YET ANOTHER YOUTUBE ANIMATED PILOT https://youtu.be/ScOgqBrgOXMGreat character designs, boring premise.
>>155131126>Great character designs, boring premise.This can work if it's juicy
how is this different from strawberry vampire?both have a school setting
So we're calling all animated shorts "pilots" now?
>>155131325If that's what the creator calls them. yes
>>155131126Another gen-Z who never went through life and never watched cartoons nor read books in her life.Probably an ESL third worlder too. >https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-FMolyz-u6U>Making MSPaint drawings of Runescape instead of actual Runescape videos.Fucking idiot. This is why I don't hang out with people whos' last name is Purdy. Fucking retard.Am I the only faggot in the world who had nothing but imaginative and intelligent women around him instead of these unfeminine spEDs who are either smelly anorexic retard or smelly obese retards? These retards have no sense of ridiculousness and no standards.
>>15513112695% of people made actual 3D Runescape videos with cool songs and using the actual 3D models and in-game footage.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8P5avBtfg3Mhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5ipJ6FdK_DEMeawnhile there were the 5% of DeviantArt MsPaint autists and of those autists the 0.05% happened to be jewish nepotistic entire turds like Pendletton Ward and Rebecca Sugar and CN hired those turds and tards.Bring back the 95%. Give the art in the hands of the 95%. Bring art back in the hands of the 95%https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mb818lP9oZU&list=RDMb818lP9oZU&start_radio=1https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9JnH4M8mlZA&list=RD9JnH4M8mlZA&start_radio=1
>>155131448NO I think this is made by a millennial since this is high school life on the late 2000s.
>>155131448This is awesome and you're a faggot
>>155131448Their oldest video is from 18 years ago. The highest age they could have been to qualify as Gen Z was 11.I absolutely think this is someone in their mid 30s
>>155131652>>155131612The gay lame 5% side of the 2000s and millennials.Imagine playing Runescape but NO you can't use the 3D Runescape assets cause you're an autistic egocentric woman who absolutely needs to show off her "artistic" skills through fucking PAINT of all things. Everyone is making Runescape music videos and stories through the use of Runescape, but naaah you have to be a piece of shit and use Paint to boost your AI-tier ego instead of respecting the source material.She should have stuck with playing Puzzle Pirates instead, but that game is deceptively hard compared to Runescape even if PP attracts more women due to its sandbox quality and farming for items to put in your shack I mean mansion.
Quite incredible that this woman is likely 35 minimum but this comes across completely as a Gen Z/Alpha fake nostalgia piece. What TTGO does to a soul.
>>155131799I am more just surprised this is an almost middle aged person with very little animation credits but this turned out pretty well visually.
>>155131214>great character designsIts fucking boring. Its another shitty indie cartoon that tries to be related but just ends up looking like every other indie cartoon in the process.
>>155131126This feels strangely like it was written by AI and the voices don't help. The dialogue has remnants of this long meandering overdescriptiveness that story generators are prone to derail into.red beanie girl is incredibly hot
>>155131126The red beanie girl would be right at home in an episode of bonus stage
>more lesbian slopwell as long as it means they've figured out something that works
>>155131645and you are ESL (erratic sperg loser)
>>155133490You don't know shit from the poster you cynical cunt.
