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>>7932804My artwork is in the OP yippee!!
WTF is going on?
>>7932804>my art didnt make it into the OP againAm I just not good enough for you freaks
>>7932814autism
based OP for keep /salt/ culture alive
>>7932879Just keep at it, it's bound to get chosen if your work is goodI say this as a 4-5 times "artwork featured in the OP" champion
>>7932879If it's not colored it's less likely to get picked up. The same can be applied to social media.
Why are there two threads up, and why does this thread look like a retard created it?
>>7932814Some dumbass got butthurt because his stupid collages weren't being used so he sperged out and created this thread. Then he added more replies to the real thread just to bump it out of the catalog.OP's a fucking moron. Or an ESL retard.
>>7932996>if your work is goodif a moron begtard makes the collage it doesn't matter if the art is good or shit.it's just random.
>>7933177I think people are just assblasted that some random artwork was picked over their own.zoomers are desperate for partecipation trophies.
>>7933203Yeah, it's definitely some deviantArt-tier retarded bullshit.
so we are using this thread?
my artwork is in the op. Nice.
>>7933401Bro take the trip off nobody wants to impersonate being a mid artist
>>7933401i wish i were you
>>7933401since I learned that you draw literal pedo shit, I just can't respect you anymore.
>>7933551What did he drew?
>>7933583Literal pedo shit. JFC read the message you fucking retard.
>>7933600K, so this literal pedo drawing is not about a real child. Got it.
>>7933615lol found the pedo
>nodraws shitting the thread bringing something retarded outside of the thread/ic/ never changes
>check magi's work on r34>no loli or shotafictional age doesn't count, in art it always counts "if it looks like a duck, it's duck"
milfs
any thoughts? I don't know if i pulled the gold bikini thing
>>7933714Specular highlights like the skin? Even moreso? Otherwise it doesn't look "gold."
Gold
>>7933714What the other anon said, speculars on the gold bits. Also, add a little bit of color to the lineart to make the image pop that much more
>>7933714Face is too frontal for that position me thinks
>>7933763Nah it absolutely has to be that way for the image's composition to work. Whenever I have to draw or see an angle like that I accept it's a compromise that has to be reached to make the image look goodRealism and correctness != appeal (although very often it does)
>>7933714That blue background makes it look like she’s at the beach. I think adding more light to the gold bikini would help, and maybe some extra rim light too from the sun.
>>7933701>check magi's work on r34>r34Even he acknowledges that what he draws was shotaloli on his twitter
>>7933923its okay, anon, you do not have to respect me, but stop wasting everybody else's time.
>>7933923Nah, i don't believe itBut what i firmly believe is that you ain't gonna post your workBut i know exactly the type of sperg you are
>>7933659just like ESLs never learn English
>>7933826skill issue on your partall you need to do is rotate the torso slightlyyou get a more dynamic pose, show more boobs and have a more correct anatomy
>>7933928not just a closeted pedophile, also a crybaby
>>7934074nta but pywgo whine about it on reddit
>>7934085no, my dear pedo, I'll call you creeps out where I usually interact with people
>>7934094you are the one who brought the shit and refuses to elaborate in favor of vagueposting loosely crying about pedos where it adds nothing of value to the threadtake it to his DMs or your twitter account @'ing himnot here
>>7933714I wanna rape her tight bald pink pussy with my greasy smegma-ridden warty cock
>>7934094yeah but let us look at your hard drive first
>>7933826nah it looks bad, also her right arm is missing, it looks weird that it just disappears
>>7933928I'm not the other guy I'm just confirming what I know you posted and said on your socials.>>7933930 >told were to find it proof>nah I dont want to lookHave fun being willfully ignorant I guess?
Experimented with foreshortening and shit on this comm, I dont usually tend to draw full porn so i wanted some second opinions
>>7934253Post it and go the full dramafag wayi dont use twatter and don't plan to
>>7934318That's terrible perspective, so before you start crying "muh style", can you guess why that is?
>>7933714You didn't pull off what you set out to do. So, no.
>>7934396if i knew what was wrong with my drawing i would not be asking for crit
>>7934074LEAVE THE PEDO ALONE!
>>7934096>vaguepostingIt's well knownhis pedo creep shit was posted here a few timesalso, cry more, let's see how much you can do about it lmao
>>7934101I'm a grown man, I'm not into kids
>>7934452then post it here againnobody's stopping you
>>7934460why would I go search for it? are you unironically retarded?I don't care about your skepticism. I said to magi what I had to say. keep being a fucking white kinght as much as you want, dumbass.
>>7934452>his pedo creep shithis pedo art is better. it seems he really obsessed with children, but forced to draw adults because of the censorship
>>7933722>>7933751>>7933867Thanks, I had no idea what specular highlights were, now I know. I also really liked the extra rim light. I really appreciate the feedback. I still have a lot to learn, so I hope I didn't go overboard with the details. I tried coloring the line art, and I feel like it makes the image look softer>>7933763At first I thought the same thing, and the angle of the head was going to be more of a profile, but as I worked on the sketch, I felt that the composition called for the face to turn further to the right, i'm still learning so idk>>7934097Thank you anon, that means a lot to me
>>7934473of course, he's a pedophile.
>>7934318It looks less like perspective and more like he's fucking a woman with a giant upper torso.
