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Previous thread >>8033298

Welcome to /salt/. Ain't nobody got time for collage edition.
If you're looking for a place to post your alternative sex works, then this is the general for you.

>General Rules & Guidelines
1. All styles are welcome.
2. Resize your images below 1000x1000 pixels before posting.
3. Critiques welcome and encouraged. Don't be a d/ic/k, offer good help.
4. All GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry and furry porn, along with bestiality are banned on all boards, including red boards— except for /b/ and /trash/. Don't post that here.
5. No AI generated pictures.
6. Do not reply to rage bait posts, just report and hide, then let the janitors and moderators deal with the problem.

>WHERE to get study materials
>>>/ic/artbook
>>>/ic/video
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>>8066326
Video related to the OP picture:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ll-nK8Jt_rs
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>>8066326
What's the point of 10-steps long e-mail verification if Hiroshita Nagasaki stills asks for 3-step verification just to post
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>>8066326
Hideous ass OP
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>>8066372
There isn't. It's pointless now.
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>>8066326
Why you keep hurrying the thread without making a collage, you know people care, you know it motivates people to post their art, you know people will bitch about it.
And the one picture you do pick will also just get a bunch of undeserved hate for being the only OP pic, like >>8066379
If the previous thread dies, sure, make a low effort op, but if there's still time just chill...
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request from /h/, criticism is welcome
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Im going to participate a lot in this thread.
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>>8066482
Yeah why is he sticking a penis into her spine
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>>8066524
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>>8066527
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You can say tracing isnt art, but I think Im really good at it.
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>>8066537
Heres another
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>>8066535
I know this looks like im schizo, but there's a method to my madness.
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>>8066326
blossom is built like a brick
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>>8066525
thanks, I will keep that in mind for the next one.
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>>8066482
her right foot bent at an unhealthy angle
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>>8066659
noted thanks, the pose was comfortable and doable for my boyfriend, he had no problems with it. I had my doubts, too, since the knee and foot are pointing in different directions, but in the end, I liked the sharp angle and the prominent ankle. I could have done a better job drawing it, though.
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>>8066482
shitty markup edit n im not enough of an anatomyfag but tried to point out the things throwing it off
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Hey guys, I really need your help. None of my work ever actually feels erotic and it's driving me insane. Should I change the expression?? how do I make it erotic and arousing! Any suggestions, advice, and redlining would be veeeery appreciated!!!
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>>8066482
>>8066671
this is literally the other way around
everything untill the foot is correct
>>8066688
what arouses you?
do you find sketches of any artist arousing?
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x suspended
its so joever
>>8066688
what do you find arousing
draw that
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>>8066688
I think the folds are really erotic, it give her body presence.
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>>8066671
Thanks! I will keep the notes in mind for the next one

>>8066671
>>8066690
Yeah, but the foot is fine. It may look awkward, but it’s supination. I dig how much stress it adds to the pose. The pose is doable and easy on the body, I checked.
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>>8066698
anatomically possible and good arent always equal. it may be physically viable but it looks awkward and uncomfortable and thats what takes precedent. ultimately you can do what you want but anons are valid when they suggest adjusting the foot
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>>8066699
>anatomically possible and good arent always equal. it may be physically viable but it looks awkward and uncomfortable and thats what takes precedent.
Oh, I agree with you, but those comments weren't talking about aesthetics. They were talking about anatomical correctness, which is different. That's why I added that detail, because I think the ankles get neglected in figure drawing, so we end up with rigid foot poses. This is partly due to the misconception that the toes and knees should always be parallel to each other. Besides that, I take all the other feedback anon gave me as homework.
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>>8066482
Hesitant to call this a redline but more like a test of "what I would start with if I was sketching over this?"
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>>8066704
The "aesthetic" is that it looks broken
You twisted it far past the point where it's exaggerated
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>>8066710
Don't sweat it, dude. Thanks! The hips you drew are useful, and I think using the intergluteal cleft as a positioning reference is helpful. Anal missionary was quite difficult to depict and is the thing I liked the least.

