>>8890168>but shit storiesthis part's pretty redundant considering 99.99% of all doujins have shit stories anyhow.
>>8890168I marathoned thisthe world building makes no sense>there are flesh android clones>they can be perfect copies of a human>they can transfer and receive memories>the mother is dying>for some reason all she needed was was some energy discharge from the android to wake upand the retarded twists and shock value slop>dude androids can get pregnant>android abortion lmao>the doctor is actually le hecking ebil and wants the mother for her supposed anti-aging genes that is only mentioned once by the end of the story>the doctor wants this despite there being perfect human copies
>>8890887>android abortionThis was so shit, especially since the dead baby was shown. Why have that in porn?
>>8892417It is, of course, somebody's fetish.
>>8892417yeah the abortion part kinda threw the story offalso when the son never had sex with the real mother when she woke up was kinda cringe
>>8892525What's wrong with people?
>>8900348Why are you unable to accept the diversity of the human condition?
>>8900348>>8900353>bumping an empty dead threadso disappointing
I'll nominate Isekai Furin II. Great art, and a pretty okay story, good sex scenes and variety too (despite the fact that it's moreso a manga than a hentai). However, the manga has a double shit whammy of magical birth control - absolutely ass, and an ending that just about ruins it. To summarize, the MC gets cucked at the start but goes to an Isekai where he's an ubermensch. All the babes he fucks are amazing, he fucks them so good they forget about their husbands, but at the end it basically kneecaps itself... The women like MC's cock so much they basically hate him over it, they won't be able to forget it, but they also want to love their husbands, so they're stuck in a bad situation forever... and then the MC basically goes back to his world, beats the shit out of the dude who cucked him (which IS cool) BUT, he then gets back with the cheating whore wife of his... And it's not as if the wife is blameless, throughout the story you get flashbacks to the wife being an absolute cunt to the MC, no ambiguity, but the MC just forgives her after she cheats on him. It's a really weird and unfulfilling ending. Everyone is in an awkward spot, and it's like the author tried to teach a lesson about cucking being bad, but it doesn't go all the way, in fact it's quite hypocritical and unsatisfying in that regard. The MC loses, the women lose, the reader loses. >>8890168Completely ruined by abortion.
>>8900467I remember how much I was really enjoying Isekai Furin 2 as a major hag lover. But that ending is easily one of the worst endings to any story I've ever read.Like, truly, it was just awful. First off, with such a ridiculous premise as "Having a skill that makes married women want to fuck you" should NOT be trying to instill ANY moral message. And then the husbands and wives. Why on earth would you write the husbands to still be alive, or loyal, or that they get back together when you spent the past what, 100 or so chapters showing the wives fucking and genuinely forming a bond with the MC? The whole point of the series was the MC traded a cheating wife for a harem. And you take it away?But by far the worst part is the MC leaving behind the other world where he's a hero to go take back his cheating wife, who genuinely doesn't even apologize for the affair. He just fucks her into submission.If there was any moral this story tried to convey, it felt like "If your spouse has an affair, give them a second chance." Which is a fucking insane take. If you wanna espouse a moral, don't write porn. Or at the very least, write porn with a better story.The mangaka's latest story is also pretty boring. It's about a woman who was a S-class adventurer and helped save the world retiring to her home town and marrying her childhood sweetheart, only for them both to end up becoming adventurers because the world's actually still in trouble. The thing is, the wife is keeping her true strength and past a secret, I guess to not immasculate her husband or scare him or some other bullshit. So it's just the same gag of them trying to deal with a threat where the husband is trying his best and the wife is just sandbagging around. And it's a mono romance so despite the story having tons of hot chicks and fanservice, nothing's gonna come of it. Really, just weird narrative choices all around.
>>8901040Agreed. I re-read it again just to be sure - but indeed the fucking milfs are literally calling their husband's cocks pathetic, they acknowledge they will never get a perfect dicking ever again after the MC leaves... it's not just sad but an outright fucking tragic ending where each milf will remain unsatisfied deep in their hearts. I was pretty smitten by the Thief as girl #1, she screams about having the MC's babies, and weeps at the end saying she hates the MC for giving her so much pleasure but ultimately leaving. This hentai should be studied in porn school as an example of how not to finish a doujin...
>>8890168I translated this doujinshi into my language and I'm going to say that I do love and hate the plot of this.I sort of love the concept of the android wanting to persue the flesh of her son as a way to feel closer to him, out of her twisted love for him and as a way of coping against the abuse the little twat was giving her. I also love the question about motherhood, who is the real mother? The one that cared for him, or the one that birthed him and all that shit. The same way I feel that the way the android starts acting antagonistically against the mother making you question her whole personality, that was quite exciting. But once the doujinshi gets to the abortion scene, which it isn't that bad, it is a way to show how fucked up the relationship between the android and her son is, the doujinshi starts shitting itself.The whole bit with the perennial youth, the bit with the doctor's monologue, the way the mother suddenly forgives the android at the end, the way that they seem to fuse and everything ends on a sort of positive note...This doujinshi had so much fucking potential in my eyes, guys. But well, it was still cool, maybe part of it is just cope from my part, I translated the whole thing into my language, kek.Ways I would fix the plot:>Make the son more like a character, shows us how his relationship with the android was in the past.>Show more about the mother's and android's relationship.>Cut the whole subplot about perennial youth.>Make the android more like a grey zone villain.>Make the final twist about the android erasing the mother's brain and taking up her body.>End on a sour note.