>>155131126I watched the whole thing. Pros:- I do think the characters have potential.- I do like the fact that the cast is tolerable enough that I don't want to strangle any one of them. A lot of cartoons have annoying and awful characters in their cast. These guys aren't bangers, but they aren't dreadful either. - The art style is fine.- I could see what they were going for.Cons:- This plot felt like a second draft. They had the basic message of what they wanted to do. They had some of the jokes down and the writing, but they were missing just those zingers and punches.- Another problem I have is the animation. If this were a web comic, I'd be totally fine with it, but since it's an animation, outside of a few scenes, I felt this was a bit too static. If this were a storyboard, I don't think the viewers would lose anything. I'm not asking for Richard Williams-level animation where the characters are gestating wildly, but I feel there should have been more motion. I will note that I really do like that the hairs aren't static themselves, and the way they're animated makes them feel like they're less like plastic stuck to a character's head and actually like hair. I like that.- This cartoon made me realize how important background music is. I'm not against the concept of a cartoon having no background music, but the audio is so acoustically boring that I feel a bit of music to help set the tone would help.- Also, their backgrounds are forgettable. They do their job, but I feel there's something that could have been done to help them stand out a bit more. It's like almost any scene could have happened anywhere in the school, barring a few a handful of scenes, noting that those handful of scenes are also the scenes with the most animation. Overall, I give this a 6.9 out of 10. There's something preventing me from giving this a solid 7, but I like it enough not to just give it a 6
>>155131325it's over 10 minutes so yeah it can be a pilot
>>155131126oh, look another oh so different outsider who doesn't fit in at highschool. what a stunning and original concept
>>155131126>White posters heh. That got me to smile. If this were a bit edgier throughout it would feel very 2000s.
>>155131448>Tolerating the generic Let'sPlay gaymer over a MS Paint fan artist>Choosing some puzzle game over OSRSYou sir are not only a retard but also a geezer with no whimsy. I bet you also like AI goyslop on top of that.
>>155131126Neat!
>>155131126Uh no thanks, I saw like the first few seconds and it has that DEI pink coloring and lighting. Also Strawberry Hill? Is this supposed to be a tounge and cheek reference to Mission Hill?>>155131448>Runescape fan. Explains a lot, I knew a girl from my school who brought Runescape on a flash drive and played it on the computers but nobody even the nerdy guys wanted to play with her. >>155131652Again explains a lot. It's not for me, so I'll leave it at that.
>>155131126What even is the premise? It's like an early 2000s webcomic but without anything weird going on.
>>155136198You're just supposed to go with the "vibes" man, don't ask questions and consume it.
>>155131448i think someone is really mad at the internet
>>155131126>we can make a whole myspace page.... oof....i hope the secretary gets a brutal and dark origin story and has guns
>>155131652Once again zoomers beat the /co/ allegations
>>155131799It's the same reason why Pendleton Ward and Rebecca Sugar and many other millennials are 39+ , but they don't have the 90s and 2000s style.They're the 1-4% of faggots that were lame back then and are lame as hell now, just like George RR Martin who had no success in the 90s cause people had standards back then, but he had success in the 2010s where everyone enjoys depressive primitive soap opera stuff instead of entertaining journeys and cool heroes. And unfortunately we have A LOT of traitorious millennials that unironically enjoy 2010s content over 2000s and 90s content, we call them tasteless traitors. They're millennial traitors who got infected by the gen-Zombie virus. >>155131126It's like I'm watching Ed's World without the cool zombie shit nor the funsies nor the supernatural shit. It feels like rule63 Ed's World made in the 2010s >>155137013>Look!! look!! 4% of millennials have the same tastes as gen-ZNot beating the allegations. >Look!! an entire 10% of millennialsCongratulations, you infected them.
>>155133361>red beanie girl is incredibly hotWhat about them?
>>155131126>written, directed and animated by PurdyHave writer/artist team-ups gone out of fashion? I get that writing is "easy" compared to art because you don't have to destroy your wrist and your free time practicing 24/7, but it's not trivial and it's clearly needed.
>>155131695Take your meds
>>155136425Go back
>>155137257>Gen-alpha is offended.
It's pretty amateurish but I like the writing. Each team having different beliefs about the voting public but unintentionally moving to the other side is pretty clever.
>>155131126I like the art style, but the animation is very stiff and that's the most stilted and least believable high schooler dialog I've heard in my life.
>>155137127Blondie with gold-trimmed blue dragonhide for me.Why couldn't 2000s kids back then be arsed to download Photoshop or any program that wasn't literally XP Paint?
>>155137183Do anons think writers are free? Especially good ones?Why did nobody care about muh writers back in the 2000s/10s era of internet animation. Eddsworld was written like shit
>>155131126>putting tomboy in a dress10/10 trope>everything elseBORING
>>155137984No but they're much cheaper than artists. Also in the sense of being much easier to include in a collab. It's writers without art skills who are SOL.
