Tell, don't show. Then keep telling and never show anything.
Infinitely preferable to Malazan which goes ten pages without dropping a single proper noun because Erikson is so desperate to seem "literary" that he has to force as many synonyms and euphemisms as possible into every paragraph. The confidence of a master versus the desperation of a hack.
You haven't read it. Stick to Gurmslop..
>>25420567That's why it's called storytelling
>>25420567Is there any passage in the book that feels like this to you in particular, OP?
>>25420567A significant chunk of some of the most influential literature ever written would qualify as "bad writing" today with our weird "rules of writing bullshit." Especially this "exposition bad" attitude.