/YPGR/ Yandere Pony General Revival #2 OC Mare EditionHey, really glad about how much traction thread number 1 got. Hope to keep it going. Sorry for the delay in making a new threadPonepaste Yandere Greens and Stories: https://ponepaste.org/archive?q=yandere>>43285793>>43286052>>43305279
You tried
WE'RE FUCKING BACK
>>43326871390 posts for a niche thread isn't bad plus multiple greens and OC pics.
My moonwife loves me!
>>43326890Yes, Luna. I’m Anon. What’s the confusion?
>>43326888I’m pretty sure it died to slide threads or something, it wasn’t that low before I went to bed
>>43327048That's what one of the anon's on the flutterrape thread said.
>>43327048Yeah I bumped that shit and everything
>>43326866What a monster.So, I haven't done it yet. Is our Sally's story worth putting into ponepaste?
>>43327088Yeah I'd say so.
I think all the M6's have enough demonstrated capacity for fixation that they'd have believable yandere depictions.But I'm especially interested in Dash because Yan is often depicted with a degree of cloak and dagger that I think Dash wouldn't excel at.How would she do it? She has a number of associates in the sports world who might help her out, like frat bros covering for each other. But then, they might also be obstacles for her.
>>43327088Absolutely, put it on the ponepaste anon.
https://ponepaste.org/11973/yandere/ Sally.What a reprehensible cretin. It wasn't just enough to stalk anon, but to infiltrate so many things and talking her way into learning more about him. She is too clever to be safe. She is too ambitious to be trusted. She is far too violent to be taken lightly.And then Anon... maybe they deserve each other, he's no better. Is he a good man for helping people or is he simply preying on the vulnerable for a paycheck? For him to be able to speak so well on so many things, it may mean he's been through his fair share of bad situations. Gives him that stench Sally could find.Will continue tomorrow. I'm disappointed in him, personally. It took so little for him to start acting out. You'd think a professional would be used to baiting and dealing with unhealthy situations.
>>43327088>Is our Sally's story worth putting into ponepaste?yes. do it or i´ll show up at your house and piss on your front porch
>>43327050Yeah that was me
>>43327288Anon was not ready for a pony to invade his life.
>>43327435He wasn't. He was completely content and in his own flow. Not only did she pop up out of nowhere and play into that professional/deep stabbing mindset he's employed before, she repeated it and has been changing how she is to keep him unsteady, uneven and unable to accurately counter her. The only genuine thing she screwed up on was him flailing around after waking up because she talked him into something he was genuinely uncomfortable with. Then she nearly caved in his head.At this point, the man OD'd by mixing alcohol with painkillers so I'm really starting to wonder just what's going on in his head. We don't know Anon's past. We don't know if he joined AA in the past because he had actual issues or if it's just some sort of savior complex of pretending to fit in so he can hone his skills.I think I can see what she sees in him. What he presents to the world. But I think, more than that, I can see how she sees through him. Every step back he takes is a step forwards she takes. Every bit of momentum she can seize, she'll add to her next blow. Her issue is that what she's thinking of and however far she's thinking, she doesn't know him or reality well enough.
>>43327700She caught him at a downward point in his life. The moment he took control she got completely stonewalled.
>>43327121I think you’re close to the mark. It’s her fans you have to watch out for. Adults and foals.
>>43327288After thoroughly reading this I think I can safely and confidently say: WOULD
>>43326866So what other traits does a human/pony hybrid have outside the teeth?
Fuck why do i like these threads so godamn much i don't even read them
Had to get 4chanx to get working again. If you can believe it, writing this is the only thing I have to keep me tethered to the old days.>>43328565That's a good question. The easy answer has always been satyrs but I don't care for that. Seems too D&D. Another question is if those are unique to her or not.>>43328585Because they're fun. They're easy. And they do a lotta damage.
>>43327121I imagine yandere Rainbow Dash to be more akin to an abusive husband. Maybe she'll insist on moving to another city so that you don't have that strong of a support network and then make sure that you aren't building another one by preventing you from leaving the house. High chance that you'll end up stuck in a pegasi city where you can't even walk around your neighborhood properly without the aid of either another pegasus or an aerial mode of transportation.
>>43328209Definitely what I'm thinking. Like maybe she'd just publicly claim you and her were in a relationship to create social pressure.>>43328677Cloudhome isolation is an absolute classic.
>>43328877Social pressure that leads to cloud house isolation. Then you get molded into the perfect trophy husband to bring to the games.
>>43327288I'm loving it.
How would the apple family react to yandere Applejack? Would they be horrified by it? Help her out? Or would it be split in opinions? I can picture a worst case scenario where everyone in the apple family is on the same boat as anon and forced to play along in Applejack's ideal family fantasy
>>43329476is that not just your average redneck courtship? ya know kidnap yerself a spouse?
>>43329476>Big MacWeirded out, would probably try talking Applejack down.>Granny SmithAbsolute enabler. She'd cheer Applejack on, especially for trying as hard as she would.>Apple BloomSkeptical? Applejack would take advantage of her presence at times to teach her some things about nabbing a colt.
>>43329527If it happens during the Apple family reunion expect many different reactions.
>>43329511Hot
bumparoo
>>43329476>Would they be horrified by it?Doing something atrocious and having others know about it but be unable to stop you is one of those super common power fantasies. Like flaunting your power.Point is, there's not enough stuff where the mare raping you is shocking and horrifying all your acquaintances but they're powerless to stop her so they're just reduced to pleading with her on your behalf.
>>43330548I could see the entire country reacting that if Celestia was acting this way.
I feel like Cadance could be an interesting yandere to explore since she's the princess of love. Thanks to Shining Armor and her representing the good kind of love I imagine that something would be needed to push her into that direction. Perhaps with the death of Shining she is unable to cope with grief properly and ends up needing to find someone to fill that hole in her heart and as she finds someone she THINKS would be a good Shining substitute her love turns twisted, resulting in Nightmare Cadance.
>>43331091There was a green for Yandere Cadance, but it died before it got anywhere.
Teenage Cadance whose cutie mark is telling her that her and her crush Shiny are destined to be together but Shining Armor has a highschool gf already. Mark compels her to change that and she resorts to increasingly desperate efforts.
>>43331957Celestia bops Cadance on the nose with newspaper. Bad filly.
>7
>>43332332When Yandere kills you not because of jealous rage, but because her cooking is shit.
>>43332332Nice work
>>43326866
Ever had a mom yandere teach their filly how to yandere?
>>43333756YanClan village deep in the mountains teaches all the young fillies how to secure the colt bag
>>43332332how could I disappoint that face?
>>43332332Why is Moonie so perfect? It's just not fair
>>43334263the pretty mare is pretty because she is pretty
>>43334456Is there a better yandere than a goddess that controls the night and your dreams?
>>43334472it's trueyou'd be so helpless, she'd control your life totally
>>43334979Haha yeah, that'd be such a bad thing ahha... hope it doesn't happen to me hahaha....
wake the fuck up, BlondiAnon, wake up and smell the ashes
>"OUR SISTER HAS THE GREATER BUTTOCKS, 'TIS TRUE, BUT THOU CANST DREAM OF IT! THOU SHALT ONLY DREAM OF OURS! OURS!"
>>43335238>Wrong usage of "canst"I'm a fake moonfag and now she's going to rape me for it.
>>43333756I’d read it
>>43335226I've been a bit sick, don't worry. I also have my panel confirmed for this Saturday.>>43334472 especially>>43334979Pone paste 4887 (You)r Nightmare. Auto-jannies don't like this.
>>43335354Thanks king, Checking it out as we speak
>>43335242I can’t believe Celestia would height shame Twilight like that
>>43335354hope get better soon!
>>43335939She loves her job.
>>43335776It’s all she has going for her.
>>43330826She'd just job to the first pony that tried to stop her.
Should I have my name on? Does it matter?>>43323970>Everything smells nice>You've never had this sort of scent before>It's warm>Smells like bananas>Banana bread>You haven't had that in so long>You'd always tell yourself that you'd make it on your own but...>You could never eat it all on your own>Yeah, that's right>That's the excuse>You reach out and->Nothing>Your arm drops>Wait>It drops?>You manage some sort of groan>You're disappointed there's no banana bread>You're bothered that your arm has gone back to your side>Means you aren't standing>You try to lift your head up but the planet itself spins to put every Volvo right on your forehead>Another noise of humanoid dissatisfaction>"Oh. Oh! Oh oh, hey, hi there! Hello!">Who the Fresh Princess of Hell-Hair is that?>Her voice is coming to the left side of your face>"That worked! I knew that was the trick.">You don't know who that is but your instincts tell you to run>Run hard>Run far>Fuck the apartment and everything in it"...">You go limp>Is it really worth struggling this hard and freaking out?"Who are you this time?">Even your mouth feels numb>What were you even doing?>"Well! You were brought in and... uhm. I think you drank too much. Or drank too little? Brace told me you took something that you shouldn't have. So I gave you a some solvent to help. Equestrian stuff works a little differently than human medicine so maybe it's not all gone? But you've been breathing now and--oh! And, I forgot, I gave you a bit of that stuff my dad used to give me when I got hurt. I think you landed on your face so there was... a... lot of blood. So I think that should help! Maybe! I don't know. This is the first time I've seen a human take it.">Don't say it"Another Equestrian.">You aren't the sort to hate entire groups>But>And this is a very fair "but">Given your record, you can't stop but vomit out the words.>"You got it! My name's Fringe Binge! I'm Brace's roomie. We gotta do the buddy system for a lot of our stuff, and because we're living on special restrictions, it sure helps a lot for keeping track of things and making sure we're a-ok.">..."...">What?"Are you telling me she wasn't in a hotel room alone?">You hear an awkward half cackle bark out>A cack, even>"Are you asking if we'd ever share a bed? No thanks, mister! We both like our privacy and me, personally, I gotta sleep in a room that has a night light. She can see super well in the dark but not me. Not even with my glasses on.">An Equestrian wearing glasses?>Well that just sounds silly>Listening to her jabber on is enough for you to wipe your eyes>The stuff on your face is gone>More so your nose feels normal>Or at least it doesn't hurt when your forearm goes against it>Another white room>Looks like the apartment>You look to your si-"Sweet jumping monkey f...">You stifle the rest of your language>This pale pony is staring at you with the smallest, most uncanny blue eyes>They look human
>>43337622>"Is it my eyes? Yeah, I look kinda weird without my glasses on. My vision isn't so good. It's not like I'm near-sighted or far-sighted, I think...">She turns around>You nearly get whipped by a mess of a rather brown tail>You hand goes to your eye to save it from what feels like a stray hair the size of a granola bar>Why is there two of them?>Why does this Equestrian have human eyes?>You face your fears, and gravity, and sit up>You are in an apartment>Not your own but the layout looks similar>You're on a couch but the back cushions have been used to make a pillow fort>"No Wings Allowed" is scribbled on a paper smashed up against one of the cushions>What an unfriendly welcome mat>Who has wings?>This Fringe whips around again, wearing the most unusual set of glasses>They seem to go over her head than over the sides>Obviously, since she doesn't have human ears>Thank God for that>At least now it looks like her eyes are more normal, relative to her being a technicolor talking pony>"I think I kinda inherited my dad's bad eyesight too. But what do you think? I fit in better now, don't I?">You aren't sure what to say>This has all been overwhelming, on top of stressing, on top of line crossing, on top of comfort zones having been blasted apart"Are those wings.">Fringe beams at your mention>"Well they sure are! Puttim' there!">The wing uncharacteristically bends forward to you, from above>You can see a few pale pink colored... bones?>Are those bones?>They wiggle like a set of primordial, half-grown fingers>You recoil back and let out something along the lines of "baaagh">Not as a mere comment but as an aghast sound of something resembling horror>Fringe doesn't seem to mind>She giggles and goes "oogly-oogly-oogly~">The fingers(?) wiggle in more ways than you're comfortable with>They're so well hidden beneath the pale brown feathers but now that they're moving you can't see anything but these horrible, horrible bone worms"Ok, I gotta go now. Thanks for the stuff, I gott-">As soon as you force yourself up, Fringe puts both wings up>How in the nature of all biology is that working?>"Wait! I... uh. I told Brace I'd keep you here until she got back.">Got back?"Got back!? From what!">Sensing your discomfort, she flutters her wings at you until you sit back down>She doesn't actually seem bothered that you're bothered by her imperfections>"She's just going to the gas station, it's totally cool! We called them ahead and paid ahead of time so she's just running over to pick up the bags.">You get the most upsetting feeling in your gut>She seems to pick up on it>Her wings shift back to hugging close to her body>No proof of any mutant fingers anymore>"...We may have used your cell. But we used our own money! Promise.">She scoots forward and sits right between your legs>Head straight up and focused on your face>"Is it true that you're her boyfriend? If you aren't, do you like pegasus girls?""She said what?"
Too distracted/tired to focus. Definitely not the norm. Always wanted to tackle a way pegasus sorts can use their feathers as fingers. Really not feeling that alert.
Discomfort.
>>43337641Another one with a human parent? They seem to latch on to human partners harder than their parents.
>>43337641So are pony/human hybrids treated poorly by both equine and human society?
>>43337888They sure seem different, don't they? Of course, neither Obscure or Fringe have a boyfriend or mate.>>43338180It makes me wonder why they're being given support to live more with humans. Also makes me wonder more about what Anon said in the past that struck a chord with Obscure to begin with. I'm personally a little bothered by the finger-bones in the wings. But then again I never liked the weird meme about how a pegasus can use her feathers like fingers. They can already rotate and apparently be used for more precise things.
>>43337641>>"Is it true that you're her boyfriend? If you aren't, do you like pegasus girls?"poor guy just can´t catch a break, can he? this is going to be fun
>>43338806>>43339071>It makes me wonder why they're being given support to live more with humansEquestria clearly set up a clandestine breeding programme. This goes all the way to the top I tell ya!!
>>43339138That or it's a way to get them away from the normal populace. They seem a little... dysgenic, wouldn't you say? We see a few cases of odd traits carrying over. That's physical. What could be going on inside of their heads?
Quick boost before bed
>>43339207Celly and Twiggy conspiring to create an eugenics program to make man-pony hybrids but then quickly scrapping it and showing the downie looking psycho-sperg ponies under the rug to live on earth off of crown sponsored neetbux. Call me insane but this kind of sounds like something that Twiggers would try to do, fuck up horribly, and then have a massive panic attack about while trying to band aid the problem away.
>>43339928You are indeed insane.Just because you have two mares being sent out in the human world with very little security strings attached doesn't need it is something they're doing just to help... undesirables out. We already know Sally's history with her parents. Not a happy union. I wonder what Fringe's family was like. Would they be ok with her going out into the world? Not alone, but the human world is pretty different from Equestria.
>>43339928>>43340263Twilight tried human and got addicted. Thought everypony should try it. Results have been mix to be nice.
>8Kapitulieren? NEIN!
>9oh damn
>>43341480I wish Luna would break into my room...
>>43339207Interesting, I'm seeing it. Is anon about to get raped by the equestrian reject circus?Nice!
>be anon>have hands>spawn in horsieland one day>get your alien ass dragged to have an audience with Celery and Moon because you look really fucking weird and creepy apparently>one look at you and the one with the fatter ass starts mumbling something to the blue one>"I never though i would see one of those humans again, they all dissapeared millenia ago">blah blah blah, you get interrogated, you say you don´t know shit, they tell you to fuck off to ponyville"what a stupid fucking name for a place" you think>you´re supposed to live with some purple nerd to get adjusted to this place before they let you loose to live as you please>she keeps sperging out about you and keeps pestering you about shit you don´t know, biology, how come you don´t have magic, the details of how technology from your world you mentioned in passing works>you try not to spend too much time in that fucking treehouse, you´d rather read on a park bench>and you do, it becomes a habit infact, it brings a sense of normalcy back into your life, it´s how you spend most of your days... or like, the three fucking days you´ve been here so far. fuck>some green horse that´s sitting really weird is staring at you. HARD. tracing your every movement with those giant fucking pony eyeballs...>why do you get a bad feeling about this>be mint mare>love humans all your life, everypony calls you horseapple insane, but you know they´re real, or at least were, there´s so much evidence that they were once very common here in equestria, from tool design to some cultural manerisms, life hoofshakes and brohooves>you spend your days mostly getting weird looks from others because you´re "that weird pony that keeps sperging out about some mythological creature being real">even your housemate has enough of your "obsession", even though she doesn´t make fun of you, she doesn´t like it>except one day...>be you>be mint mare>practicing your human sitting stance at the park again>you´re getting really good, your back doesn´t hurt from it anymore, it´s starting to get rather comfy, you´re getting a lot more stable too! you really need to speak to that Melody pony about her cello stance again some day, she needs to teach you how to sta-"...no bucking way in tartarus">you see one, right now, right here, it just came to a park bench across from you, sat down, and started reading>it looks like a male, actually, aside from the small eyes, he doesn´t look half bad at all->aw hay, he noticed you staring>you make eyecontact>you finally got to meet one, and it´s a colt! He´s so cute, oh how gently those hands turned those pages.>you try to mutter out something but your voice is stuck in your throat...>he raises an eyebrow>"uuuuh is there a problem. miss uuuh green harp pony?">that breaks the ice"Lyra Heartstrings, call me Lyra please!" you beam at him
>>43342154This won't end badly at all!
>>43342154"of course there´s no problem! I just never saw a real human before, they haven´t lived in Equestria for thousands of years, i always really wanted to meet one, everypony called me crazy for it, said that you are only creatures of myth, but here you are sitting on a bench reading a book right across from me. I am so happy... Can i see your hands?">be anon again>what. the. FUCK?>another one? seriously? what the fuck is wrong with ponies!? you come here to escape one purple sperg trying to vivisect you with questions only to run into the same fucking thing only in a differently colored package?"Fuck no, please leave me alone.">she looks taken aback, almost like you struck her, she averts her eyes to the ground and starts shifting around... you almost start to feel bad. suddenly her head shoots up, she looks you straight in the eye with a completely blank expression.>"oh sorry for bothering you, i didn´t mean to offend you, goodbye">and just like that, she hops off the bench and slowly clip clops away into town>damn, you really didn´t expect that big of a reaction, she wasn´t even nearly as forceful or intrusive as lavender nerd, you kinda regret lashing out like that>oh well, what´s done is done, it feels so bad>What once was happy now is sad>I'll never love again>My world is ending>I wish that I could turn back time>'Cause now the guilt is all mine>Can't live without the trust from those you love>I know we can't forget the past>You can't forget love and pride>Because of that, it's killing me inside >you go back to reading>be Lyra>be sad>be angry>be disappointed>be... well, you don´t know what to feel>you want to know more about this human, you want him to like you, you want to get closer to him>you NEED to>you WILL.cont if anyone finds this interesting
>>43342180Humans left because they were faggots who couldn't handle mare lovin'.
