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What grade would you give my friend's work?
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preschool
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>>7945637
Idk maybe a B? It’s pretty good for what it is but it isn’t too nice to look at . They can make it if they keep going
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Is your friend a tranny by any chance?
I'm not sure but I just get that vibe
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Idk how old are they and how long have they been doing this?

Assuming they're early twenties and are beginners, it's pretty decent. Some things, that would make this better immediately in my eyes, her eyes need a glaze to have the gloss of actual buttons, or just be actual buttons. Secondly, her lower body is slightly too short and her skirt sits far too low on her waist, it needs to be brought up because as it is right now it also contributes to the short lower body feeling. Other than that, the pose feels a bit static, but it's look a lot better with these tweaks
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>>7945637
Did your friend send you process breakdowns? Or made clear what materials were used?
It looks like this was made off the cuff without a guide, and in that sense its not a bad attempt, but there are some structural things that I need to see underneath to get to the roots of the problem.
This looks like a thick sculpture, and if that shit is composed ENTIRELY out of clay without any clay that will cause structural problems, both anatomically and the fact that its just a waste of fucking clay when you can make shit like armatures before actually laying down clay
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t8rGdg3sfjk
Doing a basic one with some cheap wire and maybe aluminum foil to fill in the rib cage area can give the sculpture a good foundation to work on even with a more basic pose. Easier then just layering clay on top of clay.
Has your friend ever looked up clay sculpture tutorials? There are plenty online and Id think it help out your friend, Im a fan of Clay Attraction personally
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3RMw1Aee-V8
I feel that what your friend needs is like proper direction for sculptures. He has a grasp of sculpting and form but needs better direction, plus if nothing else that shit is free standing without the need of a base, so your friend is aware of balance and believe me that is impressive I saw alot of noobs in my ceramics class who were making impressive sculptures only to end up collapsing under their own weight
Id give it a C
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>>7945637
this thing looks less like coraline and more like whatever shot up that mosque a couple days ago. troon coded, check if your “friend” has had bottom surgery (if so it’s too late)
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>>7945651
>>7945787
holy rent free. The reason you're both perceiving it as a tranny is because the skirt is too low on the waist so it implies no hips or butt which are masculine features.
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>>7945637
yes ai was used for this, no I dont care, yes it can help OP see their mistakes
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>>7945857
I don't really care if this Coraline is a tranny or not, I just know she scares me
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>>7945983
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>>7945637
Im making this into a meme lmao
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>>7945637
D for looking like shit but it gets upgraded to a B for being a based Coraline enjoyer.
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>>7946532
My friend was supposed to make a piñata for his brother, and since the kid likes Coraline, he wanted to make something about it. But like I was saying, this shit terrifies me because of how empty her eyes feel (the good news is that the kid liked the piñata)
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>>7945858
Ew
Yes you are a faggot
Yes your "contribution" is worthless
Yes you should kys
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>>7946573
To be honest this entire thread is vindicated only by the fact that this thing got fucking smashed to pieces
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Faggot pose



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