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talentless /lit/ bookcels would never be able to write something as beautiful as this
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men don't want that either; it's just what the international porn producers beam into their little goyheads.
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>>25503152
You mean this
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>>25503152
lesbians engage in domestic violence at a higher rate than male-female couples thoughalbeit
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>>25503152
Even in their poetry, lesbians are obsessed with men LOL

lesbianism is fake. so fake that at least half of them are compelled act to dress act and present as masculine because they are obviously not attracted to women

OP is a fag, avoid bumping
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A lonely turd postured aghast
The time it spent spinning surrendered
Down the drain, or down the hatch
It streaked along or so I remember
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>>25503152
>wanting to get close to the abomination that is the female "soul"
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>>25503194
This is actually heat.
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>>25503152
>lesbians
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>>25503152
If you squint this almost looks like a work of chrischan

>>25503194
I'm tired of pretending that this doesn't suck
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>>25503184
You are autistic, retarded, and ugly and any man would rather marry an actual whore than your neurotic projecting ass.
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>>25503519
I take that back: You'd probably just turn them gay.
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>>25503152
>A poem about loving women is majority hateful innuendo about men
Must be some pretty sincere feelings.
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>>25503152
Okay, pseud. Let me tell you something from the gorey trenches of the writing métier. You are born from thin air and chaotic violence. You try to improve your and yours' life, so you pick up writing. Train, train, train, grind, grind, grind, like your MMORPGs or your TikTok or whatever the flip the youth does nowadays. Then you get good. Then you receive a talent for it. Now you are no longer talentless. HOLD UP, STOP, WAIT RIGHT THERE. Whát do you dó with your talent? THAT'S RIGHT, YOUR TALENT IS CURRENCY. IF YOU HAD KNOWN YOUR READING YOU'D KNOW THAT A TALENT WAS SO-AND-SO MUCH MONEY IN ANCIENT GREEK OR HEBREWLAND. So what do you do with your talent money? You keep it in your bookcase as a trophy? NO. YOU PUT IT WITH THE REST OF THE COINS, WHICH IS THE BANK OR THE MARKET OR WHERE-EVER THE MONEY IN YOUR COUNTRY GOES. Yés, Mary Poppins will tell you to feed the birds, AND YOU CAN DO THÁT TOO, THEY ARE NOT MUTUALLY EXCLUSIVE. ASHES TO ASHES, DUST TO DUST, BIRDFEED TO THE BIRDS, MONEY TO THE BANK OR THE MARKETPLACE.

BUT

You are strictly speaking now talentless again, though your name may be engraved on your talent, a document may prove that you earned the talent, everyone might have told it on the mountains and preached it in the holy houses. What did you LEARN from this whole process? TALENT WITHOUT HARD WORK IS MERELY TALENT.

THIS LAST SAYING IS EXPLAINABLE THUS:

1.) YOU CAN BE TALENTED, BUT IF YOU DO NOT PUT YOUR TALENT TO USE, IT WILL WITHER AND BE LEFT UNUSED, WITH YOU UNABLE TO PICK FRUITS FROM FURTHER PROGRESSIVE WORK, BECAUSE YOU DID NOT DÓ THE FLIPPING WORK

2.) A TALENT HAS NO VALUE IF IT HAS NOT BEEN EARNED THROUGH HARD WORK

Even if you have to grind your qualityposts on Anonymous internet letter gossiping forums.

P.S. (PROTIP SCRIPTORIUM)
>It's happier to flaunt your own writings EVEN IF THEY BLOW ABSOLUTE INTERNALLY BLED NEEDING-TO-BE-WIPED RECTUM, to use the medical term, in the parlance of our times, than it is sad to flaunt someone else's and mock people for something you did not write. Get good, robot, you'll get there through consistency and practice.
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>>25504396
>With men it is impossible
Back to the Bible it is with you.
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>-I
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>>25503220
Howeverthoughmaybeit... they should get dogs to wean off the catfights.
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>>25503519
>>25503523
porn neutered gimp seethe
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>>25503184
nah women are furniture
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>>25503152
I just googled the "poet's" name
Apparently some people suspect it's a pen name for Taylor Swift
It's absolute talentless slop, so it does check out
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>>25503514
The Tiger is amazing for a six year old.
As a work in its own right, it is middling. If an adult wrote it, i would make fun of them
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>>25504430
What exactly do you think you're implying? What interpretation are you putting on this poem?
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>>25504580
Exactly
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after a lot of crushing setbacks in life caused by poor immature decisions, I feel I've grown up now at the age of 38.5

My conclusion about women and living your best life as a man: avoid them at all cost. Stay single and be at peace. If I could rewind I would have never got a girlfriend let alone get married. Now I'm married and it was a big mistake.
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>>25504441
Thank you for admitting it.

No amount of internet ideology replacement-personality will make you appealing, romantically or otherwise, to men. No amount of shrill screeching about pornography will fix your own perverse fixations. Get help lol.
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>>25503152
I'm don't love the expression "virtue signalling" but this is just that. Fuck, half the point of good poetry is getting your ego the fuck out the way for a second and exist in something else that's not YOU. Fucking describe the bark of a tree or something. I don't care that you're totally not a toxic person xd (you 100% are). This "poem" is way more disgusting than the type of men described in it because of the DECEIT.
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>>25503184
>>25504441
What do men want?
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>>25505224
To love. Billions must love (within the chaste bounds of the holy catholic sacrament of marriage)!
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>>25503194
Soul
>>25503152
Soulless
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>>25504530
>I cannot READ A FUCKING POEM without making sure the author is someone I'm allowed to like
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>>25505427
normcattle would die if they didn't have melodrama and celebrity gossip
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>>25503152
One of my last gf had published 3 poetry books, and THEY WERE ALL AWFUL.
Shit like...
>my mom is like a bad chocolate.
>and my dad is like just the wrapping of a nice chocolate

Don't know why she even bothered.
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>>25505427
Looking up a poem's author is a perfectly acceptable alternative to reading their complete works to grasp the context surrounding the poem. If contemporary poets don't want to be treated this way, they could always just write poems that are good and self-contained rather than vague and shitty.



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