>8sad
Got a storytime panel tomorrow/Saturday night. It's fairly early in the evening so that's going to be a big mixup from it being in the dead of night. I'm not expecting anything but there'll be a story to tell. Three hours will likely be enough.>>43337641>"Haaa ha... just kidding. I bet you haven't even met one before. We're pretty rare outside of Equestria. Did you know that? The air is different so I can glide kinda ok but I can't fly. It means I'm not beating UPS anytime soon.">She is>Not>Removing her head from between your legs>You don't need to feel any direct contact to tell that this one is apparently a fan of you as well>If not directly, then generally by existing and being too close by"Listen, I'm going to stand up now. And I'm going to use your toilet. This is not an excuse to leave and not come back, this is me saying you don't know the demons I'm fighting.">"Ok!">Despite your deathly serious statement she isn't moving"...">"..."...">Why must it be like this"Back up.">"Oh! Oh yeah. Sorry. Ha.">Fringe stands up and backs away by three steps>Three small pony steps>Screw it>You swooce over to the side of the furniture and slide up>Same general floor plan so you can the secondary bathroom easy>Clean and empty>Toilet paper near the sink so that works for you>Do ponies even use toilet paper?>How?>Nevermind that Anon, the doom>You nudge the door mostly closed and fumble to your rescue>...>...>...>Freedom>Lasting elation that leaves you feeling empty of body, but pure of soul>For once, everything feels at ease and no strains from the outside world can cause a break in your stride toward tomorrow>That's it, Anon>That's the good stuff>"Oh, I forgot, did you need toilet paper?">Too late for you, the door opens and a roll of toilet paper acts as a crown for Fringe Binge>There are no brakes on this train however>You glance down at her>She's not looking at your face"It's rude to not knock, I'm good to go.">Maintain zen, Anon>Focus on the stream ahead>Rotating until your back is mostly to her, you feel relief once more>The aiming is a little more awkward but you aren't going to stop>She's just going to walk away>Any moment now>Any second>For all you know, she's already gone>Once the deluge narrows to a more humble brook of some babbling, you can tell that she's still behind you>She hasn't moved>It's fine>This is fine>This is really no different than just dealing with a foreigner, in a foreign culture>Maybe they don't even know what toilets are>That helps>You sigh once done and start to awkwardly reach back for the roll near the sink>You aren't going to accept defeat and turn back around now>"Heh ha, your hand is warm.">You do manage to grab something>It's Fringe's face>The top part>This level of casual discomfort is really something you shouldn't be used to>And you're still not"Fringe?">"Toilet paper?">Her head lowers>Your hand touches the roll"...Thanks. Please get out.">"Okay."
>>43343320>Washing your hands help to steel your resolve>Even if Fringe isn't watching, you can tell she's nearby>You'd attribute it to ensuring a stranger doesn't take anything if you weren't already familiar with Obscure>Sally>Whatever the hell her name is>Who's to say any name she's giving you is real?>You return to the living room>Standing near the fridge>You had to fight off the stray urge to pry it open and steal anything to drink"...I'm gonna have to ask you some stuff.">The pegasus perks up and nods>"You got it!""Who are you two?">Fringe pauses>Looks down at herself>A short expression of disgust and terror melts her face>"Oh my Gah... I'm a pony!?">That lasts for a second until she giggles and looks at you for confirmation that it was a funny>It is, indeed, not a funny"I mean it. Do you know how much she's been tailing me? What she did? How she--both of you--got here?">Fringe nods>"Oh. Oh yeah, sure. She likes to talk about a few human podcasters and pod people and whatever casting couches. Your name popped up a few times but I thought you were... like... a character? Like the one guy with the monkey clips.">Should you be flattered to think your things that get dozens of views could ever be compared to someone actually successful?>"But you're pretty real. We found this place because we can afford it, it's away from most Equestrians so we won't be bothered, and after finding out you lived here, seemed like a hare-brainer.""A no-brainer.">"No, we had to use our brains a lot to get to this point. Believe me.">Of course>At least she's keeping a good amount of distance from you>Even if she hasn't washed her face"Ok. Do you... think... we're some sort of couple?">Fringe squints and grins>The squinting, even with her glasses, make it seem like she has the most evil of little vermin eyes>You aren't feeling any malice toward her>Neither are you able to shake the feeling that she's really only the opposite side of the same coin>"Nooooo... if you were, would we be in our separate apartment? Besides, I don't know if you'd know, but we could split the rent three ways if you wanted. And I can help you with chores and showers. She can't do that.">Such openly stated facts"You know, you're not a great friend to her if you're talking to me this way.">"So you like that she scrubbed your mouth clean with her tongue and nearly broke your face?">Her expression intensifies>"I mean, you do kinda look like the sort that would get overwhelmed easy... but I'm smarter than that. Ever hear "kill them with kindness"?">You never liked that phrase"Nope.">"Well. It means she's willing to be mean if she thinks it'll work. The only fist I can make is a pacifist, so I would simply be mean to you in other ways."
>>43343336>That makes you disengage and head for the door"I don't care what you or her think, I don't react positively to being treated like that. It was a moment of weakness that let me fall asleep in her room to begin with. Then what I was worried about came true. I've lost I don't know how many days due to this, I'm over it, I'm not going to deal with you too and no random statement is going to give me a sudden change of heart so this charade can continue.">You build up momentum with each step>You make it to the door and swing it open>It's from the inside so even if it were locked, you'd just unlock it>The hallway is free>You leave the apartment, just to hear the pink pegasus follow behind>"I'm sorry! I didn't mean it like that, promise, I just know that certain human gu-""Nope, not gonna have this conversation. You and her can shove it so far it circles one end and out the other until it forms a ring.">What floor are you on?>Above where you need to be>Take the stairs down and you're set>You never did tell Sally which unit you were in>Even if she seemed to figure it out anyway because you were on your patio>Screw it>"Anon, you gotta believe me!">You almost stop>Instead, you answer while maintaining your pace"I don't gotta do anything about this. You're associated with her and you're just as-">Creepy?>Freaky?"As weird about this as she is. I'm not taking any chances where I end up busted and bleeding again.">Why did you hesitate?>Both of them look weird, sure>Both of them have qualities that you aren't finding as positives>You'd be a hypocrite to focus on those with what you've said before>More so of a hypocrite than you already are>You end up near your door when Fringe rushes ahead>Wings flapping in full force to give her an extra edge>She stops in front of your door>Of course she knows your number>"Anon, please. Calm down. I'm not her. I didn't talk her into coming here, I thought you two were like... dating.""And you still thought you were going to say that stuff.">"I panicked!">The dorkasus flared up her wings in a defensive gesture>"I panicked, ok? She left you there with me, I'm the one who saved you, she didn't want to answer a lot of questions, you don't act like you hate us for existing...">Oh Christ>It's down to this>It really is, isn't it?>If what Sally told you was real, she came from such a severely fucked family>What's this girl's story?>Tarred and even more feathered around the town square for needing glasses like some 1950s stereotype horror movie with the message that nerds are people too?"I-">Anon>You've dealt with this before>The form is different but you've handled this conversation before>Just not so directly involved with it"I don't even know you. There's no way I hate you. And...">You roll your eyes and shake your head"And I don't hate her either. But this is way beyond my comfort zone and I am, absolutely not, going to be the answer to your problems."
>>43343366>"Yeah well what if my problem is I wanna have foals before my feathers fall off?">What"I don't... know what amounts to but that means you just go and find you a guy.">"Why wouldn't you do nicely?""Because you're friends with her!">This is not appropriate hallway talk>"Ok then I guess we're not friends then, can we go out now?""No!">Is she too stupid to insult?>Is it desperation?>Is she doing it for fun?>She doesn't look like she's having a rough time of this>You go fo->God>Damn>It>Your head hangs down while you're holding the door to your apartment"...Fringe Binge.">"Mmm, yuppers.""...Did either of you take my keys?">"...Mmm.">Oh, and don't forget your cell phone"Can you please get my keys and phone from your apartment.">Your tone is flat and stoic>It was all fun and games until you came to a dead end>Foiled by a rickety lock and a door that doesn't even actually close because the latch hole is off-center by a fraction of an inch>"...Yeah. Okay. I'll be back in a minute.""Thank you.">She trots off with her new mission>You wait until she's out of sight before you turn your back against the door>You slide down it until you're sitting on your butt like some kid locked out of his own apartment by some negligent single mother>How did it get to this?>You're smarter than this>You haven't gotten anything out of this>This isn't going to be fodder for you to crank it to later>This has just been annoying>Inconvenient>Unappealing>Dangerous>Unfun>You're doubting there was even any genuine interest in talking to you that first night>What a waste of time this has all been>It isn't pretty but hammering on these points will help you go back to a factory reset point>Whether you call it killing or suppressing your emotions, it has the same positive effect>This has all just been a grave misunderstanding>You got some sort of Equestrian cocktail that balanced out the face crushing>Even's even now>You can deal with that>"Here you go, bun-duh-duh-dah!">Fringe appears with your keys on your phone, on her head>She sure likes balancing that"Thanks.">You carefully lift them off of her>Only now do you notice that her brown mane heavily favors her side>It isn't just from grooming but it's cut to give it a sort of similarly flat, well-maintained line>Longer hair but by not too much>The further out her feathers go, the more they turn from brownish to white>Off-white at least>They're hiding but after being made aware of the finger-ish bones amidst the feathers, you can see them just barely>She looks a little rough but not some freakazoid"Listen. These last few days have been a big, big, massive misunderstanding. We're not a couple. Never was. Somehow met her twice across two different states, and then met here. I don't know what your deal is or if you were with her, I don't really care at this time. I just want to..."
>>43343399>Go back to your hermit lifestyle?>Forget you ever even associated with any Equestrians?>Try to find a good cover story to your injury, miraculous recovery, and ignore that you OD'd by mixing alcohol with pain stuff?>Or how about the fact that this has driven you to actually drink, rather than deal with it your own consistent ways?"I just wanna go back to my world. Which means work, enjoying my own hobbies on my own, catching up on my backlog of stuff, and whatever else.">That really is all for you>It doesn't have to be a lot, does it?>Fringe plops herself beside you>Too close>Her scooting even closer until she can't physically move more over is too blatant to be subtle>It's too much and yet also too little for you to find the energy to reblow your top>"I can try to tell Brace about that. But I don't think she'll listen.""Yeah well she's out gallivanting around so I don't really care right now.">"She should be back any minute... so. Lemme ask you a question.">She curls her neck around>She doesn't look so terrible when she isn't hopped up on something"Alright.">"Lemme ask.""Ok.">Her voice quiets>"Lemme askie.""Yes.">"Yeah?""Do it already.">She slams her head down on your far thigh and practically bellyflops onto your lap>Somehow it works>"Can you tell her I fell and it was very unfortunate?">You really must have angered someone to be in this"...Whatever. Sure. Ok.">"Killer.">At least you have your keys and phone>You sit for at least another twenty minutes>Going through email>Answering questions on the Xitter>Got something new set up a few weeks from now>Already sold forty tickets>That's massive to you>No doubt something big must've gone viral for that interest>It's in a heavily populated state too so maybe that balanced it out?>But is she going to end up popping up again?>"I thought I'd find you here. I didn't think you'd be able to walk around so soon. Good work pinning him, Bin.">"You got it Brace.">You see Sally trotting down the hallway>Proud as can be>Three separate gas station bags hanging around her neck>That is rather ergonomic>She sits in front of you, smiling>Is it genuine even if you know it isn't?>"I'm glad that stuff fixed you up. I didn't know what you'd want so I got us all some... lunch...?">It's way too late for that>Too late for dinner too"Sure.">"And drinks.""Yay.">You sigh"There's no chance in hell either of you are gonna just let me go inside alone and you two just go away.">"You know I can't do that.">"Neigh-gatory.">This is how it is>This is the home stretch>Just eat some gas station grub that's probably safe>Slide yourself in>Push them away like overly pushy stray dogs>Back to life"Alright. Let's go.">Fringe immediately flops off of you and joins Sally's side>You divvy up the bags with little ceremony>Everyone has a can of soda>Everyone has some leftover breakfast burrito>And a six pack of cake donuts to share three ways>In a hallway>Glorious
I'll admit. Maybe I'm overthinking all of this. It's such an unusual, uncomfortable thing. To not know someone's true intentions. To understand, or at least insist, that it isn't out of genuine or earnest interest. To not be sure whether or not you can even handle the possibility if it is genuine. Anon's just on a different wavelength from them. He's not defenseless but he isn't capable of just lashing out and calling it done. I get the feeling that's the only way they'll stop and go away.And then there's Fringe Binge. What's her deal? She's way too comfortable doing what she's doing. She's too forward. Is that a trick too? Does Obscure Embrace know about that? Does she even think she could have competition? It's not even a competition, it's just two pronged poking. Whichever way it'll go, his batteries are drained. It's all been a zero sum experience. No physical damage wasn't healed up. Any emotional damage hasn't yet been assessed. She got away with what she did, so what's he going to do about it?What a mess. What an exhausting mess. And neither of them seem to care. Or maybe that's their goal. Wear him down and then just insert themselves.
>>43342180Well I do want the story to continue, I like determined ponies
>>43342180post more right fucking now or this mare will rape you in your sleep tonight
>9soon
>>43343422Good grief these two are a disaster, and Anon is just caught up in that storm. It’s Ike they were born with dysfunctional harmony if that makes sense.
>>43343620can´t rape the willing>>43342180>be nonner whine mouse>you´ve been here for almost two weeks now>you see that minty mare fairly often around town, when you bump into her she averts her gaze and ignores you, but more often that that you just see her around, always a corner away, a street too far, a behind a herd of ponies in the market...>it´s a small town with active neighborly citizens though, so you probably just notice her more than other ponies because her color kinda stands out and you´ve already met her>as you´ve adjusted over the past days, and gotten to know some ponies, you started to find out that they´re actually really nice creatures, overly friendly sometimes, a bit eccentric other times, sometimes maybe a little annoying...>but ponies mean well, they´re trying to be nice and accommodating to you, it´s their nature>you start to wonder if you really hurt that mare, you haven´t seen a pony be mean or even as much as a little rude aside from some fillies poking fun at eachother on the playground>it has been gradually dawning on you that ponies don´t really avoid you out of fear or disgust at your unfamiliar form, they were actually rather forthcoming at the start>you´ve just been an irritable asshole, lashing out at and brushing ponies off all the time, even treehouse nerd stopped bothering you with questions>who can blame you, you didn´t choose this, you just wanted to be left alone and go back to your normal life>that won´t happen>EVER>you´re stuck here, and you´re only making it worse for yourself because of it>it´s time for radical measures, if you´re to live the rest of your life here, you might as well make it pleasant for yourself and those around you>you´ve been an ass to everyone, but one really seemed to take it to heart>you decide to apologize to the green one>be you>be an anthropologist>and you´ve been busy>ever since that simian shot you down with such vitriol, you only had one goal>to make him like you as much as you like humans, for him to show the same interest, to feel his hands run through your mane, to smell his breath, for him to smell yours, he needs to love you>you have his routine down to a T, wakes up a bit late, always after sunrise, usually 8am, walks around town then shops for Twilight and returns to the library with the groceries, he usually has a cup of tea before running out again, this time with a book to the park, he returns for lunch, helps with the cleanup, then he´s out again, his afternoon routine is a bit more varied than his morning activities, he sometimes opts to walk around or hike around the outskirts of the Everfree, sometimes he brings a book and some snacks, he seems to eat more salty than sweet, maybe it´s him, maybe it´s a human thing.>you´re starting to get a good idea of who he is, you know he values quiet and peace, doesn´t care much for physical or social contact, though he seems lonely sometimes, probably misses other humans
>>43343432Based on what Fringe said to him, she didn’t he was a real person. And still doesn’t treat him like one. A toy that she watches.
>>43344100>misses other humans...>you can work with that, you know a bit about those>it´s time to start wearing pants again>"Lyra, it´s past midnight for Luna´s sake, turn of the light and stop giggling to yourself, it´s creepy.""Buuuut Bon, I need to go over my notes again, he´ll open up to me easier. I bet he´s like that only because he´s missing home. How would you feel if you appeared in a world full of humans one day!?">"I´d rather be stoned for a millenium if they´re all like that.""Bonnie!">"I know, I know... But please go to sleep, or at least stop rummaging around so much, I have 8 batches of drops to make tomorrow, not to mention delivery, they´re expecting it by noon, Lyra, please.""Okay, I am sorry, i´ll tone it down">Bon-Bon turns around and makes it to the door before turning her head>"...and I am sorry, you were right about humans. Sorry for telling you it´s just an old mare´s tale. He doesn´t even look creepy like your drawings, hehe. Goodnight">heh, even Bonnie can´t escape human charm... if only he was a little friendlier.>back to work, it might take a couple more days of research, but you´ll make him crack>you know how to make him feel more relaxed, less overwhelmed, but you still don´t know that much about his likes and interests>he reads a lot of fantasy and adventure, but you noticed the occasional encyclopedia on Equestrian wildlife or the various species and tribes you share the land with>he´s at least a bit curious, you can leverage that>you need to talk to Sparkle if you want to know him better than that, she´s the only pony you´ve seen hold a conversation with him>be you>be stalking>he already finished his tea, should be leaving any minute now>the door to the library opens and he steps out with a book in hand>9:30, right on time>he seems different today, he´s been smiling... he even waved goodbye to twilight when he left to read just now.>seeing that made your eye twitch, and your hooves dig into the ground, she better have not>if she did, that changes your plans a bit>even more reason to talk to her>as soon as he´s disappeared behind a corner you step out of the brush, shake of a leaf stuck in your mane, and make way for the library>three taps on the door, and now you wait>the first one might or might not have left a mark>the door swings open with Twilight behind it>"Is something wrong? Is there an emergency? DID A MANTICORE RUN INTO TOWN, OR MAYBE THE PRINCESS IS HERE ON A SURPRISE INSPECTION TOSEEHOWANONISDOINGOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH-""No. I just came here to talk to you, i wanted your advice, sorry to startle you with the knocking, i stripped and hit the door a bit harder on accident" you cut her off"May I come in?"
>>43344202The spaghetti is all over the place.
>>43344202>i stripped and hit the doorfor fucks sake>"Oooooh, i see, sorry. Please come in." she says with a sheepish smile>as you´re getting seated she starts "So what do you need advice on? Is it a friendship problem? Do you need more information on humans? I am actually trying to write a book right now, there´s so much that was undocumented on humans, and so much more that has apparently changed since humans lived here!">she´s the one that gets to explore him and learn about humanity from him!? UNACCEPTABLE!"I suppose it would be both... I´ve been actually meaning to ask you how well you know Anon, I´ve been wanting to make friends with him, he seems rather lonely, and i wanted to make him comfortable by being more human in my approach, I wanted to find out more about his interests first though, so i´d have something to bond with him about...">"Wow, that´s great Lyra! You know he really needs a friend, he´s been distant and very stressed, he´s still not used to Equestria... Though he did have a change of heart yesterday, he´s been a lot friendlier since then." she says with a smile"...friendlier?">"Yes! He even apologized to me for being so grumpy all the time, said that ´nopony deserved to catch flak because of his circustances´">they´ll steal him from you, you need to do better than her, than everypony>what if he´s talking to a pony right now? if he is, he´s probably talking to a mare. what if the mare is single? what if he likes her?>you need to act. now."Oh... hehe, i see that i guess that i don´t need any advice after all. OkayThanksBye">you gallop to his usual park... >he´s not there. >he´s always there. on that same bench he was when you first saw him. >where is he?>he had a book with him>he never changes the morning routine>what´s wrong!?>your heartbeat speeds up>so does breathing, you´re panting now>suddenly...>THERE! in the corner of your vision, there´s that unmistakable dark green piled on top of the charcoal grey suit and a red tie, just closing the door behind himself... the door to sugarcube corner... with a box of confections... with a bow on it...>he almost never eats sweets, there´s a bow on the box>it´s not for him>BAD>TERRIBLE>your breathing almost stops>your heart slows>a wash of cold sweats breaks out over your entire body>you bolt behind the nearest corner before he sees you>your going to get to the bottom of this>you´re going to find out what caused this sudden change of heart>you´re going to find out who those sweets are for>you´re going to set Anon back on the right path>you can´t allow this>you won´t allow this
>>43344574>>your going tokilling myself
>>43344572mostly over my keyboard, i have no fucking idea what i am doing besides a vague idea of narrative direction
>>43344574Love the Yandere Lyra! I quite like how spergy she is with her obsession. I wonder if she only likes him for the human part, or if she starts to grow fond of who anon is in general.
