember someone here saying Goose liked that show. I could see bunch of things being lifted with Jax and Gangle being a Popee and Kedamono. But with Jax being way cuter than Popee and Kedamono being way cuter than Gangle.
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>>154819785
They can be now, since 1978. Though I don't think there has ever been a black apostle, y'know, important people.
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>>154819817
Not the mormon but I'm just genuinely surprised I'm not the only religious person here
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You guys do realize that regardless of which religion is true, we are all false digital constructs who cannot access the afterlife, right?
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>>154819591
>Jax sees the image after Pomni posts it
>"Pomni, I told you I want to be called 'she' now!"
>"Well I'm sorry, but... I'm still used to seeing you as 'he.'"
>"You said you'd be supportive!"
>"I am! It just takes a while to get used to everything. You've never even worn any of the cute outfits I gave you. And don't say they're 'too small,' you're as rail-thin as I am and we're both flat as a board!"
>"... I'm nervous."
>"Dude, this isn't gonna work if you don't just come out and own it."
>"I know... and stop calling me 'dude.'"
>"I call Ragatha 'dude'!"
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>>154819817
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_XY3D5Nfi3A
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>>154819873
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>>154819873
This isn't even good for what you're trying to do, come on man
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>>154819873
What do you even get out of this?
Actually, I don't care.
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>>154819873
Actual cancer.
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>>154819873
Your dialogue is better than mine
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>>154819903
You must write like a first grader
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Jaxtraction, please, come back
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>>154819873
Use ai at this point brother
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>>154819245
>a chicken or the egg scenario
Actually there's an answer for that now
The egg came first and was laid by something that we wouldn't call a chicken
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>>154819917
I don't want either of them here
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>>154819921
I figured that out in high school. Keep up.
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>>154819340
More importantly who’s most prone to wokecock
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>>154819965
Nobody.
Leftist men dont get laid.
See trans cuck Jax as an example.
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>>154819245
chemicals in the water
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>>154819885
>70 minutes
Yeah not doing that
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>>154819912
>Jax is eating a digital grilled cheese sandwich
>”Jax, give me some of that sandwich”
>”Pomni, fuck off, this is my sandwich”
>”Wow, rude, Jax, I just wanted a bite”
>”No, Pomni, fuck off this is my grilled cheese sandwich”
>”Why don’t you just ask Caine to make you another grilled cheese sandwich? Give that one to me, Jax.”
>”Fuck off, Pomni! Why don’t you ask Caine to make you a grilled cheese sandwich?”
>Then Pomni asks Caine for a second grilled cheese sandwich
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>>154820000
Your concession is accepted.
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>>154820011
Jax wouldn't swear. Unless this is post episode 9 unabstracted Jax where Caine has the swear filters turned off.
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>>154820011
"Hey G, would you make me a sandwich?"
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>>154820027
That was my underlying premise, yes. Hence Caine actually listening to Pomni and giving her what she wants as well.
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IT'S THE FISH HAT AGAIN (canon)
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My alternative headcanon for episode 9 is that Pomni keeps Jax on a leash to keep him from running off and abstracting.
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>>154820051
Well in that case it's unironically better than what the other greentext poster wrote so well done
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>>154820090
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>>154819873
your writing is so shit it's inspired me to get better at writing. I'll finish Restore point and try and write it better, get back to my webcomic after my work placement, and generally your posts are like Questionable Content, and inspire me that no matter how shit my output is, it could be worse.
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>>154820104
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>>154820026
No win situation; conceding is the winning move
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>>154820090
>>154820104
>>154820117
cute
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>>154820047
NOH
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>>154820134
Never concede, never admit defeat. Always claim victory.
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>>154820106
I don't think Restore Point was actually written by Jaxtraction if only for the fact I feel like Jaxtraction would constantly talk about how he wrote it and honestly I kinda feel bad for the anon who actually wrote it since he had to endure some pretty harsh criticism, I hope he takes the time to try to make his story better rather than give up entirely.
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creatures
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>>154820157
I think my issue is that I'm really rushing through it, I should write a rough version, then rewrite a better version
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damn this made me sad
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>>154820172
Are humans the only animal that engages in sexual relations with other species? A rabbit could never fuck a hamster. But u could.
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need pictures of princess loolilalu, martha mildenhall and ragatha all in hi-rise bikinis fighting in a kiddie pool full of jell-o. dont ask why
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>>154820180
>I should write a rough version

Absolutely you should. Start with an outline. Maybe make a rough greentext that goes over all the scenes you want to include and major conversation topics you want to hit. Just a simple summary of the story. Flesh it out more if you like, but only start a chapter once you have a good outline of everything that's gonna happen in it. Having that prep work done makes it so much easier to actually write the chapter.

