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>Artist improves in almost every area technically
>Art still loses some of its "appeal"
What is this called and why does it happen so often?
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it's called you have shit taste and you should kill yourself
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Right looks more appealing in every way
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>>8030803
Pic not related
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Contrast = Appeal.
Shows what you know.
When will you idiots realize that appeal is fucking subjective? Even in the general sense, both of these are appealing.
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>>8030803
It's what happens when you neglect copying/studying other artists. Something that seasoned artists often neglect is the importance of creating like a child because without it, there is no true inner beauty that shines through whatever the exterior is.

The left isn't as dynamic or as detailed as the right, but you can FEEL that the artist was thinking "I really want this to look like so-and-so because I like the energy his art evokes in me".
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>>8030803
Right looks strange.
Left looks /pro/.
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>>8030803
>does it happen so often
Name one case.
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looks AI traced
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>>8030811
I think it comes from copying other artists
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>10 replies in
>every opinion is wildly contradictory
im starting to think this whole art thing is a little bullshit...
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>>8030803
got lazy
lower effort
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>>8030803

my critique? 2025 drawing is more technically impressive but so visually busy that the important details of the character (clothing and face) have been lost in a sea of fabric folds and hair strands. i'll admit that the pose is far more fluid, but i can gauge the character's princely smug aura better from the 2022 version.

one of the main rules of cartooning (as in, newspaper style cartooning), is that the less details you have in a drawing, the more impactful each detail is.

i have a suspicion that you photoshopped the background out of the 2025 version to present the character, but if there's a complex scene and this individual is not the sole focal point, then i would say you are selectively misrepresenting the artist's work either intentionally or unintentionally.
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>>8030803
OP filtered, also pyw bitch
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>>8030803
Right reminds me of a modern anime's style. Anyone knows which one was that? I remember there's an elven-like character with long ears wearing a bandana.
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>>8032500
Mononoke.
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>>8030803
I don't watch animes. Are they well-known characters?
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>>8030803
lol cuz render fags
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>>8030803
How would you actually describe how they improved technically? The skill level between the two drawings doesn't look that much different to me. What might have happened is the artist didn't actually study or work towards improving that much over those three years, but wanted to show improvement in the redraw, so they attempted a more challenging piece that was still out of their comfort zone which led to it looking less polished.
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>>8030803
Left image - a character.
Right image - a pile of hair and drape.
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>>8034820
left image - something you deludedly believe is achievable for your permabeg ass
right image - makes you seethe because you cannot even fantasize about drawing it
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>>8030803

Key things that stand out are how the 2025 version has a smaller range of values and that every colour looks desaturated. In monochrome, you’ll find that 2025 is pretty muddied, which makes me think it’s not the focus of the piece and was taken out of context, and that 2022 is more direct in its presentation of the character since the hair and clothes frame the smug facial expression. Idk tho man
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mooom they are glazing flat ass little sketches again!
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>>8030803
The left is more saturated. Is it just the colors?
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>>8030803
usually because they choose a different pose/composition that some decide isn't as pleasing as before. it's not that anyone's skill ever regresses.
in your pic I don't see a progression of skill, these 2 poses could be from the same episode of an anime it's just that the first pose would be from a calmer dialogue scene and the 2nd would be from a more action packed scene. i don't see one as better they're just different.
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>>8030803
No one explained it to you, but the brain perceives simple shapes, without so many details, better; it’s not that the one on the right is less attractive, but rather that it is cluttered with details.
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>>8030803
Oh its one of these threads again
I've talked about it before but the main issue is a battle between "Style" and DESIGN. An artist while they are making improvements also may have a change of tastes along the way and when they "remake" old art they put so much of their new influences/likes into it that characters end up looking different. Theres a reason why the whole "master study" exercise exists btw cause if I were tasked to do a Master Study of something like pic related the goal isnt "Draw this in your style" the goal is to reverse-engineer a piece to see how the artist was able to create the original in the first place. In OP's pic its clear that the artist has improvements in technique but they cast aside deliberate design choices they made during that time to the point that they could read as two different characters cause there are so many small changes to the design and color choice etc etc.
As someone who constantly looks back on their OC's its something that I always keep in mind. Even my more cringey high school ideas I still try to deeply analyze cause young me liked them so I try to preserve as much as I can about what were the elements that had appeal. Its something that requires an introspective analysis though and for most of these artists on social media they just shit out something quick more for engagement and instant gratification
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>>8030803
Left=simple details
Right=sarurated details
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Unlike the bleach thread, this IS the same artist
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You can tell everyone itt is a mentally ill foid because not a single one if these idiots pointed out the tiny ass head on the increasingly taller body compared to the 2022 version. It’s just competely invisible to them how retarded this looks.
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