>>43342180Man, it's always Twi that gets chosen as the resident sperg and punching bag. Maybe if Anon's were nicer they wouldn't keep getting kidnapped and put in Pony's basements. But you boys love that sort of thing. Although in my story being nice leads to the same result. So damned if you do, damned if you don't.
>>43345113>Anon's*Anons>Pony's*ponies´I know you´re a country gall, but please, be mindful of your grammar. Purplesmart would say the same. :)sincerely,-Anon
pre-snooze bump
>Crystals sure are a sight, Anonymous.>Heh, a rarity. I guess you can say.>Well… if THERE WASNT SO MANY THAT IT BLINDED YOU EVERY OTHER SECOND!!!>GOODNESS GRACIOUS.>You sure thought the CRYSTAL empire would have some crystals… but not this much!>Oh well, what matters is that there is no crushing Rainbow dash.>Or scheming Rarity.>Or constricting Twilight.>Or… fluttershy… eww…>Just you… and well… SA and other pink menace are here.>Luckily for you, they manage their kingdom so badly you literally walked around the entrance into their kingdom from the train station and now you are chilling on a bench!>Hopefully there will be no legal repercussions or potential schemes that can be pulled since you are technically an illegal alien! (And just an alien in general).>You hold your chin as you ponder the fact that you are in a world where you have no rights. Or maybe you do? Hopefully ponies are too dumb to recognize that…>You lean back on the crystal bench you are obviously sitting in.>For crystals, they have a certain give to them. Similar to cushions.>You are starting to see why they make most of their stuff out of… uhhh….>There seems to be a very black creature on the bench with you… just staring bug eyed at you…>Like… literally bug eyed… it’s… it’s a bug-horse.>Changeling or whatever.>You heard some very strong opinions about them from Twilight Sparkle.>Usually something about their hostility and penchant for stealing… identities.>This one isn’t in disguise though… so you know what. Friendship is Magic, motherfucker.“Hello there…”>You say as you turn your body towards it more. Eyebrow raised. It is still staring…>At the sound of your voice it jolts back a bit in surprise. Elytra (yeah, you know the word for bug wings) buzzing briefly for a moment in what seems like shock?>”Oh uh-“>It looks around as if it thought you weren’t talking to them.>”Hi…”>It- or rather he based on his voice- gives an awkward smile and nervously lowers its head.>His bug hooves nervously kneeding the bench as he transitions from looking down and back into your eyes.(I am literally writing this as I post this. One of my first greens in a while).
>>43345532“So uh… got a name?”>Damn, Anonymous. Very smooth. You are the best at making friends.>”Oh! I’m Thorax! Umm ummm y-you wanna be friends…?”“Sure let’s be friends. Nice to meet you Thorax. I’m anon.”>Damn, Anonymous. Very smooth. You are the best at making friends.>Thorax stands on the bench and looks at you with a big ass smile. One that you are starting to share.>His smile goes off for a second as he looks down.>”Oh I’m sorry, I was stealing your uhh emotions a little. When you smiled back at me. May I have permission to eat them…?”“Oh yeah. I don’t care. I didn’t even feel it.”>You say amused before he dashes forward and gives you a big ass hug.>You shrug and awkwardly hug him back.>He hugs tighter with a big ass smile.>Fluttershy would kill to be in his situation. You laugh a little at that.“So you uh… feed off this?”>”Mhmmmm.”>He hums into your chest.“Anything I can do to help…?”>He looks up at you like a cute cat and his eyes somehow look like they are in thought despite being bug eyes or something…>”Well, you could take your->Youre face grows into somewhat shock as the changeling proceeds to go into detail of the most steamy sweaty actions of “friendship” you two could share.>”-and once your inside you can grab my horn and-“>He stops hugging you as he does a demonstration with his hooves.>”-and as you recover you can take your foreleg and shove it in my-“>He proceeds to take a hoof and shove it through one of his leg holes while excitedly explaining what you could do with your fist.>”-and I’m the perfect height for you to just-“>your jaw opens a bit in shock at his very forward speaking.>”-until my chitin is completely white instead of black-“>Your eyebrows raise as you watch him display his tongue out of his mouth.>”-my den is like right over there!”>He points his hoof towards a small crystal home on the edge of town.>”-and we can do it all right now. I-if you want to…”>His elytra flutter as he gives an excited smile at you.>You shrug. You got nothing else to do.>”Sure. I got nothing else to do…”>You pick up Thorax and make your way to his den.I hope you liked it. And do give feedback, friends. :D
>>43345185I wrote that at like 2am. I am appalled at my bad grammar honestly.
>>43345535>You are Cadence. Princess of Love-“AGGH!!”>You clutch your chest with your hoof.>Your eyes dilate as you come to a realization.“no no no… NO NO NO!”>You jump off your throne and charge through a random guard on your way to your room.>You kick down the door.>The flying solid crystal domes Shining Armor as you run to your massive closet.“The board! The board!”>You exclaim as you reach your shipping board.>You gasp as you see the a bunch of shining red string on the ground.>It seems the connections you put between Anonymous and a bunch of different ponies fell to the ground.>You look back up on the massive board. A small red twine connects anon to…“THORAX!? BUCKING THORAX!?!?”>You pick up a massive dresser and throw it.>”Y-you okay, hun…?”>Shining armor mutters at the entrance to the closet before he gets domed by a dresser.“MY PLAAAAAAAANNNSSSSS”>You exclaim into the sky.
>>43326888Yeah here is to even more content>>43335242I miss this artist and I hope they come back, anyone have there Twitter.
>>43345861I don’t know if he had a twitter
>>43345802Her eternal nemesis, bug.
>>43346208She seems to always get bugged by them…She wishes they’d just buzz off…Maybe she’ll make amends… heh, who am I chitin…
>>43346248W-why's she looking at me like that, bros...
>>43346258She's at the zoo and having fun.
Starswirl the bearded x yandere Celestia has the potential to be kino, I think.>Get entrusted with the two most powerful fillies in the world>Groom the elder of the two throughout her teenage years>Do the job a bit too well and now she's obsessed with you>World gets threatened and you end up having to sacrifice yourself>Enjoy the sweet bliss of nothingness for thousands of years>Suddenly wake up>A purple whorse undid your sacrifice>As you get taken to Equestria's castle you see her again>She's older now and way more powerful than you>She experienced the heartbreak of losing you once>And she'll make sure she won't experience that again...
>>43346248i know who you are and i will have my revenge for these puns
Stay alert
>>43344202I love this autistic human-obsessed qt
>>43346258She had an intelligent smirk as she says those puns.>>43346579I know who you are… and more puns will come…
>>43343422Are we getting an unicorn/human hybrid later? Curious how messed up that one could be.
>>43346248Derpy’s a cutie
>You are Lyra. >And what an interesting sight it is to see… your obsession… take form…>Aka anon the Human in Ponyville. >Yes yes, I know. Crazy.>Hehehehehe… you were right… humans arrrrreeee reeeaaaallll.“Hehehe.” >You giggle as you watch him looking at a tree curiously.>Silly human. Looking at the tree like the ape he is.>Wait… Is that speciest?>Definitely don’t say that to him out loud.>Back to human watching.>You start to pull out a notebook as you hear flapping from behind.>Anon also takes out a notebook while looking at the tree.>Hey you got something in common!>A grey pony drops a big cardboard box next to you as she lands with it. >”Human watching, eh?”>A bubbly voice rings out.“Oh hey Derpy.”>You look away from anon to look at the mail-mare.>She looks at anon for a moment with both eyes before one drifts towards you. >”Hey Lyra. You like the new human or something?” >She asks with a slight smile.>You sigh wistfully.“Yeaaahh… I always had an obsession with humans. Ya know.” >”I know.” She says quickly and sweetly. >”Any romantic thoughts…?” Her voice going monotone as she looks down at the box. One eye still on you.“Oh um… I don’t know maybe… yeah…? Yeah! Id try.”>You smile at finally admitting your feelings out loud.>”All I had to hear.” Derpy’s upbeat voice rings out as she pulls out a clipboard and pen in her wings. “Sign please!”>You take the pen in your magic and scribble your name on the paper before you look at the large box behind derpy.>You begin to walk past her to the box.“Wowee. This is for me?”>You open up the big box and…>Theres nothing inside…
>>43348754What?
>>43348754>The sweet sound of breathless choking reach your ears. >A neck held tight between your forelegs. >You glance over at anon.>Your level, emotionless face brightens as you look at him in the distance.>Silence erupts… wiggling stops… >Easy. Like it always is.>You push the obstacle into the box. >The limp body curling inside the confines as you close it and tape it closed. >Your focused, dead centered eyes lose their seriousness after you finish. >One of them wanders back to anon.“Morning, ‘Non!”>You enthusiastically wave to him. >He startles a little as he turns away from the tree he was looking at.>”Hey derps, how’s it going?”>He says back at you with a smile and a wave. One of your eyes following down his arm for a moment.”Good! Cause I ran into you!”>You genuinely say with a wink and a wing pointed at him. >”Aw, you flatter me, miss hooves.”>He remarks playfully as he walks up.“You deserve it. Whatcha doing anyway.”>”Dr. Fauna sent me to look for a white squirrel she was caring for. Should be in the area.”>Your face frowns for a moment and your eye twitches at the mention of another mare before you catch it and keep your cheerful face.“Okie dokie. Well I’ll see ya. Package to deliver.” >You smirk and pat the big box as you look up at him.>He does an impressed whistle.>”I never get how you can carry those. See ya around, Derpy.”>He walks off as both your eyes stare at him.“See ya around, anon…”
>>43348784Thanks, Derpy? This seems like a bad idea.
does going full on supreme gentlemare count as yandere if it stems from the fixation on one person specifically and and getting rejected by them?
>>43346462Given he has an entire CON dedicated to him, he might have several suitors in the wing he ain't ready for.
>>43344574>he´s been walking around ponyville aimlessly for the past two or so hours>he´s walked through the town center, around the outskirts, he´s hit the park 4 times, stopping on a bench to sit down and distractedly read while looking around...>he´s looking for somepony, and he can´t find them>he´s starting to look kind of dejected>you though the goods from sugarcube corner were for Sparkle, but you´re so relieved that´s not the case>this is still salvageable>oh he´s getting up, it´s almost lunch time>you tail him all the way to the library and have a peek through the window until you´re sure that he wasn´t giving the sweet confections to that librarian nepobaby after all>good... they do seem to be chatting about something though, you can´t make out what, but it doesn´t look flirty>you make yourself comfy in a bush overlooking the doors to the treebrary and wait for his afternoon walk>ah finally! and lookie, he has the paper bag of sweet treats with him!>he seems to be walking in a familiar direction... but he doesn´t know any ponies on this side of town... >maybe he´s taken to drinking with Berrypunch?>ridiculous!>you would have known that already.>past Cheerilee´s house>wait>there´s only 2 houses left on this street>and you seriously doubt he´s trying to court Filthy Ritch...>he´s headed to your house>and you know he hasn´t talked to Bon-bon>at least you hope you know that>you´d hate to lose her, she´s such a sweet (hehe) roommate>wait he´s heading to your house>BUCK BUCK BUCK>you´re not in your house>you run around to the other side of the row of homes, and sneak into your own house through the back door>just in the nick of time>he´s already knocking>KNOCK KN-"HI ANON!">"Eeep! Jesus fuck, hello... Lyra, right? You kinda startled me there.""It´s so nice to meet you! You´re not mad at me anymore?" you say with an impossibly wide smile>"Hehe, I actually came to talk about that... Listen, I am sorry for lashing out, it was right after I appeared here and it was a lot, I didn´t mean to be well uhhh, mean like that... I was just mad about everything at the time, I am sorry i made you sad like that. I bought you something as a way to say sorry, here.">you´re stunned, sparkles in eyes, mouth agape, you don´t know what to say, he loves you, he didn´t want you to feel bad, he brought you sweets to make you feel better>THANK YOU SWEET CELESTIA, YOU COULDN´T HAVE ASKED FOR A BETTER COLTFRIEND!>"uuuuh, do you not want it?">he´s still handing the paper bag to you"THANK YOU SO SO MUCH, APPOLOGY ACCEPTED, DO YOU WANT TEA? DO YOU WANT TO COME INSIDE?" you excitedly shoot as you absolutely sunbeam at him>"Sure, why not" he says with a smile>you envelop the sweets in your telekinetic aura and show him to the living room>he really dose care, he´s so sweet, he loves you so much>he even came inside>you grin at the though that you might even get lucky today while Bonbon is still away
too hard to write drunk and sleepy, this took like 40 minutes, i´ll be back tommorow if tommorow isn´t as bussy as the past 3 days were
holy shit Yandere threads are still ongoing? I remember writing greentext here 10 years ago. This is so nostalgic
>>43349877Hold it together Lyra and you might get the HMD.
>>43349889yandere lyra so peak fucck....
>>43349877>DO YOU WANT TO COME INSIDE?always gets me
>>43349877Lyra needs to calm her tits the fuck down, she's letting her crazy show
>>43350808>lyra´s teatswhoaaaaah, UNFhttps://twibooru.org/3584214
>>43349877"Would you like some tea, anon?">"Oh sure, thanks!">skip and prance over to the kitchen>be a darker shade of green than mint mare>be anon>she´s awfully nice to you, despite you meeting her on the wrong foot>ponies don´t really like holding grudges it seems>she´s actually rather happy about your turn around, you can hear her happily humming from the kitchen>looking around the place you notice it´s rather tidy, though the coffee and dining tables are a bit cluttered with books and scrolls, there seems to be an inkstain here and thereeeeeeeeeeeee>you decide to be a helpful guest and clean some space on the coffee table>the first book you pick up sports a drawing of the fucking Vitruvian Man by Da Vinci on the front cover, it´s not the only one about humans on the coffee table it seems>Twilight did warn you that this was the resident human obsessed autist of the town when you asked about where to find her during lunch today>no matter that, she´s nice>as you hover over the dining table you scan around it to see where to put the books down, you see parchment filled with notes and sketches>you see some hands, drawings of humans... timetables... is this a fucking portait of you?>wait, timetables? wait wait wait WAIT WAIT! Wake up 7:30-8:15, morning shopping 8:00-9:00, morning tea (Canterlot breakfast green, one sugarcube, no milk) 9:00-9:30...>THAT´S YOUR FUCKING MORNING ROUTINE ON THERE WHAT THE F-EEEEEEEEEEEEEE>oh fuck, the kettle´s done>you quickly push some stuff over, place the stack of books down and jump back over to your spot on the couch>this is fucked up>you don´t like this>you might be sweating a littlebit>be fisherman´s friend>be making tea for a human>life is goodEEEEEEEEEEEEEE>oh lookie look, the water´s ready>you pour some in a cup to cool it down and then use that to steep the tea, wouldn´t want to ruin Anon´s favorite green leaves with boiling water>you even wash the leaves to open them up first, not that you do all this when making tea for you and Bon, but it´s important to take care when hosting somepony, or especially someone>you carefully plate the punch cake and cookies he got you from pinkie´s, and set it all with the tea on the nice silver tray, this is a special occasion after all>you take the tray and head over to the sittingroom>he looks a bit nervous>aaaaaw he´s shy, probably his first time on a date visiting a mare like this, so cute>you set the tray down on the coffee table>...>you glance on the now clear coffee table>your eyes widen and shoot over the the neat stack of books on the dining table>buck, he knows"Here´s your tea... and here´s the sweets, gifts like that are best shared, and it thought it would go well with the tea... hehe" you say with a nervous grin as you set the table>"thank... you. This, this smells like the stuff i drink at Twilights""haha, yeah, very popular choice this tea"
>>43351345>and it thought it would go well with the teafuck me*and I thought it would...
>>43351350u fucked up now you owe me another posts worth of green
>>43351345>>43351586>straight faced lie, only aristoponies drink that, it was a parasprite to get your hooves on>you´re starting to feel that it´s getting akward, the tension in the air is palpable>be a worried simian>be anon>let´s give her the benefit of the doubt, it´s not *super* creepy, sure it´s honestly scaring you a little, but Purplesmarts has drilled more sensitive information out of you than when you wake up and how much sugar you like in your tea...>Twilight did stress that she was extremely interested in the subject of humans>sure, keep telling yourself that>speaking of tea, you pick your cup up and take a sip, that ought the calm you"Huh, i thought it was the same tea that Twilight buys judging by the scent, but this is milder, not bitter at all">"It is the same, Twilight´s little secretary might just not be that good at brewing tea, hehe. Water temperature and steep times are important to get right.""Oh really? Is tea like a hobby of yours?">"Not really, but it wouldn´t be proper to treat important guests to bad tea now would it?">she´s surprisingly normal about this all, don´t be a pussy, anon. if she wanted to do creepy things she would have already."You know, for someone supposedly obsessed with humans you´re a lot more restrained than Twilight, haha">her teacup clacks down on the saucer>FUCK, bad choice of words>"Twilight what?">what?"what?">She stares daggers at you, eyes wide open, mouth a slight frown, terrifyingly still and neutral expression>"How exactly does Twilight lack restraint?""Uuuuh, she mostly just keeps questioning me about my homeland, other humans, human technology, some basic facts about my biology...">she seems to calm down a bit>"biology?""Mostly what i can and can not eat, i can´t really answer more in depth questions... though she used to pester me about seeing me nake-">she slams her hooves into the coffee table>"WHAT!?"
>>43351711"SEE! Thank god there´s someone normal here! She couldn´t even comprehend why I didn´t want to the first few days she kept asking me! I almost thought NOT showing your genitals to others wasn´t even a concept in this fucking place! Seriously, you´re the first one i met here that as much as even stopped to think about if showing off your naked body to someone you just met is a good idea, when i mentioned it to Applejack when she was at the library she just stared at my confused why that could possibly be an issue!">she´s just looking at you, blushing>"oh yeah, right haha, humans cover themselves for a reason, of course... they´d know that if they ever listened to me, totally">you reach a hand to the plate with those cookies an->why the fuck are there horseshoe shaped dents in the coffee table>you look at her>back down>back at her>she´s not blushing anymore, her eyes are darting around the room, everywhere but not you>you slowly retract your hand>a cookie enveloped in a glowing gold aura slowly makes it´s way to your hand>"cookie...?" she says with sheepish smile"Thanks">okay this is really fucking scary>you´re starting to think she might be a little off after all>do you ask about it?>probably a bad idea, right?>she seems quick to flip>without warning too>are you safe?>does she keep notes only because she wants more reliable information on humans?>is she just human watching, or is she stalking you?>nooooooo, you´re not that popular with the ladies>you look over to the dining table"You said you were interested in humans when we first met, right?">you´re a bit scared to look back at her to see her expression
>>43343422i know it´s been only 3 days Blondianon, but i miss you, the withdrawals are driving me so insane that even i am trying to write
>>43351715>you´re starting to think she might be a little off after allAnon's not the sharpest shed in the tool, eh?
