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Your fate is to be great
It is what the world says
Do bear in mind the weight

The hours wont wait,
Neither the days
Your fate is to be great

Even if you come to hate
And the sky is grey
Do bear in mind the weight

The path won't be straight
But there is always a way
Your fate is to be great

The steps will take you to the gate
Thorns won't make you stray
Do bear in mind the weight

Hold steady faith
It's already halfway
Your fate is to be great
Do bear in mind the weight
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Technically correct, but what's the point?
Villanelles are always fucking awful. There is more poetry in a recipe for lasagna.
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>>25639780
with or without fate
laywoman void of hate
rest in interstices head

days arrange with gait
night peruses dreams
in voids we venerate

cherubim pursues wed
exuelting what we had
rest in interstices head

with or without fate
love grows ore in weight
in voids we venerate

laywoman void of hate
love to fill and generate
rest in interstices head

with or without fate
laywoman of weight
in void we venerate
rest in interstices head
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>>25639780
Villanelles are a worthwhile exercise because, at least for the first hundred, they're going to be all form and no content. That's a decent corrective for the "just write what you feel" nonsense typically given people in school

Nice hippopotamus.
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>>25639780
It looks like a hippo



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