Writing completely off the cuff can also trap you later in your story if you're not thinking ahead of time, so it's good to plan ahead.
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>>154820232
do i rewrite the first chapter or just keep going?
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>>154820270
I'd give it a rewrite, personally. Try to focus more on your prose. From what I remember, your story is almost all dialogue without any description of how the characters are reacting or what they're thinking. Who's perspective is the story coming from? Is it Jax? Try to put yourself in his shoes and really think about how he would react to whatever situation he's in. What's he thinking internally? How is he reacting to the conversation with the others?

Pardon the forbidden horse link, but this is an excellent guide to making your fanfiction writing better. It's a long read, but absolutely everything in here is excellent advice for writing anything.

https://www.fimfiction.net/writing-guide
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>>154818235
Diversity win: the most misogynistic guy you know has a sissy fetish!
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>>154820318
>>154820270
Oh, also, use a grammar checker. It's such a simple step that so many people skip that will save you from dumb mistakes.
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Leeroy should’ve been gang raped by a bunch of big fat Mexican guys, that’d fuck the woman right out of him.
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>>154820360
I mean, yeah sure, but why Mexicans specifically? Thats a bit weird.
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>>154820318
>without any description of how the characters are reacting or what they're thinking.

Autistic writing

> Is it Jax? Try to put yourself in his shoes and really think about how he would react to whatever situation he's in. What's he thinking internally? How is he reacting to the conversation with the others?

Yes, i see my mistake now. Although it's not first person, it's still Jax's perspective. I'm sure everyone has guessed the twist already though

