I wasnt sure if i should take this to /mu/ or not but I was listening to "i dont give a fuck" by Eminem and I really enjoyed the the song, his rhyme scheme and his lyrics so I immediately tried writing in the same vain. Please pick apart my version and help me make it better. Song for reference:https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=RtFR0yof930
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>>25467873You kidding? You need no help my nigga, them bars are fire
>>25468703Thanks anon I appreciate that a lot. Ive never tried writing before