>>43351739At least I gave a good panel on Saturday. I'm still floored I was only three votes behind Purp. Someone brought up the idea of me narrating a story or a green so I've been wondering what would be good as a starting point.
>>43351755as Anon is the vessel to self insert into for the average /mlp/ user, I am afraid writing him any smarter would break the immersion of my story...also retarded writers trying to write smart characters usually just ends hilariously shitty, and Faust knows i don´t know how talking to other´s works
>>43351775>other´s
>>43351775Yandere stories are in a very weird spot because most fiction out there relies on the protagonist being dumb, or spineless, or just unable to take control of the situation. That's part of the fun because (You) are taken on a wild ride. Yuno's one of the best written yanderes out there... which is a low bar. But it's both true and fun. But Yuki is such a pussy to the point he's one less vertebrae away from being Shinji. And you can even argue that Rei and Asuka have yandere qualities in how their own mental states go to extremes and arguably he's the only source of support they can get. The quality of said support doesn't really matter.So have two parties butting heads and it turns into almost chess. It's like keeping a score card, except the points don't dictate who's "winning". Good example. Anon has made a lot of mistakes. He's let his guard down far too much. What he ultimately lacks is the testicular fortitude to go "no, this is done 100%, go away" and proceed to ignore her. That's a personal weakness to him. Whether or not he wants to admit it. And it means a lot of things about him. Not a lot are compliments.Then we have Sally. Her biggest screwup was letting her emotions run wild and nearly caving in his head. She was doing really well by encroaching on him, firmly pushing past his comfort zone and putting a dent in his armor. The issue is, I think, she had no real way to start carving into him.Then we have Fringe. If things are right, she saved his life. That's huge. He might not really know it yet but that did amazing for her to get points toward him. Talking to him like she's already interested in him are some points taken away because she just popped up out of the ether. It seems like they're friends at face value but I don't know if that's... necessarily correct to say. I have no clue what her plan is. I don't think Sally cares or expects her to have any influence. She might see her as an accessory. Like how someone magically got a new puppy shortly after dating someone as a way to further rope them in.What a mess.
>>43351935>Yuno's one of the best written yanderes out there... which is a low bar.i wanted to argue... but i can´t come up with an exception to that, not a single one.you know, this in general, that´s my issue with writing. to tell a story someone has to fuck up, or fail, or else it isn´t interesting, especially when it´s not "protagonist against the world" and it´s a story like this, where the oposing forces are both in intimate focus. i struggle to write believable people because i can´t make them make human mistakes, they either come out too retarded, or too marry sue like, or worst of all, a mixture of all guided by the needs of the plot in which one comes out at what time.similar issue with dialogue of the characters, it feels too artificial, when i write dialuge it feels like i am showing words into their mouth, not that they´re actually saying what i write, even if it´s not a pre-existing character...anyways, thank you so much for your perspective and the dissection of the yandere trope and writing as a whole, it was really interesting to see how someone that´s actually good at it thinks about it, ya fucken weabooMirai Nikki was pretty good though, Uryuu Minene best girl
>>43351974I hear that. When I write dialogue, I feel like an ai data center that is overheating cause I am trying to simulate a realistic dialogue and reactions. Especially lately where I am doing a green with three people total! Instead of two characters speaking one on one. That’s hard. And I never like ignoring a character. But I also never like overwriting a scene. That’s why I am kind of nervous for my next part. Cause I actually have to write three people in a (somewhat) intimate setting. (Or a really intimate one if the anons of the bug thread had anything to say about it).
>>43351974>i struggle to write believable people because i can´t make them make human mistakes, they either come out too retarded, or too marry sue like, or worst of all, a mixture of all guided by the needs of the plot in which one comes out at what time.>they either come out too retarded>too retardedYou wanna know a fun way to turn "I gotta write a smart person" on it's head? Write someone stupid but has some nuggets of brain activity. More than that, see what happens if they have the drive to learn. Keep in mind I said "drive" and not "capacity". Have a character that fails to adapt repeatedly but can swing a hardcore victory rate of 20% and you have someone who has a lot of problems that you can then explore because 80% of the time they're not able to pull out a win. Then it isn't about whether or not someone is smart or stupid. It's about what is holding them back, what their flaws are and how much all of that genuinely matters.Pic related for idiot losers that manage to improve themselves, even if you can argue it's for the wrong reasons.>>43351992>I never like ignoring a characterBobby, you speak English.I'm sure you've also been in situations where conversations tend to bounce around a few parties. Or someone ends up staying quiet through most of it. Or there's a lot of talking over each other. I think what can help with that is to think of who the characters are, how they are, and how they communicate with others. Too many people get focused on "this is X's favorite band, music, and color" and not "this is how X deals with being spoken over and ignored, or when there is finally a chance to speak up". Make no mistake, it can be excessively difficult because you can only write one bit at a time. If there's a way to write two immediate perspectives at the same time and blend them together with 3d glasses, I don't know what it is yet.
Any cat-and-mouse yan pony stuff?
>>43352007This is unironically some really good info. Take this map for wordbuilding purposes.
>>43351792Who is this artist, they are great.
>>43326888Here’s to more green, and pictures
>>43352813School of Friendship is crazy big.
>8
>>43352813>The school is bigger than the literal fucking castle.It's a cancerous tumor that never stops growing.
>>43353500Cute
>>43351715>you´re a bit scared to look back at her to see her expressiontime to see her war face
>>43354027>"LET ME SEE YOUR RAPE FACE, GUARDSMARE""WAAAAAAH>"THAT´S NOT A RAPE FACE, THIS IS A RAPEFACE">"AAAAAAAAAAAAAA">"ARE YOU A CLITSUCKER, PRIVATE LYRA!?""MA´AM, NO, MA´AM">"BULLSHIT! I BET YOU COULD MELT A JAWBREAKER IN 30 SECONDS!"
>>43354027I'd probably just let Twilight rape me if she gave me a face like that
>>43354063Twilight would never do something like that; she's too sweet and innocent
>>43351974I also forgot>to tell a story someone has to fuck up, or fail, or else it isn´t interesting>or else it isn't interesting>interestingCompletely throw that word out of your vocabulary. You have no clue what's going to be interesting to others. I've done a lot of things that I'm sure no one will ever care about. You have too. When it comes to characters and the story that forms around them, you shouldn't expect it to be interesting because it's not some avant-garde film project or high budget miniseries. It's just (You) throwing stuff into the abyss. The initial hump is "no one cares", which is ultimately true. But the good news is that "no one cares", so you can do what you want. Test yourself, test your characters. See who and what they become through their story, and then see how you've grown as you've told their story and made sure to tell it the best way you can so others can interpret it in the way you want them to.It's like Nihilism. Nothing you do will ever matter. That's the hump. The good news is that everything (You) do matters. So if you want to tell a good story, tell it the best you can and know that no one is watching. Until they are. But you might not ever let yourself believe that they are.
>>43354121thank you for the very kind words, if you say any more i might just start keeping tabs on your daily routine and and start watching you through the windows...as for the writing something interesting bit. Whenever i create something, whatever it may be, i first and foremost try to make something that i would enjoy, that´s what i mean by interesting, i do not want to write a boring story, a story i wouldn´t read myself, because what is the point when even i don´t enjoy it. the way i see it other´s enjoying what i do is just a nice bonus, be it when i draw, write, or even cook, i do those activities because i like doing them and would like to get better, not because i want others to recognize that.though i have to admit, it really feels amazing when i get complemented on my writing, i never really was that good at it and it takes way more effort than the other two i mentioned because of my lack of practice and spergyness. your advice and encouragement have been worth their weight in gold :)
This thread has my support
>>43352815I made that drawing.
>>43354594Draw more!
So many great greens, you love to see it.>>43343422I've become quite intrigued with this Fringe Binge pony. I know I'm probably getting multiple details wrong, and I apologize if so, but I've attempted to doodle her. I imagine the eyes might need to be a bit "beadier", among other things, but I think this'll do for now. Also, this has been a lovely green thus far, so I must thank you.>>43351792Cute and kino drawing, fren. Twiggy better work quick before her Anon falls victim to these harlots and their wicked charms.
>>43354733i fucking love seeing your art when you crawl out of the G5 threads, u gotta come out of your cave more often
I suppose I should tack on my name finally since we have other wordmen wording it up.>>43343422>Things turned out better than you thought, what with Sally ending up a distant neighbor>Fringe Binge has been bugging you daily while claiming to be an intermediary>You haven't been so completely fine with that but you do appreciate that she's been doing checkups on your face>Apparently Equestrian medicine is less pressed pills and more... actual magic>But is it magic or merely enchanted?>The less you know the better, personally>You hear the front door open>You can guess who that is>It's still freaky to see Fringe work doors>"Hey, Anoo. Anooo, cheeki breeki! Where are you?""Yeah, in the room.">You haven't forgiven Sally for what she did>This feels like appropriate retribution>It's still so weird>Fringe trots into your room to the tune of a song you can't hear>"This is a sweet room. You know I'm telling Brace all about it, right?""That's fine. She's not going to be in here.">She doesn't have anything with her outside of her special specs>You can still tell that she has those beady little human eyes in that pony head>You don't mind it that much>Give her the right pair of goggles and no one will know any better>"What are you doing?""I...">Sally already knows about your stuff>You presume Fringe does too"Am trying out a new script. I try to find something new to talk about every time but I got an email from someone.">You ignore that she springs onto your bed>And proceeds to throw herself over it multiple times like an excited dog>"Yeah'm?">She decides to remain on her side with her hind legs open>You are not blind to the female anatomy, human or Equestrian>You are, however, capable of not being drawn into it>You can deal with it later on your own like any average man"He has... a lot of stuff going on. Divorce, kids. Hell if I know why he's wanting to ask me for advice.">This is bound to happen>You're getting led out of your area of expertise again>You say what you can but is it honestly enough?>"That's pretty hardcore... and you never married, is that right?">Her leg is hiking higher up>She's really trying her best with that isn't she"That's right. Never even maintained a reliable relationship. So what's making them think I'm cable to give something good?">You slink back in your chair>Even if you're focused on one of your screens, you do have peripheral vision>Too bad it's the wrong time>"I listened to all of your audio. All of the ones Brace has anyway.""Hopefully you didn't pay for it.">"I didn't. I think she did?""I hope not. I don't have any paywalls going on.">Her airborne leg isn't just hiked up>She's shaking it"Can you cut that out?">"Yeah. But not bad, right?">Not bad?>What is this, open appraisal night?"Are you not worried she's going to cave your shit in like she did to me?">"Well she won't unless you tell her.">Are you really going to even bring this up?"Down already.">"...Five seconds."
>>43354121>Nothing you do will ever matter. That's the hump. The good news is that everything (You) do matters.4chan motivational speech, gud work
>>43354594>>43354598seconding this, i thought you were like a long lost oldfag who pumped out kino and bailedif you're still here i'm going to be pissed if you don't post more art
>>43337622>>43323970 is still going?i assumed it just ended right then and there like he just up and died
>>43354733Positively spooky. I love it. I like that calm expression despite her eyes. I didn't think her "fingers" would be that long but it does show that there is some sort of freaky skeletal structure going on in there. I appreciate it. I've noticed that when a character gets some form of visual representation, it can spur others to give their own interpretation. Some details stay the same, others shift just slightly. Good coincidence seeing this seems to be her night.>>43354770Yeah. He OD'd. Personally I can't say whether or not he's alive.>>43354751>Five seconds?"...Ok, whatever.">You close your eyes and shake your head"Five. Four.">"Hey, you're doing too quick! Can't close your eyes.">Oh Jesus>You lean back in your chair and look up at the ceiling"Ok. Five.">You wait at least three seconds before counting to the next number>You hear grunting and things shifting around"Ok. Four.">"Hey, look! Look look look look look look!">You don't want to>You roll your head along your shoulders>She has mounted your pillow>Backside upfront and center>Squinty grin and looking behind her to make sure you're paying attention"...Ok. Three.">You're focused on her face>Just her face>It takes a cycle or four to start up but she starts to... hump your pillow"...Ok... two.">You're going to have to throw out that pillow>"Watch me! Watch this!">Her voice is quickly turning obscene"Ok one second left, seriously.">It was just humping at first but it quickly turned into her downright slamming herself down on your pillow>Of course, due to Equestrian biology, it's not like it's anything is->And there she goes>She just... sits on your pillow>Lightly huffing and clenching her thighs to>Taint>Your pillow more"What was the point of that?">"Do you know how hard it is to get privacy when you're living with someone?""No, I mean why did you do that to my pillow.">"Do you know how often she does the same thing on her own?""I don't really care about that right now.">"Did you like it?""Why are over here to begin with?">Fringe rolls her body in a circular motion>Not only is she keeping her spot on your pillow>She's slowly rotating to face you normally>It's a pillow, you can replace it easy enough>"Well. She wants me to spy on you. She wants me to steal your keys so she can make a copy. She wants me to also catch you unaware so she can figure out when to try to sneak in while you're sleeping so she can go to bed with you.""Oh, is that all.">You kinda don't mind the honesty>It means you just don't give her what she wants>"Yup! But, little does she know that I'm playing both sides. I'm doing what she asks because it means I get to visit you anyway and I can do basically anything I want and you're ok with it because you like me.""You know if you do stuff I'm not ok with, I can just kick you out.">"Ah--">You can tell the thought never crossed her mind"Like how I need a new pillow.">"...So you aren't gonna use this one tonight?"
>>43354784"...">You're not going to say anything to that>It's already a shameful thing that you've been looking up Equestrian models>It's not an admission of attraction>You're just working through some things because of what happened"Listen, I get why she's doing this. I think. Why are you acting goofy?">"I'm acting goofy?""Sister, you're acting so starved for attention that I'm confident you'd accept a wedding ring from the first guy that offered to buy you drive through.">Fringe thinks on this>And then smiles>"Why, Anon... are you asking me out? I can be careful but you're asking a lot of me!">You blink over the course of maybe ten seconds>Just...>Let the moment settle in"No. I'm not.">"Oh... well I can do pizza!""I am not doing that with you. Tonight or any other night that I'm aware of.">You speak with the experienced serenity that comes from having to turn down a painfully desperate offer to go to a strip club with free drinks>She doesn't quite deflate>She's thinking of something>"Ok. Oh! Wanna hear more about my tragic backstory and let me endear myself to you through shared truama and vulnerabilities?">That's cold-blooded"Sounds like you're going to try to really sell yourself here.">"Well I mean Brace said she did it and it worked because you're actually really emotionally vulnerable, yet mature. But don't worry. It's not like I have any real major sob story. I'm just an orphan. I can't feel that bad because I was a sister to, like, fifty foals. Brace is kinda like that too. Like a little sister that really is going through some stuff.">That is... interesting>What's going on?"So your idea of being a good older sister is by reporting on me to her while trying to... what, exactly?">"Well I'm not stupid. I took one look at you and I said he looks like he mates with equine girls.""And when was that?">"After Brace came back and showed me like a dozen pictures she paid someone to take of you two eating dinner together.""...What?">Did she seriously pay someone to take pictures of you two like that?"You're kidding me.">"No way. She got, like, a pro to do it. Zoom in and all.">How deep does this go?>Just how clueless were you?>Nevermind were>How clueless are you now?>She grins>She must be sensing your disturbance>"Almost look like a couple... she's kinda living in her own little world, you know.""If she almost caved in my face due to a mistake, you're a dead mare walking if she finds out.">"But she won't.""But I might tell her.">"But you want me to tell you all about her plans so you can stay one step ahead, right?">This is disgusting"Are you really willing to mess with her goals that much?">Her grin fades>"Do you really care? That medicine wasn't just sitting in my pocket. We don't all carry a belt with ten jugs of it for us to guzzle as soon as our hooves get sore.">That would be amazing if it were even half true"So you want me to... what? Pay you back through something?"
>>43354823>"No. I want you to help more people. Kinda like how I'm helping Brace with stuff. But I'd really appreciate you keeping this sort of stuff secret until we can let her down easy.""...I am not doing that.">What you have listened to is kinda...>No>It is, objectively>It's disgusting>Not that you should have a hand in this situation at all to start>What sort of self-proclaimed sister would plan this out?"What the hell is wrong with you?">Her more human eyes dart over you>Just you>Not your desk or your computer>"What, couldn't tell? I'm a freak even by half-breeds. Brace has her weird moods and that mouth. I once knew a colt that had his mother's face. Which means he had some stubby, humanoid shape.">Whatever playfulness she had is bleeding out with every word>"He's still a kid, even today. Someone told him where they kept the rodent poison. So many called him a pest that he devoured it and drank a half bottle of bleach. He never grew up to see if his face would change, or if his body would grow to fit it better.">There's no joy left>"You think she has infinite money or something? We've been pooling resources to get all of her things going. She's learning that she needs to improve. She's learning that she's not enough. And I bet she will, some day.">Her eyes focus keenly on yours>They make it so hard to tell what her emotion is>You're no expert but Equestrian eyes can be pretty expressive>"I've waited long enough. And if we're just normal buddies and eventually we just happen to fuck like bunnies and I pop out normal human foals... then it means I'm not some dead end. I'm just human enough.">This isn't the same kind of threatening that you feel from Sally>This is...>This is something else entirely>It feels like a different kind of malicious"Who said you're a dead end?">It isn't a return to a grin>More a faint, condescending smile>"No one's said it, Anon. They don't need to.">You do not want to deal with this right now>Not that you don't care, you can't just let all of that sit there>But you still aren't finished with your response to the fresh divorcee>You can't split yourself up like this>You did that once>Once was all it took for you to get the feeling that you caused something very bad for someone"I...">Be professional, Anon>This is precisely what you do for money"...I need to finish up with this. Can we talk more about this next time?">You look around the room>You aren't even sure what she accomplished by being here"I'm sorry. Why did you visit again?">Fringe decouples herself from your pillow and bounces down onto the floor>She takes steady steps until she's one step away from walking into you>"I told her I was gonna try to give you some sort of love potion.""You're shitting me. That exists?">"Yeah but I left it in the living room, near your TV.""Why?">"So you can use it on whoever you want.""You're not going to just spike someone's drink. Like mine."