I'll rewrite it , and go from an outline, to a rough version, to a better version
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>>154818820
Am I the only one that wants Tumblr to go back to it's 2014 woke feminist phase? I found it rather charming I miss the 4chan x Tumblr fan art posting from last year
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>>154820420
Good luck, Anon.
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>Ribbit comes back
>"Wait, Pomni, you and Jax are dating?"
>"Yeah"
>"But... Jax is gay, how does that work?"
>"Um, i guess he saw something about me that convinced him"
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Jax is gay and ugly.
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Jax is gay and beautiful
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>>154820465
>>154820453
Jax is a gay male purple rabbitoid and his penis is perfectly fine for Pomni
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>>154819221
The vice versa happens too. Lotta FTMs suddenly lecturing on yaoi consumption and homo fetishization as if they are not the peak example. Escapism + sexual thrill = addiction
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>>154819245
Definitely the yuri came first
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>>154820488
What the fuck
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>>154820451
>Wait, you used to date Jax?
>Yeah.
>But... you said you were a lesbian?
>Well, I guess I saw something about him that convinced me.
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>>154820270
as an aside, a pretty popular writing technique is to write the thing, then rewrite it again from memory. That was your brain has a much firmer grasp on what you want to happen in the scene
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>>154820451
>Implying Jax is gay
Jax would probably be a transbian
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If goose wanted Jax to be Irredeemable, why didn't she make him gay?
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>>154820521
Transbian cuck
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>>154820488
This most likely
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>>154820488
How is this not the most misogynistic, objectifying, dehumanizing shit that’s been said about women?
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Gangle is flat irl.
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>>154820117
He was actually just projecting with Gangle all this time
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>>154820421
Feminism is dead now that men in dresses define what women are and aren't
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I think I'm gonna head out bros. I love you all and have enjoyed spending the last couple years funposting in these threads.
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>>154818496
Starry and Pina
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>>154820823
see you tomorrow
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>>154820791
They ONLY thing these feminazis care about is free abortions.
Disgusting.
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funbun for the soul
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I want to *BOINK* Jax in his bunny boy *BOINK*
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>>154818496
this but with jax seeing at his peeled version.
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>>154819591
Imagine being Pomni in this situation, Jax the all oft ass decided to cross over seats through your personal space to flaunt his cute bun butt and interrupt your order. His fluffy tail wiggling in mock excitement, letting out an "Uhhhh " like he never even planned to intrude. Imagine the way his body would stiffen when you enclose his tail with one hand, squeezing and kneading it like-no, AS your personal stress ball. How a little whimper would intrude when he panics, belting out his order. Tail waggling against your grip, breath catching at the cashier's question of if he wants to make his order a meal. Imagine how he'd foolishly leave his lips open in indecision, priming him for the other hand. Letting out a full mouthed moan at the spank of his ass. Knees buckling into the center divider, falling into pleasure and your lap with the melting of his silly little persona. Allowing you to finish your order while you fondle him as deserved punishment.
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>>154820823
Farewell.
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>>154818496
ribbun
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>>154819221
Niggas aren't allowed to enjoy lesbo porn anymore because of the "male gaze" so they adopt the gaze of one of the females instead. And as Kneecheese said, when you gaze into a bitch, a bitch gazes back into you. So they end up thinking they're bitches and cutting their dicks off.
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>>154820862
iktfb
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>>154820918
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>>154818098
pomni sexoooooo
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>>154818118
https://litter.catbox.moe/yxiqo65ifgccmw89.png
getting close to figure out how to 3Dize the rest of the letters.
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Pomni vore
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>I heard you like bad boys? Good...
>*puts on bow*
>...'cause I'm bad at being a boy.
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>>154820991
nah
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Pomni feet
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You guys still acting like faggots?
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Princess Loolilalu feet
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>>154821079
Always
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>>154821099
This shit better not just be some bitch ass one and a half minute short. I'm expecting some substance, here.
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>>154821079
That's like my whole job
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do not give bnnyu corm
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>>154820964
hmm, under or above.
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>>154821099
Save me muscles Jax
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Stealing Jax's tail, clipping under the map in an Adventure world, and hiding it in an obscure corner before launching myself back into the main world.
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>>154821112
In this economy?
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You know, I'm getting kind of tired of every piece of media I get invested in shitting the bed during the finale
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Damn Fight AU Gummigoo kinda.....
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>>154821248
can you name 5 that had a good finale?
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>>154821248
That's why you cope with imagining a better ending.
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>>154821253
yo actually making him just a little more feral looking does loads for the design
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Gummigoo balls
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imagine making raggy angry...
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>>154821337
Imagine it? I plan on it!
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Damn, sorry guys
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>>154821352
this does sound like something goose would say
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>>154821337
There's pouty; THEN there's angry.

I know not every day is going to be smiles und sunshine, but I shudder to think about what will get her this pissed off.
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>>154821352
I'm from the future.

We're in the middle of season 3. Funnybunny is not only canon, but all of the abstracted characters come back and literally all of the lore regarding C&A and its connection to the circus is explained. The most recent episode had Pomni trying to contact Abigail because she thinks the computer that holds the circus is beginning to fail.
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>>154821352
It's official. Anon x [your favorite character] is canon.

Door's open, fellas.
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>>154821352
Nah, I don't think we can trust this Goose weirdo.
Funnybunny is clearly canon and this strange triangle is only going to fuel my love of Jax and Pomni more.
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>>154821378
I'm from even further in the future and boy you're gonna hate funnybunny divorce and abortion arc and then Jax dies again for real.
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>>154821382
IT WAS NEVER EVEN IN DOUBT!!
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need more ragatha making faces
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>>154821378
Don't listen to him. I'm from father into the future. Trump became a dictator and said funnybunny was outlawed. Anyone who supported it are being found and killed.
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>>154821352
What'd you think goose was going to say?
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>>154821388
I wish this artist didn't paywall all their stuff. Fuckin' bullshit.
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>divorce
>abortion

Not these two. They aren't Nick and Judy. They're not thinking Arby's.
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>>154821396

