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https://imgchest.com/p/6eyraqxrl4pWar of Fakers>be Master/Servant>pick your pair from preexisting options (p. 13-24)>no limit on the number of participants>no Custodian's Mark, Transferred Insignia, Stolen Regalia>no High/Lethal Servant Upkeep>no Servant Extras for yourself>no Angra Mainyu>reminder to choose your starting location (p. 4) and time of summoning (slot order, p. 20)>Additions:Broken Ritual, Odd Lineup, World War, Gibbous Moon>Time Period:Present Day (2010)>Grail Mechanics:Deadline: UnlimitedWar Cycle: One OffCycle End Condition: VictoryLesser Grail: Pot of FraudGreater Grail: Cavern (in Antarctica)Homefield Rules: Free EntryAssassin Rules: Any Assassin>Points (regardless of Identity and Additions but changeable by other options):Self: 550Partner: 900Turtle (Servant) & Artoria Pendragon (Master) https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98504131/#98513552Necromancer (Master) & Pale Rider (Servant) https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98544048/#98544319Isaac (Master) & Richard the Lionheart (Servant) https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98514688/#98515468Ruler of Fate (Servant) & Ozymandias (Master) https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98514688/#98522968Tourist (Master) & Hans Christian Andersen (Servant) https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98524174/#98530072King Midas (Servant) & Mundane Outsider (Master) https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98536088/#98536382Ethereal Master & Gilgamesh (Servant) https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98536088/#98539944Simulacrum (Master) & Sherlock Holmes (Servant) https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98544048/#98548208
https://imgchest.com/p/ljyq8pmdy25Lori T'Nara https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98397662/#98398332Force Navigator https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98440304/#98442102Surviving Padawan https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98397662/#98398639Mando Knight https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98397662/#98400830Mar Darik https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98408197/#98411551Ghost in the Droid https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98419432/#98420728Clever Guardian https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98440304/#98441601Solari https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98463295/#98466179Ph'rt'hly https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98419432/#98421577Master Byraan https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98427790/#98432584Lunath Vocasta https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98427790/#98433237Lala the Hutt https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98427790/#98434902Kyber Bomber https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98440304/#98440895Teronas https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98440304/#98441911Imperial Bastard https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98440304/#98443385Gigachad https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98471380/#98474788Young Jedi Padawan https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98488207/#98491595Soldier of The Force https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98494697/#98498345Cree'v'aak https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98494697/#98501212Mu-Gami Rhinda https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98514688/#98516345
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King of Pretenders>RoleServant >Slot1>LocationSnowfield>AppearanceAttractive, Tall (but actually Any)>ClassAssassin/Caster>EquipmentAny>AlignmentTrue Neutral?>ParametersStrength DEndurance DAgility AMagical Energy A+ (Everything related to concept of Falsehood, both in making and unmaking)Luck A+ (It must normally be EX. King of Pretenders is someone who was never supposed to exist yet appeared anyway, but alas. Still, things like fate and future/past reading can't affect him very well. After all, he wasn't supposed to have anything like that in the first place.)>Master UpkeepFree>Noble PhantasmNone>SkillsItem Construction -Territory Creation -Presence Concealment -Imperial Privilege EX(Paradoxical convergence of possibilities. The Servant has virtual pool of 400 points, and can instantly purchase and repurchase any options that can be defined as "Skill" in this WarCYOA, excluding Double Summon, Combination, Nega- and Custom Skills. The pool can't be increased by point-providing Skills, but their other effects remain. It is perfectly possible to see something like Mad Enhancement buff applied for a fraction of a second to strike. Free movesets and basic abilities of established Casters and Assassins of this War are fair game as well.)King of Pretenders pretends to be a king.Double Summon [Caster/Assassin] A King of Pretenders pretends to be a Pretender.Combination A King of Pretenders pretends to be two different people.Independent Manifestation B King of Pretenders pretends to exist at all. Falsehood The Most True.
>>98550016>>98549986>WishHero of Justice?Pruning Theoretical Phenomenon Is Necessary, Therefore, There Is No End To This World's WickednessThis Grail isn't powerful enough to remake fundamental rules of the setting, therefore, such a wish can't be achieved this way. Not directly.>MasterMundane Outsider Clueless, Rich, Brutal, Incompetent, UnstableNew World(Ryuunosuke-tier shitter, don't mourn him. His Command Spells will serve a better MasterMyself.)Once there was a wise king who saved his city from wicked gods with sorcerous trickery... His proud people stood too tall before them, you see, but alas this story is a complete nonsense.Spawn in Snowfield, abuse Inherent Wisdom loops with some minor Counter Hero priority, hunt a certain spare key for some Faker fun and profit, have fun and fool them all.
Does anyone know what the deal is with the Lady of the New Dawn in Living God? Is this description supposed to be a reference to something? I legitimately can't figure out what the author intends me to envision when I read this.>Morality in accordance with the decree of Royalty is this: that which is inverse to the nature is moral, and that which subscribes to the nature is immoral. Thus, The Lady of the New Dawn seeks to annihilate nature. Not nature in the environmental or biological sense, mind you, but created nature, the natural state of objects and motivations. By doing this, her current spheres of influence have experienced vast technological and social progress, but at the cost of the happiness of her principality. Is this anguish merely for nature's grips, or is the denial of human nature necessarily an evil in itself, even if that nature is immoral?
>>98550033This is crackpot nonsense lmao.
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>>98550033Just assume most of it is a reference to Ultimate God in some way.
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>>98550078oh great Wodan is posting this shit again
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>>98550016That is an inconvenient level of thematic overlap with “turtle” considering I’ve already written the update to add imperial privilege
>>98550163Turtle is a Caster/Assassin and King of Pretenders is an Assassin/Caster. Totally different, you see. Unless you are truly dedicated to be a Quantum Servant, it won't be too bad. And even if you are, it only adds a certain charm to this War.
