>>25643854
/wng/

>>25643854
Wow are you a professional poet or just really talented?

It's my first time writing just for fun
Thanks

>>25643854
>your shout stops [my mind short]
next sentence
>your existence made [...] my mind never stop
??
One moment your heart races, and another, it's a heavy, inert, object. It just doesn't follow. It reminds me of a 1.2 megawatt Siemens engine, not of the organ where feefees are stored.
>yet my feet feel light. It's like my body wants to rush to you
A heavy heart and light feet. Add to that a pain in the left shoulder, and you'll be as close as you can to the description of a heart attack.
>as if, like
I don't like it
You might want to consider turning it into a poem, since that tends to force people to think more about what they're writing

Haha thanks for the medical check-up, doc. I guess my text really brought out your inner cardiologist-plumber. I’ll make sure to get my Siemens engine checked. Thanks for the feedback though.

>>25644120
more like semen engine

Ask your mommy, she checks my engine every night and says it runs perfectly.
Hahahah