>>154821395
We need a reverse of this. Anon headpatting Ragatha
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>>154821406
I mean if artists didnt paywall they'd have to get other jobs, have less time to draw, and you'd still get less content
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I'm from several centuries into the future. The War of the Circuses was a brutal one but House Ragdoll emerged supreme and led the planet to an age of prosperity after everyone in House Rabbit was put to the blade. We also have cool flying cars now.
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>>154821401
I'd be the first to start the funnybunny resistance
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>>154821423
need terminator poster but its ragatha
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>>154821421
Yeah but they paywall even their SFW stuff. Not something you see very often, though maybe I don't follow enough artists to see it.
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Goose won a bunch of Emmys for the abortion episode btw. It was really raw and emotional but it's clear that Pomni was much happier after.
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>>154821423
Enjoy it while it lasts. Several millennia later a rebel faction builds a bunny from genetic scratch. Now a swarm of rape bunny robots is threatening all life. Also, tell my wife I love her.
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>>154821423
did i survive at least? if i died i hope i went down swinging
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>>154821352
And shitposts like that are exactly why people are still coping about season 2 because Goose is incredibly unreliable narrator
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>>154821449
You realize it's fake, right?
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>>154821429
i wouldn't say its super uncommon. You just hear a lot more about it when it's nsfw stuff
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The crazy thing is that Goose is still alive but she just wants to be left alone while she masturbates to triangles and drills
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>>154818496
Jax stroking Limpy's tail
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>>154821389
I've come from the further further future and i am here to say that i have killed Ragatha for the good of all of us
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>>154821405
>>154821449
>now that TADC is over
>November 6th
GOTCHA BITCH
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>>154821460
The fuck you mean someone here lied to me? The audacity man I swear.
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>>154821465
You fool. That's what she was planning on you doing.
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I am the end of time

The universe has collapsed

What's left are two stars

One we call funny

The other we call bunny
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I am from the birth of the next universe. Jax is dead and gay. Pomni is green and purple now? Ragatha is the center of everything.
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Time, space, and reality are all gay