>>43354835>"Nope. But you can do it to mine if you ever change your mind. You don't have to even tell me you're doing it. Just tell me to drink something and I will.">A criminal grin spreads on her face>Like earlier>But worse"I bet if you give it to Brace, you can control how she acts. Finally put a muzzle on her. Let her have the happy romance and convince her nothing's going on so you can show me why my parents decided to have their union.">There it is>That look in her eye>That human, inhumane gleam in the overwhelming white of her eyes>"You can even put them in an orphanage too, if they're defective. We can keep trying. They'll be perfectly human. I swear my womb on it.">The intensity is more than you can bare>This is a few dozen levels beyond excessive>You also are just not a fan of this direction"...I think you should leave. Fringe Binge. I don't want you around me right now.">"But I can visit again, right? You're not gonna kick me out?">That tone>You have not stepped on a landmine yet>You are now keenly aware that you are surrounded by mines>All with her face on them"...Sure. Yeah. We can do baked potatoes. But I gotta... you know. The email.">"Yeah. I remember. But it's ok. Divorce is a dirty word and I'm glad you know how to handle that situation.">She takes a few steps backward>Not like she started walking backwards but her walking animation was going in raw reverse>"She doesn't know how the love potion works so if you wanna play along with her, just do a funny accent like the skunk character.">She proceeds to not just walk backward but continue her reversal in animation>You sit at your desk and listen to the dreadful silence once she's out of view>Five seconds later and you hear a door close>Nothing else>No glass breaking or anything>Once the door is closed you rush out to lock it>Sure enough, in front of your TV is some soda can's worth of a liquid in a crystal container>You need to throw that away>...>...>...>Right?
>>43354842I do not trust Fringe. I do not trust her. She's too calm for this. She's too comfortable with moving pieces on the board. Is Sally the mastermind at this point or is she just being given a fair chance to try to make things swing in her favor?
>>43354842>>"You can even put them in an orphanage too, if they're defective. We can keep trying.what a fucking horrific statement, even more so when you grapple with the fact she's a half-breed herself.there's a severe absence of empathy and i'm worried this might make her a lot worse than sally in that regard, fringe might not be able to be reasoned with, she's deliberately playing at sally's faults, way too cold and calculated and that statement alone feels like it is gleaming into it very plainly.my theory is that sally will be nowhere near as bad as fringe is. being on fringe's good side might not end up awful i guess but if anon gets on her bad side i think things could get very bad very fast while sally is just plain obsessive.goddamn i don't normally write reviews like this dude, you know you're doing good writing when a faggot like me is having such strong introspection about it, like i just want to keep on writing about it on and on, im so fucking excited for more.
>>43354848>while sally is just plain obsessivei should emphasize that yeah obviously i read the previous parts and saw her insanity, but there's always at least a line of logic to it that can make you understand her line of thinking in some sensebut Fringe's statement makes zero sense to someone who has a capacity for empathy, there's no line of logic to follow for those who are not psychopaths....actually now that i think about it, she seems like a textbook psychopath...
>>43354750Thanks, fren, I'm glad you like my doodles. And yeah, I've been trying to post in other threads too as of late, so hopefully you'll occasionally see my stuff in more places. G5 threads are comfy though, so I'll always be there as well.>>43354784I'm really glad you like it, Blondie. And yeah, I suppose I did end up taking some subtle artistic liberties with her wing fingers, but like what you said with individual interpretation, it can vary from person to person. Also again, thanks for the big green update, I feel like I can't say that enough but it's genuinely a great story.>>43354842After this I must agree with the other Anons, Fringe is a ticking time bomb. She's seriously unwell, and I don't think Anon is prepared for when she goes off. But perhaps, though the chances are slim, her latent psychopathic tendencies can be quelled with sweet and tender lovemaking?
>>43354842Fringe is doing something to me and i do not like that i feel this way... Sally is the kind of nuts that makes my alarmbells ring and makes me bail. While i could actually see myself falling for Fringe´s bullshit easily, she´s not overtly insane, she doesn´t seem too bipolar or easy to switch up, she´s just insanely cunning and seemingly remorseless.
>>43354848In a way it's almost funny, isn't it? Sally may not be stable but she's smart. But she's... trusting? Too eager to simply be happy and accept victory. She thinks she's very smart. And she is. But I don't know how well she appraises others. Almost makes me want to say it is a question of maturity. Sally went through some very harsh things. Her drive is from somewhere immature and vulnerable. Fringe seems... mature. Like she firsthand saw the face of having a mixed parentage. Apparently not a positive experience because I can't imagine there is any infrastructure to allow for an Equestrian orphanage on our side. Surely we've never seen any episodes that allude to easy bullying targets for anyone who doesn't seem 1:1 the norm. Right?>>43354851I think Fringe is logical... in a feminine sort of way. The issue is she's willing to trample over Sally's own goals. To lie to her and pretend to be on her side. How far could that go?>>43354928IZZY SEX. But also yes. It's nice to see my stories inspire someone. It's also kinda odd because, now I think about it, I've never had anyone comment on an older story/something already done. Maybe it's more there's just no way to comment or get that inspiration if it isn't freshly baking in front of you. Most art usually popped up while it was most active. Part of me wonders if it's just a matter of if a design is fun or if it's easily lewded. I remember when Dot Matrix popped up along with a few other really nice /neet/ mares and I see stuff of her all over the place that's just more and more overtly sexual. I don't really remember how many greens she's a part of.>>43355124Are you saying you'd keep the pillow? That's a slippery slope, anon. But worse than that, our Anon has been given what is apparently a love potion. Whether or not it is one is dubious. But they do exist. There's certainly magic to force someone to be attracted. But they have no access to magic. Is it an invitation for him to join in on their games, and for him to come out on top? Is it an offer for last second protection? Is that real crystal?
>>43354842Now I can picture a green of a nun finding one of these half breed foals on the church doorstep.
>>43355320>Are you saying you'd keep the pillow?i´d tell her that i threw it out because i don´t approve of her forward methods but secretly i´d bury my face in it and sniff it untill all the smell was gone.what i wanted to say about her is that she seems less voletile, more predictable, one could even say safer than sally. Sally will kill you if you push the wrong buttons, Fringe seems she wouldn´t hurt you in a manner this direct, she´d probably try emotional or actual blackmail, fuck around with your reputation... dunno she just doesn´t really set of the "don´t stick your dick in crazy" alarm in me, while Sally does so much it´s off the charts. I can see myself getting manipulated by Fringe, actually i think she´s rather likable as a person, if admittedly a bit strange.
I saw Sally at a grocery store in Las Pegasus yesterday.
>>43355723Did she steal your receipt?
>>43356306>We were just past Mareslough when the drugs began to take hold
i wanted to write today, but i was busy, pre snooze bump and good night horsefuckerfrens
>>43355723Hopefully she didn’t punch your face in.
60 KB60 KB JPG>You are Anonymous and you like crystals.>And so does the pony in front of you probably.>Unless they are some weird cave dwelling shapeshifter that feeds on ponies and takes their skin and coat to trick and then eat the next pony.>You look down at said grey pony. Their face showing no expression. They dawn a saddlebag and a spelunking helmet with a broken light.“Are you some weird cave dwelling shapeshifter that feeds on ponies and takes their skin and coat to trick and then eat the next pony?”>”No.”“Well okay. Whatcha doing down here without a light. Or well, working light.”>You point to her broken helmet.>”Broke.”>She really doesn’t sell you on being an actual pony.“You really don’t sell me on being an actual pony…”>”You look more like a monster than me.”>Your furrowed brow softens.“Sorry if I startled you…?”>You somewhat question. She hasn’t shown a single emotion since you met her.>”It’s okay. I wasn’t expecting another creature in these caves. I am usually the only one in them.”“You got me a bit too. Emerging from the dark like that.”>You smirk down at the mare at the humor in the interaction now that you view it as a past event.>”Thats funny. I froze when I saw a light coming from such a tall imposing creature.”>Her face doesn’t change nor does she laugh. But you believe her.>She steps forward a bit to look at you from below.>You snicker.“I’m not THAT imposing.”>She pushes a hoof against your leg. Feeling your muscles.>”You are very imposing. Like a boulder.”>She stops and looks up at you.“Uh. Thanks.”>”If your morals weren’t so rock steady. I’d be afraid what that strong body could do to me.”>She says in pure monotone.>Lets… smooth this out…“Uh…”>You give a small huff of awkward laughter.“I believe we haven’t introduced ourselves. I’m anon.”>You reach your hand down towards the very close mare.>She licks it lightly and smacks her lips.>“Mmm… halite. My name is Maud. Very nice to meet you, anon.”>You wipe your hand on your clothes.“nice to meet you aswell, Maud… uh anyways. Do you need help outta the cave since your light broke?”>”I could traverse these caverns in a blind fold. But I would rather you traverse my caverns instead.”>You blink at the… what you presume to be an accidental innuendo. Whatever.>She probably means that this is her cave, and that she’d rather you just continue what you were doing.“Uh, okay. Goodluck on getting out. And see ya around!”>You wave to her as you continue your path deeper into the cave.>She turns to face you as you move. Her eyes dead on you.>She gives a small smile.
>>43357297>Yandere MaudNow this is good stuff.
>>43357297>I’d be afraid what that strong body could do to me>But I would rather you traverse my caverns insteadI love it when they're not subtle.
>>43357297Maud rocks. With her, I'd definitely play up how expressive she can be. It's not the face, it's the eyes. And not that her eyes show expression but they do show where and what she's looking at. Another thing that I have seen about her, or that I insist on seeing, is that her wit can be like a rock. Like obsidian. Rocks are blunt but obsidian is sharp. She's very sharp. Not just in regards to wits. And like a rock, she can be impossible to go through or take head-on. Unless you have a water cutter.So what I'm asking is, is Anon a hard enough pisser to cut through her? Otherwise he may become her quarry. Because she digs him.
>>43357297We’re going to be trapped in a cave in alone with her.
>>43357480Yeah. I always liked her as a character. I was originally gonna make this a one off… but… maybe I should continue…>>43357518Absolutely. I like writhing her cause I a make her very blunt, but the lack of facial expressions can then confuse her very forward nature.>>43357903I’m gonna ignore the puns… but yes. Maud is very expressive in my eyes. You just gotta read her right.>>43358442I was perhaps gonna do that… just didn’t know if I wanted to continue the story or not.
to preface the next update... i wrote a rough bullet points of story progression after i posted this. unfortunately like 12 hours after i did that Blondi posted green that contained something very similar and i have been mulling over if i should go in a different dirrection, but i really like where i was going to go with this, so i apologize for mirroring the Sally green. If you happen to make it to EHM next year, i´ll give you a couple jars of gooseberry marmelade as an appology for this accidental plagiarism, Blondi.>>43351715>still not finding the bravado to face the consequences of your words you continue in attempt to smooth things over"If you want i can show you my hands...">"REALLY?""Sure, provided you don´t ask about morphology and start x-raying me to better understand the bone structure like, Purplesparkle">she gets up and slowly walks over to you, opting to sit on the floor infront of you>she´s visibly nervous and positively giddy>she gently pokes your palm with her nose and then starts prodding, gently squeezing, and carefully bending your hand with her hooves>wow, those are... soft. and warm, the middle bit is surprisingly squishy and springy, jarringly prehensile.>that does feel actually kinda comfy if strange>she then raises your hand in her hooves and gives it a sniff>then she looks up and looks into your eyes like a dog asking for a treat...>but then you remember something>i show you mine, you show me yours"hey this might be a weird ask but there is something i have wanted to do since i started getting used to this place, humans keeps fuzzy pets, and really like petting those, can i do that to you? pet you i mean, is that weird?">she gets positively beams a smile at you>"YES PLEASE OF COURSE, I ALWAYS WANTED TO HAVE MY EARS SCRATCHED PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE. YOU SEE MY BOOKS SAID THAT HUMANSREALLYLIKESPETTINGPONIESINEQUESTRIASHISTORYANDANDWELLTHEYSAIDITFELTREALLYGOODFORPONIESTOSOI-">as you place your hand atop her head she freezes for a second>then you start scratching behind her ear>she actually leans into it, holy fuck>even her leg is kicking>her eyes are closed and she´s almost purring with delight>wow, you didn´t know ponies´ furr could change color like that, her cheeks and tips of her ears are absolutely flush>eventually you get your other hand busy scratching beneath her chin>you start getting into it>this is nice, it´s been so long since you felt this comfy, this relaxed>your hands instinctively start moving a bit lower, like you´re scratching your dog>you move to scratching the side and back of her neck>then your left hand finds it´s way between her forelegs, scratching her chest fluff>she doesn´t seem to mind, actually she´s enjoying herself a lot, practically melting at your touch>then your other hand creeps down to her withers, where you start scratching between her shoulderblades and at the base of her neck>"~oooooooh, yeaah... mhmmmmmm~~~"
>>43358937>you shift your focus on her cutely cooing like that>her eyes open and look directly at you>she bites her lip while making eye contact as you scratch her>her head comes down to rest on your thigh>did it just get hot in here all of a sudden?>you her her smack her lips but her mouth doesn´t move>actually you hear that a few times>her face is practically burried in your leg>suddenly her head shoots up, looking at you with a dumb smile and flushed face>"ah- I am so-so happy, Anon" she says with labored breath>you swear you can her her smack her lips again, she was speaking, how the fuck is she doing that>she comes a step closer and placer her forehooves on your thighs, raising herself to eye level with you>wow, she´s a bit too close there>she gets even closer, your noses are touching now, tip to tip>she smells kinda nice>she´s breathing into your face, right on time as you begin to inhale>what the fuck>this is weird>what the fuck is she doing>you don´t like this>do you like this?...>she´s still going>no... way too fucking weird"ehm, uuuuh, what are you doing?">"Breath sharing" she simply states in a cheerful tone"what? why?">"so we can get to know each other better. :)">she pulls away and winks at you>you seize the opportunity and grab her forelegs and gently shift her to the side, placing them on the couch beside you>"oooh~~ So assertive... Are you going for it already?">if you didn´t know any better you´d think she´s trying to fuck you here>she hops onto the couch standing up on it on all four legs, facing away from you>you hear those lip smacks again, louder this time>she lowers her front onto the couch, with her face and chest resting laying down on her forelegs>her rearlegs stand a bit wider now>her tail swishe->THAT WAS NOT HER LIPS SMACKING ABORT ABORT ABORT>HOLY FUCK SHE´S TRYING TO FUCK YOU HERE>"LYRA!? What the hay are you doing?">Deus Ex BonBon>be horny>be bluebeaned>be Lyra Heartstrings, a harp player, the resident human expert and lover, and a not so loving room mate right now...>you normally are rather excited to see Bonnie come home, she´s a very pleasant mare, and despite your differences, you have some common interests and generally rather enjoy eachother´s company>not today though>not right now>it was going so well, so, so well>and then she just waltzes in to see your marehood drooling in anticipation of that wonderful HMD>you even got a few whiffs of it, you got so close, you beathshared together for Faust´s sake!>once the initial awkwardness wore off more tea was brewed and you all sat down together>you did have to clean yourself up a little bit before sitting on the couch though, Bon would kill you if you stained it like that
>>43354761>>43354598I'll see if I can, a bit busy right now. Any Requests?
>>43359315yandere lyra, in honor of writefag plox!
>>43359315While I am compelled to say Derpy. My second would be yanlyra in honor of this amazing fic: >>43359042
>>43359042breath sharing already? Lyra is a fucken playa
>>43359315Anon, who is tied up, watches as yandere AJ and Rainbow Dash fight over who gets to spend "quality time" with him first
>>43359315Happy mares staring at (You). Smiling like a pitbull.
Which pony tribe has the greatest capabilities to be a yandere? As in, if a pony really, REALLY loved you and wanted to keep you only to themselves by any means neccessary which tribe would have the easiest time and why?>Earth ponies>Pegasi>Unicorns>Zebras>Bat ponies>Kirins
>>43360859Unicorns, easy. They have magic. They're weak and flimsy but have quadratic capacity to go to any extreme they can. The thing is they are ironically more brutish in their ploys.
Bump
>>43327289aim for the potted plants, anon doesn't water them enough
Good to see this threads return. Wish more old generals would come back from the dead.
>>43360859Probably unicorns, but you should be wary of the kirins too. You never know when one's gonna chimp out and go full nirik.
>>43359042Bon Bon could totally be her wing pony, help her out. She's probably going to be a dick though.
>>43361926you fucking nigger
>>43361988>All IF forgiven. I love you Bonnie!!Grammar mistake slipped in
>>43362175boy i sure am glad that that´s just my own pointers with a few bits of dialogue pre-written that i will rewrite into the post window anyway
>This was always the way i moved,>´twas my intention.>I got so brave, cider in hoof.>Lost my discretion.>It´s what I got used to.>Just wanna get it on.>I´m curious, for men, caught my attention.>I kissed a man and i liked it,>the taste of his lips just clicked.>I want a man, not just try it.>I hope Lauren Faust don´t mind it.>It felt so strong>It felt so right>I guess i´m in love tonight>I kissed a man and i liked it>I liked it>Yes, i want to know your name>It´s all that matters>Yes, i´d let you brush my mane>it´s equine nature>It´s not what Trixies do>Not how they all behave>Men get me so excited>it´s hard to obey>I kissed a man and i liked it,>the taste of his lips just clicked.>I want a man, not just try it.>I hope Lauren Faust don´t mind it.>It felt so strong>It felt so right>I guess i´m in love tonight>I kissed a man and i liked it>I liked it>Those strong men are so magical>hot hands, salty, so lickable>Hard to resist so cudleable>too good to deny it,>ain´t no big deal, it´s innocent>I kissed a man and i liked it,>the taste of his lips just clicked.>I want a man, not just try it.>I hope Lauren Faust don´t mind it.>It felt so strong>It felt so right>I guess i´m in love tonight>I kissed a man and i liked it>I liked it
>>43359042>"so... you´re Anon right? she wasn´t bothering you was she? she can get a little obsessive about her hobby, but she´s a good pony, don´t mind her. You actually get used to how overly enthusiastic she can get, and once you do, you´ll find that she´s a really nice mare and a great friend.">sweet Celestia is she actually wingmaring for you?>all is forgiven, i love you Bonnie!!!>"he he he, well i wouldn´t call it bothering me... i was just a little surprised is all.">he nibbled your withers, he´s lying>that slutty colt is playing it off like he´s not the horny one here!"Oh Nonny, no need to be shy, those scritches on my withers REALLY hit the spot.">"EHM, you´re not alone in the room you know..." Bonbon says with a glare and a Luna grade blush on her cheeks"...not like you didn´t see us.">why is anon shifting around like that?>he really is shy... just not when it´s you two alone it seems. what little devil hehe>"So uuuuuh, you two live together?">"We sure do. Though sometimes it looks like Lyra´s just visiting, given how often she does her share of the chores and all that...""Oh come on! Not in front of Anon! And besides, i don´t slack off that often!">"Remind me, when was the last time you cooked?""That´s not fair, your cooking tastes better!">"Did the dishes?""I wouldn´t want to put stuff in the wrong place and have you look for it when you cook after!">"Cleaned?""You always find a spot i missed! You´re CLEARLY better at it!">"See?""Hey... At least i do the laundry around here.">"YOU´RE THE ONLY PONY IN THIS HOUSE WHO EVEN OWNS ANY CLOTHES!">be someone>name undisclosed>one could even call you anonymous>you´re pretty creeped out>not serial killer brandishing a knife creeped out>but it´s up there right between a teenage girl crushing on you, and that nice old lady from the neighborhood telling you she´d "take you for a spin" if only she were younger that one time>this gives you some confusing feelings>the way that her roommate doesn´t seem to give any semblance of a fuck that she was about to try and fuck you right then and there on the living room couch is not helping>you want to say something, clean up this mess, clear the misunderstanding>you don´t have the balls>the green one scares you, the hoofprints indented on the coffee table remind you that telling her "no" might have not even been an option>is it better to halfheartedly let her do the deed or to get beaten and then raped with at least some self res->"Heloooooooo, equestria to Anon!""huh?">"Seriously am i really such a bore that you need to zone out staring at the table as soon as i start talking?""Wha- no, of course not!">"Hahaha, I am joking, ease up. Sorry I disturbed you two, by the way. I didn´t know you and Lyra were that close together already. Though I hate to admit she has some good taste now that i get to see you upclose.">oh fuck, Lyra´s mad, she´s staring daggers at her
>>43362788>Bonbon looks back at her>"BWAHAHAHAHA">she starts laughing straight in her face>"Seriously!? That´s rich! No need to get jealous like that, you know damn well I am a fillyfooler, Mints! Ehehahaahaha!">"Don´t worry -haha- I am not petty enough -wheeze- to switch teams just to steal your -HAHAHAHA- dream ´man´ now that he showed up -whheze- at least not just to get back at you for being lazy with the chores anyway! BWAHAHAHAHAaa">sides in orbit, you have to admit that one was a little funny>fucking hell, you thought she was dead there for a second"H-hey! Don´t start with the chores again!" she stutters out, seemingly losing momentum with every word, she practically whispers the last part "...at least not in front of Anon">you have to admit, this Bonbon chick, or uuh- mare actually, is pretty cool>she certainly has a way of dealing with Lyra, she completely fucking disarmed her>or is it dehoof? disleg?>fuck it, it´s gamblin´ time"That might just be the first time i´ve seen you embarrassed... What are you into mares too that it made you blush this hard?">her snout scrunches and she goes beet fucking red>"N-n-n NO! It´s just that she´s all open about it like that and sheSaysItInFrontOfYou!""What are you scared that i can tell she´s hit on you before?">"WHA- WHAT!?">holy fuck it actually works>and as a bonus Bonbon is absolutely losing it>"Pfuhuhu, wow, she was right about humans, you really do learn and adapt quick!">"Hey buck you!""You already tried that today.">her eyes go wide and akwardly shoot down to her cup of tea>holy shit, you could do this all day>"Oh yeah, speaking off, how long have you been seeing eachother? Lyra has been talking about you since you showed up, but i figured it was just her usual obsession thing, i didn´t realize you two were dating. Though i should have figured seeing as how she´s been gone almost all day every day since you showed up in Ponyville...">Lyra´s ears perk up at that, literally... then they point at you, she´s still looking at her tea, but she´s expecting your anwer>fuck, thanks a lot Bon>you don´t think that any convenient banter is coming just in time to dodge this one>let´s not dig a grave for yourself here, Anonymous"Well... actually, I´ve only talked to her once before today... I was having a bad time with my displacement to Equestria and i was pretty damn mean for no reason... I showed up today because I wanted to appologize and couldn´t find her in town, Twilight told me she lived here.">"Wow... Really, Lyra? You really didn´t even buy the colt dinner first?">"Hey, it´s not like i pushed him! He was the forward one there!">BULLSHIT, SHE PRACTICALLY ASSAULTED YOU!"What? You jumped onto me and started breathing in my face!">"You literally asked for it!... Stallions, I swear...""HOW!?">"You RUBBED my whithers ALL OVER, not that I minded, not that I didn´t want it, but even I was not expecting that!"