Tfw want to draw hot ass anime girls but stuck working 12 hour shifts
>>7934485Doing a drive-by post from the index to say I think she's cute, Anon. GJ.
>>7934485You got any tips for doing good lineart like you? Shit's crazy good.
>>7934485I want to pin her down and put her in a mating pressPermanently
>>7934485This is a solid contender for being in the OP of the next thread, good job anon
>>7934836Don't draw stump legs like you do. Unless you're into amputees. Some weirdos are.>>7934485That's nice. Now face the wall.>>7934430If you knew how to draw perspective, you wouldn't have to ask for critique.
>>7934967Still wanna fuck to your lines.Also, something I did a while ago and didn't share here.
>>7934968very nice
>>7935102Yo, quick question about manor stories. Where do you find your potential voice actors for those projects? Any recommendations?
>>7934967Why is she sweating, what purpose do those sweat beads serve if the rest of the artwork doesn't convey any motion whatsoever? Or are those just pimples on the ass cheek and her thigh?>>7934968You suffer from small head draw syndrome, luckily for you you're digital slop, so use the transform tool to fix that mistake.>>7935102There's probably a reason why you didn't share it here.Speaking of digital slop, how are you still drawing amateurish pin ups almost 18 years? That's the definition of insanity, that you haven't changed a bit and before you give us another TL;DR, just answer it in one sentence.
>>7935247this troll is too on the nose, you have to pretend that you're being nice.
>>7934888She's supposed to be kneeling, but I guess it doesn't really look like it? I'll try to get some reference and fix it after work.
>>7935102Great stuff. Your style reminds me of BBCChan.
how is this looking
Hmm
lil messy
>>7935247you tickle my funny bone anon
>>7935247The true definition of insanity would be answering to a malicious troll lol.
>>7935189I'm pretty sure you can ask him directly via Twitter/Bsky DMs.
>>7934318this is cool looking
There are no trolls. Just people delivering truth you’re too much of a pussy to accept.
>>7935771You can change the word troll to asshole if you prefer. I'm not even arguing the substance of the comment, just the delivery. It's obvious ragebait.
>>7935733No, I can't. I have no friends and people don't check that. Ask while he's here.
>>7935488>how is this lookingAmateurishly unfinished. There's nothing sexual about gatcha game pulls. You're not pioneering the lifestyle, either.>>7935594>hmmmExactly. What were you trying to convey here, this doesn't make any sense.>>7935657>lil messyYes it is. I can't imagine the finished drawing being any better, it's just your basic, run of the mill, generic elf pin up. Before you sperg out, ask yourself, where the fuck is that waterfall coming from? You're obviously only going to draw a jungle in the background so, do waterfalls just, fall from the sky in your imagination?At least Bob Ross makes the conscious effort to paint an origin of his waterfalls.
>>7935903I didn't want to convey muchJust wanted a redline(which I should've mentioned)
>>7935802You're not arguing the substance of my critique, because it's true. That void, purple background SCREAMS lazy, generic pin up.For someone who's been doing it for 18 years, you'd think you'd put it more effort. Amateur.
>>7935905Redo it altogether. You're digital, it'll only take you like, 20 minutes.
>>7935771Deliver the truth while posting your art pussy.
>>7934968I love your rendering style, blog?
>>7935903>Amateurishly unfinishedI see, I should've said 'how is this looking SO FAR'of course it's unfinishedmy idea was to draw the watching porn, her saying 'insane pull' is about the guy finding a particularly hot video
>>7935657Update.. figuring out shapes and lighting
>>7936070Don't engage, he's just being an asshole for no reason. Your drawing looks great and I like the concept, has something familiar or explorative about it, like two siblings watching TV together without it being incestuous I mean, kinda hard to explain
>>7935947I don’t have an art pussy because I’m a man, faggot.
>>7936123>Don't engage, he's just being an asshole for no reason.LOL I think you’d be better off on Reddit.
>>7936012@cycleoftormenti've only posted lineart and sketches though
>>7936129>I am on 4chan, so people HAVE to take my bait
>>7936090This,s looking good. But does it follow the rule of thirds? Are you going to crop it?
>>7936131Is there a drawpile server you usually hang out in?
>>7935488Girls legs are completely off. Looks like you wanted her thighs spread, but didn't know where to put her lower legs and drew them in later.Why is her right leg curled underneath her butt like that? Her thigh is literally bending forward to make the pose happen. We shouldn't be seeing the front and side of the knee from that angle. If I were going to draw what you have, I'd probably have her leg raised with her foot resting on a coffee table.For her left leg, I think we'd be seeing more kneepit with her foot in profile, probably propped up on her tiptoes. The foot you've drawn is above the ground, and doesn't seem to be resting on anything. Upper bodies look pretty good though.
>>7935908Oh, I completely agree with you on the low effort put into that artwork. That was definitely halfassed. Just a demo to test CSP's recording. That's why I said I'm not arguing the substance of the "critique". I was colling you out for being unnecessarily aggressive.I put in my art time and effort equal to what I'm being paid for. That's just the reality of being a commercial illustrator.
So many years on this board and he still can't take any single criticism with the excuse of people either "trolling" him or being "asshole".Literally dobson tier of retardation.Just let the people call you names and shut the fuck up, you ain't special.
>>7936463>doesn't accept a normal response and deflects to personal slander>"I'm not a troll"my sides
>>7936463Y u so mad tho? What made you wake up and decide to be the way you are? Or are you just autistic and incapable of interacting with nuance?