Sex with Jax
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>>154819340
Gangle
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I am the God responsible for creating all life and matter in existence.
I need a place to shit. Would it be fine if I use the ragaverse as my toilet?
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No you're not, I am.
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ALL RISE!
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>>154821490
Thanks, Doc
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>>154821519
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i am you and yesterday we cheated on Ragatha with her mother. Don't believe me? Check inside our pants
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sometimes I use pictures in the thread for warmup drawings
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>>154821559
..........bruh
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>>154821559
Ewww
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Getting high with Ragatha at mcdonalds and then telling Gangle to kill herself.
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>>154821559
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>>154819221
There’s just something about seeing the trans flag especially as an emoji that pisses me off so bad I don’t even care who it’s attached to something about it makes me feel so visceral.
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>>154819340
Jax. Which makes sense
>Chud who tries too hard ends up being a self hating tranny/fag
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>>154821559
Disgusting!
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need me some stupid sauce rn
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>>154821586
Trannies fill me with so much disgust
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Petting Jax. Scratching his chin. Rubbing his ears. Fluffing his chest fur. Squeezing his tail. Massaging his shoulders.
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>>154821578
They legalized all drugs so I've been smoking a joint laced with fent and lcd every day after lunch. It's how the dear leader stays in power.
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>>154818496
Jax being really shy and uncomfortable about having nullo sex with Pomni
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New Waiting for Open Eyes chapter is out
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>>154821604
>LCD
Based liquid crystal display lover
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>>154821558
neato
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>>154821352
kek, that's pretty good trolling.
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>>154821352
>November
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smoking some of that OLED
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>>154821577
>Heh... you're cute.
>You're... drunk or something...
>I wish I was cute...
>I think you'd look cute with a bow...
>I trieded that once, but I pushed the girl away and she abstracted.
>That sucks...
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>>154821610
They better actually fuck in this chapter so help me God
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>>154821614
You would be shocked how well it mellows out the fent and keeps the THC going. Just wish I could feel my left side again.
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pretty ragdoll....
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>>154821628
I smoke HDMI
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>>154821559
This is very upsetting
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>>154821608
In fact, of course
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>>154821577
I love the unicorn horn ice cream cone
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>>154821600
I believe gender dysphoria is real, but I cannot wait until the fad to believe you have it passes. I cannot fathom the torture of experiencing dysphoria, pretending or convincing yourself that you have it just to fit in is sad.
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>>154821559
This makes me think of a TADC fighting game where Gangle is some big ass Potemkin sized mother fucker made of ribbons.
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>>154821643
Yea, now imagine it being animated and going on for 30 minutes while a guy spouts verses from the book of Mormon.
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>>154821559
That's kinda cringe.
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>Pomni/Abigail would be in her mid 30's now
>Ragatha/Susie is probably in her mid to late 40's
HAGS
HAGS
HAGS
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he's just a lil guy
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>>154821728
a dead little guy
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>>154821725
>Mid to late 40s
And like that, the age gap has disappeared to my relief.
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>>154818863
>everything everywhere all at once
Have you seen that other movie, by the same studio, that someone talks about on here sometimes?
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>>154821738
he lives on in my heart and my fanfics
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>>154821741
Remember: The show takes place nearly a decade ago. Every single character in the show would be in their early to mid 30's by now or older.
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why didn't Ribbit just do this
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>>154821756
Most people are bad people
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>>154818178
I think it's an interesting show, but people completely miss the forest for the trees when they focus on these characters' relationships.
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>>154821774
I feel like the whole forest was missed for the tree named Jax
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>>154818098
Say "Hoooly Brapmeat!" out loud.
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>>154821779
I blame spending the first 5 episodes dicking around.
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>>154821756
She's a low IQ slut.
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I remember a time when people were obsessed with the mystery of Ribbit. Kinda wild that no one really gives a shit about her anymore.
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>>154821755
Pomni voted for Trump because she's a big WWE fan
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>>154821816
No... she can't be a chud. Where is she? I'm gonna do my job as a male feminist and rape her so can see how bad the patriarchy is.
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>>154821816
Pomni comes off lib as fuck. If she was conservative she would have told Jax, Gummi, Gangle etc to pick up their fucking bootstraps when they came crying to her.
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>>154821805
>kills herself because Jax doesn't want to be alone with her
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>>154821844
She could have been a lesbian with ragatha.
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>>154821851
Nobody likes Ragatha
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>>154821851
Now that's a ship I could get behind
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>>154821805
She has 20 minutes of screentime and she really was just a normal girl who had unfortunate fate of meeting Jax.
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I want to sneak into Jax's room and sleep in his bed while he's mucking about on a forced adventure. To be woken to his sweaty body flopping on the bed and smothering me in him.
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Caine still did nothing wrong.
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>>154821773
>Most people are bad people
We've all done bad things.
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>>154821861
Why would you sneak into his room while he's not there instead of while he's sleeping and helpless?
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>>154821869
The fact that no one pushed back on this was crazy
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>>154820791
Kek funny bait
Considering its a tranny complaining about nb's
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>>154821880
Pomni really does have some of the worst lines in the series.
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>>154821880
Because it is undeniably true if applied to ones life.
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I think it would have been interesting if everyone EXCEPT Jax had their moods and neuroses slightly altered to go on adventures, with the logic being that Jax likes the adventures and escapism so he never had to alter his mind.

