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D3nizEn
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Looking for story critique on my work.  No.25346325
Hello, I am working on a story you can find either through my Carrd (https://staggerloop.carrd.co/) or on RoyalRoad (https://www.royalroad.com/author-dashboard/dashboard/168985) and ScribbleHub (www.scribblehub.com/series/2337452/stagger-loop/stats/)

The narrative is currently 97~ pages published on either site. It is an experiential story that has aspects of body horror and scifi, among with weird-fiction and similar. Narrative is dense and uncompromising, you are meant to meet the story halfway, you won't be told anything directly.

I am looking for critique and advice, and an editor if anyone is available.
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>>25346325
>access denied
Thanks very cool
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D3nizEn
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Ah fuck wrong link sorry man

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/168985/stagger-loop
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Anonymous
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>>25346325
we have /wg for this
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Anonymous
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>This fiction contains: AI-Assisted Content
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I ignore women
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>>25346325
look a' wha' we ha'e 'ere
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