if you were in charge of writing for the show and had full creative freedom, what would you change? What would you keep?
I would just adapt picrelated and call it a day
>>155033165idk anon, just copying a fic word-for-word seems kinda cheapat least spice it up somehow
>>155033157Loona's adventures with Doomguy.
>>155033271Can't improve on perfection.
Stolas gets hit on the head and mans up and storms up to Stella and mating presses her despite her objections. They're then a happy family. Octavia gets a human boyfriend.
>>155033157I need Stella's tits in my face.
>>155033157I would use the Goetia demons a bit more and will shake things up giving the imp couple a new gig
>>155033165Read it. Don't get the hype for it.
>>155033497say no more
>>155033800That's fine, to each their own. Personally it scratches my itch in all the right ways.
>>155033800It's decent when it embraces the wish fulfillment aspect and it's Anon on misadventures with Loona. Or going going to the arcade with Loona and Octavia. When it starts trying to be a serious fic it falls apart.
>>155033157It's fairly easy to fix/re-write HB, you just need to backtrack to season one, pilotfag that I am, season one wasn't as bad as I remember, still I don't think it's that good when compared to the pilot or just in general, season one is salvageable as it felt more cohesive overall, all it needed was some patching like addressing the oppressive bureaucracy that the lesser hellborn deal with, show more of Goetian society, show that Stolas and Stella loved each other at one point, but their marriage had a major falling out due it being unable to truly blossom, make Blitzo an actual character instead of Brandon Rogers painted red, the shorts can be regulated to show the everyday life of the supporting characters like Verosika, Striker, Millie's parents, etc. HB can be a serious show, it's much better suited to be one compared to HH which should've been a comedy through and through, but that "show" is a bit harder to fix/re-write.
Bzzzz bzzzz.
>>155033157Kill off every character expect Stella and Octavia and the ending is me getting the oyakodon treatment from them both.
>>155034152I disagree, the serious stuff gave meaning to the wish fulfillment and misadventures. Fluff without structure is just stray hairs blowing in the wind.
>>155034170Are you gonna give that paper Bee some paper food?
>>155034287Paper honeycombs. >paper beeMakes me think of Paper Mario.
>>155034227>oyakodonI can see the appeal, but personally i despise the conceptNot only is it completely OOC for octavia to agree to such a thing, but i myself am a hopeless romantic who believes in loyalty and monogamy
Casting an embiggening spell on Bee's snout so it's there two minutes early wherever she goes.
>>155033157Reduce cursing to a minimum; it should be used sparingly, in tense moments, or when it would actually be unexpected as a punchline, rather than every other sentence like the writers just learned what curse words are. Cut the relationship drama entirely.Replace every obvious fursona and feathersona with actual demons and monsters; it's Hell, and the denizens should reflect that. The lords of Hell should embody sins, and actually draw from their religious inspirations—rather than "Beelzebub" being Viz's dumb sparkledog fursona with antenna and bug wings glued on.
>>155034589>Replace every obvious fursona and feathersonaAs long as octavia, loona and stella remain as they are, i hope
>>155034589While I agree that it would give the show a wide generic appeal it will also be painfully generic
>>155034713As if it isn't now
>>155034661NTA but that is debatable, there are some good looking redesigns of Octavia and Stella, nothing wrong with the original designs which are good too.
>>155034713You can write new stories. The problem with Helluva Boss is that the actual concept of the show, the elevator pitch, is basically background noise to be sidelined in favor of relationship drama. Relationship drama that isn't well-written, or even interesting. Helluva Boss is already extremely generic.>>155034661They can stay, they just can't be the norm. Demons and monsters should be varied, but Viz likes to make everyone look the same.
All helluva girls must bounce on my cock.
>>155035348t. literally me
>>155035649Who took the picture and made the snap if Gosling's there?
>>155035683no one, he placed a hidden camera to gouge her reaction
>he had yung's room converted after she left for college>its his way of coping with empty nest syndrome
what did you guys think of the latest BotF chapter?
>>15503315730 minutes of stolas being brutally penetrated in all sort of ways
>>155035934With knives.
>>155035947He's into that.
>>155036134Angelic knives.
>>155035928I liked it :)That said, could some freak shit Goetia do something like repeatedly lop off a limb or finger, infuse it with Life, rinse and repeat until he has an army of freak shit Thing monsters?
>>155036212>tiny stolas homunculi skittering around like smiling friends critters
>>155036238A homosexual nightmare...
>>155036632>A homosexual nightmareA nuclear family.
>Hi, I.M.P.? I'd lot to put a hit out on this guy, last name McCooch, first name Pat?