>>155137984I just want the 90s/2000s industry back. I don't actually give a shit about indie animation. If the industry bounced back to those levels I'd never watch a YouTube animation again Is this too much to ask?
>>155138247KekMost writers working for pay are expecting union rates. They're substantially harder to get than artists in my experience. Art can be a hobby, screenwriting isn't. Maybe the best you'll be able to get is someone who writes their own comics or fanfiction but tv writers aren't interested in working on some no budget indie cartoon. They'll legitimately get angry if you ask to collaborate even if paid
>>155138275It's shocking how little anons know about the creative world. They seem to just think cartoons come from thin air and writers will work on some amateur project. Point me to where I can find good or even intermediate screen writers (who know how to format a screenplay) willing to collab on a budget and I will kiss you on the mouth
>>155138275Paying someone to write for you is not a collab.
>>155138302RetardYou have to pay to get them to collabDo you think these writers are going to be interested in working on your project for free? Do you have any idea how much this shit costs? These writers aren't your fucking friends and even if they were they'd want payment for their time
>>155138324Why do you need to pay people to work on a fucking indie cartoon?
>>155138324>These writers aren't your fucking friendsThen make some friends. If someone's working on *your* project because *you're* paying them, that's not a collab.
>>155138302collab is short of collaboration which means "the action of working with someone to produce something:"
>>155138331Are anons here really this retarded when it comes to indie animation?
>>155131695Imagine thinking using ripped assets is better than creating your own shit.What a faggot.
>>155131126Are kids allowed to wear hats in school now?
>>155138354In an artistic context it has the implication of coequal artistic contribution. If a studio hires you and to do what you're told, that's not really collaboration.
>>155138331>>155138365>Indie artists/writers bitching that they can't produce anything worthwhile because indie writers/artists cost too much to work with
>>155138369Imagine using Paint as your own """viable"" assets. You fucking faggot. It's called Runescape, not XP Paint Runescape. >>155138390.... what the fuck kinda high-class school do you live in?
Gus and Nat need to go fuck in a bathroom stall already.
>>155138291Brian Griffin is an AWFUL writer
>>155138538alex the lion what the hell are you doing in my car
>>155131126Now that's a big kipah
>>155131126>Great character designsWhy would you lie to me like this
>>155131527Ward and Sugar were from Tumblr though.The Deviantart autists are making entire professional looking cartoons using unconvential software like Powerpoint by themselves.
>>155140422>implying Sonic is great character design
>>155138331Why every "indie" cartoons are high-school or 21-years-old people working in McDonalds?In the real world, McDonald´s food is made by robots and Homeschooling is the default for most american kids
>>155142173>Homeschooling is the default for most american kidsThird worlders need to stop getting their info from schizos on youtube
>>155131126"animated" might be a bit of a stretch.
>>155131126>"What a waste of my time... this is the best they have to offer us? Only the characters are worth saving; they have a good design... that's about all the good there is. The main plot is so boring, it’s a sleeping pill; there’s no humor, nothing draws your attention to the outcome of things. Literally, other crappy series that tried to be the successor to Family Guy managed to catch my attention for 0.1 seconds. They had 'humor'—something, even if it was just a particle of humor. This has nothing: it's soulless, unfunny... it’s not even garbage, because at least garbage would be something. This is nothing; emptiness is the concept of zero made into animation. I’ll put it to you more clearly: look for a job in something else, because as a series writer, you'll starve."
>>155131126What's this crap?
>>155142173probably because the people making them are basing them off personal experiences they had in the mid 2000s when things weren't shit yet. hell people who weren't even alive during the 90s make media based in the 90s, and naturally, they get everything wrong
>>155131126this feels like the old cartoons about teens/young adults from the 2000's but there isnt any actual funny scenarios
>>155138331People got bills to pay, yo
>>155131325It's what the algorithm favours
>>155140419I've seen bigger
>>155131298My new original series Blueberry mountain
>>155131126Bump because I have a plan for this
>>155153330plan?
>>155138331It's their time and skills being used, that's why
