advice on making better pubes?any notes on pussy also apreciated
>>8008605
This is hideous. Draw something else. Just stop
>>8008605Why not also post full pic? The puss is fine but all the details are pushed up closer to the abdomen, all these organs are much more hidden and closer to the anus, that’s really the only reason this looks off. Pubes seem ok if you’re trying to make them curly but maybe a few for hairs sticking out from the mass would be better that just a constrained mass of hairAlso I like the belly, post full pic
>>8008628not really a composed picture its a 3d model,i posted it here instead of 3 since they dont allow nsfw content ive seen porn artists draw good thick pubes that dont turn into one clump like it does here how do they do it?what am i missing?idk well other than that what do you all think of the contour lines?
>>8008644and the back lines
>>8008605Thats not where vaginas are located
>>8008648Wow I wasn’t expecting this to be a 3d model?! I feel like I’m out of my depth here now. You could try doing the slightly more time consuming thing and draw every hair by hand or draw the entire section of pubes black and then just ad spikes of hair protruding out any way you want and then add white shine lines to add detail. I’ve honestly never tried rendering pubes before, kinda hoping someone will pay me to do that. I’ve drawn pubes before but I haven’t tried in some time.This all looks fine I think just move all the pussy parts down closer to the anus, essentially the pubes would cover most of the vagina. You’d probably see the smallest glimpse of clit from between the legs but all this stuff is usually in between the legs not exposed outwards
This is how all women should get portrait in art. As the vile creatures they are.
>>8008605>>8008608>>8008644>>8008648
>>8008648Why are the back of her knees like that? >>8008685KEK
>>8008685Sickening. Its like the aliens from district 9 decided to draw a naked human.
>>8008648Is this AI generated? Why are there folds on her hamstrings??
>>8008605My god, I didn't realize vaginas could get cleft lips as well.
>>8008677Your mothers biggest sin was not aborting you.
>>8008756>>8008793its not ai i tried to draw it the way another artist and didnt get the logic of how it was supposed to look>>8008830>>8008791>>8008685whats your problem i posted this on artwork critique because i need an constructive artwork critique to improve it,if it were perfect i wouldnt be here
>>8008835Art simps like you are the reason for the downfall of civilization.
>>8008840This belongs in the /beg/ thread >>8005842 It's usually not a good idea to make your own thread over a single drawing, especially if you're still a beginner.There's really not much else to say except that a female human vagina does not look like that. The anatomy on that model is completely wrong.
>>8008851fair enough this is the first time im posting here i wasnt aware
>>8008851neo vaginas don't follow traditional standards
>>8008861You're fine, people are mean because there's too many schizos that spam low quality threads
Why not look at your own?:D
>>8008605the pubes are the smallest problem here have you seen pussy before? like even in porn?
>>8008605Quick fire improvements.the pussy is way further back from the front with closed legs you might see the very end and maybe some flaps hanging it basically starts where yours seems to end. the clit is where the flaps meet up top. Its also smaller unless the character has a lot of testosterone so usually something like having pcos, being ftm or being a cheating athlete. The flaps are usually a bit flatter. happy trails are also something usually only achieved with high testosterone. not or the stylisation of the bush itself. it helps to have more gaps showing on the side where the light hits as the shadows cast would obscure gaps on the darker side which might help make it look less flat. if in doubt go find some porn that looks similar to what you are going for and see where what goes on the real person
>>8008685Virginity is common these daysWhat's strange is seeing sex havers
>>8008987alright but what about porn you don't have to smell it to see it these days you know
hot
>>8008605that vag is way up near her belly.it should be wayyyyyy lower.anon, study your fundamentals!!!
>>8008605 better pubes?any notes on pussy also apreciatedUnironically spend more time looking at vaginas, use the hamburger method as per pic related, for pubes Id recommend looking into people that use ink to draw grass or foliage as it might be helpful at helping you understand the mechanics behind layering textures, which shares a lot with something like drawing pubes imo. 'Less which gradually grows into more' is more in your case, if that makes sense. I think its too abruptly thick, not that there is anything wrong about a thicc bush but it might look better with some density variation. Also, and again, please take this as an honest measured crit, I think your hood is a lil too long in relation to the clit and the outer lips. At least for a more common looking vagina it seems disproportionate, ofc there are many shapes and sizes but starting off with the right foot might be the better option for you.Its the kind of thing that is better that you practice through observation until the point that it sets in your mind as a symbol that you can just draw from imagination at any time, as long as you have the standardized shape memorized then you can vary it to your hearts content.Hope that was helpful to some degree, best of luck anon.
>>8009542this is super helpful thanks anon
>>8008605why do you want to fuck a cavewoman? even furries aren't this weird
>>8008644>>8008648I think the face has some charm, but the body is definitely rough, even if you account for style. The arms are a bit out of proportion.>what do you think of the contour linesToo many. Female bodies generally do better with subtle lines. Even on points where multiple bones/muscles come together like the elbow and pit of the knee, there's too many lines placed without knowing what they actually look like. The result are those grotesque looking knee pits.
>>8009873given the face doing a great impression of a freshly ran over possum i suspect its supposed to be rough and kind of offputting overall
>>8008644Wtf are these nipplesLook like prolapsed buttholes.
>>8008605>>8008608>>8008644>>8008648take less inspiration from Giger
>>8009542>>8008851do we still have cheat sheet threads? i remember we had them some time ago?
>>8008644Anon, that's terrifying. Take this edit and go look at photos of real naked women to practice. Her body parts are segmented when they ought to be seamless, with her sexual organs and breasts especially blown out and emphasized beyond anything resembling that of a human. As others have stated, her genitalia is in the wrong place, and her clit shouldn't be engorged and hanging out like that unless she's got a severe hormonal condition. Regarding her nipples, if they're too big and bulbous for a baby to get its mouth around, they're useless. Her breasts should connect at the center of her sternum instead of hanging loosely from her pecs. If you want her vag to be on full display, just pose her to spread her legs; cheating her vag to be stapled on the front is just unsettling. Good luck!
>>8008605Less is more anon. Unless you really want to emphasize the pussy to like a /d/ level in which case go harder you pussy
>>8008605HAHAHAHHA man this thread is goldOP must be kidding, noone can fuck up a drawing like that
>>8008605>>8008685>>8008851These things are abominations. I'm sorry God please forgive me.