>>7936090Consider this fair critique, but what's going on with those eyes. The right eye is looking towards a three quarter angle while the left eye is almost at profile. Where is the right of her rib cage. Why is her right arm floating in mid-air like that. I don't think that waist is supposed to fold over like that. Change that now, or you're polishing a turd.>>7936450You're an unknown, there's nothing commercial about your art; you're just the next digital slop in line in the year of Our Lord 2026. Please don't exaggerate your mythos.Let the critiques continue, let the art speak for itself.
>>7936574Are you not capable of receiving an honest, fair critique about your art? Do we need to baby you, tell you the art is worthy of a refrigerator door, that it's, worthy of praise?No. If your art sucks, you should be called out on it, then decide for yourself, what am I doing wrong?You can either a. ask for help after getting punched on the chin for it or b. become this thread's lolcow. The choice is easy. I'd pick A.
>>7936583Sure sure, you can type, we can see that. Why are you so mad tho?
>>7936583You have also been here for many years so we have to assume you're just as skilled as the people you're dishing out such hard hitting critique to....right? RIGHT?
>>7935102>try to foreshortening>settling with as anatomically flat as possibleClassic!
>>7936574you always make these generals fucking unusablekill yourself
>>7936444Do you have a vendetta against this guy?I swear no matter what thread i happen to find his art there is almost always the same sort of anatomy pointers in the same redditesque style of writting. I get that everyone can always improve and that theres no bad in having feedback but it seems a tad bit obsessed.
>>7936841tb h redlining would be better for the artist and the rest of the thread instead of long writing like that
>>7936856Something something an image says more than a thousand words and i am pretty sure if he can splurge so many words he can put those words into drawings...Because he does draw right?
>Now no one can post work because of the dramafuck you faggots
>>7936866These threads and the whole board have been unusable for years
>>7936383i used to hang out in the /ic/ one but i haven't joined in a looong time
>>7935247>Why is she sweatingMakes her stink good
>>7936582>You're an unknown, there's nothing commercial about your artI never implied I was famous, that's just you making up a narrative you can go against.What's commercial about my art is that people pay me to make it. Simple as.
>>7936583>Are you not capable of receiving an honest, fair critique about your art?I'm OP and didn't write the post you are replying to.I can accept a fair critique, as I did here >>7936450
Liquified textures are fun.
>>7933401very good. why not pushing the perspective though?
>>7937110thanks, lacking imagination and inertia mostly, and I just wasn't very good at it so I would've struggled to give up the parts I've already drawn. Although looking at how you did it seen like an interesting way to keep everything consistent without resorting to 3d model the scene so I might try doing it, but I don't know if I'll do it on this particular piece though.
>>7936832you are you framing this as he's not capable of doing it while the timelapse clearly shows he can. its funny how desperate you crabs are to pull others down to your level, just so you can forget that you are at the very bottom of the bucket.
>>7937215yo magi, you ever thought about doing a Webtoon of your harem oc
Does it look like a drawing by an old person?
>>7937281I dunno what you are getting at, but more like a drawing of an old person with that saggy and deflated anatomy.
it's still wip but are there any big errors at this stage?
>>7937297The bodies seem kinda long. There shouldn't be too big of a gap between upper corners of pelvic cradle and the lower parts of the rib cage.It IS a very difficult interaction to draw though.
Feeling kinda aimless latelyAnything I should focus on improving?
>>7937358
>>7937358Line quality (messy hairy lines), perspective (lack of proper foreshortening, especially on the hands) and anatomy (this kind of simplified shapes aren't good for porn).
>>7937297Boob squish needs to be fixed. Try to remember that when fat meets fat it tends to compress, meaning it gets sent in all directions away from the mass of the force impeding on it - this means up, down, and splayed outwards.Apart from that everything is pretty good, it's a nice piece and the colour palette is lovely.
>>7936090i think i got it to where i like it now, just gonna clean it up
>>7937523>>7937313alright thank youu
>>7937419I see I see, I'll start w working on line qualityThanks anon
>>7937549Now that I see you quoting me, I realize I might have sounded very dismissive. If it's any consolation, I think your art definitely has some appeal.
>>7937589>I realize I might have sounded very dismissiveI didn't feel that way. I appreciate it when ppl are forward, especially when giving criticism
>>7935102>There's probably a reason why you didn't share it here.>Speaking of digital slop, how are you still drawing amateurish pin ups almost 18 years? That's the definition of insanity, that you haven't changed a bit and before you give us another TL;DR, just answer it in one sentence.retard
>>7937007So is a proper anatomy. Exaggerated or not, that's very unappealing. The last time I saw an ass divided in sections like that I was at a butcher's counter ordering meat.>>7937281Yes, it does. Drawing child pornography isn't sexy either, old man.>>7937297PLENTY. I suggest you do more anatomy studies. And don't listen to >>7937523 , he/she isclearly misleading you, the left forearm on the redhead is nonexistent. Unless you like Ethiopian thin, that's a personal choice.
>>7937358Anatomy. At least make an effort.>>7937528Those eyes are going to come back and haunt you. On both those elves. Mark my words.>>7937664>You can only critique an artist's work.>Digital slop. amateurish pin upsYou must be new here. That's called a critique, despite what your fee-fee's tell you. No participation trophy for you.
