generals belong on /vg/ btw

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>>747915862
WRITTEN SONG ANCHOR
This is an anchor post for newly written songs posted the first time. It's not to shill a song that didn't get noticed and wants more attention, it exists to get a quick glance at the new songs that were posted for the first time in this thread. So please link every newly finished song to this with a reply.

Happenings Doc:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1v52iATWKyrU1gwn6axE-RtteVgusFgL3izxCky-EUqc/edit?usp=sharing

>>747915862
>Edition
Take it to /vg/, buddy.

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Tricky flow on this one, did what I could to make it match but if you feel like giving it a shot then by all means adjust however you need to get it to flow with you.

>>747915951

I Still Play All My Retro Roms

Original: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RZtcz4WVBGg
Instrumental: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-yo3JZzYu38
Lyrics: https://rentry.co/xxsvxcrx

I don't get yellow paint games only retro feels real
Nothing like Outrun fun when you're behind the steering wheel

Thirty Two, bits for me
Thirty Two, or less bits for me
I still play all my retro roms
NES puts a feeling in my heart
There's no chance they could make these now
They can take discs but roms stay around
I still play all my retro roms, hoo, ooh-hoo
Huh

Anons on /v/ play slop that only brings more rage and bickerin'
You can count on the games that you can count the pixels in

Thirty Two, bits for me
Thirty Two, or less bits for me
I still play all my retro roms
Genesis puts a feeling in my heart
There's no chance they could make these now
They can take discs but roms stay around
I still play all my retro roms, hoo, ooh-hoo
Hell yeah!

*maybe some retro game sfx over the solo. basically anything recognizable from before 2000 works*

Thirty Two, bits for me
Thirty Two, or less bits for me!
I still play all my retro roms
PS1 puts a feeling in my heart
There's no chance they could make these now
They can take discs but roms stay around
I still play all my retro roms, oh-oh

*still some airtime, maybe more retro game sfx*

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OHNONONONOOOO
K DON'T LOOK

>>747915862
>>>/vg/

>>747916017
>>747916145
>>747915948
you don't gotta reply 3 times newfag, this project is likely older than you.

>>747916186
but muh stealth advertising thread might get bumped off the 'log :/ :/ :/

>>747916310
uh huh
"stealth"
sure

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>>747915862
SWEET PUMPERNICKEL SHIT-PICKELS ANON IT'S DAY 3 OF THE MUSICAL, WHAT ARE YOU WORKAN ON?
WRITAN?
SINGAN?
EDITAN?
ARTAN?
VIDEOFAGGAN FOR SONGS BOTH OLD AND NEW?
WE'RE ONLY 3 DAYS DEEP AND WE'VE ALREADY WRITTAN OVER A HUNDRED AND TWENTY SONGS. WE ARE A MACHINE THAT TURNS SONGS INTO VIDEOGAME PARODY SONGS.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, EVERYONE, I BELIEVE IN YOU

>>747916520
yeah those virallers in other /v/ threads are not at all subtle

>>747916310
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2zGO6hfV8NI

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Fuzzy demo
https://gofile.io/d/K2VkxjaI

Threw in some rudimentary mixing. How do you add in the static effect in the original? I just took some segments out to make it have the illusion of sound being cut out but it feels cheap.

@writer. I tweaked the bridge because being broke and old seemed a bit dark so I changed the lyrics to this:
It’s life, now that you’re older
The world sits, on your shoulder but
You love playing vidya
Please don't forget

On 3:11-3:13 there's is a car that passed by my window and I'm not sure how to cut out that sound.

Let me know what you want me to improve or add/subtract

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>>747915951

Trailer
(Sparkle - Tatsuro Yamashita)
original: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VpOXqos8c0M
instrumental: https://files.catbox.moe/tygpcv.flac

Hey Yamashita Anon! Since Ride on Time last year was written about WEWY, I thought, wouldn’t it be cute to write Sparkle about the WEWY sequel. Sparkle was originally written for an advertising campaign, so I was like, hey, what if it was written about a character who was originally created for WEWY's advertising campaign? For those who don't know, this character, dubbed Hype-chan, was created to bait WEWY fans, but was only used to advertise a phone port and later a Switch port. In the sequel, she finally got a role, but it wasn't well done since they had had to shove her in to make fans shut up about her.

This is a first pass. I can tweak the lines more! Just tell me what lines are hard to sing to the JP. I love this song.