Then again I also think it would have been much better if the story went full nihilistic at the end - Keep Caine dead, and have everyone abstract one after another when they realize the bright vibrant circus they had a love/hate relationship with is gone forever and its just nothingness.
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>>154821869
>>154821880
Jax should have pushed back on that, turning away from the others, telling pomni not to defend him, that's he's done worse than everyone else combined
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>>154821869
Yea. Kinger made the circuses, pomni said the n-word to a black guy, jax is awful, zooble got a lady fired after they misgendered her, ragatha molested several boys, and gangle would spit in customers food. No one is a saint.
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>>154821880
Because she was technically correct and her point about how they needed to take care of each other now that Caine had gone off of the rails still stood. It was just a badly conveyed point.
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>>154821872
Because I want to be the helpless one smothered in bun. But if I really want to turn the tides his tail is within touch.
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>>154821895
>Then again I also think it would have been much better if the story went full nihilistic at the end - Keep Caine dead, and have everyone abstract one after another when they realize the bright vibrant circus they had a love/hate relationship with is gone forever and its just nothingness.
Some "I'M GONNA KILL DANTE AT THE END OF CLERKS TO SEEM REAL AND EDGY" shit.
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>Everyone suddenly uncomfortable around Jax since the sex update
>he legitimately doesn't mean anything in a sexual way, but now his goofiness is suddenly super inappropriate
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>>154821891
the others having done SOMETHING wrong at SOME point doesn't mean she gets to brush aside her project bf's years of malicious behavior
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>>154821956
Holy fucking ears
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>>154821889
Goose's fixation on having Pomni get things moving at all times was kinda weird
I would have expected Zooble to be the one to blow up on Caine, not Pomni
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>>154821880
Not as dumb as Gangle saying Jax was right that it didn't matter that he tried to fuck everyone over.
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>>154821174
i got tired, mb i do it later, meanwhile i did sum else instead.
https://tmpfiles.org/wkwbiwUd0OAV/bstnewlinesnojap.png
https://tmpfiles.org/wPwjiQUMTTof/bstnewfin.png
now i feel like i wanna play sum vidya ig, wish i were still in the cord tho.
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>>154821973
it's overall just a really bad scene
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>>154821956
>every time he tries to choke someone for the funny effect they freak out worse then before
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>>154818098
https://youtu.be/kyQ39XVbFso?is=iTMnOiq8Xtp3ibeX
Cool video
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>>154822005
>Kinger becomes based AF
>Jax becomes hideous
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>>154822005
i think the issue is taking the circus part in the show name too literally and also the stuff about it being supposedly 90s videogame, i think its more about a just a experimental VR that caine turned into a theater.
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>>154821869
What did kinger do? Thinking back on what was supposedly implied by his lines abou5 blaming himself and being sorry for drawing is his (clone) wife into this, none of the backstory info we got backed up him being responsible for anything. All we know is that his real self helped make caine, that's it. There's nothing implying that he took part in creating the brainscans, except that he must have tested it, otherwise he and queenie wouldn't be there. And as far what happend with everybody abstracting, what was he supposed to do? He did have the means to combat caine.
Although, if he supposedly knew that he could conjure things up at anytime, he sure didn't use it when it would have been helpful.
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>>154822069
He stole a ballon on free Ballon day
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>>154822069
>none of the backstory info we got backed up him being responsible for anything
He designed Caine, didn't he?
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>>154822069
He thought he could play God
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>>154821895
>Then again I also think it would have been much better if the story went full nihilistic at the end - Keep Caine dead, and have everyone abstract one after another when they realize the bright vibrant circus they had a love/hate relationship with is gone forever and its just nothingness.
How much black are you wearing right now? Be honest.
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>>154822069
>S2
>kinger realizing Grant has been the one in charge of keeping the computer running
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>>154822131
Okay... and then what?
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>>154822069
He helped make Caine so he blames himself for people being stuck in a place that would not exist if he hadn't worked on Caine. Not sure how that is confusing.

