I want to make Sentinel-inspired visual novel. Same mech designs, different plot and characters. 2-3 routes. What could it be about? Need your ideas, /m/.
Forgot to say: the same setting as the original. UC, after events of Zeta.
You need H-scenes, a VN without ero is just a kusoge.
>>24057558If you want it to be a hit you gotta give a lot of focus to the Alice. Not necessarily romance though, just have her fate as one of the story cores Also for whatever plot you make try to keep it small in scale or you'll get tangled in too many points and characters and fuck up
>>24057558>Ryou Roots's design needs to be bishonen-ified so that any Otaku can comfortably self-insert as him and to make the H scenes more digestible>Alice romance route is a no-brainer (this is a VN after all, although I personally prefer the more platonic parent-child angle of her relationship with Ryou)>Brave Cod romance joke route
Well, if it will be some sort of small-scaled conflict between EFSF and Titans remnants, I'd like the MC somehow be able to get perspective of situation from both sides.>>24057621Good points, I'll have them in mind.>>24057611I dunno, anon, it's a little tricky. Maybe "fading to the black screen" will do?
>>24057558Brave Cod has to be the Ugly Bastard that wins in the Bad Ending.
>>24057634Brave Cod counterpart should be a cyber-newtype girl. Should be more proficient with incom too.
>>24057641It wouldn't be a joke route anymore if he was a pretty girl.
>>24057642Yeah, it would be hatesex route then.
>>24057634>of her relationship with RyouWhat relationship? The big disappointment for me in finally reading sentinel was finding out she never does anything or speaks with anyone, aside from functioning as a lame victory toggle that most characters don't even know exists. In this way a romance angle would be a straight upgrade cause she might actually do anything.
I've been thinking. Let's say Titans captured some zeon remnants experimental lab. Titans leader is Brave "Ugly Bastard" Cod, who also took captured (cyber)-newtype girl to his quarter, implying he could keep her around as a sex slave. At the lab they acqured pack of Xeku Eins and three Xeku Zwei units. And then they captured Mk-V. So, grunts can have their Xeku Eins. Brave Cod goes with Mk-V, two of his XOs take Zwei units. They modify third Xeku Zwei with psycommu and put cyber-newtype girl there.
>>24057635>I'd like the MC somehow be able to get perspective of situation from both sidesEasiest way is having him interact with civilians supporting the antagonists
>>24057655whatthat's like giving weapons your slaves and expecting them to protect you instead of fragging you the first chance they get
>>24057661Yes, it was a mistake on their part. But they thought they already tamed her sufficiently. The mc can take advantage of this mistake though.
Okay, I think it could work that way. In some point of the story mc will be presented an opportunity to join Titans ranks as a spy. That's a major route fork. If he misses this chance, then it's an EFSF / Alice route. It he takes the chance, then it's Titans route. He goes to Titans base, meets their stuff and can secretly recruit cyber-newtype girl to his side. On that route Alice won't evolve and mc won't get Ex-S, but he'll get cyber-newtype girl and defeat Titans with her help.Alternativelty he can go full retard and actually joins Titans, being bro with Cod and all that, but he has to fight his former allies later.
>>24057653Well obviously you expand that. She needs to be a proper mother-daughter-wife figure to the now faceless and with hair over his eyes Ryou.
>>24057611Gundam Sentinel has literally zero female characters. Ryu’s mother is only mentioned and ALICE is just lines of code.>>24057558OP my best advice would just be to play it straight and faithful to the novel. The reason why people who have actually read Sentinel love it is because it’s a hard science fiction military drama. Some call it Tom Clancy does Gundam. Lean into this, I’d recommend making the MC part of another Nero or Nouvel GM III unit that’s involved in the Pezun incident. I’d suggest making two routes for the Federation (a good and bad ending for the MC) and a bonus route as the New Desides that’s unlocked after completing the two.
>>24057747Op here. Sorry, anon, I didn't really like Sentinel plot. Too dry for me. So it will be alternative take on that, fanfiction if you like. I'll add at least a couple of females.
>>24057641>Brave Cod/Pounded Tuna power duo
>>24057747>ALICE is just lines of code.As if that has ever stopped anyone before.
>>24057558Include the Deep Striker in actual combat, it never goes into battle in the original story
>>24057815Yes, that was the plan.
Idea. If you go to the Titans route there will be a woman, maybe titans officer, who wanted to be dommed by Cod, but he pays her no attention because he prefers younger girls.Mc can help her to relieve her stress or can ignore her too, then she'll defect to EFSF.
>>24057558Just one comment: the only AI in this ought to be A.L.I.C.E.
>>24057752> i liek this thing!> but not for the reasons that make it good/what defines it
>>24058092It's way too early to think about graphics, story should be written first, at least partly. But I don't approve use of AI-generated art if that's what you're talking about.
>>24057558Have the FAZZs be more powerful than they are in the original GS story. The original story has them defeated pretty easily by the MK-V.
>>24058094>the reasons that make it good/what defines itThe robot designs
>>24057558Make what you want. Design-by-committee bullshit has no soul and you'll burn out if you're serious about doing this.
>>24057752Put a few trannys in it while at it amirite
>>24058135I had the same thought. Probably will replace destroyed FAZZ units with Zeta Plus. And FAZZ will be left for the final battle.>>24058431I'll think about it.>>24058159I know. I was just looking for ideas and opinions. And this thread has been useful, it helped me outline the concept in my head. Also, while it's not exactly an eroge, writing about waifus needs a certain mindset, anons here helped me with that too.
>>24058135I like the FAZZ the way it is. It's the shell of a gundam with high energy output just so it can mount the biggest gun possible, with most other features stripped out or downgraded. It's unique.It's also not that they completely suck, it's made clear they don't stand a chance up close against a suit designed for close combat with incoms. If they got him square with the missile barrage they'd have lived.
>>24057558Oppai Loli cyber newtype.
