some based /adv/ for /lit/
>>25348726The pope wrote this?
uh actually it's SUPPOSED to be boring and sound like shit, it's post-modern decolonisation
>>25348726This is nice.
>>25348726Nigger. Gay nigger. Gay retarded faggot nigger. We have a writing general for such banal things as you thought warranted a new thread, you gay retarded faggot nigger.
>>25348751Ahhh. Music to my ears.
>>25348751Whatever thread this killed was probably equally if not more terrible. Complaining about bad threads pruning other bad threads always struck me as a curious position to take. It's all sewage running down the drain anyway.
wasn't this pre-de-bunked by meter?
>>25348726READ mai /lit/ niggas
>>25348793The bad thread it killed was on page 10 not bothering me.
>>25348726How do you not get bored out of mind reading this 'writer on writers' schlock? It's on the same tier as motivational wisdom. If they aren't high level artists with significant cultural influence, it doesn't matter what the fuck they say about where to put your line breaks. Jesus Christ.
>>25349249>implying that it matters what they say even if they happen to be "high level artists with significant cultural influence"Disgusting!
>>25348726miss me with that shi
it overcomplicates the whole thing, just say short sentences make the pace go faster and long sentences make it go slower
>>25349270Still too many words>grug think shaman use too many word
>>25349308Too wordy, shan't read
>>25349314shan't
>>25348726Utterly retarded. The five word sentence paragraph is just as musical because of the varying syllables. If anything it’s more musical than short and long shit.
>>25348726What I like to do is end a sentence on the most important in order to emphasize it word.
>>25349249this. I read this shit in like 2013 and its still all the same advice.
>>25349398
unfortunately, AI writes like the bottom sample. Those AI niggers love the two word, one word, three word sentences.