>I don't think it is his fault!
Irrelevant.
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>>154822080
>>154822086
That's all he did. He just created an ai. An ai that is entirely localized and trapped in a single PC. Remember, there's no evidence to say Grant had anything to do with the goggles, beyond putting them on, or the npc brainscans, all of that seemed to be scratch's doing. Hell, Grant probably has no idea that the pc is still running let alone that npc clones are suffering.
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>>154822137
grant moved them to a new computer, now they have limited internet access, and work on fixing abstractions
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>>154822137
feel even worse because he didn't do shit to delete the VR to stop any new player from joining.
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>>154822169
Okay, and? What is the central conflict of this arc? What's motivating the story?
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>>154822159
He could have like
Not programmed Caine wrong? This is like saying Miles Dyson has no responsibility in T2.
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>>154819608
well not prying led into the circus becoming the best place it could possibly be while prying lead one guy becoming worse than ever and making the whole place worse for everyone
so... don't pry.
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>>154822069
Anything could have happened in the first generation circus. You know, he might have already gone insane from trying stuff by the time Queenie abstracted.
It took until watching ep 3 for the fifth time or something when I realized he was (or they were) already building the pillow forts.
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>>154821253
huge gummy tail
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>>154822154
How is kinger responsible for the clones being trapped with caine? All we are told is that Grant helped create an experimental AI, 2 technically. How that suddenly lead to npcs based on brainscans trapoed with the AI is not explained.
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>>154822178
NTA but i think theres plenty of stuff for sum couple of seasons
unabstraction
blue ai revenge
prevent the C&A from getting demolished and turn it into a tech museum
mb a epilogue involving new ppl joining or sum chappie shit where they manage to leave although as robots. (just how mike prob wanted)
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Smoking weed with Pomni out back of the Spudsy's during break.
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you know what, i dont care anymore. check my 7
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>"Man, it feels so good being a woman-"
"Jax, shut the fuck up."
>"...what?"
"Everyone here knows you're only doing this transgender shtick to piss people off. It's not fucking funny. It's disgusting."
>"I... wha? Huh?"
"Like, every two seconds, you're saying some bullshit about how lovely you are, or whining about your pronouns when ABSOLUTELY FUCKING NOBODY said 'he' or 'him' at the time to justify bringing them up."
>"But... but I-"
"...and then, on top of that, you're changing your fucking name every time I turn around. Is it 'Lilly'? Is it 'Greznedge'? Did you go back to just 'Jax'? I'll tell you what I'M going to call you, no matter what -- fucking 'Jackass'! Because that's what you are, what you've always been, and what you'll always be! Fuck you, fuck your pranks, fuck your fake trans routine, fuck your shitty black wig, and fuck that stupid little fucking bow, too!"
>"Don't talk shit about my bow! I got it from-"
"From Ribbit!? Yeah, I know where you got the idea, and that's fucked up! How fucking DARE you use your dead friend as an aid for trolling everyone! Ragatha broke down in fucking tears while you weren't looking because it reminded her of that frog! You make me fucking sick! Do everyone a favor and go back to being abstracted, you piece of shit!"
>"I- I- B- But I-"
"'BuT! bUt! BuT!' Fuck you! You fucking dick! Always doing some bullshit to everyone! You piece of shit! Why don't you do something nice for once, you fucking shit!? Go back and sit in your cuck tent and take an eternal fucking nap!
>"..."
"YOU FUCKING BITCH! FUCKING FUCKER! FUCKING COCKASS!"
>*sniff*
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>>154822225
FUCK
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>>154822179
The entire point of artificial intelligence is that it's not programmed, it's supposed to be alive and able to make it's own choices. This bs that we're suffering through in the real world is not actually really AI.
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>>154822244
He could have not made Caine at all.
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>>154822225
>>154822242
Hand him over
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>>154822222
Jax....
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Beating a screaming and begging Pomni until she miscarries
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>>154822262
You gonna be ok champ?
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>>154822262
Sun....
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>>154822267
Yeah but that fetus won't be
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>>154822261
Is such a faggot he probably never touched a drug.
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>>154822257
i cant, rules are rules
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ahright, the limpy cat just wants to fuck the bunny
which OC wants to do the op and beat jax mercilessly?
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>>154822275
you're cute when you're angy
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>>154822250
Again, where does creating an AI lead to trapped clones? We're are not told. We're not even told why caine exists beyond vague science reasons.
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>>154822267
No. My mom called me a faggot and dad hasn't gotten the milk.
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>>154822273
So angry. Why so mad? It is only show.
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>>154822280
from what i remember pretty much all of them except for limpy and maybe oska hated him
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>>154822287
If Caine is never made then how do the events of the series ever take place?

You are trying to argue as Kingers lawyer rather than looking at it from the POV of a mentally damaged man.
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Would Pomni still love Jax if Jax was into sissy age regression and liked wearing princess diapers, but only kept it to an hour a day after each adventure?
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One character from the gang is revealed to be a secret fan of The Greatest Showman, who is it? Hard mode: not Caine or Ragatha.
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>>154822273
Jax the type to have a panic attack if he touches a drug.
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>>154822295
Goose called me a mean name one time when I asked a question.
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>>154822316
Based Goose
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>>154822316
Did you tell him he will never be a woman in response?
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>>154822298
I'm arguing that the show mysteriously brought up a bunch of questions that the writer didn't notice.
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i assume if it wasn't cuz of glitch meddling maybe we could have got a jax crashout where he starts to beat kinger nonstop until the rest stop him.
>you fucking piece of shit, you bastard, you trapped us all here, why u didnt turned off the computer, WHY YOU REAL SELF DIDNT TURNED IT OFF"
so all the fags that were screaming nonstop about a jax & kinger moment (mb a talk will fix him) can finally shut up.
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>>154822361
Kinger would kick Jax's ass and Jax knows it.
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>>154818098
This show is highly satanic because it was made by a trannysexualised
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>>154822369
Satan is based
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>>154821352
Bowtie cannot stop winning
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>>154822369
i want this poster opinion about EVTV weather
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>>154822367
he wouldn't bother to fight back because he knows he deserves it.
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>>154822411
kicking kinger would probably be like kick a solid tree anyway
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Friendly little critters.
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GANGLE
GANGLE
GAAAANGLE
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>>154822445
Pomni....
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watch out bnnuy
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>>154822440
>You wanted to try this one, right? Blue-and-pink.
>H-huh? No, I... how did you know that?
>You were looking at it the longest. Just get your fav, and don't worry about Pomni.
>*boops Jax's nose*
>Got it, Princess?
>...
>Ciao!
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>>154822480
Counter attack!
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into the gangle-verse
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>>154822225
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into the pomniverse
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Gangle needs to shower more often.
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>>154822497
lucky fucking bastard!!
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Jax needs to shower less often
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>>154822225
C'mon Ragatha!
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>>154822566
>Fur becomes dreadlocks from being unwashed.
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>>154822520
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>>154822222
quints will make it so
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>>154822630
El Gangle
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Night night Ragathugs!
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>>154822669
good night.... for now
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>>154822627
Hamni is such a chubby little creature.
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>>154822694
I can tell that's you behind the mask, Ragatha
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>>154822734
>
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>>154822809
Subtle fuzz... cute
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>>154822178
Jax comes back and has to face how he's treated the others, and eventually Kaufmo, then Ribbit will come back.