>>8066725
>it's exaggerated
That's the point, but I'll see if softening the knee angle makes it look smoother. Thanks!
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>>8066730
No i literally said it's not exaggerated, it's broken
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Really dislike how this is turning out, hoping I can somewhat improve how I feel about it w/ shading,
Too late to restart it tho so gotta push thru
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>>8066737
I think the composition and camera angle could be more dynamic. The original has a lot of empty space and is very static, better suited for a long drawn out moment with minimal intensity.
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a couple WIPs
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>>8066537
>I think Im really good at it
If it's obvious you're tracing (it is), then you aren't good at it.
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>>8066767
You wouldn't have known if I didn't tell you though.
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>>8066895
Nah, it was clear even before I read your comment.
Tracing can be a legit learning tool. Now apply it to actual creation of art.
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>>8066688
She's cute but I have no idea what you're into, feels like the image lacks a specific sexual appeal... If the point was to make a cute naked girl then it works fine but if you want me to use this as fap material I don't see what kinda tag I would use to find this, you feel me?
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>>8066903
Nah its too late you made me depressed. Gonna quit art now.
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>>8066958
just to add on to the other anon, it's very obvious that that's traced. you should learn to draw for yourself and you'll realize how apparent it is
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>>8066960
I was trolling bud.
But you're both right.
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>>8066980
looks amazing so far!
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Intermission doodle.
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>>8066326
made this tonight
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>>8067370
How do you do the gradient on her glute? I like it
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>>8067512
The whole image's shading is just simple greyscale shading with a 33% "Color" layer mode gradient map slapped on top.
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>>8067514
thanks! But is it just a 2 color gradient, like the one you have selected, or does it use multiple color steps?
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>>8066688
I think puffy and large areolas like that are already erotic enough. Perhaps make them puffier and larger? Perhaps change the shape of the boobs? Like pointy perky sharp torpedo tits.
There's of course the usual shortcut. Adding incest, bestiality, age, costume and other kind of taboo like that.
And of course adding drool and grool like hentai.
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>>8067535
It's just that one gradient map and nothing else, for the colors that is. Anything else is greyscale values.
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>>8067370
Where did your twitter go?
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>>8067578
Do you ever try a simple search before asking certain questions?
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>>8066537
>>8066539
>good at it
you are not, in fact, good at tracing
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You guys know porn is supposed to be arousing, right?
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>>8066745
I love nasty gob bitches so much bros. .
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>>8068030
this. except for the animation guy everthing is pretty meh.
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>>8066710
How did you get this good?
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>>8068030
You know arousal and other emotional responses are subjective to the viewer, right?
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>>8068147
Pay attention to optimizing your tool size and other settings, software pressure settings, arm support, field of view, grip, viewing distance and in-software zoom.
It's hard to draw well if any of those are lacking.

Think of it like playing a rhythm game where the audio is desynced, goes at wrong speed, has the note line at the wrong spot, the background is too transparent and the effects are obscuring your notes. It's going to be difficult to get those full combo/all perfect results, even if you are veteran in rhythm games. Optimize your goddamn tools instead of settling for the defaults.
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>>8068147
He just copies other artists.
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>>8068351
I think my art is transformative enough that calling it "just copying" would be a gross mischaracterization. Plus I can draw without any references.
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>>8068318
What are good specs and should I invest in dimming glasses for that fov maximization?
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>>8068391
Are you samefagging Jad? What the fuck is this conversation?
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>>8068391
>dimming glasses
?? No. Use the fixed fov your eyes come with and make sure you can see the the small and big details at the appropriate level depending on what thing you are currently drawing. Use your neck and back, not just the zoom tool.
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>>8068403
I think I am the only person that's not confused. Can you voice why you are confused?
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>>8068360
Your art is derivative as fuck. There's absolutely nothing original about it.
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>>8068443
It may not be very original looking, but I'm not just copying it either.
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>>8068244
he might have meant this as a skill issue. the thread attracts a lot of beg artists.
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>>8068966
Like you?
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>>8069023
yes. i was not excluding myself.
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>>8068494
Fair. I see the potential in your art and I'm just sad you don't explore a more original avenue where you can develop your own distinct style.
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>>8069023
That's not beg art. You'd think that only if you were a beg or a livid liar.
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>>8069059
this. this guy’s art is honestly amazing. i feel the /beg/ in myself when i stare at those beautifully fluid, proportionally balanced forms out of reach. such pretty work.
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>>8069057
>sad
You are just sad I'm not drawing the art you want me to draw the way you want it. Go come up with your own art style, then you won't be needing to dump your unwelcome expectations on me anymore.
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>>8069118
Nah, that's just your coping mechanism at work. I'm sad you are so derivative and you could be mistaken for 100 other run of the mill hentai artists that draw the exact same faces as you do.
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>>8069129
>>8069057
narcissistic emotional manipulation & projection 101
skill level: pathetic
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>>8045462
You here anon? I'm still interested in seeing your work
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>>8068966
>Out of whack collarbone and spine
>Not beg art
Great, the circlejerking has reached its next level
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>>8069048
I was trolling again. Love seeing your art, though I can't replicate it's charm. I keep forgetting your socials too (pretty sure I follow you though). Please sign your work or something.