>>98549986>LocationTrifas>AppearanceMaleAdultAttractiveUnassuming>RolePriestMagus>AlignmentNeutral Good>ResidenceThe Sewers>SkillsCommon SenseSurvival>Magic CircuitsAbnormal (Paralysed legs)Quality EX (Manaka Sajyou style)Quantity EX (Mana Core)>Command Spell1BackRedCrestPotency B>Elemental AffinityHollowNothingness>OriginNothingness>FoundationMystery A (Death Magecraft)Ancient TimesOld BloodMystical ConceptWorldwideThaumaturgical Attribute x2 (Beginning, Ending)Clock Tower Education>Magecraft ExtraAlchemyCursesNecromancy>StatusCleric>Priest SkillsReligious Doctrine>SacramentE>Priest UniqueFalse Allegiance (Betraying the church)>UniqueMagic CrestIncapacitatedSealing Designation>WishThe Root (For the third magic)>ServantPale Rider>Slot Order6>Servant ExtraPremature SummoningThis is either going to go extremely well or extremely badly. I'm a wanted cripple with only a single command seal to my name, but in exchange I am a truly monstrous mage with ties to the Root and what should be the right kind of magic to fully exploit this connection. Given how far apart everyone is and how early I am, my weaker starting position shouldn't matter too much since I have plenty of time to heal before anyone finds me, and also I can just hide in Doomsday Come. Idea is to capture the enemy masters/servants in Doomsday Come and kill them with the other NP fuelled by my ungodly amounts of mana. I will of course be going for the third magic, but since Pale Rider is basically a robot it shouldn't mind dying for me.Now I have an additional affinity for dealing with spirits/imaginary number space and 'beginning', as well as some skill in survival (which is nice since I'm living in the sewers). Also I'm cosplaying a regular mundane priest for more points, though I'll drop the church as soon as I can get away with it.
>>98550016>I can redistribute the 400 points spent on one skills to other skills however and whenever I like!
>>98550248It is just Imperial Privilege taken to its logical EXtreme (not really, I discarded even more bullhit ideas).
>>98550277It is, unfortunately, a flat upgrade that stands above every other possible choiceInventing one of those means you are a bad game designer, and cannot be trusted with oc write in powers
>>98550057"Starsector the CYOA" lmao
>>98550323EX IE costs 400 points. It is, arguably, not superior to 250-points UBW in versatility. It is a strong option, sure, but it is not I-Win button, far from it. We have fucking Gil in this War even.
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>King of Pretenders>SimulacrumWho wins the fake-off?
>>98548208>>98549986If he was trvly evil, he would've taken Class Distortion and made Sherlock into a Caster.
>>98549986Okay this should be the final update for my build unless I've gotten something wrong and need to correct it.Me and Hans will spend the 3 months before the start of the war backpacking around his hometown and all the most beautiful and romantic locations of europe. We'll talk to people and listen to story's and give him all the inspiration he needs to write his story.Going to avoid detection and confrontation as much as possible. We'll hide and use our magic for defense and misdirection.If we get cornered I'll do my best to convince the rival Master/Servant to leave us alone until Hans can finish his magnum opus, appealing to whatever inner romantic might exist (It's just a story afterall, what harm can it do?). Offering whatever help I can to them I can.Probably use my command spells for some sappy shit like to tell him to be happy or smthn idk.MasterLocation: Odense, DenmarkGender: MaleAppearance: TeenagerTraits: BlandRole: Magic UserAlignment: Neutral GoodResidence: Apartment, -10Skills:>Common Sense>Operating Electronics, -5>Mythology Expertise, -10>Investigation, -30>Intel Gathering, -20>Tracking, -30>Stealth, -20>Speech, -25>Servant Negotiation, -50>Cooking, -5>Driving, -5>Multitasking, -15Magic CircuitsComposition: NormalQuantity: C, -35Quality: A, -150Command SpellNumber: 3Location: Left HandColour: RedPattern: OrderlyPotency: A, -125Special:>Persisten Stigmata, -10>Hidden Sigil, -10Elemental Affinity: EtherOrigin: Feeling (Bittersweet)Foundation: Profane, +100Magecraft Extra:>Bounded Fields, -10>Runes, -20>Familiar, -15>Puppetry, -40Servant: Hans Christian Anderson, -350bSlot Order: #1, -50bServant Extra: > Tripple Treat, -25b> Homeland Fame, -200> Premature Summoning, -100b> Camaraderie, -75b
>>98550511Oh, right, my wish.To find love? To go on an adventure never ending? To have something more than the mundane life I love?Something like that.
>>98550511Sasuga. I crown you our official Illyasviel crybait, it'll be so kino.
>>98550543Arigatou, anon-san.I fitting role.
>>98550504Simulacrum probably has an edge because of Sherlock, whose whole thing is nailling down slippery things.
>>98550595The problem is that King of Pretenders starts more than 2 weeks earlier than Sherlock is summoned, has perfect teamwork with his Master, significant raw magical energy advantage and isn't a comically evil vampire who will probably suffer at least some minor subtle problems with Counter Force.
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Saw this was posted last thread - what a classic!
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>>98550504Supposing that the King of Pretenders's Imperial Privilege EX is allowed to stay as it is, he obviously wins. The build is absurd to the extreme.
>>98550645Though Simulacrum's whole thing is laying low, he has an ability equivalent to a noble phantasm ranked EX that keeps him constantly off-grid and unassuming to anyone who isn't actively looking for him. Odds are, by the time Sherlock is summoned, nobody would actually realize what his deal is.Sherlock is also being summoned blackened, And turned. Odds are, the church executor who revived him will also be turned, so it's unlikely there will be too much strife between the vampires. By then, it's just a matter of abusing Sherlock's bullshit noble phantasm to smell the rest out while maintaining his cover and doing the occasional pic rel with zero repercussion.
>>98549986ok but like, is there a story or somethingare people gonna write
>>98550676Like, what specific method are we planning to use to kill each other? Mhm, that would be fun to talk about.
>>98550684How would (You) kill the other servants, anon?
>>98550033>referenceShe just hates the natural order and wants to invert all of the shit/replace everything with artificial crap, ain't that deep. >>98550066Although yeah, unintentionally(?) she does read like certain Aromage NPCs.>>98550277>to its logical EXtremeNah, judging from one of the Grand Lancers the logical upgrade of Imperial Privilege is straight up godhood on par with the leader of a pantheon.
>>98550504>King of Pretenders>SimulacrumPathetic. Here's what a REAL Beast is capable of. Not capable of stopping the most plot armored MC in the entire history of the franchise from walking right up to her and bodying her with the power of friendship and Grand Servants, though
>>98550016CUTE BOY OWO
What's going on with you guys today?
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>>98550826Hi wanna be gay together?
>>98550828>>98550833Not especially, but I can't stop you from being who you are in our shared space
>>98550818>>98550833Softie...