Jax's anxiety in how this will happen is the main "arc" of the show
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>>154822877
>another 9 episodes of the Jax show
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>>154822882
oh let's explore the other characters then?

Gangle uh... um...
Zooble is.... well...
Ragatha learns to... you see...
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Do you think it's awkward that Gangle is probably happy as fuck that Pomni's friend is dead?
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>>154822896
Gangle is really into tentacle porn
Zooble is afraid of the implications
Ragatha learns to paralell park
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>>154822929
>implications
what implication
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>>154822347
>Kinger created Caine who was responsible for Scratch and Queenie's abstractions
>Caine was abandoned and replaced by Kinger and his other creators
>they never bring this up, all their interactions are pic related and a still frame from the end credits where they go fishing
Character driven show btw
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>>154822958
Character driven, show? No! Jax!
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>>154822964
>>154822958
Jax is the only actual character
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>>154822964
He can't keep getting away with this
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Revolutionary writer Gooseworx aka La Creatividad created a new genre called "Jax-driven plot"
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>>154822896
I mean, I'd expect a new show to address this very problem
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the dawn of a new thread is approaching... what will be the next OP?
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Pomni is cute and funny bros
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>>154822988
The problem is that other than Jax everyone is too docile and pleasant
If it weren't for him every episode would be 30 minutes of a bunch of bozos being overly polite to each other
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>>154823026
>>154823026
cropped porn of Jax
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>>154823026
>>154823026
cropped diaper art of tJax
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>>154823026
JAX JAX JAX JAX JAX!
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>>154823042
>tfw waited for a Ragatha crashout for 9 episodes
>it never happened
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>>154823040
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>>154823126
No wonder she gravitated to Jax
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holy shit check out this Jax cosplay!
https://i.4cdn.org/r9k/1785260562418904.mp4
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>>154823026
You already know, you posted it
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>>154822958
The show is driven by Goose’s mental problems, the characters exist as avatars to explore that and nothing else
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>>154821352
This is something she would totally say
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>>154823273
i want a s2 where his mental sanity gets worse then.
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>>154823229
ok, but im gonna wait until this thread goes to at least page 6
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>>154823301
Then someone else is going to make the thread before you
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>>154823309
oh shi
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closing with cringe.
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>>154822069
Kinger is a straight white man so he must take sole responsibility for everything bad that ever happened in the circus
>>154821248
At least Japanese and Western media can finally be on the same level. It’s the same level of shit, but still…
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I guess we're doing >>154821312?
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>>154823342
we doing meth
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>>154819219
An allergy is your body's physical reaction to something, it wouldn't affect you in the digital world.
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>>154820154
Why is she wearing a thong under her trunks?
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>>154820190
No, it's relatively common
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>>154819219
pussy
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check out his Jax cosplay!
https://i.4cdn.org/r9k/1785260562418904.mp4
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>>154823629
Where's the cosplay part?
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>>154819322
There's far too little actually tied up sub jax. Even just maid jax + suit pomni does not have THAT much art



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