Whatever happened to a good old, honest critique that lands a meaty punch to the mouth. What's with all the cotton-candy asspat bullcrap?Christ.
>>7937268I don't think it has strong enough premise to function as a webtoon, unless you meant it as a generic term, I post them on online already. >>7937297I think you should make Eris' upper arm segment longer so it can show her elbow and forearm, it looks too short right now.
>>7937833see >>7935947
>>7937827>So is a proper anatomy.
>>7937827>And don't listen to >>7937523 # , he/she is clearly misleading youNo, I have breasts myself so I have a better understanding of the movement of their form and mass under action. Nothing about what I typed/drew was inaccurate.
>>7937828>Anatomy.anything in particular thats off?
"Post Ink Clarity"
>>7936840Nah dont think I will.
>>7937828>That's called a critiquevague opinions aren't art critique. they are the same slop without any value you are mentioning.
>>7937664>newfag doesn't know it's the same person
tried drawing from a lower angle but i think i fucked up the head/ponytail cause it looks weirdly flat
>>7938434retard
>>7936444>Looks like you wanted her thighs spread, but didn't know where to put her lower legs and drew them in laterthat's exactly how it went, actually. dunno why that other anon got on your case, I wouldn't post if I didn't want feedback, and yours wasn't dismissive. tried redrawing her left leg, the right one I didn't bother with, since it's gonna be cropped out in the final anyways. there are still things to trial and error>>7934967>>7934968I wanna draw like dis>>7934485this rendering resembles rizdraws to me
Away from pc started another on ipad
>>7938734I would probably populate the value range a bit more gradually, but I can respect the unique look if that's what you want to preserve.
>>7937281Anatomy is not really the problem, but merely a symptom of you not having a sufficient control over your tool. Thick, wobbly lines suggest that you went through a lot of trial and error just to get to the meager results you have. I recommend you fiddle around your brush size, pressure and stabilization settings to get much more reliable strokes. Then the rest is up to your muscle memory, arm/wrist/finger/shoulder/elbow utilization, arm support and zoom.
>>7938471
>>7938762Yah I I kept going at it
>>7938836You may wanna do a final check while zoomed out fairly far away to make sure everything checks out.
>>7938875>>7938836Edit B. Tried to preserve the angle a bit more.
>>7938815Standards are too high around here...
>>7938963Sorry that you suck.
>>7938968
>>7938815thanks for correcting, yeah i fucked up the neck it looks like>>7938963cmon man no shit stirring
>>7938968Shut up biatch
>>7938977You messed up more than the legfuck off back to /beg/ dunning krueger faggot
Does a fight always break out around here when somebody asks for corrections?
>>7938987>You messed up more than the legHe didn't mention the leg you faggot
>>7932804
>>7938990I meant neck but it still appliesHis shit is fucked top to bottom
>>7938887i like the changes
>>7939025It looks like she is hoverhanding the breeding mount. Make her really grip into it man
>>7938530That looks much better, glad I could help.
Left to go out and drink with friends. And this fag is still shitting up the thread. Jesus man...
>>7938530B-Blog?
I think I finally figured out my zoom issue. I should adjust my IRL neck/upper body at the same time as I adjust my zoom, in order to establish the range of motion for my own body in relation to the distance for viewing the active canvas from the ideal range.
>>7939025Previous one was decent. This one is yet another polished turd. Your pelvis anatomy is beg level and because of that you can't pull off this kind of hyper exaggeration.
>>7939183Huge wide hips fan excited to draw them for the first time.jpg
>>7939366I guess it's finally time, huh...
>>7939396Oh wait, lambda is the other way.
>>7939366>>7939396You can simplify the shape. This kind of bone detail is unnecessary unless you are drawing actual skeletons.Focus on proper perspective instead of detailing.
>>7939400Oh, I will, in fact you can see some of that already happening in some of the examples. Although a third of the examples were already from pure memory; I kinda already got kinda comfortable drawing them more complex.
>>7939401>>7939400I guess the middle example of 2 curves, 2 straight lines and 2 circles (the middle example) are about as simple as I can make it.
>>7939411It's interesting to see how BIG BONED you have to go to arrive at my preferences.
>>7939421Drawing lewds just got spookier than ever.
>>7939432The real treasure I got out of doing these hip studies was the "boneify" shape rhythm. Not just bones, but you can use it pretty much anything, even abstract and partial objects!
>>7939544Nvm, any perceived improvement there came from using better zooming habits and nothing else. Still neat tho.Was this thread this dead before?
long john
>>7939763Sometimes I lose motivation to post in the thread if it feels like no one's really responding which I guess creates a vicious cycle
>>7935488took me a week but I pushed throughwhy yes I have altered common sense / casual fetish how could you tell>>7939822beautiful rendering, but her left hand...>>7939823uncircumcized representation
>>7939937Got a place you post anon?
>>7939823"I bestow upon thee...EXCALIBUR!" Very nice.
>>7932804Howdy everyone, I almost never post on this website so apologies if im doing something wrong. Ive never really drawn fat nor boobs upside down so I wanted to check with yall if it looks okay? I was mostly thinking with the water balloon method. If theres anything else though thats worth critiquing lemme know.
>>7940005(immediately forgets to post it)
>>7939937
>>7940007If she's hanging upside down and meant to be in uncomfortable position and situation, consider showing it through gesture. Now she's just hanging there straight and stiff
>>7939763Busy failing with my art hustle. Need money to draw.