>>98550870What did I ever do to deserve this slander
>>98550826I didn't get a job I went to the final interview for so I wanna kill myself
>>98549986>runs simulation>sherlock fucking traps and betrays meAlright, I know what to use those 50 points on now.
>>98550960sorry to hear that anon, but you can console yourself that you got that far. Imagine if you had bombed from the beginning! Surely you'll have success if you apply at a couple similar places
>>98550016Basil wouldn't do this
I’ll be gay with you guys
>>98550983Omori?>>98550965Like through ai?How did my tourist build go?
>>98550926>why am I only remembered for being gay and betaYou're starting to ask the right questions.
>>98549986>Omori?Yeah, pic reminded me of that character.>How did my tourist build go?Upon entering the Antarctic cavern, Build 9 attempts to deploy Idea Blood Pretension EX to overwrite the Greater Grail's activation conditions, establishing a fictional reality where he achieves the Root.However, Vampiric Sherlock Holmes, utilizing a moment of mental clarity granted by Oblivion Correction B, activates Elementary, My Dear B. The Noble Phantasm forcibly exposes the conceptual structure of Pretension EX, revealing its core weakness to the gathered alliance.Simultaneously, Hans Christian Andersen (Build 3) completes the final chapter of Märchen Meines Lebens. The manuscript enforces a narrative condition: "The false pretender who lurks in darkness is stripped of his illusions when confronted by the light of absolute truth." The combined effect of Elementary, My Dear and Märchen Meines Lebens permanently shatters Idea Blood Pretension EX.With Build 9’s illusions removed, the Ethereal Master (Build 8) uses Pure Eyes to lock onto the Executor's soul core. Female Child-Gilgamesh unleashes the Gate of Babylon, obliterating Build 9 under an overwhelming barrage of divine prototypes. Sherlock Holmes, his vampiric bond broken, smiles as his Spirit Origin dissolves peacefully.Hans Christian Andersen and the Tourist (Build 3) survive the war, their journey concluded.
>>98551030Oh fuck, wrong reply.>>98551010
>>98551030>>98551040I've never played but he's a qt.Also based. I'm surprised we both lived in literally any iteration of the scenario.
>>98550057Just like with any paradox game I intend to barely update the CYOA while adding a gorillion dlcs>>98550338Yes, it was the original concept but I added some extra stuff, technically the CYOA happens long before the collapse
>>98551054Honestly I'm surprised too. Tourist seems to be the most vulnerable and out-in-the-open build for servants like Midas and Ozymandias to immediately lock on like hungry hawks. Nice to see, though. Next few times I run this I'm gonna have it be more strict and exhaustive in its cross-checking.
>>98551089Honestly I'd be interested in knowing how my build does in future permutations.What kind of parameters are you running them under? I assume you've fed whatever ai the cyoa and told it to factor in whatever official information and releases for the setting?Honestly running cyoas throu Grok has been pretty fun. Doing it with the Pact Dabbler cyoa and currently building up the characters and town.
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>>98551105Yeah. I had Claude transcribe the whole CYOA. Then I feed all of the builds to Gemini through the advanced research feature and have it look up information and also cross-reference terms with the transcription files, and I tell it to run scenarios based off of that. I think I'll put them together into a rentry and catbox the transcription files if you guys want to give it a spin yourselves.And yeah, seeing your choices being actualized in some way is hella satisfying to see. I'd be doing full roleplays if AIs weren't so bad with non-canon scenarios.
>>98550826dog diarrhea'd all over my bed again so I want to kill myself
>>98550647>Druidism>Sky Magic>Enchanting (Shamanism)>Diplomacy>Melee>Tradecraft>Helga, The Young Warrior>Longsword* 6>Plate Armor*>Grimoirepedia>Yurt Camp>Chef* x2 >Serf x3>Hunter x3>Worker x3>Spriggan x1>Tribesman x2>Priestess x1>Dragon x1>Dragonkind>Slay the Beast!close to a self insert. I can't imagine playing this without taking enchantment or shamanism - preferably both>>98551135Brutal.>>98551130You are retarded. Appeal to authority through AI is insane. I know that's not totally what you're doing but it's close enough to be bad
>>98551149>Appeal to authority through AIAhahahahahahahahahahaha
i hate you bothi hate you alli hate us all
>>98551176I already made a build for this, but she looks like a frog here
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>>98551183He who fights with frenchmen might take care lest he thereby become a monster. And if you gaze for long into an abyss, the french gaze also into you- Neetzsche
>>98551176>this shit gets a cyoa but re:zero doeesn't
>>98551235Youjo Senki has a very unusual setting for anime, that's one of the best parts of it. Adopting a franchise for cyoas is mostly about the setting.
My hatred for anime transcends mere words. The weeb Goddess must die.
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>>98551149>People are having fun the wrong way? Why are other people having fun but not me?? They are retarded!!
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>>98551157Don't laugh, you're gonna live to see it.
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>>98551235>shit anime doesnt get a cyoawonder why
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>>98551268>he's posting the whole thingMad lad
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>>98550647>Superhuman>Water Magic>Mind Magic>Mercantile>Intimidation>Marksmanship>Mathilde, The Noblewoman>Longbow* 12>Crossbow>Spear>Leather Armor>Avarice Stone>Flight of Icarus>Orb of Sight>Frigate>Worker* x4>Hunter x2>Serf x4>Chef x1>Guard x5>Guard Captain x1>Inquisitor x1>Privateer x2>Chimera>Griffin (Cormorant/Fishing Cat)>Dire Weakness>Scar
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A build in two parts, since I couldn’t help but describe my Noble Phantasms in detail. Open to critiques on point usage though because honestly I’m not entirely sure where my phantasms would landServantName: Seeker of TruthBuild: Male, Adult, Attractive, ElegantClass: LancerEquipment: Futuristic Armor, Polearm (Short spear), Shield, Formal WearAlignment: True NeutralParameters:Strength - BEndurance - CAgility - A (-25)Magical Energy - DLuck - C (-55)Upkeep: MediumNoble Phantasms: (-35)True Name - Beatitudo InscientiaeRank - B- (-45)Anti-UnitItemBuff>The representation of the beginning of a man’s journey towards gnosis. This archaic round shield provides an enhancement to the bearer’s Luck and Endurance based on how little they know of their enemy. As knowledge accumulates, this benefit decreases until it is negligible. The shield itself is unbreakable unless its true name is uttered by the bearer. Once per Holy Grail War, the bearer can invoke its true name to shatter the shield. They gain all possible knowledge about one target.True Name: Maledictum ScientiaeRank: B+(-130)Anti-UnitItemDebuff>The crystallization of the ultimate goal sought by seekers of gnosis. This futuristic short spear has a blade formed of pure light and is anathema to illusions. As the wielder accumulates knowledge of their opponent it becomes more lethal, and attacks from the spear grant a steadily increasing debuff to their Strength and Agility depending on knowledge of the target. If the wielder has accumulated all possible knowledge about a target, they can invoke the true name to perform a truly debilitating blow. All statistics of the enemy are one rank lower, stacking with the existing malus on them when facing the wielder specifically until one of them perishes.
