I wrote a 100k word absurdist novel about Batman despite never having seen a Batman movie or read a single comic. Here is the first five pages. Thoughts?https://your.ls/20pmh
Send this to DC and they will hire you on the spot.
The early part of this reads like a fever dream because of the cyclical repetition, like finnegans wake written by someone with much lower intelligence and a lesser education>special ethnic Batmanian wedding mask This made me audibly kek, genuinely funny. Much of the rest kind of feels like you were phoning it in a bit like a child’s school creative writing assignment.
>>25480052There's no way you read the whole thing in 10 minutes
Fair enough. How about Chapter 1 then? https://www.batmanswedding.com/sample-chapters/chapter-1Or name a chapter between 1 and 20 and I will provide. (No, they’re not all uploaded there already for you to try the URL for, to save you time.)
Seems more like robin
>>25480032This is fun, i would love to find a place this type of work gets play
This work speaks to me because fuck Steve Miller and his faggot ‘The Joker’ holy shit what a fucking rube song
And it is really funny that Burt Ward’s name is Ward. Like Bob Barker
>>25480097Do you really read so little that reading the equivalent of about 6 pages of text in 10 minutes seems impressive to you? Absolute state of this board.
>>25480689I thought you meant the whole 100k novel as anon claimedI didn't click the link and thought he posted the entire thing
Not gonna read your slop but you should kill yourself immediately
>>25481598you have extremely bad manners, anon
>>25480032Great. Other literature has been too tiresome.
>>25480032Why would you write a novel about a character you know nothing about?
>>25480032>“I sure hope the Bat Man is lapping my lap later…” Cookie obliviously said aloud.Can't believe this broke me.
>>25480356There are people like the Bat Man, out there, in real life. I know some. Truly grim.
>>25480032>em dashes everywherenot reading your AI slop