>>155036212>could some freak shit Goetia do something like repeatedly lop off a limb or finger, infuse it with Life, rinse and repeat until he has an army of freak shit Thing monsters?probably, but thats the sort of thing that gets you executed, so no one would do it
>>155034732Is not that generic, I believe the swearing and relation drama helps on it
>>155034874>redesignsi kinda like this one
>>155037151It might make it stand out but a hunk of shit stands out in a flower field. That doesn't mean it's a good thing.
post more redesigns
>>155037394I've got a Millie one, but it's not that great, anybody got that one where Millie looks more animalistic?
>>155037341Depends on how you draw the shit it can be hilarious
>>155037447>hat one where Millie looks more animalistic?uh, i dont think i do, but i do have this
>>155037492YIKESNow THAT’S a firetoadTo say nothing of Loona
>>155037492Damn, that artist mangled them.
>>155037492Not the one I'm talking about, these are odd looking, not bad just odd, somehow Blitzo is the best looking one here, Moxxie looks like a high elf halfway through Oblivion and Skyrim, Millie looks like Ugandan Knuckles and Loona looks like Norm from Norm of the North, thanks though.
>>155037558thats probably by design
>>155037581I'm straight but that Andre looks kinda... I think it's the eyes, with the color scheme he almost looks a bit cute, but not in a gay way or anything. ... you think he's seeing someone?
>>155037041Kek. I like these.
smol bee
>>155037588These are better looking, Striker looks cool, Octavia looks adorable, but should be more slimmer, she's not the same when she isn't a stick and Fizz is Fizz, he's alright.
>>155037658She looks fluffy here, this is nice. >>155037630I think you're in need of a fix, Anon, the good news is there is a lady who you will plow you, issue is said woman is...
>>155037692>Charlie gets jealous of your HB girl of choice>decides to let it go>you think>meanwhile, your girl seems to have strange episodes>she gets... bubblier>more thoughtful>kinda childish>the episodes get less severe over time at least, and you think nothing of it after a while>she's probably just nervous>your relationship progresses, until the two of you are finally comfortable enough to share a bed>holy lord in heaven she's freakier than you thought>practically sucked your soul out of your body>the next morning to tell your gf that you have some business at the hazbin hotel>she seems a little panicked? >when you open the door to the hotel, you're greeted by a very frazzled Charlie, half-dressed in her work clothes and half in her pjs>"Anon! What... a surprise! You want coffee or something? You had one helluva nigh--I mean you look. Like you had one helluva night.">"Uhh... yeah, I did. My girlfriend's been acting a little weird, you know anything about that?">"Probably just SOOOO giddy to be in your company, Anon! Just *siiigh* soo giddy..."
>>155037855wasit, if charlie is disgusing herself and larping as octavia...then where is the real octavia?
>>155037892Maybe she was both there and not there at the same time...
>>155037909>charlie straight up pulling an obsession and possessing your gf
>>155037855Who would Charlie be jealous of to the point she posses them?
>>155038137Whoever it is dating (you)
>>155037892Here, Octavia and Lucifer are going to buy all the taxidermy ducks they can carry.
>>155038267I do not believe Charlie is the easily jealous type, she'd be very encouraging of HMOFA relationships, it's her plan for hell after all. Now Velvette, Nifty and Emily on the other hand...
>>155033157The series is now entirely built around Stella's desperate attempts to keep their branch of the family's place in society afloat despite never being trained for it and having no real support other than her mildly abusive brother, some cowboy ass imp mercenary who wants to kill her next, and a human guy she ends up making a contract in the hopes of enslaving him and buying his soul to use as free labor only for it to backfire, all while trying to deal with the uncontrollable anger issues and psychosis that decades of neglect and devaluation as a person have caused her to develop, all while her faggot husband continually makes things worse while sneaking around with his pet fucktoy the gold digger and his company.
>>155039077>and a human guy she ends up making a contract in the hopes of enslaving him and buying his soul to use as free labor only for it to backfire>stella tries to make a faustian bargain with a random human she found while on earth undercover>unfortunately, she picked a law student>even more unfortunate, she herself has 0 clue about how faustian bargains are meant to be written, so her ”deal” is rife with loopholes the human in question is more than happy to exploit>on the bright side, the guy isnt a complete jew, so he doesnt use the deal to fleece the shit out of her, but still maintains complete autonomy >he also seems to want to give her a hand, for whatever reasons he might have
>>155039134My honest thought was that it's not even that he's a law student so much as, on account of her being literally only ever expected to take dick and lay eggs with her only real skills being loud enough to make people listen to her out of annoyance, she was never really taught how to do that shit and only has whatever she learned via osmosis or via slowly picking up some of Stolas's slack when he started getting worse about it, so she fucked up so badly that the guy basically ended up owning *her* soul or the equivalent but just feels so fucking bad for her that he's bumbling around trying to help her unfuck shit.
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