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>>98551351Class Skills:Magic Resistance A (-50)Personal Skills:Eye of M. (True) A (-85)Disengage A (-50)Eye For Art A (-45)Mental Pollution C (+45)>To me, information sometimes takes physical form (determined by Luck), and truly memorizing it often takes the form of the physical act of dissection. From the outside it looks as if I am manipulating invisible cutting implements while I do this. Failing to dissect the information leaves a floating hallucination and blocks me from even interpreting it until I doCustom Skill (Discerning Eye) (-70)Main Effect EUtility AConditional Effect DDrawback E>Allows me to passively gain information and insight on a target. Each round of combat, if I pass a luck check, I gain relatively useful new information. As an interaction with Mental Corruption, sometimes this information is not easily digestible. Instead, I get a small hallucinated creature that I must then dissect later to benefitWish: To Change My Fate>A hero from a possible future, where humanity has collapsed and rebuilt itself. He sought the path of Gnosis, unerringly moving forward like a spear in flight, and in doing so doomed himself to discover knowledge that was best left undisturbedMaster: Living Legend (Merlin)After Merlin crashes out over summoning a Lancer, I feel that we are in a decently good position. He can’t leave his tower until the world ends so I won’t have explicit support, but his clairvoyance and general magecraft will act as an excellent support for me. The general strategy will work by steady accumulation of knowledge, using my first Noble Phantasm to force them to blow hard hitting abilities on me before disengaging, and assassinating them later. It can also act as a bluff since they don’t necessarily know that the boost goes down over time while my spear gets stronger
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>>98551268this sucks
>>98551435Insolent creature.Just for that I will post another big cyoa you won't like.
Surinical is hot
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>>98551447this sucks and you suck
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>>98551351>The shield [...] is unbreakable*extremely durableUnbreakable at B- is unreasonable.
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>>98551235I'm sure there is an interactive one.
>>98549991Doing some writefagging around this. Does any build want to be cameod or featured?
>>98551680Force Navigator here. Include me if appropriate.
>>98551680Nice!>Does any build want to be cameod or featured?Lala the Hutt was mine. Any take on her is fine, whether she loses or wins, lives or dies. I know she would happily die if it made a good story.
>>98551680Young Jedi Padawan, please add me if I can be useful.
>>98551687>>98551689>>98551736Can do all of these on the current draft. If it changes, pray that I change it further.
>>98551351>>98549986You need to have Location and Slot Order. And you simply can't act far from your Master without Independent Action/Manifestation, your build isn't viable.Also, Luck-reliant Lancer is a meme in itself.
>>98551680You can use my build (Master Byraan) as you'd like. Change things around, or even alter it beyond recognition. I believe in total creative freedom.
>>98551268>27 pages The hardest part of being a CYOA author is not making a lot of pages full of content. It is "Kill your darlings". "Kill your darlings" is a famous piece of writing advice. It means you must cut out any part of your story—like a favorite sentence, character, or side plot—that you love, but that does not actually make the work better and just serves to make your work longer. I see so many weakhearted CYOA authors who do not have the heart and mental clarity to "Kill their darlings". What you end up with if you do not trim down your content is monstrosities like this CYOA. Too long, too unfocused, and too much bloat.
>>98551860Better than anons cutting their decent cyoas into something short and forgettable imo.
>>98551876>Better than anons cutting their decent cyoas into something short and forgettable imo.There is a reason this CYOA >>98551268 gets no builds and no one even remembers it, while the original Dawn of a Demonlord is a much-beloved CYOA that gets tons of builds whenever it is posted. Bloated is not better.
>>98551860pretty sure kill your darlings means something else
>>98551749Feel free to use Surviving Padawan if you want .
>>98551887https://letmegooglethat.com/?q=Kill+your+darlings
>>98551883Personally I think that it's way too generic the world building is bland, the powers are generic, it's just a boring harem powerfantasy slop. Dawn of the demon lord at least had some coherent worldbuilding creating a massive challenge for the player to solve with a limited toolset.
>>98551922(cont.)Triming it down would not have fixed the underlying problem that it's just overall a bad cyoa.
>>98551922The CYOA author spread himself too thin on 27 pages instead of focusing on delivering a focused and well-written experience on 9 pages. The audience will choose quality over quantity every single time.
>>98551930>The audience will choose quality over quantity every single time.I'd take a feast of goyslop over a small fancy dinner any day.
No, resist anon. Do not post anime high school. Don't.
Do it anon. Awaken the Titan.
>>98551930I am not sure it's an issue of spreading oneself to thin, it's more of a skill issue and lack of experience. It's probably someone's first cyoa especially considering the low effort visuals. It's a decent first cyoa, but it's not spectacular
>>98551991>It's probably someone's first cyoa especially considering the low effort visuals. It's a decent first cyoa, but it's not spectacularStar Dust was SDA's first CYOA and Nemesis was Tok's first CYOA. Rise of the Dark Lord is utter garbage in comparison to either of those.
>>98552001Compared to some of the slop out there this is decent, bellow average but still consumable.
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>>98552001Toks cyoas fluctuate in quality, like I would say this thing might be comparable to his overpowered isekai cyoa, aside the visuals.
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>>98550647I love this cyoa. My build is built around info-gathering. Mind magic lets me read minds, druidism lets me use plants and animals as spies, shadowform lets me turn invisible. I also have the Orb of Sight for scrying. I'll attach myself to a benevolent monarch and make myself his spymaster.>Major SkillsMind MagicDruidismShadowform>Minor SkillsMysticismDiplomacyHealing>CompanionEnoch>EquipmentStaffRobesOrb of SightWaters of LifeGrimoipedia>HomeTreehouse>BeastGriffin>EventSlay the Beast!