>>8069059
The latter.
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Borked it a bit, just fixed color and liquified a bit.
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>>8069207
Is this referenced? That body is really good
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>>8069212
Femboy is referenced, man isn't.
It looks really off to me though. Fuck it.
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>>8069210
it's a shame liquify can't teach you how to draw feet
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>>8069361
how does one even chicken scratch this hard
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Spooky month pic complete. Dropping it down to 1000px width kinda nukes the quality thiugh
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playing with proportions
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>>8069207
>>8069210
now THIS is art, i kneel. do i know you? post your blog plz.
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>>8066460
This
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>>8066460
The old thread was at 323 replies and reached bump limit.
Stop being autistic and next time make your own participation trophy collages, fucking retard.
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>>8069797
Google foreshortening.
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>>8069806
ok now what
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>>8069805
>Stop being autistic
the complaint is the opposite of autism retard
If you don't care then at least put your own art in the OP so everyone can shit on you
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>>8069805
>participation trophy collages
So it's still this ONE faggot ruining generals around the board
Can't believe you're still mad because your art is not good enough to make it into the collages
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request from /h/, criticism is welcome
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>>8069811
Practice it until you succeed.
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>>8069818
I can't believe you are still coping with this kind of projections.
I picked the artwork that was the most readable in thumbnail format and wasn't complete beg slop.
Stop crying like a bitch and next time make your own thread, underage idiot.
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>>8069818
It really is him. Same typing style in the beg thread. The little shitter had a melty when he was cuaght being an underaged shartyfag too.
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>>8069930
Still mad you didn't make it into the collage, huh? It's not that hard, even I got in once.
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>>8069930
>most readable in thumbnail
riiiight...
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what t he fuck does alternative stylization even mean
feels like forced phrasing to make the backronym salt work
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>>8070046

Back when /alt/ was around people kept complaining about wanting to post porn in /alt/ and there was a divide. So /salt/ was formed.
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>>8070044
The one with the giant disgusting coomer hips not making it into the OP was, I think, a good choice on baker's part
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>>8070025
I've never missed one single collage, whenever I posted in here. You have no idea who you're talking to, my dear coping friend.
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>>8070044
It has bigger characters that read much better. It has more competent art. It doesn't risk to be flagged as furry art.
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>>8070183
Lurk moar newfag. Long before /salt/ it was called /porn/.
I used salt in order to not upset the autismos, as it already happened in the past. I didn't want to waste time making a collage tho.
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>>8070284
I'm the one who made /alt/, I remember everything to the T.
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>>8070285
Then you have a very bad memory. The divide into /PORN/ came years before /SALT/ was invented.
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>>8070289
My memory is absolute. Only a woman would judge a mans ability to remember a series of events.

If your version of history was correct, why does /porn/ no longer exist? Because the dominant influence was /alt/'s split. All general's on this board today persist from what source idea became dominant, not who was first.
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>>8070283
You chose dog shit art from a P-dough artist. I don't really care, but stop larping as though you chose it for anything other than your dog shit taste.
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>>8070282
Retard
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>>8070328
NTA but he's good. Seethe more.
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does the boobs look ok here
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>>8070452
regardless, I think the collage is a good tradition and I would encourage next op to take the time to make one.
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>>8070706
Why are the boobs turning towards the viewer? Seems menacing.
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>>8070328
I explained my motivation and it had nothing to do with personal taste. It's not a competition and I'm not the judge. I just made a new thread and you atustic morons can't get over your retarded BS.
Keep coping though, it's hilarious seeing you melt like this.
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>>8069926
how
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>>8069797
>>8070925
I think it looks great, foreshortening included. I guess my only feedback would be that it looks a bit uncomfortable how the shins pivot so far forward.
It's like she's about to snap them off like bubblegum drumsticks.
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>>8070925
oh no, it's a howie
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>>8070922
You've got PRO skills in ragebaiting. The way you profusely defend yourself reminds me of that anon with the thick, zero pressure line style that is "too dumb to render". Im on to you bitch. Don't be a lazy cunt next time.
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>>8067370
your extremely fringe stuff is amazing work, but do you ever worry about negative reactions or being socially branded for it? I want to draw fringe nsfw but have fears about putting it out there
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>>8070931
yeah i agree

>>8071004
how do i do that
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>>8070282
Pyw
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>>8071099
To an extent. I try to keep things so that it doesn't hold too much weight.
And that goes both ways, because more often I worry that I'm not drawing fringe *enough* content, because it is what keeps the lights on. But when I draw one type of content, it makes me neglect other parts of my audience, which also makes me worry.
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>>8066424
Thanks for the info anon. He cute.

Got any more?
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>>8071149
>how do i do that
Never mind, I see now that you just lack mainstream appeal and you prefer to draw bizarre broken (like the knees in that artwork I criticized at first) and weird stuff.
Just keep drawing your retarded shit.
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>>8071149
terrifying
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