>>7939968Yes! I post on 4chan.
>>7940040You need to make yourself galleries in Pixiv and DeviantArt and E-hentai. 4chan doesn't have enough users.
>>7940042I was just joking, that's not my work.Anyways, let me ask. Why?.... why should I create anything on deviantart art or ehentai?I have galleries there and nobody looks at my shit Anyways. The people that "like" my work doesn't support me with any money or encentives.If they liked my work enough, I'd reckon they'd make the gallery for me. These websites aren't fun anon. So why should I waste my time pandering to others?
>>7940044Do you know how others find new art and artists to follow in Pixiv, DA and E-Hentai? They use the search function. When you upload your works, you give the work tags. When users search tags that interest them and your work has those tags, the users find you. I've been drawing for 5 years and I have thousands of followers in DA and Pixiv and most my comms and monthly supporters come from there. Learn to brand yourself if you want to make money, newbie.
>>7933583Actual pedophile shit, graphic shit like Naruto fucking his 8 year old daughter- shit even Jeffrey Epstein would be sickened by. It's a shame because his regular art is so nice and he has a unique artstyle. No doubt irl he has USBs full of CP he uses for reference. Hopefully his day job isn't one where he's allowed near children.
>>7940047I'm a busy guy and I'm too lazy to search through all the tags for just a quick fap, I can only imagine that others do the same as well.Fyi, I'm not a newbie. I've also been drawing for about 6 years.
>>7934074He's not a closeted pedophile, he's proud and open about it. He is also a crybaby and throws tantrums when anons call out what a sick fat fuck he is.
>>7940048Shut the fuck up bitch! It's my turn to talk. I'm talking to Anon.
>>7934096Holy shit magi just stop drawing child porn ffs
>>7940049>doesn't know how to garner audience and clients/supporters>says he isn't a newbieOk, newbie
Great, now I lost his attention. Go take your pedophile shit somewhere else. That's not even me you asshat.
OK, whatever, you guys are stupid weirdos anyways. Enjoy your stupid drama. I got things to do.
>>7940019when posing I drew the guy's with his left leg raised a little, leaning against the armrest. but because the bottom is cut off, and the pants are covering his feet, it turned out poorly readable.I also see now that I drew the dickhead too dark. and the motion lines I phoned in, very bad>>7940047nah man that's not my thing, it's only a hobby
>>7940056You are allowed to make money and gather audience from a hobby
>>7940056You remind me of a friend that I used to have, your artstyle and how you do it just as a hobby. And comics, Never satisfied with his own work, eventhough it was already good. I won't say out if respect but you aren't him, since he was good at coloring. 50/50%
>>7940065You deleted your previous post just to make a worse post
>>7940066Yes, and to continue my misspelling. Does that irritate you. I can taste your tears.
>>7940068Just wanted to make you self-conscious and you to know your blunders were seen
>>7940069I could care less.
>>7940056the knees anatomy and leg's perspective+proportions were all wrong, my man
>>7940070That is your second post about you not caring
>>7940074Because I'm waiting for these fallout 3 loading screens to finish.
poto>>7939937super hot
>>7940052where he posts child porn ? I thought he has stopped to do it.what is the purpose ? why ?
>actually malding over loli stuffWhy are you Redditor-tier retards here on 4chan? Get the fuck out, tourists.
>>7940098Those feet, especially the toes look kinda big/chunky/chubby. If it's intentional, then fine.Here's a redline for various potential considerations.
>>7940150You are in no position to teach others how to draw feet.
>>7940141To call out human garbage like you.
>>7940166I should probably do a focus study on them too, but I figured this was enough to point out what I needed to tell, which was more about the overall size in relation to the body, rather than shape.I think I can draw really nice and pretty feet if I really try and focus on that. They've been kind of bothering me on my more casual passes on them.
>>7940028I'll be sure make that change, thank you!
>>7940150Anon you're a fuckin genius! I knew there was something off about them but I couldn't tell what it wasThank you greatly for the redline as well, you're far too kind
After being in a drawing slump for over a year, I've discovered the power of having an oc, but I only want to draw her now lol>>7939401>>7939411>>7939421>>7939432This is sick!
concept
>>7938887Cool use of flats, I like it. I think some value contrast (on her specifically) could help her pop out a little more.Pic related has a lot of art using flats and makes great use of contrast with a good balance between light and shadows, sometimes adds more detail and texture/patterns on midtones, or defines the form on the shadow with some intetional fill + rim light. It's useful to know even though you're just using color, you're still drawing, so you can add some variety just like some comic artist using inks would use different hatching techniques. Pic related uses a mix of flats and gradients, but they're subtle enough, you can do that with an area of interest, such as the face or her hair, you can even go a bit off rails and use a literal texture layer on top just for flavor, it can look cheesy but it's an interesting approach, sort of as trying to figure out how a combination of blobs, marks and patterns can trick the eye into something that feels complex, I'll post an example in my next post, same artist.
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>>7940264they are making shit up at this point.
>>7940280Tristana...?
>>7940299You draw porn of Naruto fucking his 8 year old daughter and Salad. Are you trying to gaslight and deny you ever did this now?
>>7940235>After being in a drawing slump for over a year, I've discovered the power of tracing Ai Fixed
>>7940367cope some more, beglet
>>7940356Nothin' wrong with that. They're just drawings.