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>>98550647>Forces you to be a vampire if you want eternal youthHard pass
>>98552085the source is right there
I don't like vampires in general, but I'd be the Vampire King.
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>>98552137
>>98552136Yeah, I don't like people having good things like immortality but I'd have good things like immortality myself
>>98552129The what?
>>98552136>>98552137>>98552140woah, when did we get part 2 and 3?
>>98552189I never knew it released with only 1 part.Did you just wake up from cyrosleep or something?
>>98552194NTA but in my original timeline part 1 was always posted as a standalone waifupicker
>>98552009Where is your build? If it is so consumable?
>>98551268>dawn of a demon lord but bad
Being serious for a second here.Is there any author DUMBER than gil?Again I’m being serious here.
Being serious for a second here.Is there any author DUMBER than Tok?Again I’m being serious here.
>>98552194this is probably one of the most uncomfy isolation cyoa
>>98551268Don't mind the other anons, I think this CYOA is great. I struggled with insomnia, but now whenever I can't sleep, all I have to do is put this baby up on my phone, and I'll fall fast asleep. I usually don't even make it past page 1 before.
>>98552298>>98552310Wodan (who is actually Tok)
>>98552194>Did you just wake up from cyrosleep or something?Sort of?I dropped a WIP in like 2022 and vowed only to return here if I made significant progress in the CYOA. As a result I only come here sporadically. I don't think anyone cares about the WIP any more so it's just a me thing really.
>>98551778I’ll fix the location and slot order in a build update, but just for clarification because Fate magic seems simultaneously restrictive and free-flowing:Merlin has Independent Manifestation A. If I have him summon me as a Master, would I really need Independent Action since he could just manifest a clone in the real world like he does in Grand Order?
>>98552328No, Gil is actually Wodan
>>98552330Vampire King has been three pages since at least 2016.
>>98552330I care about your wip
>>98552350Different timeline I suppose>>98552361Thanks anon
giw uwu
>>98552332Isn't this only possible because that specific Singularity precedes his own birth? We don't deal with Singularities in this run at all, the world did not end.In short, I don't think so.
>>98552330What's the wip?
>>98552391It's just about surviving in a magical city when the Emperor decides to unleash all His horrifying monsters, heroes, and demons against the inhabitants living there. The idea is that it feels very modern (magical bubble tea, livestreamer assassins, an extremely dated reference to devils trading souls via NFT) even though there's dragons and war-gods and The Princess of the Moon (don't look at her). It was called Saint Slayer, if anyone remembers it. It'll be out at some point. Bleh.
>>98552411>Saint slayerI have been waiting for it and still do
February... home...
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>>98552462
>>98552411Once, you posted that seeing the WIP in the thread made you slightly guilty and prompted you to work a bit on it.Since then, I've been posting it at least once a month.
>>98552468
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>>98552330
>>98552489fuck off
>>98552472At that point you're no different from a woman waiting for her soldier husband to come back. Last letter was four years ago chump, move on
>>98552523No.
>>98552523If the thread still exists and I'm still breathing? You'll find me in that same spot. Waiting for it.
>>98552523Your Exalted Conquest? Your Echoes PSY? Your Luminary? Can you really give up everything?
>>98551176More gifs in this gif cyoa please. I wish i completed making all the images as gifs but that might cause burn out and might not fit in 4chan file size limit>>98551183>>98551189Kero kero kero. A great quote by soldierneetsen>>98552319Everything reminds me of her>>98552330Who let you out of the oc mines? Guards!!! An authorslave has gotten out of his cage!! And guards, please put more manggoes in my rations, thank you
Today, I will not work on my cyoa
>>98552624Italics-SAMA...
Today, in fact 10 minutes ago, I was walking home from a shop, and on the way a woman walked past and said something to me. I didn't hear what she said, my attention wasn't on it, so I stopped to face her. But then she said sorry, and I replied, "You are someone from our apartment complex, aren't you?" And she said: "Yes but I confused you for my husband, sorry." And in that moment I felt a bit elated - that someone could confuse me for someone who is not too much of an autist to be a husband. It feels so good, I am an autist in a normal person's skin instead of an autist in an autist's skin. The autist's skin is stinky. I don't want to be in it
>>98552629a woman has never spoken to me...
>>98552637Stop pretending. You at least had a mother, potentially a sister, and most likely female friends when you reach middle/high school and realize females weren't another species.
>>98552637Taken literally it is hard to believe. I suspect you are exaggerating at least to some extent.
>>98552646>>98552655I was left abandoned as a baby at a buhddist monk temple, schooled by the monks there, I have no idea what a human female looks or sounds like
>>98552659>raised by monks>cry about the true love perk>quote Gifts as the best ""women"" ever>unable to play if he's not THE STRONGEST>endlessly baited by the most obvious shitposts>need a physical medium for escapismEven for the joke I don't think someone like that would end up here.
>>98552669Amitābha, you simply do not know
>>98552679Nor do I care, to be honest.
>>98552686All desire leads to suffering. I am glad you have given up caring about me. The karmic cycle turns and you have taken one step on the path of being free
Danmachi?
>>98552698...You know what, I welcome the monk roleplay. A good counterbalance to the terminal waifufags.
>>98552411Saint slayer is still mentioned frequently as the never ever everyone wishes was completedDo as you may, but people do care I care, I liked the wip
>>98552705This is the only good surinical cyoa because it doesn't have ai slop smeared in every corner
>>98552704As a caster fag I just can’t enjoy Danmachi because it only lets me take three spells and that’s kind of gay?
>>98552725>as a fag I can't enjoy things that are kind of gay
>>98551176CanonReincarnationMale18Major (from the high ranking perk)Mondragón RifleLuger P08Winchester Model 1897 (for the fashion)Mission: Golden SpeechAdvancing German Technology or something along those linesStrategistLuckyDiplomatAttractiveGeniusHigh RankingWiseLeft Foot, Right FootUnquiet mindWeakI didn't watch the anime.
>>98552725basedlimited spells suck, especially when (almost?) all of them are combat-focused slop
>>98552752Normally I associate this picture with the world of darkness general
>>98552714I liked their long form CYOAs like BONC and Metastatic.
Endless spell lists are fucking gay as fuck though??
>different timeline!>different timeline!Your brain is fried from smoking weed
>>98552792Your parents wanted to kill you for ditching weed and smoking cigarettes instead.