>>43362906Anon and Bon Bon ribbing Lyra, good team work.
>>43362788> and that nice old lady from the neighborhood telling you she´d "take you for a spin" if only she were younger that one timeTime travel is indeed something in Mlp… and if Granny Smith said this to you…
>>43362906>"H-hey! Don´t start with the chores again!" she stutters out, seemingly losing momentum with every word, she practically whispers the last part "...at least not in front of Anon"this one was supposed to be green
>>43363380>Go to Equestria>Homeless>The apples take pity on you and let you stay on their farm so long as you help them with their chores>Become an unofficial family member over time>Finally feel like you belong in this world>There is one problem though>Her>So kind and sweet, yet so old and frail>Her health is worsening every day>You won't accept this. Not if you can stop it>Every day after work you go straight to the library and begin reading on magic>You still recall Applejack telling you about a certain unicorn called Trixie and how she casted a de-aging spell>Granted, it was with the help of a powerful magical amulet but you'll be damned if you don't try>She's YOUR granny now>Even if you aren't magical yourself you can still interact with magical objects, and that includes brewing them together>The plan is set>You are making a youth potion
>>43363503>"You need to be more careful from now on, Ms. Smith. Even if you are under treatment for your osteoporosis it doesn't mean your bones will go back to what they were in their youth">Be Granny Smith>You're old >Very old >Hospital visits are becoming more and more frequent"Ah'll have you know Ah'm very careful, missy!">You leave the room and begin walking across the hallway>There is a yellow, blurry thing in the distance>It almost looks like some kind of sign->You slip and fall>*SNAP*>Pain shots through your body as the nurse that just attended you hurries over to your side>No need for a diagnosis; you know you just broke something>Looks like you won't be getting home early>"Anon, ah appreciate the effort you're putting into all this, but ah don't think it's a good idea.""I have to at least try. After all you've done to me I can't just let one of you die.">"And how do you know you won't make things worse?""I've been reading nonstop about magic. I think I have it figured it out.">The orange mare in front of you lets out an exhasperated sigh>"And you think that no one's tried a youth potion before?""They didn't try hard enough.">"Need ah remind you whose grandparent you want to experiment on!?""Well I'm sorry for wanting to save a life, unlike someone else.">"...""That's what I though-">Before you finish your sentence you get tackled to the ground>You turn towards your aggressor, only to be struck straight in the jaw by a hoof>By sheer miracle it didn't break>"Listen here, you son of a bitch! Ah don't know what kind of trauma you're hauling from wherever you came from. That doesn't give you ANY right to treat MAH FAMILY like a bunch of guinea pigs, YOU GOT IT!>To emphasize her words she hits you a second time>You feel a couple teeth getting knocked out >"At the very least she will die peacefully at this rate. That's more than what some folks get. And if YOU turn her into a monster before that I will make sure you rot in tartarus!">She finally lets go off you and begins to walk away>"You better get rid of those potion-making books by tomorrow morning. There will be tartarus to pay if you don't."
>>43364118Whether it's right or wrong to shill, there it is. A thing that has successfully stopped me from writing more of >>43354842 for a few days. May happen again, may shelve the idea.
I like seeing a lot of greens. There has been a strong hunger for this dynamic.
>>43363472good green
>>43363682Time to prove her wrong!
>>43363682>"And look, Ah know ah'm one to talk about all this but why is he so obsessed about family!?">Be Twilight Sparkle>Princess of friendship>Currently dealing with one drunken friend"You did made him an unofficial apple, so...">"YES! But what right does he have to experiment with MY grandma!?">Applejack asks as she downs the rest of her hard cider>It's the sixth mug so far>You take a deep breath>So much for confidentiality"You know, back when I interviewed Anonymous about his world I also asked him about his personal life. It seems that he may have more things in common about his upbringing than you think.">"What do ya mean?">She orders another cider with a quick hoof gesture"He also lost his parents at a young age and he was raised by his grandma as well. Right as he went to college she passed away.">"O-oh. So he never got over it?""Doesn't seem like it">Applejack falls silent>This doesn't stop her from downing her cider as soon as it arrives though>"Ya know, despite everything Ah don't hate him. Hay, he was just making her some porridge this morning after he found out she was at the hospital. He may be reckless but his heart is in the right place.""Then talk things out with him.">"Ya know Twilight? Ah think Ah will.">She says before leaving the bar>Without paying her tab>You sigh>Be Applejack>Currently in the Apple family household>Anon is nowhere in sight>Probably for the best. You might need to sober up first to have a proper talk with him>Check the kitchen>Nowhere to be seen>He didn't clean the pot in which he made the porridge>Smells awfully funny>Check the pot>There's some weird heart-shaped petals in the pot>Kinda looks like the heart's desire petals...>Realization hits>Oh no>OH NO!>Your legs begin moving on their own towards the hospital>Be Granny Smith>Currently eating some porridge made by your adoptive grandson>It tastes really weird>Not bad, just weird>Still, you finish it out of politeness>"How does it taste, Granny?""Good enough, I suppose. What did you add to it?">"Just some spices, spices, spices, spices, spices, spices-">Everything turns black>Anon is long gone, but his voice keeps on looping>You are in a black void, alone>Alone, except for her>Your younger self>She's staring down at you with a smile that feels anything but genuine>"Look at you. Old, frail, pathetic. Is this really how I turned out?">You take some steps back>"This won't do. WE want to live and you clearly suck at it.">She gets closer, calmly so"A-Ah-">"A slow life where you slowly rot away, without even giving love a second chance? Is that what you really want? I don't, I'll tell you that much.""G-get away from me!">"And what will you do about it, you hag?">She lunges towards you>You try to excape to no avail>She wraps your forelegs around you>You feel yourself melting>She is melting as well, fusing with you>"It's time for me to pick up YOUR slack."
>>43366246Nice
>>43366246Seems like a lotus flower situation.
>>43366246>Open your eyes>There is a nurse staring at you in bewilderment >"M-Ms. Smith, are you alright? How are you feeling?""Better than ever">Your voice is back to its old self>You can't remember the last time you've felt this lively"Since Ah'm already cured Ah take it Ah can leave now, right?.">"Actually, we would like to run some tests firs-">You get off of the bed and head for the door>Not having any of that. Not yet anyways>"Ma'am, please. We still don't know what happened to you and-">You push her to the side and leave the room>You start running down the hospital hallways>It feels good to be able to run again>Be anon>Just got your shit kicked in right outside the hospital>Big Mac is restraining an absolutely livid Applejack>He isn't too happy with you either but he doesn't want his sister to be charged with murder>"I SWEAR TO CELESTIA ANON, IF YOUR POTION GOES WRONG AH WILL KI-">The hospital doors open and from them a young mare comes out>"Now what is it with all the ruckus?">The three of you stare at her in stunned silence>There's no doubt about it. Your potion worked>Granny Smith>Roughly the same age as Applejack"See!? It worked! Now you can get off my ass about it.">The orange pony glares daggers at you before approaching Granny>"I-Is that really you?">"Of course it's me! Now let's get outta here before they haul me back to the hospital!">She doesn't wait for a response, instead she walks past everyone >You shrug your shoulders and begin to follow her. The apple siblings do the same shortly after>Applejack is still pissed at what you did>Big Mac seems relieved more than anything>Granny Smith walks very close by your side>You can hear her muttering "My hero..."
>>43362906Lyra is a menace to society. Bon Bon and Anon need to work in shifts just to tard wrangle this horny beast.
>>43367301Everything is fine now. What could go wrong?
>>43367986the potion worked but Granny is gay now
>>43368068I mean, she's already had foals so not much loss.
bumpa
>>43359315>>43359431>>43359477Here's Lyra.
Bumpa
>>43369740Oh nooo not a clingy dedicated gothmare wifeNooooo please arrrgh
>>43369486>It's 3 am, Lyra. What are you doing?>She's lost control of her life.
>>43369486>I don't want to go to bed>I want to research Anon
>>43369740dumbass can´t even tape my hands together properly, you´re supposed to tape the entire forearms together... you can just twist your wrists to have enough leverage to stretch the tape when it´s like this.
>>43370292You should show her how to do it right.
>>43345802Silly hoers, you can’t plan for this
>>43369753you're gonna get gothmarried son
>>43370292The trick is to involve the forearms and the fingers. Make it so you can't just idly wiggle back and forth, unless you go tight enough and wrap around enough layers that it isn't just going to fall apart or crumble from a little wiggling.Zip ties also work well. Even two work well, one for each segment on the thumb.t. human anonymous
>>43370792I wonder what bug slurs she has for Thorax for ruining her plans.(Amazing art btw)
>>43370792All those red lines, wasted!
Has it really been six days? Good the thread has been alive and active. That's all I want to see. I at least tried that story narration that's on youtube. Learned a few good lessons. Not just what to do next, but what not to do. I may do more of that. I'm not expecting any feedback but it feels like something new to build up.>>43354842>Things have been...>Quiet>Whenever you come across Sally, she seems more polite>Still sharp>Razor sharp>You aren't sure if this is good or not>At least once, you ended up offering to take her to the grocery store>Not that you would buy her anything, of course>It saves her a trip and logistical woes>"You know what feels nice, Anon? Going shopping with someone. Imagining all of the food you'll get to eat together. Learning more about what they prefer.""Yeah. Once upon a time I used to really look forward to that sort of thing.">"What changed?">A lot of things>Not that you give her that answer>Or any answer>Then another trip>"That chicken breast you like is on sale.""Good eye, Sal.">Somewhere from that night of getting your face stomped in and that particular visit, you took to calling her Sal>It is less a sign of intimacy and more a casual name>Between her human and Equestrian name, it's too weird to focus on one or the other"Hey.">"Yes?""Doesn't Fringe have some sort of... human-friendly name like you?">"Oh. Sure. Just call her Cringe.""...You're serious.">"Nah. Don't call her that.""I won't.">"She once told me.""The world was gonna roll me?">"What?""...Nothing.">"She once told me that she didn't like nicknames. Nicknames made her easier to remember, but those who used a nickname eventually forgot her real name. Who could forget a name like that?""Who could remember?">"...Maybe you have a point.">These small talks are pleasant>You remember the love potion>You aren't acting like it's working>You also aren't going out of your way to pretend like everything's all fine and normal>You aren't pretending anything at all, you suppose>You're in the mail room, near the building entrance>You haven't been waiting>But she usually shows up around now>You don't have her number>Do Equestrians even carry cell phones?>The moment you consider going out on your own, you hear the elevator ding behind you>It's both Sally and Fringe>Seeing them side by side, in the daylight, feels a little like a horror movie>Both of their eyes lock onto you>You never noticed that Sally was a little smaller than Fringe>"See? I told you I bet he waits for you.">Fringe raises her head up to you>Her eyes follow a moment after>Examining you or just checking you out?>"Show him some restraint and he'll just do whatever he can to help. That's the kind of man he is.">Sally speaks with unwaving confidence>Her smile is toothy>Carnivorous"That's not what this is.">"Sure it isn't. Sally mentioned that there's a bakery at this store you take her to?""...What, you want to go with?">"Of course."
>>43372839>It's your own fault, Anon>You haven't paid for anything not yours>You have been given at least ten bucks in gas now>You can say it's charitable but you don't want to make it sound like you're taking pity on the two runts"Alright, back seats, seat belts, keep all limbs behind the console or I'm driving into oncoming traffic.">The rules come out with as much enthusiasm as a water park employee who realized he couldn't go down every slide whenever he wanted>"Ok" and "I want the front seat on the ride back" come out at the same time>No one's getting the front passenger as long as you're alive and well>The store visit itself is>Awkward>Coming in with one Equestrian is one thing>Coming in with two Equestrians is quite another>Rather than be led by their whims and curiosity, you adhere to your own path>It's the same path you take every time you go to the store>"You know, I think this is a habit of his... did you know that every time we come here, we start out near the vegetables, then fruits, then bakery?">"A man of habit, is he... sure explains why he was waiting for you.""I'm not doubling my path, you want greens, now's the time.">"A--stop right here! Please!">Sally trots off to the garlic and...>Tomatoes?>"She's calmed down a lot, hasn't she?""Does she think the love potion took?">"Are you saying it hasn't already?">Fringe looks up at you with a smirk>"You know, you could have tasted it on your own... but what makes you play along for her, I wonder?">Before you can answer, Sally is back with... a geriatric?>"Oh my, I've never met you before either!">You take the multitude of plastic bags from the old lady while she talks to the two mares>Thankfully you can blend into the background>No one has to talk to you>"Are you their... chauffeur?">Her tone isn't suspicious>Dubious at worse>"Oh no, he's my BFF's BF. She's his GF. They're both too cowardly to have sex and make centaurs.">Why would you say such a thing>Fringe Binge>More like>Cringe Minge>You are nothing less than mortified"...">"Are you saying you fuck these talking horses...?">The lady sounds somewhere between disgusted and horrified>"...She's kidding. She's a kidder. Anon's my emotional support human. He's a motivational speaker, you know!">Sally throws in, doing her best to divert the course>Without thinking, you pull out your phone and tap a few things"...It's true. This is my channel.">You can only show your meager channel metrics>The lady looks between you and Sal>And then down at Fringe>She has the most shit eating grin>You've never understood the value in dwarf tossing but you sure do wish you could just grip and let her rip>"...That one's no good. Send her to the glue factory.">She punctuates her statement with a huff and walks off"Jesus H... why did you say that?">"Yeah, why?">Fringe shrugs and trots ahead to the next spot you normally go to>Despite having never been invited to a grocery outing
>>43372881>More isles are visited>The longer this goes on, the more Fringe is skipping ahead>How does she know where to go next?"...So you've told her a lot about these shipping trips, huh.">"...Yes?">She doesn't sound confident>You don't sound appreciative either>Is she trying to give her a chance to have at you?>You shouldn't be acting like that love potion happened>But if you don't...>Why do you care if it did or didn't work?"Is it just me or have you calmed down?">"I've calmed down a lot.""Why?">"Bec--ooh, the deli. Hold on.">Without hesitation you slow your cart down and wait for her>More so, you grab whatever she ordered and put it in the cart, next to your items>"Thank you. It's because I have calmed down. I do feel sorry for what I did to you.""The beating?">"The beating. You said to never forgive someone for hurting you. And I hurt you. So I don't ever expect you to forgive me.">It sounds a little cold now to have that thrown back at you, doesn't it?>Or perhaps your weakness in this moment is the weakness many other feel>The cycle of abuse>"The cycle of abuse... I don't want to continue that cycle. Also knowing that I know where you are, and that I'm sleeping under the same general roof as you has brought me more peace than I thought it would. I don't wake up in the middle of the night nearly as much.""Sleeping issues?">"Yeah. It's not like... you know. Every night I'm haunted by things. But I used to worry so much more.""About what, if you don't mind me asking? By the way, this soda's on sale. I recommend it.">"Grab me one?""Sure. My treat.">Damn it don't just offer to buy her things>"Thanks.">It's starting to be hard to tell what you bought and what she bought>Not that you're done going around the different sections>"Where I'm going to live. What I'm doing with my life. If I'm deserving of a family. Why I don't already have one.""Lot of deep questions. Are you able to answer them?">"I try. Because of you, I've been able to figure out how to answer them better.">It's a little hard to remember, isn't it?>She's some unwell fangirl, effectively>Maybe that's why you're not fangs out?"You really do speak too highly of me.">"You let others forget you too easily.">Hers never retract, it seems"Agree to disagree.">"I disagree.""Mm.">Tapioca>Bacon's on sale so ten packs of the good and lean>A dozen freezer pizzas for her?"Pizza fan, eh?">"That and we're waiting for our kitchen to be set up for us to use. So oven is easy to do.">How does a waist-high horse manage to work an oven's controls when they're usually on top and against the wall?"They're really setting you up, huh.">"Yeah. Well, we are technically ambassadors. Not that it means we get help shopping.">You somehow doubt that title>Who would give those two random political positions?>More so, why choose those two specifically?"You notice where Fringe went?">"Probably back to the car.""...Why?">"She wanted to see how we act."