>>7940367>nobody ever drew anything before AIThis is another piece of mine. It's, technically speaking, identical to >>7940235. Do you want to check the upload date yourself, or would you prefer to save yourself some time and scurry away with your little dick between your legs now?https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=5200274
>>7940383>getting this assblasted.im not that anon but bro this isn't looking good for you. just ignore them lmao
>>7940392>assblasted>isn't looking good for youStop describing yourself and projecting it on others.
>>7940395lol ok
You know you made it when vendetta fans start going after you.
>>7940407This.>>7935102>>7935657>>7937297>>7937837>>7940098>>7940235Good shit.
>>7940392Guy replying to you isn't me lol, but honestly it's hard not to get frustrated by those kind of accusations. You'd think art just didn't exist at all before AI. What do these people even think it's trained on in the first place?
>>7938251Why does it look like that tattoo above that poorly drawn penis is just floating in the air, rather than it looking embedded on his skin? You would think gay artists would have a much better idea about drawing the male body, unless this was drawn by a female, then you get this reply, >>7938080 and understand why.>>7938471That's not a lower angle, that's just an awkward perspective. Why is she wearing a crown. What about that conveys movement. Why does she (he?) have weird sciatic pain lines?>>7938815The blind leading the blind. You only made it worse.
>>7938887It turned out EXACTLY how I knew it would. So did your cross-eyed elves earlier. Wonderful job.>>7939025The saw horse table legs are at an angle to the left. The legs on that futa are angled to her right. Make it make sense.>>7939366More like, I can't draw perspective.jpg a second time around. Let me focus on bone structure instead of addressing my inability to draw perspective correctly. Look here, not there. I beg you.
>>7940460>>7940461And here comes mr. Unhelpful with his esteemed "advice" that would be better off left in a trash bin...
>>7939401>>7939411>>7939421>>7939432>>7939544>Oh shit, I hope they don't notice the saw horse legs>Quick, upload these scribbles, that'll put out the fireThe butcher's meat diagram analogy was spot on.
>>7939822What a terrible, half-assed color job on this. I love how the left implant is practically at his neck.>>7939823Maybe make an effort in your art and someone will justify giving it prasie, or in my case, a critique.>>7940468Quiet, no one asked you. Either give critiques or keep your drama to yourself.
>>7940472Is your crab-strategy making advice so unpleasant that you keep everyone down by making them not want to follow advice, regardless of how right or wrong it may be?
>>7940472>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gxnu3PQIypo
>>7939937Boring, unappealing storyboard. Why would you type out LOUD INTERCOURSE (FULL VOLUME) rather than use the proper onomatopoeia? Why is there a GIANT arrow pointing down at the second "panel", but there's a speech bubble tail pointing to the top panel? What is this.>>7940007Thank you. Someone who FINALLY taking a critique in the correct way, shown here, >>7940209 Kudos. Learn from everyone's mistakes in this thread and don't get caught up in your own ego. Well done and good luck.
>>7940235>2026>Still avoiding drawing hands>Can't draw stomachs or hips>Still drawing the same backgroundsHow. I didn't think it could get worse. But it has. This is what stagnation looks like.Unbelievable.
First time drawing NSFW as a not-so-experienced artist. Thoughts?
>>7940517Thoughts?Women exploitation, objectification, sexualization. Disgusting.
>>7940531that was a joke. don't ban ples
>>7940460>Why is she wearing a crown. What about that conveys movement... Why does she (he?) have weird sciatic pain lines?it was supposed to be a "shock" mark you see in stuff like manga. And the context of the image was that she's irritated about her dress getting wedged up her butt(again), so those lines were supposed to show annoyance and draw attention to the butt. I was pretty haphazard with all those effects and it looks like my visual story telling also sucks dick since the drawing got misunderstood so badly. Back to the drawing board!>>7939937Do you manually draw those effects and text bubbles cause they look nice
>>7940484>Why would you type out LOUD INTERCOURSE (FULL VOLUME) rather than use the proper onomatopoeia? Why is there a GIANT arrow pointing down at the second "panel"Actually very valid crit
>>7940517I think its off to a really strong start with the color and shading but the thing that catches my eye the most is the anatomy. I dont think the top of her right leg transitions into her waist well so it almost looks disconnected in a sense like its something attached rather than naturally occurring in the body. And while im not entirely sure on this, it looks like that her neck is a little too stretched out which also makes parts of her upper chest look a little longer than usual. Im not a pro artist though so id be sure to get a second opinion, best of luck!
>>7940517Anatomy and gesture too stiff and straight. She's a plank wearing human skin. The torso is straight (props for some twisting of hips and rib cage), her right arm is straight and stif, her neck is stiff and doesn't look comfortable. Her head is bit tilted, yay but the hair hangs boring way.When you draw erotica you want to convey feel, passion, whatever your kink is. She's wearing fetish outfit which is good. But in big picture, what do we see? Naked lady in sexy get up awkwardly posing. The platform is boring, the pillow is horrendous, her eye is nice, her mouth is just there, the background is light brown (such erotica, such atmo, wow!)Think about your personal fantasies. What makes them erotic for you? How does the person you desire act, carry themselves, what feeling is pushing through?