>>98552774omg they're like me fr fr
>>98552807/cyoag/ isn't for the likes of you
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>>98552824
>>98552813Are you sure?>I want romance kids!We have it.>I want to be a girlWe have that too.>I want an eternal coom dimensionRight this way sir.>I want to be the strongest!Here.>I want to play shit from RedditHave you played Mirrorseeker's cyoas yet?>Actually I just came here to shitpost lelDo you prefer "Wodan -> Tok" or something more generic?>I want OClol, lmao
Cute boys CUTE BOYS
>>98552799>Your parents wanted to kill youAnd they both failed. Checkmate
Choose Your New Job
>>98552843I like twinks but they have to be 100% hairless and that’s pretty much an impossible demand for most men unless they’re literally from Japan or something
>>98552863I prefer neetbux sorry
>>98552870You better be making oc with all that free time anon...
>>98552863
>>98552873Sounds like work so nah.
>>98552863Bride Kidnapping Expert
>>98552863Bear biologist and paperfolder, since bear biologist sounds like something that requires actual expertise so I would suddenly gain expertise
>>98552938>Bread Scientist>Rimjob Inventor>Writer / Wizard / Mall Santa / Rasputing ImpersonatorAre you telling me these don't require expertise? Are you shitting on the professions of all those folk?
>>98552970Sorry bear science is superior
>>98552863I find this list of options too limiting.
>>98552970>Are you shitting on the professions of all those folk?I wouldn't know. That's the expertise of the rimjob inventor.
>>98553046.....How many elves?
>>98553145Average bodycount.
>>98551883NTA but rise of the dark lord is probably the cyoa i've spent the longest thinking about, not because its good, but because of the opposite, the cyoa is so immensely dogshit but is on the cusp of not being so if the author was more than 12 years old. Its so annoying to finish a build, yet it has so much potential as a cyoa to not be shit that I find it hard to ever finish a build for it but hard to put down.
>>98553239What kind of megumi does it have? It's too steeped in gooner bs to really be that impactful to me.
>>98550078>>98550083i like urban phantom but i wonder why it was never finished
>>98549986all the standard classes are present, woo
Who gets the flute
>>98553369me
>>98553369Whichever one wins the HGW.
>>98553369none of them, i behead and skin them all because this is a retarded caricature and the people who made this are subhuman
>>98553378Simulacrum...
>>98553369The sexiest one.
>>98553280what's wrong with gooner things
>>98550774okay like how? abolish emotions and the family unit? and wtf is "created nature" which includes "the natural state of objects" but not nature in the "environmental or biological sense"?
>>98550016The EX is illegal. Make something else.
>>98549986I think the confusion about if you are getting the points from choosing to be a master or servant is because they are written as Self and Partner instead of starting Master Points and Servant Points, I read them as the later and had no problem knowing that choosing to be a master give 50 Master Points.Also "regardless of Identity and Additions" it should be Scenario and Additions, or add that the Discarded Suit and New Deal addition to the War of Fakers scenario are in effect.I'm assuming Identity is referring to the You section at the start, it should really be removed and the starting points put back at 500 Master Points and 900 Servant Points.
>>98553491"Identity, Scenario, and Additions". This is as clear as it gets, right? Any more possible confusion, please voice it now.
>>98553510How do you feel about ranch?
>>98553440Is it stronger than Gate of Babylon used with minimal competence? No. Yet we have that as an option.Ban all the custom EXes then, both Web of Fate and Pretension are gamebreakers in their own way as well.
>>98553518NTA but gate of babylon is at least way more expensive than normal EX's.
>>98553518You cannot flip the same number of points for literally the same result but better.
>>98552436I REMEMBER THISThe noodle goddess lives rent free in my head.
>>98553510Remove the word Identity (is it about being a master/servant part of the cyoa or the Role selection for master, something else, no idea because no section of the cyoa is called Identity), and put the points back to 500 and 900, right now new Servant build would have 50 less servant points than before but 50 more master points.
>>98552704I want to enjoy it but it’s just so cringe
>>98553518>Gate of BabylonRetards keep wanking this. It's effectively just a fancy gun. Gil cannot use the special effects of other people's NPs. He has Gae Borg but cannot use its cause and effect attack. This is why all he does with the Gate is throw shit.
>>98553560The first section is about your Identity. Look at its description. I think I should say "regardless of p. 1-4" to make it crystal clear.Self points literally refer to points for yourself. If you are a Master, then they are Master points. If you are a Servant, then they are Servant points.
>>98553571Untrue, he can and does. The cause and effect thing is a special technique invented by Cu so he can't do it.
>>98553571Gate of Babylon only have items, but him only throwing them is because of his personality.>>98553583>Self points literally refer to points for yourself. If you are a Master, then they are Master points. If you are a Servant, then they are Servant points.Good thing I made a master build if true, I would have mess that up.
>>98553535It really isn't stronger than even 250-points UBW.>>98553554Try to emulate GoB or UBW by buying all the stuff they can provide with normal rules of NP purchase, just try. Or look at Ruler Shirou's NP.>>98553571Lolno.
This cyoa made me wonder "What would realistically happen if a few random people in the world got high-tier superpowers", and then got disappointed when I found out the comic it was based on barely investigated the subject and spent more time on random bullshit about dimensions and angels.So...what do you think would happen if six anons were each given one of these "supreme" powers?
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>>98553640Call it gullible, but I would trust random retards on this thread with these powers far more than most people.
>>98553631World is destroyed on day 1
>>98553631A golden age
>>98553631The cyoa only really works because it forces you to assign negative traits to the other supers. Most people generally like to to live in peace and would have no problem coexisting.
>>98553669>Most people generally like to to live in peace and would have no problem coexisting.Well, sure, but what happens when these people in question each have the power to take over the entire earth on the tip of their pinky fingers? I mean, are you really just gonna go stop fuckin...robberies with that kind of power?
>>98553631The global government structure would probably pivot to anons' idea of utopia. The real kicker is whether Supreme Biology is a racist or a pervert, because if either is true, the nature of humanity will change.
>>98553619>It really isn't stronger than even 250-points UBW.That's a Noble Phantasm, which you are giving up 200 points to even have. Also UBW is limited to weapons you've actually seen.
>>98553631Given how the last few threads have gone, I'm really glad I'm not a woman.