>>43372912"How we act? We're not acting like... anything.">Sally crooks her head up>That smile>It's somehow less predatory>Maybe more appeased>"I know. Isn't it great? It means it worked.">Does she mean"...What worked?">"Her coming with us. Obviously.">You shake your head"I have no clue what you mean by that.">"It's ok. Let's get some chips next.""Roger.">A few more items and you're checking everything out>You remember when self checkout machines were the cutting edge>Your grandma was so amazed at the idea of bagging your own stuff>Meant a crap ton of free bags>Now it's just a way for you to do the store's job>Sure means you're taking extra plastic bags"...Shit.">"Huh?">Neither of you were paying attention>You ended up putting everything in the same bunch>In other words>You bought her groceries"Ah, it's nothing. Merry Christmas I guess.">After a second of catching up, Sally giggles and butts her head in to the side of your leg>"Thank you, Anon. I've never had anyone buy me so much food before. I feel like I could live off of that for a month and not ask for another cent.""Yeah well... you haven't asked for anything. And don't let this last a month. If you're gonna go hungry, just show up and...">Shut up, Anon>Do you not see that you're a fraction of a second away from inviting her into your apartment?"...Well I'm not gonna just sit there and let someone go hungry.">She nuzzles harder into your leg>You two are not the only living beings in this store>You may have had an easy time of forgetting that by focusing on the journey>Now is not the time to indulge her"Ok, time to go.">She stops on a dime and nods>"Y'okay.">Loading up the car is easy>"You two took forever! What, did they offer a discount for couple selfies?""I ain't having it with you today.">"Yeah, I'm having what he's having.">At the last second you re-bag things so they're separated>Almost everything you got isn't for you>Was this even a shopping trip for yourself?>The drive back was at least in comfortable silence>Without asking, you manage all of the groceries in one trip>It's your own personal pride that means no bag is left behind>No second trip required>They head to their apartment and you follow>To be honest, this doesn't feel so bad>You're just...>Helping out>With their door opened, you remain in the hallway and visibly extend yourself to reach in>Fringe isn't saying anything but that leer>What a considerable leer>Sally seems more content>"Hey, wanna come inside?">Her eyes meet yours>Before you can answer, you can feel that>Tension"...No thanks.">"Not even for pizza?""...">You've been doing well>You've set down boundaries>She has calmed down too>Don't muck this up"...I'll think about it.">That seems to be enough>Sally doesn't look happy but she is satisfied with that answer>"It'll be ready for you.""Thanks. Catch you later.">With that, you head back with your minimal purchases
It can't and won't end just there. It's probably obvious I've been distracted while writing this. I think it's an important thing to see. She had her episode, he had his recovery. Both of them are doing better. Fringe seems to be purposefully setting up things, but we already know she's some manipulator. This may seem like a boring point but I think it is important. Critically so. Sally doesn't have infinite fight in her, and Anon doesn't have infinite patience. But because there's this slow, actual relation building up, it's still working in her favor. Worse, or better, that love potion is having an effect. Can something have an effect by just... having it around? If someone openly gave you a roofie, would you keep it and go "I might take this later for them"? Sounds pretty crazy when you put it that way. A lot of this does.I would say this is still a mess... but in a way, it's getting better. It's getting worse. Real groundwork is building up. That raw, burning passion isn't there yet she still wants to be around him. That form of respect is shining through. If there is manipulation at work, from Sally, it's too veiled for me to see it. Is that better or worse?
>>43372971>"Not even for pizza?"https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t6McxxZtosY
>>43372971Is there a point to this, or is it just a bot?
>>43372971The line between degenerate and normalcy is a fine line. That old racist lady was right though, to the glue factory!
>>43373203That's a new one.
bump
>>43372971i was beginning to worry that you shelved this. i am really curious what Fringe is thinking here...
>>43374806Of course not. She wanted to be there, of course. Didn't seem like she actually picked up anything but there are questions to ask about what there is to gain. I'm more curious at how Sally and Anon are kinda just... doing things. Not much. But even taking someone to the grocery store can mean a lot.
>>43374806She likes to see reactions and test the water.
>>43375138What we don't know is what happens once there's enough blood in the water? She's openly helping out Sally. She's putting Anon in situations by letting him see her ploys and allowing him the option to secretly avoid them. She's poking at him when she's around to see if he's complacent or not.In short, she's toying with both of them.
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maybe
>10Thingpone can be clingy… might make something in the future with that…
>>43372208No idea, but definitely enough to fill a few pages in a thesaurus (thank you!)>>43372511Such a shame, another reason to throw Thorax in a dungeon
>>43384670Is this a new one?
>>43384670Celestia doing a pegasus classic, swooping to snatch prey.
>10it would be cool if the activity was at least not garbage spam
>>43385982New Gen stuff always generates controversy.
>>43386318>>43385982Not as bad as 2025 was, at least. Lots of sliding last year.
>>43385982Kinda fun to see the ebbs and flows of greens and art coming up.
>>43345861I remember when he briefly made a comeback for a thread
>>43372971"And that... is why. You do it.">You hold up your second Moscow Mule>What a mess>For some reason, this show had more than a few Equestrians in it>More than you ever met before>So many of them seemed normal>Normal on the outside at least>Halfway through your topics and spiel it turned into a straight Q&A>"Where did you grow up?">"How did you know Equestrians have the same issues?">"Could you talk to someone for me?">They were so open with their requests>At least two already sent you an email following up on what they asked>One has an Equestrian geriatric that's convinced humans will kill her and mount her head on a wall>The other has boyfriend troubles with-get this-an Equestrian that is going through a hardcore human culture phase>That phase involves Elvis, The Beetles, and a strong interest in military might>Who are these people?>You shake your head until the thoughts rattle loose enough to let your thoughts flow>You'd kill for a shot of cherry syrup to add to the mule>Something tells you Sally is to blame for the Equestrians>How many are her friends?>How many are going to show up at your apartment block and stampede into your room?>Just how many are going to be there to encroach on your life further until nothing is left private?>"Hey handsome. Is this seat taken?">You freeze"...I hope that's not you and is instead my imagination.">Sally climbs the seat opposite of you>Booth seating so it seems easy enough for her"God I missed that face.">Her prepared speech completely falters>You couldn't have verbally slapped her harder if you tried>"...What did you say to me...?""M'yeah.">You cock your head to the side while making that noise"You'd think I'd be upset or riled up or any of that, right? How dare you follow me out here and waste your own money on a flight?">You shake your head>As much as you want to gulp down the drink, you focus on the tiny straw given>You can siphon out all of the alcohol at the bottom before finishing off the watered down ginger ale>They never mix these well enough"Nah. You... I at least kinda get. Those guys though... nah. How am I supposed to talk some guy out of learning about culture? How and when do I tell him that shotguns aren't cool, or that old music isn't the happening thing? That's just... a weeb. A human weeb.">Strong suction leads to you sucking 70% air>You set down the copper cup and extend your plate>It's just a large order of cheese sticks with a pair of marinara sauce cups"Help yourself.">You'd never say this under a clear head but you're glad you see at least one familiar face>Sally seems taken aback by this but after she sees you aren't twitchy or upset, she begins to snack away"Lemme guess. No hotel room?">The direct question doesn't give you an immediate response>After a moment she nods>"N...no. I got one this time. Just in case.""Good thinking. Fringe with you?">A curt shake
>>43388012>"No. I spoke to my mom before going and she said I should keep this sort of thing to myself. That she already seems to be getting too involved.">The mysterious mother figure"Where is she, anyway? You mentioned her a few times before and now and you aren't really around her, otherwise I'm sure you would've introduced me.">A waitress swoops by to take your cup>Of course you'll have another, you aren't driving anywhere>Sally finishes up one stick before speaking up>She's putting on airs>You can tell she's hungry>"She's... in Equestria still. She's too old to want to make the move. But we still walk.""At least she's still doing well, right?">The dark mare hesitates>"I guess so.""It's better than the alternatives. You say you talk to her often enough so it means you value her. Far better than just forgetting about her.">That comment makes her light up>"I'm happy you remember that about me.""Of course. Whether or not you tried to drug me with a love potion or beat my face in, it's whatever, it's--">"What?! A love potion?">She recoils at the title"Yeah. That's right. I caught onto that.">Despite the insinuations, you aren't bothered>You're right at that peak of being content with your lot, such as it is>"That... that's not something I'd do...""You can admit it if you want. Fringe stopped by. Big decanter, red liquid in it?">You aren't that familiar with Equestrian faces but you can almost see her turning red"She dropped it on me, told me that she wanted you to mix it with a drink or something for me. Told me I could guzzle it or toss it or whatever.">You aren't in a position to care and you get the feeling she's not the sort to go ballistic over it>You seem almost jovial>Maybe it's because you have a third cup to drink>"...So what did you do with it? You didn't drink it. Did you?">Points for her trying to do her best to make it seem like she's worried"Nah. Who knows if it's real. So I keep it in my room. Got it next to my clock.">Sip>That has a strong ginger taste to it>Another sip>Delicious"I'll be honest.">"I like it when you're honest.""I find it...">Should you say it?>Does it make sense if you don't say this the right way?"...I think I appreciate that you wanted to use it.">There's no right way to say that>Not sober>Does this mean you're drunk?>...>Nah"I don't know if I should trust Fringe so much, and why she brought me the entire bottle than to mix it in a pitcher or something but... I don't know. She's weird anyway.">"She's weird?""Yeah. Weird. Do you think she's weird too?">"Well... the wings are kinda creepy.">You're really putting her on the back foot>Back hoof"Yeah. Why'd she have the entire amount anyway?">Sipper>Meet sippee"Speaking of, you wanna know the really messed up thing?">You clear your throat, more to prepare yourself than to clean your throat"And I mean it, the messed up part.">Sally doesn't answer>She looks ashamed"I drank some of it."
>>43388052>"You what?!">You aren't sure you've seen such an expression on her"Yeah. Part of me didn't think it'd do anything. I didn't think it'd actually be poisonous. They don't allow liquids so I chugged it right at the checkpoint and I've been kinda... I don't know. Feeling good.">Sally does not look pleased>Quite the opposite>She climbs onto the table, only stopping once she practically butts her head against yours>"Anon, look at me.""Yeah.">"How much did you drink?""...Iunno. A third of it.">Those yellow eyes are staring at you so hard"What, are you angry that you weren't there for me to be fixated on?">"What were you looking at when you drank it?""What difference does it make?">"Answer me.">A solid bonk forward tilts your entire world back>Maybe you have been drinking a fair bit more than normal"I don't know. My shoes. An ad about life insurance on the wall. My bags.">"You weren't looking at anyone?""No. I'm not a people watcher.">Someone shouts at her from beyond your peripheral vision>She climbs down and hides next to you>That'll do a good job to show you aren't also somehow at fault>"You shouldn't have done that.""And why not?">"Because you're supposed to take it and think of someone.""Well rest assured I wasn't thinking of anyone at that point.">Your cup is empty yet again>Another gesture>That's going to be four, isn't it?>"That's the issue! If your mind is clear and you take it, you...">She gets into her hind legs and almost climbs you>Another face to face moment>"What do you see?">You pause>Is this a trick question?"Just you. Why? Are you supposed to grow horns?">The world slows after that>You remember the fourth drink>The fifth too>The more you drink, the more you feel like you can swim through the air>The feeling is unobstructed bliss>Every now and again you can see Sally>Sweet, silly Sally>She's acting so worried>She really is showing how smart she is, too>It isn't like she's snooping but she knows what to ask for, and you show it to her>She's quick to act too>Not like you've had that much to drink so you aren't so quick>"Anon, we're gonna sleep in this bed for now, ok?""Sure. You really are trying to move fast now that I'm under, huh.">That's most likely why she had that love potion to begin with>"No, I'm worried that because you drank it on your own, and you weren't around anyone, it affected you wrong. You weren't supposed to drink it alone and then not be around me.""Oh please. You say that like this isn't already part of your plan.">"It isn't my plan when I had to drank you away from that place!">Did she do that?>You remember some shouting>Was that you?>At least you're in bed now>Things feel so nice>So soft too>Sally has turned into a pillow for you to lay your head on>The ceiling is swimming"...Why did it take this long to take effect?">"It didn't take long. It only happened when you saw what you love.">Oh"I get it. It's because I love booze?"
>>43388072>There's no answer"You know. That's a pretty neat potion. I guess I do. I love the swimming sensation. That floating feeling. The way I'll walk and feel like I can just barely manage, every time. I love inebriation.">There it is>That flow of warmth, paired with visions>It's not the ceiling itself that you like>Just that you can almost, sorta focus on it>"No, that's not true... you just can't think straight. You think you do but it's not like how it is with me.""Nah, it's definitely the booze. The murder of what once was.">"It isn't. You're thinking of the wrong thing. Close your eyes and get some rest. Just relax.""Yeah... yeah. Whatever.">You close your eyes>You can better taste the Moscow Mule on your tongue>In your throat>You should not have listened to her on this either
>>43388081>You remember the first time you had a drink>Familial death number... what, two?>You were too young to really be affected by the first>A shared drink>"To remember them with", you were told>Then three>Then five>Then many drinks to your brother>One for every time you remembered one of those lame jabs>Somewhere along the lines of all of that, you made it a habit>Not a big habit>You never went broke from it>It never impaired your daily life>You had no social life remaining so no one would chastise you on it>Those were the days>How long had it been since you had anything that forceful to push you?>Regrettably, you pulled back on the drinking>Liver concerns, illnesses, all of the televised risks, etc>The biggest reason is that you just didn't want to end up like one of those addicts>The ones that can't get through the day without a drop>The ones that insist they function because of it, rather than despite it>The ones that romanticize the experience>...>You don't romanticize it>It's just something you do>Something brings you back>A pressure on you>Weight>"I called room service...">Oh, neat>You think you said something about that>Where were you>Right>Addiction>Thankfully you were never in that realm>Not even adjacent>But you got why others would>Not about being stronger or weaker>Not about wanting more fun or to be boring>It was never about any of that>It was just a good excuse to talk about it>That's all>That rush while talking about it>New mixes>New brands>Old bottles>All of that could bring you from dead in the water to full speed ahead>Speaking of full speed>Where are your pants?>You hope someone didn't shit them>You're on your bed>Everything is pitch dark except for your phone>When did the brightness setting get so high on that thing?>On top of it, and to the sides of it>Three more copper cups"Oh thank Christ.">"dᵣᵢₙₖ ₘₑ!">You hear a quiet, bright whisper>You look around and>No, it's just you"...How did you three get here?">"Wₑ'ᵥₑ ᵦₑₑₙ wₐᵢₜᵢₙg fₒᵣ ᵧₒᵤ, ₛₜᵤd. Dᵣᵢₙₖ ₘₑ!">That voice>It's kinda familiar>You look around again>Stumble to your feet>You can't see shit, captain>The bloodflow invigorates you, even if you can only manage two steps before returning to bed>How late is it?"I... I'm gonna drink one of you. The other two can watch.">"ₙₒ, dᵣᵢₙₖ ₘₑ ₜₒₒ! ₐₙd ₘₑ!">The voice sounded like it moved a little>Whatever"Well if you insist...">You swipe the first one and down half of it in one go>It's fresh>Teeth-chatteringly cold>The ice is the only thing that stops you from going all the way>You throw yourself onto your back and hold up the cup"Ah... that's the good stuff.">You realize your position>You sure could be laying better"...I wish I put my head on a pillow. Angle doesn't do me any favors, at all.">On the "at all", you feel weight beside you>In a blurred moment, your head is on a pillow
>>43388012This like reading about westaboos from Japan or Poland, except Equestrians.>>43388813Oh great, he’s truly addicted to poison now.
>>43388813>You can see well enough>Just not so well that you can handle your head moving more than an inch at a time"Oh... hey. Thanks.">You hear a voice next to your ear>The ear opposite of the location of the drinks>"Dᵣᵢₙₖ ₘₑ, ₐₙₒₙ. ᵢ'ₘ gₒᵢₙg ₜₒ dᵣᵢₙₖ ᵧₒᵤ ᵤₚ.">The voice sends such a chill up your spine"...You're not the Moscow Mule.">Your face turns to a dirty frown>Who's that?"...Are you?">Something presses on your hand until the cup is brought down to you again>You struggle just enough to make sure you don't get ice to splash out but you end up drinking it all>Then the other>Then the third>You swear that you're not moving your arm>Somewhere between the first and second, you felt such incredible pressure on your lap>Something warm and slimy in your mouth>By the third, you didn't care that there were ice chips around your head and staining the pillow>You were shouting something>You were being shouted at>The only energy you had were in your hips>Piercing up and forward, chasing this indescribable warmth that offset how chilled to the bone you were>Was it the AC or all of the ice that was on your face and chest?>Outside of your mouth and lap, everything was nearly frozen>That life affirming fire was only present there>In a lull, you try to reach the affected area>You can't feel yourself>Only something on you>Not just on your lap but your chest"...Mule...?">The warm mass doesn't respond>You don't see a reason to press it>It's cold as shit>This is warmth>The only warmth you've felt in a long, long time>You squint in the darkness>Your phone had long been dark and silent>You can almost make out the gleam of the copper cups>You reach over to take a sip>You feel parched>...>...>...>Nothing but melted ice>The cup drops to the floor>It was an honest mistake>Honest>You feel the weight on top of you move>Something darts in your mouth, immediately cleaning and claiming whatever you tried to drink>The weight on your lap rises, just to lower again>Wet, heavy, sloshing, slapping>By the third cycle of the heat and pressure falling, you grab onto the darkness>Both arms>Nothing escapes you>How many times is this now?>You mutter something"Don't think you're getting away so easily, Mule.">The shadow mass bleats out something>It's female>Of course it is>You recognize the scent and taste>You're having sex>You've been having sex>The moment of clarity has been brought to you by a pair of yellow eyes>Glaring down at you, just to end up flickering up toward the ceiling"Don't think you're getting away so easily, Mule!">Seconds later everything turns to murky darkness again>Blinding, straining, full body throbs and a scream knock you back under>If you could just have something cold again...>The oozing, dripping heat>It's almost too much to sleep through
>>43388852I always wondered what would happen if you took a love potion but weren't pointed at someone in particular. All it means is that you look inward... and what makes you truly happy. Would he have drank it if it wasn't in such an appealing vessel?Also worth noting. There are many things in the darkness. Monsters love to hide in the darkness.
>>43388862This is some heavy shit.
>>43388862Oh I see. Sally is trying to fix the problem by giving him another love potion and making sure she’s there this time. Anon is suffering from a double love potion overdose. He might actually die from this. Sally you idiot.
>>43389010You know, supposedly love potions include alcohol. One could say that alcohol itself was one of the first love potions out there. Buyer's remorse the morning after aside.
>>43388862here´s to the daterape
>>43389572Was there even a date?
>>43389581i mean... they did sit together at a table and he offered her food... that counts, right?
>>43389690i just realized that that´s how she got the delusion of entitlement to his affection, he started it after all, he bought her lunch!i know, i know, i am such a smart little cookie. very fast to catch on too!
>>43389711Did he, dubsman? He had already ordered. He just let her have what was left. Not sure if leftovers are an open invitation.We know that men and mares can mate. What are the odds that...?