>>7940517The first thing I'd advice is giving it a more dynamic perspective that's closer to the subject. But without going there and redrawing the whole thing, I think there are still things you can do.Here are some tips:- Generally try avoiding parallel direction/size elements if you can. This can be anything body parts, to shape of light hitting objects, to sizes of different rocks in a formation.- Try using light that illuminates the picture unevenly.- These are all just options to add more contrast. Bitches love contrast. So contrast, contrast, contrast.- I didn't use crop the images, but if you aren't planning to use up all that empty space or have it serve some purpose, I recommend you give it a bold trim.I think I was going to write something more elaborate that wasn't covered, but I think I'll just let the image do the potential helping.As a sidenote:While the mood of discussion can get quite ugly at times (often for seemingly no good reason), I encourage people to use images as part of the critique. It doesn't need to be perfect, or even great. As long as it's helpful and hopefully drives the point home, then it's all good. And even if the image isn't helpful, then using an image has served its purpose discrediting the value of the critique, which is a pro too.
>>7940628>Do you manually draw those effects and text bubbleshow else would I draw them, with a shape tool? it'd look bad>>7940707I thought it'd be more amusing than putting onomatopoeia there, same with wording it inappropriately formal like that. the arrow, same thing, I thought it'd make a funny transition. 'we'll just chill in the living room' *em-dash to indicate a quick cut* *large accusatory arrow pointing at them jerking off*but if people are confused then I didn't make it work
>>7940891It worked because descriping the sound like that is valid for it being from a device instead of the characters in the panel moaning. It's a common trope
>>7940865What's gotten you into such a helpful mood? This thread has been pretty devoid of any actual good discussion, so pretty surprising.
>>7940956That's just how I normally post my crits when I do visit the board. Also me:>>7938815>>7938782>>7937313>>7938875>>7938887>>7939686>>7940893
>>7940891golden rule is; show, don't tell.Whenever you look at your work and think; "i need to tell the viewer about X", do the opposite.big fan btw(draw more tomboys)
>>7940966b-but!!
>>7940982those type of comics are a nice case of study in the matter of "show, don't tell", because they're not showing anything, they are outright telling you.Think about memes of today and how they're generally bloated with text... now realize who these type of comics and memes are made for and for how long these type of media is expected to be consumed.But ironically, it has a purpose of why they're like that; they're supposed to be easily digestible and informative about the thing they're showing, more akin to propaganda. in the case of this >>7939937The context is already there and obvious as wellyou don't need to tell the viewer they are watching porn... in a porn comic where both characters are jerking offAlso the arrow pointing towards the next panel, which makes up the majority of the picture i can already see; is pointless.Like; if you want to draw a comic of a woman with her tits out, you don't let her say something like>"uwu look at my titties!"You just show the tits.
>>7940982>>7941000>those type of comics are a nice case of study in the matter of "show, don't tell"Ironic to say this in response to a Stan Kelly comic and then complain about people explaining the joke.
>>7941002Oh no, anon, the irony is all yours.Do i need to complain it to you?
>>7941008Let's hear it.
>explain it to mepic related
>>7941016Hahaha, you say >>7941008 and then can't even come up with some bullshit to cover your ass. That's way more embarrassing than just admitting you didn't know it was a satirical comic.
>i know satireexplain it to me then
>>7940517You need to hear the truth. Everything is wrong with this drawing; as a not so experienced artist, can you answer why. If you want a real critique on this, I need to know I'm not going to waste my time giving you one if you're just going to dismiss it. Let me know if you're interested.>>7940628Well done. That's how you take a critique—you analyze what was said without your ego blowing a gasket, then you see how things can be changed. They were misinterpreted, now you do more research, you realize the changes you can make, and your art gets better. Simple as. Good job.>>7940865Incorrect. You imposed your help without first fixing your art. Don't disingenuously misguide a beginner with your mistakes.>>7940915>that pictop fucking kek. Fuck you for making me laugh, you stupid faggot. And, saved.
>>7941294>Well done. That's how you take a critique
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>>7939937Why don't they just bang?
>>7940367>Ai tracing It's funny. I had this discussion with another artist about a week ago thought we were the only was the only ones who not only noticed. I can actually prove it but I don't think tracing is crime to begin with and have no stake in this race.
>>7942500I'd be genuinely interested to see how you can prove something that isn't happening. Please upload the proof, and in the meantime you can have this:https://streamable.com/txnttehttps://streamable.com/ovyv46
>>7941875I really like this
>>7942538Based.Btw, you are entertaining fucking beglets that have no idea what it means to create anything that resembles a decent artwork.>>7942500Stop spouting bullshit, begtard.
>>7932804I did this
>>7940056If you made a twitter account you will most likely get a higher quantity of feedback on your drawings, other stuffs of inspiration since people would recommend other stuffs and have a place look at all of your work in a single place rather than sifting thru several threads.Besides your linework and comic work is good enough that you could make a pretty penny if you decide to publish comics with you tomboy character.Atleast give yourself an artist name so that people can archive your stuff in r34 or danbooru when you get tired of this because i believe your work is actually worthy of being remembered.
>>7942658>higher quantity of feedback.Usually it's best to just use discord. because people on twitter are casuals with shit taste.Even here you at least got people with expertise.
>>7942658>>7942734I forgot to mention too. twitter is my side hustle, if janky ass ain't sharing we dip'n. you get?