>>98553631Hinges on Body and Telepath, really. The former can destroy anything and nothing can stop it, so if it lands on a destructive nihilist, then the whole of creation is doomed. Telepath landing on a destructive nihilist would be the same since it can convince anyone, namely Body, of almost anything through the most sublime rhetoric.
>>98553700Because we'd hate you on principle AND ask for pics?
We still don't have any DAs right? I might make one...
>>98553710We have one (Simuluacrum) but he's crazy so eh.
>>98553681Telepath can end crime worldwide. Everyone else uses their powers for party tricks and sex. What more do people even want?
>>98553702I'd argue that Sorceror is the sleeper pick. There's basically no limit to what you can do with a little time, and protecting yourself against the telepath is probably not that high on the list.
>>98553631A lot of sexual crimes and multiple world dominations at once which ends with the world destroyed.
>>98553631The comic is about a bunch of irresponsible morons refusing to work with their telepath.
>>98553705>ask for pics?They'd 'ask' for far worse than that.
>>98553738That's like, 20% of the screentime at best. The rest is just angel demon dimension bullshit.
>>98553742We gentlemen would never.
>>98553725How poor is your imagination?I don't care about power by itself but being able to tell humanity to stop being retarded would be good for everybody.
>>98553410It's icky and I don't like it
>>98553631Really the problems gonna start when one of the anons is gonna try to fuck off planet. Especially if it's a sorcerer.
>>98553761Why would that be a problem, of all the other things that could be? Especially the Sorcerer, who could take out literally everyone else if given enough time.Hell, not even that. A sorcerer could probably dimension hop somewhere no one can reach and then do build up a "kill all supremes except me" spell.
>>98553752I know there's other stuff they COULD do. I'm saying six average people probably wouldn't do much with those powers that would challenge convention.
>>98553694>That's a Noble Phantasm, which you are giving up 200 points to even have.You can obtain it as a Master, even cheaper than normal.>Also UBW is limited to weapons you've actually seen.And skills of their users, don't forget. Also, defensive items like Raw Ass are fine too.
>>98553773Well, I can't help but disagree. Everyone's got their idea of what the world should be. If you were given the power to make it true, how many would still not bother?
>>98553771That's the problem, if someone fucks off planet they can potentially develop a weapon to kill off all the others. Soo everyone else would try to stop them and well who knows if the planet is gonna survive that.
>>98553756>It's icky and I don't like itJokes on you I'm into that shit
>>98553776>You can obtain it as a Master, even cheaper than normal.Then it's an item that can be lost or stolen.>And skills of their users, don't forget. Also, defensive items like Raw Ass are fine too.As in, if you want to do a thing you have to actually see something that does that thing and then copy it, and it gets degraded (even more so the further it is from a 'sword'), and there are things you just can't copy...
>>98553631That's such a cool setting. It's a shame the comic looks like it's super gay and wasted it.
>>98553796Fair enough. Ain't nobody can stop the sorcerer if he decides to go to another Dimension, though.
>>98553631People do bad things 99% because of material conditions. Telekinetic+Biokinetic provide infinite raw resources and solve that instantly, while Inventor can make giant 3D Printers that gives everyone what they want. Sorcerer can literally do anything, and has the entire world behind them if its for a communal goal, while Telepath can act as a global therapist. Body can... idk desu. Punch big space monsters? There's zero reason to fight.
https://imgchest.com/p/a8462xjggyx
>>98553807>Then it's an item that can be lost or stolen.Or you can interpret it as a potion that gives you a superpower.>As in, if you want to do a thing you have to actually seeIt obviously comes with all the weapons already analyzed by EMIYA, just like GoB comes with all the things already collected. You just can add to it.>degraded (even more so the further it is from a 'sword'), and there are things you just can't copyIt has its limitations, yes (I'm sure he can trace even degraded versions of Divine Constructs now). Just like a certain EX-rank Imperial Privelege has its own.
>>98553946Can I fuck my guardian angel?
>>98553946Why did he do it, bros?
>>98553973Smoked too much weed
>>98553973he wanted his own little piece of heaven. Impressive that he actually pulled it off.
>>98553631I'm not a fan of OP Supermans.I prefer having more reasonable empowered people that can actually be killed.
>>98553369Obviously Child B would make more flutes for Child A and Child C. Child A would teach Child B and Child C how to play the flute. I need do nothing.
>>98553954>Or you can interpret it as a potion that gives you a superpower.So, more cheese? I mean, the fact that you have to compare the Servant option to a Master option instead of a Servant option for it to seem balanced speaks for itself here.>It obviously comes with all the weapons already analyzed by EMIYA, just like GoB comes with all the things already collected. You just can add to it.Even that isn't actually that much. Realistically anyone would choose your EX Imperial Priviliege over UBW.>It has its limitations, yes (I'm sure he can trace even degraded versions of Divine Constructs now). Just like a certain EX-rank Imperial Privelege has its own.Well yes, it's just that the limitations aren't enough to make it balanced. Really the big issue here is the lack of rank limits. UBW and GOB both have raw power trade-offs in exchange for their potential versatility (UBW ranks down the NP's, GoB is limited to A++ despite costing more than an EX ranked NP).
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rihVFBf0szQWhile watching this video, I wondered, is there any CYOAs that explore sexual assault in a good way?
>>98554212lol, lmao
>>98554212Ask yourself the question slowly. You'll find the answer in your heart. Please refrain from inviting shitposting about rape.
>>98554212I explore sexual assault with all my builds.
>>98554212Femdom rape CYOAs
>>98554212Glory unto the sweet violated my eyes if that counts.
>>98554236post it
>>98554044That's not the point, anon. The point is the idea of "What if random ass people suddenly had abilities equal to a nuclear superpower?"
>>98554212Isekai Dark Overlord did the best rape mechanic I've seen in a SFW CYOA.
>>98553946>Guardian Angels:Martiel, Mahariel, PurahErase all wickedness and create heaven on earth.>Myself:Appearance+, Intellect+, Willpower+, Emotions+, Memories+, Heritage+, Virginity+, , Possessions-Size+>Gifts:A Mighty Host x5, Miracles, 3 Divine IdolsMartiel can effectively boosts the power of Divine Idols by repairing them.>Companions:Prince Ahmed Solas, Victoria, High Priestess Esha, Lady Chloris>Missions:Works of Giants, A Holy Empire, Songs for the Dead, Stairway to Heaven, Infinite Undiscovery, The Secret Jewel, No Good Deeds, House of Sin and Sorrow, A Road Less Traveled, Tragedy of the Ancients, Houses of the Holy, Oberon & Titania, The Queen & The Bishop, Waking Shadows, Forgotten Kings, A Woman Scorned, Lost Children, Sunken Cities, Dark Water, Emissary of False Light, Star Eater, The Green King, The Eclipse, A Shadow on the Sun, Black Magician, A Dragon Among Serpents, The Chosen's Doom, The Tree of Suffering, The Tower, The Red, Through a Nightmare, The Legions of HellDo all that ought to be done.
