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GRRM needs to see a 'warning shot'. Sometimes, higher-ups in the food chain intimidate insubordinate clerks by showing that they can be replaced, and that their job will get done even if it needs to be taken from them.

I have read all of GRRMs 'ASOIAF' media, have consumed hours upon hours from fandom content, and I am confident that I can replace him.

Here's how I'd do it:
>replace Winds of Winter with a series of character-focused novellas that chronologically tell events happening at the same time:
* Winds of Arya (for the pointless training that might as well happen offscreen)
* of Daenerys and Tyrion (for Slave Bay slop that went nowhere in Dance)
* of Samwell Tarly (for the attack on Oldtown)
>then have the actual Winds of Winter released as a shorter book focussing on Jon Snow, Cersei, Jamie, Sansa and Arianne, which would begin with Cersei defeating the Faith with Qyburn's help, only to lose the Iron Throne to the Aegon Blackfyre (Griff) at the behest of Margeary Tyrell, who will seduce Young Griff, leading to Tommen's death
>second part of the book would be about how the Wall is lost to the Others, how the North falls, and how Littlefinger will use this chaos to leverage his control of Sansa and the Vale to convince Griff that "his is a song of Ice and Fire", so he helps fight the Others
>the resistance in the North will be led by the Brotherhood without Banners, Jon Snow (the true Azor Ahai and true Aegon), the new Frey, and Griff will lose his army trying to save everything.

Jon Snow will defeat the Others, and at the epilogue of Winds, news come that Euron Greyjoy has taken King's Landing, Oldtown, Storm's End, but three dragons destroyed his fleet when he tried to take Dragonstone. Daenerys has arrived with Tyrion, and she takes King's Landing.

Dream of Spring is Daenerys x Euron x Jon Snow coalition. Bran will show up as a counter to Euron's magic.

Anyone would support my claim?
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>>25289107
Buddy this guy is almost done writing it before you even started. Get in the grave with Geroge.
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>>25289107
Dream of Spring:
>Euron is fought off while sieging Sunspear, Arianne succeeds her father as Queen of Dorne after realizing 'she needs no man', with the help of the Targaryen dragons, making Dorne side with Daenerys
>but during the battle, Euron uses his magic to mess up Daenerys's brain, making her mad and revealing that Jon Snow is the rightful ruler and that Griff is a fraud
>Cersei (who escaped to the Westerlands amidst the war with the others) desperately tries to seize control of the Riverlands after the devastation, but Arya (using the face of Jamie Lannister) will kill her to save the western people from the fury of the dragons. Jamie will inherit the Westerlands, and finish his character arc by deciding for peace and going against the 'blood', by taking them off the conflict completely and has a surprise happy ending (before Arya arrives and kills him pretending to be Brienne). Brienne's son with Jamie becomes the new Lannisten lord
>the restored North will be ruled by Sansa, as regent of Rickon, and they'll support Jon Snow (+ Littlefinger)'s claim to the throne
>Daenerys will burn down Storm's End, then all the forts that sided with Griff, clearly showing insanity. Griff and Conington will die trying to face her
>she'll rapidly lose her allies, including Mormont and Tyrion, then rely ever more on Fire and Blood
>Euron's Horn will be then be used to make her dragons land, leading to her ultimate defeat by Jon Snow
>Jon Snow will be offered the Throne by Tyrion, and he'll refuse it, choosing to leave Westeros with Arya
>Littlefinger (lord of the Riverlands, controlling Sansa's "the North", the Vale) becomes the King of the Seven Kingdoms, and marries Margeary Tyrell
>Dorne and the Westerlands break independent, Stormland and the Reach are mostly devastated

Done. ASOIAF is over, Littlefinger wins, the Lannisters are all defeated, magic is bullshit, and the good guys sort of triumphed.
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>>25289118
I don't like his fanfiction, it is show watcher slop.

For an ending to be enticing, it needs to be an 180º from the HBO show and GRRM's original outline.
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>>25289135
I haven't read it, but Preston is the furthest from a show watcher.
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>>25289107
The blackfish ought to get a novella
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>>25289118
This shit sucks so bad, how does this faggot get views (because there are a lot of retarded faggots in the world, I know, it’s still annoying)
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>>25289135
>show watcher slop
Oh lil buddy spend the 5 minutes to invent something believable it's better bait.
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>>25289107
All we have to do is wait for that fat fuck to die. His publisher will pass his notes and drafts on to someone else to finish it then, probably Sanderson lmao.
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>>25289107
bro just have AI do it if you want it so bad
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>>25289135
This. Faggot Preston simps seething in your replies. Embarrassing



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