>>7942538Fantastic stuff man
>>7942500Do you want to know how you can tell that this artist is tracing AI?Here's a Growlithe plush doll, created by a commercial sewing machine. It has two ears, properly placed on its head. >>7942538Here we have a supposed "Growlithe" animorph, but what do you notice right away?That one ear, in the middle of the top of the head. Now, as an artist drawing being present you'd think, I can't draw that there. The ear is in the wrong place. Why would I, a real artist, make a decision like that? Hmm.Notice the color of the "breasts". How does a skin just, change color like that? Look at the hands. Look at that traced thumb on its right hand. Where is the second knuckle? Look at that elongated torso. Why would a conscious artist draw that?Of course this artist is going to complain, "The breasts are the color of its fur, /beg/tard."To which I would counter, "That's not its fur. It's skin. Retard."
>>7942736>if janky ass ain't sharing we dip'n. you getenglish
>>7942592>Btw, you are entertaining fucking beglets that have no idea what it means to create anything that resembles a decent artwork.You didn't notice the Snorks look to that drawing?
>>7942538>>7942759>dog ear looping over the entire center skull rather being on the side of the head like any sane person of this skill level would put themOrthamal has definitely adopted copying ai and pretty obvious
>>7942770>artist comes back to check replies>artist gets felted>pic rel
>>7942759I can agree on the ear part, since it's obviously placed on top of her forehead while also having a human ear, but everything else is just... what the fuck are you talking about?Women's breasts, do a lot of times slightly change skin tone and in the arts the different skin tone is used to make em pop. If you look at a lot of the generic high rendered anime pictures you see that's the case where tits are slightly if not at all shaded.In a more obvious example, when you have a woman with a tan, why are the tits usually left un-tanned? Because it makes them stand out more.You can say ortha's anatomy is wonky as fuck, as it always was, but at this point it's a stylistic choice.And the shit he does isn't something so fucking complex that it can be attributed to AI, since it tells more about you rather than the faggot.Like, look, i would get a little bit of pokin': and trollin', but at least get your critical skills straight.Also post your work and don't post ai slop because that'd be just the lowest hanging most pathetic homosexual tryhard fruity shit one could do.
>>7932804coloring is really hard
>>7942538>Please upload the proofunderstood :^)
>>7942811>It's obviously placed on top of her forehead>mfwI stopped reading right there. Let me critique your reply. It's called the crown, beginner. Or the vertex, had you done a simple Google search. Not the forehead.>>7942841Outstanding. You can't argue with facts.And that makes 300 replies. Critiques will continue until artwork improves.
>>7942841the only weird things are the fingers disappearing and the fur on the taileverything else can be attributed to laziness, oversights, experimenting or simply usual beg mistakesYou're gonna need a lot more evidence of such repeated "mistakes" to make a strong case
>>7942763>You didn't notice the Snorks look to that drawing?I'm pretty sure it's a conscious decision. They posted other art with anthros where the ears were placed traditionally. They have been drawing at this kind of quality level for years now. Your AI claims are baseless.
>>7942831It looks like anatomy and perspective are even harder in your case.
And by the way, did you all notice how the /beg/lets scattered like roaches the SECOND the critiques began? It's almost like some rejects from /beg/ tried to hijack this thread.Go figure. :)
>>7942852I'll critique your reply:Utterly useless, shallow, superficial and a poor attempt to discredit anything that might threaten the narrative you're trying to spin.Nigga, if you want to troll ortha, just call him a tranny.
>hehehe lol lmao i posted the ai meme-10000000 izzat
Defenders are already running in like their retweens are on the line
i just wanted to know the end gamethat's some weak ass bland shit, my niggaWhat the fuck do they teach you in school nowadays?
>>7942858Post your work horny davinci.
>>7942538May I perhaps get a blog? your stuff is amazing
>>7942853There also this image >>7940383 where she separated this ladies' 'left' arm from the shoulder gurgle, and bizarrely tiny pelvis in relation to her upper body now making this thread image in this thread where the artist made very glaring observation "mistakes" for someone thought to have a high level of drawing prowess. I don't know how much more proof is needed to entertain the theory.
>>7942877>High level of drawing processNot as an insult, but you genuinely do not draw, right? Brother...
>>7942879I meant in terms of being at a level where you aren't make so many obviously beginner mistakes like still putting the head one shoulder or disconnecting bones when they're being obscured by the other parts of the body.
Finally got to update this again
>>7942883Anon, he's not a professional artist that has to pump out shit of a specific quality for some company. He's just your average twatter slopper staying in his comfort zone.It's ok that you don't draw but it explains your views.
>>7942897i didn't say she was a professional artist, i just said its weird to be making so many simple mistakes this far into her art journey. I have no horse in this race so there no point in shooting the messenger.
>>7942943>not a proIt was an abstract. It means he doesn't need to uphold any sort of quality or consistency since what kind of audience does he play to? Just your average twitter retard who never seen a titty before.>it's weird to be making this many mistakesyeah, but it's not instantly to be assumed to be aimaybe he's just autistic, retarded, lazy, maybe he doesn't give a shit, maybe bad days, maybe brain fog by heavy porn addiction, maybe he doesn't have the experience you think he has since drawing skill isn't extremely linear like videogamesThere are artists who draw the same exact shit for decades and instantly regress to prebeg levels when trying to draw something elseIt's not even shooting the messenger here, you're hanging yourself by not knowing what you're trying to comment about
calm down orthamaw you dont have to defend your tracing so hard