>>98554212Rape Shadow Legends
>>98554300What's the text the evil twinks are wearing?
>>98553631I honestly feel that anons from cyoag would be far better then most people with these powers, mainly because they are implicatively introspective and disinterested in worldly mattersWhile I can imagine someone here trying to take over the world as a personal challenge, I can’t really imagine them trying to do anything to it for long before getting bored and moving onIn this particular case telepath is extremely, overwhelmingly important and if they are the wrong person then the worlds over, but I don’t think many anons are interventionalist like thatI would personally take biokinetic, declare a nation to be under my protection and not look beyond it until I have the ability to colonise the stars>>98553761>>98553796I would immediately try to fuck off the planet and I wouldn’t stop anyone else from trying. What possible motive could someone have for attacking me in deep space and what possible motive could someone have for turning around to kill those left on earth?Conservation of energy isn’t a thing here. There’s nothing to take
>>98553973I would have done the exact same, perhaps less successfully
>>98551860I've been telling you faggots for years that longer and longer CYOAs are cancer and the medium was best when everything was one page long.
>>98553631All hentai and all romance converge in the sappiest and edgiest, most autistic and artistic superstory. Futanari bromance vs gay world enders, the end of fat people and the birth of a new age.
>>98554290It has a rape mechanic?
>>98554348It is an implicit synergy. By combining Lustful Minions with Brood, for the cost of only one point, you can have your minions breeding hybrid reinforcements from the locals. Unless you have a specific build, such as a Manipulator with beautiful minions, or an Emperor who can offer great incentives, that is probably through rape.
>>98553631>So...what do you think would happen if six anons were each given one of these "supreme" powers?Give me Supreme Bikinetic, and I'll make everyone beautiful, pic realted
>>98554359I never thought of that. Clever.
>>98554381You get nothing.
>>98554342The best are 3-12 pages with some exceptions.
>>98553631>So...what do you think would happen if six anons were each given one of these "supreme" powers?Give me Supreme Bikinetic, and I'll make every willing male a super soldier, pic related
>>98554212Lavender and Pantheon of Pleasure. Sylen's Empress has potential for growth but the lore is great for the topic as well as the redemption from it.
>>98554429>Bikinetic>male super soldierpic related
>>98553631>>98554381Give me supreme bio kinetic and ill ensure that tok does not do this
>>98554508With the power of the Supreme Sorcerer, I could just send you all to hell.
>>98554521What about the horde of six billion people that were transformed into superpowered, super horny futanaris with human sized cocks through a bio-virus?
>>98550826I helped my grandma prune and bend her fruit trees and went to the gym:)
>>98554521>>98554410
>>98554524Where they go, heaven follows.
>>98554524As described, it takes a few weeks to fix something like that. But it would be possible.
Post Cataclysmic Cultivation.
>>98554568No.
>>98554594
>>98554594>noMay Tok turn you into one of his deformed bimbo shemales
>>98554596
>>98553631I'd use the Supreme Inventor to make an extremely cool hat. The coolest. Also a harem.
>>98554600>TokThere is another.. Shewalker
>>98554600>May Tok turn you into one of his deformed bimbo shemalesBro, not cool. Don't even joke about that.
>>98554600>dubsA powerful curse indeed
Somebody post infected (tg edit)
Somebody post words of affection, adressed to me specifically
>>98554632Parentheses, you, closed parentheses.
>>98554611>jokingShould've posted CC.
>>98554568>>98554645Post Dragonfall
>>98554698We have hit the image limit, no more CYOAs until the next thread
>>98554698Tok...
>>98554710NtA but stop spamming out dogshit then.
>>98554710No CYOAs in CYOAG... fitting...
>>98553631It's always been weird to me how the other powers have somewhat hard limits and then supreme body comes in and has no limits while being unkillable and can extremely easily obliterate every other power combined.
>>98554381holy kek that something straight out of a slaanesh army>>98553631Give me supreme body and I am willing to team up for a world take over, let us purge the decadence and rot from this planet to reforge it anew
>>98551680Rentry is being ass and not doing what it's supposed to- >CONTENT_TEXT_ALIGN = justifyThis does nothing. Nothing. It's supposed to let me mimic Star Wars opening crawl but for some reason, nah. Does the text have max distance? >>98551789Thanks. I'll even have to name some of these.
>>98554778Yea I mean, I guess. Its just like:every other power -‐--------> telekineticTelekinetic -----------------------------------------------------------------------‐------------------> supreme bodyIts almost comical how weak most of the powers are compared to supreme body
>>98553946Great CYOA that I don't think I have ever played. I have been inspired to take the self insert approach more often latelyGUARDIANS>Lepha; Angel of the Seal>Pancia; Angel of Swords>Anafiel; Angel of the Seven Keys>Ofaniel; Angel of the Moon>Sahaquiel; Angel of Sky>Martiel; Angel of RainFAVORS>Possessions: Negative>Heritage: Negative>Memories: Positive>Willpower: PositiveGIFTS>A Mighty Host x5>Array of Light>Divine Mathematics>Heathen Secrets>Miracles>LongevityALLIES & COMPANIONS>William O'Bailey>Lieutenant Annabella Kesper>Chandramani>Sir Brixby & AmadeusMISSIONS>A Road Less Traveled>A Shadow on the Sun>Houses of the Holy>No Good Deed>Works of Giants>Songs for the Dead>Lost Children
>>98554533Very nice. What kind of fruit trees? Does she have some kind of espalier situation going?
>>98554381>but slaanesh is bad because it doesent look like something a normal person would find hot
>>98554919>>98554919>>98554919>>98554919>>98554919NU THROG
>>98554774>be supreme sorcerer>jump to other dimension>He can do nothing but rage impotently in his dimensional gay baby jail while you prepare a spell to nuke him Problem, supes?
>>98553631I always disliked this one because all of its discussions reek of VSBattle wiki tier autism.