>>43389873>Did he, dubsman?i was referring to the beginning of the story, where he offers to buy her lunch. i think that Sal was just a disturbed fangirl, but when he showed her that bit of generosity and genuine interest in her by offering to buy her lunch and talking to and truly listening to her, that´s the point where Sally´s obsession truly begins... Pretty sure she even mentioned later on that that´s when she realized that Anon was truly a nice person, and not just a stage act now that i think about it
>she saw you´re having the mare from the neighborhood over for tea and now she won´t stop knocking
>>43390754Moments before the window is next option.
>>43390118I think you're forgetting that she had already planned to move into his apartment building. By the first time they physically met, many wheels were already turning. That face to face meeting helped confirm a few things but I don't think she needed him to do her a personal kindness.Also worth noting that this is her first time doing all of this. Caving in his face was absolutely show show stopper but thankfully we have Fringe. "Thankfully".
>>43388862>You have never been more happy to be back home>Well, "home" in this case being your apartment>Likely less than fifty yards away from the two Equestrians that have been causing you so much turmoil>That morning after...>What a mess>Empty cups everywhere>The room was chilly and had the strongest reek of sex>Not just human either>The female scent was intense>All over the bed sheets>Stained bed sheets at that>A lot of the carpet had severe staining too>The bathroom>Down the hallway, up to a few dozen steps away from the door>All liquid stains and spots, speckled with white streaks and plops>You remember absolutely nothing after your...>Do you call it a show?>You never remember what to classify those as>Whatever it was, that first drank came and then everything else>It was that love potion>Had to be>You only packed it because you wanted to see if it worked>TSA agents, no dice>Stewardess, not one tingle>The varied crowd, which seemed to have more females and Equestrians this time around?>Nothing>But once you got that first drink...>This is not a good thing>After your fifth shower of the day, you sit on your couch>Love potion and a bottle of potato vodka on your coffee table>Side by side>This is really the only way to prove this, isn't it?>You are not a severe alcoholic>Not like this>No way like this>To test this, you poured two cups>Left, potion>Right, vodka>You like this brand, so if it's real, you're going to polish it off, rinse it with water, and drink the water for every residual bit you can gather>Not that you'd ever do that normally>This is a bad idea>But so is waking up to empty copper mugs with a sore pelvis and a drastic sense of confusion"Fuck it.">You swipe the red fluid of the cup and down it in one>It's>...?>It's cherry and cinnamon>It kinda has a slight burn to it"...That's it, huh?">You remember when you got caught with it>You thought those TSA-proof canteens were supposed to be legit>You got a little bit of a wry look when you gulped it down but what does it matter?>Not like you can turn a few ounces of a liquid into a bomb by drinking it>You sit there, towel around your waist and leg crossed>You could use another sip to be honest>Not that you suddenly love it, it just tastes nice>Strong cinnamon aftertaste>After around ten minutes you get up to grab your phone>The next hour includes you answering emails; feedback from the...>You hate to call it a show>The whatever>Both seem like they're going to become extended calls>Is this what growth looks like?>This is less motivational speaking and more just Jerry Springer-style consultation>No, that's too harsh>These problems are odd but they aren't so extreme>You haven't even mentioned pricing>How could you?>By the time all of that is done...>Nothing>Actually nothing>You may be sporting an erection more furious than the time Undertaker got stuck with his jacket but that surely can't be the cause
>>43391105>Must be due to... residual effects>Another hour>Nothing>You're not consciously focusing on last night>You couldn't even if you tried>You don't even recall getting blackout drunk>Every time you've drank, even the rare heavy time, you knew exactly where you were and how you got there>You truly do not recall anything>You're not sure what to make of this>It takes some pacing around for you to come up with a daring question>That mess>You wouldn't have gone through all of that with just no one>She's involved>You know it>You openly advertise your appointments>You don't really hide anything>You don't recall seeing her or Fringe>That about settles it>You get dressed and ignore the rising thrill of it>What's she going to look like?>What's going to be her million dollar excuse of how she somehow had nothing to do with this?>Oh, you are ready to rumble>There is not a single blockade you will not smash to get your answers>"Oh. Hey, Anon. Yeah she's here. You really put the hurt on her.">...>What?>Fringe met you at the door and she's not hiding anything>Not any of it>No subterfuge>No lies>Nothing but the actual truth"...Huh. Ok. Uh...">You were expecting more of a fight to be honest>You scratch at the back of your head"...Is she in any state to... talk?">Fringe smiles>She seems satisfied>"Is talking what you're planning on doing there, stiff?">Height difference>Right>That's a thing>You ignore it completely and maintain a straight face"That's right.">"She told me you drank the love potion too, you know. Did you know it activates when it mixes with stomach acid and enough alcohol?">You did not know this>She's taking the wind out of your sails with this sort of dry explanation"...So I'm not in love with alcohol?">"Why did you think you were in love with alcohol?">Well now>You walked into that one, chumly"...Iowaska trip told me so.">You wave your hand away before she can purposefully take that as any way but a bad joke"Anyway, mind if I go talk to her?">Fringe pauses and gives you a nod of approval>"If I tried to stop you, who knows what you'd do to me next...">That seems to make her stance clear>She's not moving"Oh for-">You politely step around her>There's really nothing stopping you from doing that>"...She's on the room to the left.">At least she's not throwing you for a loop>You take your shoes off--you're not a monster--and encounter a closed door>You're the invader now>You tap on the door, more than knock>You hear>A lot>Of rummaging>"She's probably gonna need another few minutes.">You flinch at Fringe speaking behind you>You haven't heard a single step from her"Jesus you...">Fringe's wing opens up>One of her weirdo skeleton fingers curl out>"Wanna chill on the couch until she's ready? I don't think she's going to escape anytime soon.">You shouldn't be here>But you have the power>You can feel it>There's nothing they can do to stop you from leaving if you want to
>>43391200Oh this’ll be a good read tomorrow
>>43391200Sounds like he went feral in her.
>>43391200checked.i wonder why is Sally hurt, she got what she wanted right? is it because her first time with anon was while he was out of his mind and moaning the name of a mixed drink instead of her own one? who could have seen the love drug doing whacky things...
>>43391737Who said she was hurt?
>>43392034Fringe did see >>43391200>>"Oh. Hey, Anon. Yeah she's here. You really put the hurt on her."she´s cooped up in her room, that´s how i interpreted it...
>>43392086Oh yeah. No doubt she might be walking funny. Might be a little. Sensitive. But I don't think "hurt" is the right word. Especially when there has been less than 24 hours of recovery.
Bumping for post-rape confrontations
>>43392640Might be funny that they ended up raping each other. One with the love potion, and the other overwhelmed her and lost control.
>>43392681I'm pretty sure you're just a couple at that point, right? Given the mess Sally left behind in the room and the hallway, I gotta ask what kind of state she was in to get on a plane. She sure didn't have time or didn't think to shower before leaving.
Bump for the question of if you can screw the crazy out of a mare
Well well well, Anon went and got himself plapped
Where are all the other green updates?
>>43394196A Yandere got them.
>>43394196i hasn´t been that long since the granny smith one... as for the Lyra i got lazy and i also think it´s kind of meh
>>43394196Where's yours?
>>43394755>>43391200Right there fampai.>>43394743>I also think it's kind of mehAnons seem to like it. Follow through on it. Doesn't mean it has to become an epic but you can find a solid way to end it and consider it done.
>>43394803Alright, damn. I'll sit down.
>10I think Derpy has some THING to say about you anons not posting…
>>43394196tied up in Sally's basement
>>43395416ThingDerp looks pretty intimidating there... guess you could call her a bit deranged
>>43367301>Well dinner time was awkward>At the very least Applejack doesn't want to murder you anymore>Out of everypony Applebloom was the happiest out of the bunch>Besides Granny, of course>She insisted that you sit beside her and you were more than happy to obligue>You felt happy>No one was at risk of dying now>Hours pass>It's midnight now>You are laying on your bed, trying to sleep>Your body still hurts from Applejack's kicks>Your bedroom door opens and a shadowy silhouette enters"Who's there?">"Oh, yer still awake.""Granny?">"Call me Lady Smith from now on. Ah ain't a granny anymore thanks to you.">She climbs up on the bed"I just wanted to help you.">"And help me you did. Ah think you deserve a reward for that...">She leans closer>Suddenly you feel her lips pressing against you>You try pushing her away but she wouldn't budge>Was she that strong back in her youth?>You can feel her tongue being shoved down your throat>At last she finally pulls back>"How'd like that, my hero?~""WHAT THE-">A hoof covers your mouth>"Hush now, we don't want to wake up the family, do we?">"To think that some creature would fall in love with little old me and brew me a potion to make me young again.""Y-You're getting it wrong. I don't see you that way.">She chuckles>"No need to keep lying. Just relax and let me thank you properly~">She kisses you again>One of her hooves slide down your body and towards your crotch>You try pushing her away to no avail>You bite down her tongue. Hard.>She doesn't even flinch>You can taste her blood >Her hoof slides down your pants>There is nothing you can do to stop her
>>43391200"...Yeah. Why not.">Well if she's honest, you're fine>This isn't a horror movie>You're able to just walk out if you really want>You retreat to the living room and plant yourself on the couch>If she's honest about the love potion needing to mix with alcohol, that means...>It's not a love potion>It's just some sort of aphrodisiac>Obviously it means if you just don't touch alcohol, you're immune>What kind of lame potion is that?>It hardly compares to whatever you were given to heal your face>Maybe a lot of things in Equestria are alcoholic...?>Fringe joins you on the couch>Sitting directly next to you>One of her front hooves on your leg>Your eyes meet>"You know, I don't scare so easy. You might scare her but I'm a lot more durable than you think.">Ignoring the obvious, you can't help but furrow your brow"Since when am I scary?">"Since you first popped up in her mind. Do you know just how much you terrify her?""Me? How? You saw what she did.">"I saw what she did. I also heard what you did.">You begin to open your mouth>"I also know it was an accident on both sides. So you can't hold that against her.">She has a point, doesn't she>What all has she done to show fear?>You're not so silly to think she's some boundless well of confidence>Not to open up to you the way she did>To tell you what she has"Who's side are you on?">You ask because somewhere between all of that, Fringe's hoof went from simply resting on your leg to moving up further>It has the consequence of her also leaning back, and into you>"I'm afraid I don't understand the question. I'm simply helping my friend out.">Her wing closest to you flexes and spreads out>You can feel her "hand" across your back>Her voice lowers>"If it happened right now. I could simply tell her that it's a side-effect. That it isn't your fault. We could take it easy. I can show you why it's a good thing our throats are so large.">You>...>...>...>Don't think to respond fast enough>The doorknob twists open>You blink and in that microscopic instant, Fringe is sitting on the clear opposite side of the couch>You're starting to remember why it's such a danger to be in a household of nothing but females>Musing on that, Sally comes out>The first thing you pick up on is that she's wearing a long skirt>That's new>How did she get that on?>She stops when she's in front of you>She looks haggard>Exhausted>You don't know why>You feel proud of that>You probably shouldn't>That is absolutely wrong on your behalf>"...Sorry I didn't stick around, Anon. I... had. I needed to make sure I caught my flight back.">She tries and fails multiple times to maintain eye contact>This isn't normal>You've seen her vulnerable before but not in this way>"Well don't leave me in the dark, now that you're both her. Cuddle up and let me know what happened. It sure sounds like something magical happened.">Fringe speaks with such a coy voice>Does Sally know what she knows?
>>43395846>You're not sure what to do>You could invite her>But how do you do that?>Do you simply go "well we already did more, what's a hug on a couch"?>That's rather crass, Anon>You simply raise up your arm and look at her>The decidedly demure damsel quietly nods and hops on the couch>She sits next to you just like Fringe did>Minus hoof on the leg>"Wow... you guys already look like a happy couple now.">Fringe's wings fold to the front>Her bone fingers intertwine like she's playing relationship counselor>"So... how did your latest talk with people go, Anon?">This feels awkward>To say the least>Sally's diminished mannerisms magnify the alien feeling"It went... ok. I guess I'm expanding my scope since I have a few more contacting me for things I've never broached before. I hope I'm doing the right thing and saying the right things.">Fringe nods>As if she could feel the weight you've felt from these things>"I see. It really makes me think you're starting to come into your own. Did you notice anything... unique, this time around?">She must mean the increase in Equestrians"Yeah. Saw a more varied audience now. Lot of attentive sorts.">Saying that, Sally leans into you more>You only catch yourself smiling at that because Fringe smirks>She's staring right through you>Those small, pinprick human eyes have a certain intensity to them, different from Equestrian eyes>"You know who you have to thank for that?">Sally quietly lifted her hoof up>She looks up at you>Her short mane is recently brushed>She smells...>Uniquely feminine>Her bright yellow eyes>A split second of fragmented memory reminds you of them looking up at the ceiling>She notices that you remembered that>Somehow>Her eyes quickly divert>"I've spent a lot of time spreading your stuff to groups I know about.">"I helped too, you know.">Fringe says that with a menacing grin>Only you can see that grin>"Yeah. We both found out ways to make some clips of your stuff. Sending them to a few places we thought you'd like.""...Oh... the social media approach?">Shit>Shit>God damn it>This isn't them helping out>It is>But now they're starting to tie themselves to your work"...So it is an... official fan page or something?">You get a similarly timed "yes" and "no" from Fringe and Sally, respectively>Fringe speaks up first>"We're big fans of what you talk about. You can help not just humans, but Equestrians too. I think you may really be able to tap into a very large market.">Sally follows along and adds in>"I think you would be able to help us a lot. I don't mean... what you've already done for me.">"And me.">Fringe again with the unappreciated thorn sticking out of an otherwise silky voice>"Yeah. Like... us. Half-breeds. Equestrians that can't rely on Equestrians.">She looks up at you again>She's able to maintain eye contact this time>"You could honestly help out... I don't know how many. Countless.">You shouldn't>But you do
>>43395855"Ha... well. I hope I don't send out any mixed messages. I don't want to turn into some sort of interspecies romance expert.">As soon as you say that, you realize where you screwed up>Both of them visibly light up>Sally is first>"Why not, Anon? I think you could do great at it.">"Yeah, Anon. Look at you, already making mares swoon over you. Who knows. Our dearest Obscure may be embracing her own foal right now. Thanks to you.">Oh God>That puts a bad taste in your mouth>Sally seems...>Not nearly as mortified>Somewhere between embarrassed and proud>"That love potion worked. Thanks for tricking him.">Sally speaks with a renewed sense of cunning"...What?">Didn't you tell her about that?>But wait>Sally doesn't know Fringe just gave it to you>Right?>Fringe leers at you>"Oh... anytime for a friend.""Wait. I'm confused.">Fringe hops off the couch>She's so proud of herself>"My little human... you've been played. That drink I offered you? It made you hopelessly addicted to mares with human features.">She strikes a bit of a pose>And glares at you>You've never seen a glare that intense>Sally turns her head up until she's looking at you virtually upside down>She grins>Her humanoid teeth, canines included, make her look more like some sort of monster than any Equestrian you can see>Both of them>They give you such a menacing feeling>They're lying to each other>They're relying on you to lie to each other>Are they really even friends?"Y... you're kidding. That... last night... that was a one-off thing. Right?">Sally beams and emits the most melodic, chaotic giggle>Her eyes dilate the longer it goes on>"No. It wasn't.""No? No.">What happened, Anon?>You felt so confident in yourself>They're lying to each other and just relying on you to back them up>Right?>Why are they leaning so hard into this?>Fringe encroaches on you by standing between your legs>You can tell when she's blushing more, due to her thinner coat>How much of that is coat versus it just being her skin that's visible?>"I hope you're ready for fatherhood, Anon. If my dearest Obscure is going to have a foal... only a quarter Equestrian... what will happen, do you think? You may end up more famous than you've ever dreamed of.">Sally knows just when to join in>She was so muted>What flipped her switch?>She changes position and rears up>Both of her front hooves end up on your shoulders>"That love potion never ends! It's never going to end!">That manic look in her eye has extended to her voice>You know this isn't true>You know that she was as surprised as you that you took it at all>You could almost call her tone panicked>Frantic>Begging for it to be the case
>>43395879>She doesn't notice Fringe slamming her face into your crotch>Her eyes are just as piercing>You can feel her mouth words into your lap>Against something that has been>Awakened>Since the night prior>She puts her mouth over it and presses her lips down firmly>It lasts for as long as Sally speaks>When she's done, Fringe drags her face away from you>"It's NEVER going to end, Anon... Equestria is full of potions... if you think about leaving. We'll just poison you instead. Obscure Embrace won't need to crush your face in. One day, you might just drop dead. No one will ever know.">What?!>That seems to break Sally out of her episode>For a second>Her eyes shrink back like the mere thought of it was beyond horrific>It doesn't last>She sinks back into the maddening energy>"T-t-that's right! I'll do it! If you don't make a family with me. I... I'll do it! See if I don't!">Her voice rises higher with each word until she's screaming>"You better hope you don't! Otherwise! I'll! I'll KILL YOU! Like I KILLED my dad!">Oh no>That broke everything>Sally cackled at her own words>She laughed at what had to be the absurdity of the situation>She howled at how she must have summoned her dad in the worst way imaginable>Her hooves curl inward>She's less pushing you in place and trying to hold you>Her barking, raving mad laughter starts to pair with tears that begin to stream down her eyes>What is this?>What do you do?>You can't think of anything to say or do>From below, Fringe is violently pressing her face against your crotch>Repeatedly slapping the side of her head against your thigh and pressing it over your center>Her mane gets messier>Her glasses fall off her face>She did this>She's still doing this>You're at once in awe and terrified at how she's managed to manipulate Sally>You don't want to think it>You surely are better than this>Why did you play along?>Why did you let her manipulate you too?
Jesus Christ. I thought Sally had a few screws loose, and she does, but she's... she has the capacity to recover. She's not bad. She's misguided and genuinely has no clue. It's not that she's dumb. It's that she's delusional. She's willing to believe anything that works for her. She's the sort who would end up in a severely abusive relationship, like her parents, and claim that love doesn't exist if there isn't some hate involved. I like her. I'm afraid she might make the wrong step in growing.Fringe is fucking evil. She played Anon, she's acting cool and like she's just a backseat helper, and then she goes and riles up Sally with something so extreme that it breaks her. She's already in an emotionally vulnerable state. Fringe took that, ran with it, let Sally indulge as if she really was that scheming. Then she hard shifted things from carrot to stick. Sally doesn't have the tools to deal with that. She can't handle that switch. She doesn't even care. She's reveling in what she can do on front of Sally. She's flaunting it. Gloating. Showing how much control she has.What has Fringe told Sally? What did that fucking freak put in her head?What a mess. It's 2am. I should sleep but how do you sleep when you see such raw, vile manipulating?
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>>43384185that reminds me of a foe thingpony fic I read once unfortunately it wasnt finished so bleh
>>43395548She’s gone wild with youthful power.
>>43395894Seems Anon is just overwhelmed with the audacity of these two. He knew they were a mess, and was surprised just how bad it is. They also seem to overestimate the effect of the rape drug, he still has the capacity to say no.
>>43395904they seem to be on equaling levels of>batshit crazyanon definitely screwed himself getting too close