[verse 1]
She was lonely
In Shinjuku
Wracked by visions in her mind
Disharmonic cruelty
Feathered tattoo
Angel prison she’s confined

[bridge 1]
Though she’s alone (though she’s alone)
She keeps the faith (she keeps the faith)
In static glow (in static glow)
Her teasers re-e-lay
(Her future hype to you)
Dream in crimson light
Make her foresight true (oooo, oooo)

[verse 2]
Lost her sibling
Left her lover
Puppeted against her will
Lacking Soul is cripp-ling
Craned to suffer
Faithful to her princess still

[bridge 2]
She’s on her own (she’s on her own)
But she’ll believe (but she’ll believe)
Her red headphone (Her red headphone)
Will someday re-e-ceive
(Her future hype from you)
Wake up Dissonance
Her instruments, too (oooo, oooo)

[instrumental]

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>>747916618
Alternatively, if someone can contribute the 1st and 2nd verses that would be grand, I'm terrible as a baritone

>>747916186
jeet reply post your fat brown hand

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>>747916663
>>747915951

[bridge 1]
Then in the Noise (then in the Noise)
She hears the yearn (she hears the note)
Her lover’s voice (her lover’s voice)
Has come to re-e-turn
(Her future hype to her)
Freely she will go
Future Compo-ser (oooo, oooo)
(Trailer of her world)

[chorus/outro]
Vision of a girl
Trailer of her fears
Waiting fourteen years
Trailer of her pain (oooooooo)
Calling for the train (oooooooo)
Trailer in the dark (Trailer in the dark)
Princess of her heart (Princess of her hea-a-art)
Trailer of her girl (Trailer of her girl)
Future is their world (oooooooo)
Trailer of her Noise (oooooooo) fadeout starts
Freeing from the toy
Trailer of her rat
Mo-use got the cat...

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>>747916549
Trying to fix this fucking song but I'm really drawing blanks. Probably just not cut out for songfagging.

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OC Anchor

This is for vocals, artwork, and mixes.

>>747916585
LOL

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>>747916857
Raw vocals for Ode to a Rat
https://files.catbox.moe/aravh1.flac
I tried to be somewhat playful, open to criticism and shieet although I wont be fixing stuff today

>>747916948
*ode to a leak

I'm feeling Another Day in Paradise. Someone pitch me a premise for a song.

>>747916948
I think it's quite good, I love playful vocals, and you put great energy into it for that.

>>747917065
Sorry I cant do much vocal distortion for the more ratty parts, I was never one for it and my teacher being wholly devoted to classical or modern theater doesnt help.

umineko song

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>>747915951
The Healer Class
Original: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TvNEUhBNVpU
Instrumental: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=36WolBzxTjU

Aw yeah
Here’s your healer class, right now, augh

(Yeah, you know what this is
It’s the one and only player who just switched
I know how it’s gonna down right now
I don’t need to tell you, just win the game)

Here I come, a healing player
All kills for you, no kills for me
You think I’m awful, I’m here to save your life
I’m gonna heal, heal all of you

I am a healing class, saving my team from death
I am the one that they, want to kill off first
I’m got a super charge, to give you one more breath
I am the only one, yeah, the healer!

I was a kid, who dreamed to become
The best gamer in this video game
My skills really sucked, I want to give up
This game is really shit
Then came along, I way I can win
A class that helps the sweats achieve
You may laugh at me but I will save you from death
In this wretched game we play

I must watch out, there are many tryhards
Wanting to kill me first
My teammates will sure avenge me

Here I come, a healing player
All kills for you, no kills for me
You think I’m awful, I’m here to save your life
I’m gonna heal, heal all of you

I have the skills, that will revive you
I can boost you, temporarily
No matter what, I must protect my crew
We play this stupid game together you and me

I am a healing class, saving my team from death
I am the one that they, want to kill off first
I’m got a super charge, to give you one more breath
I am the only one, yeah, the healer!

And even when the scoreboard is against us
I’ll be by your side
I’ll be the human shield to bare the hits
We all fought pushed and barely won the game and that’s okay
I am still dead, yet you live ‘cus of me
Supporting

Here I come, a healing player
All kills for you, no kills for me
You think I’m awful, I’m here to save your life
I’m gonna heal, heal all of you

(1/2)

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>>747917428
(2/2)

I have the skills, that will revive you
I can boost you, temporarily
No matter what, I must protect my crew
We play this stupid game together you and me
So don’t you die and win this damn game
You fucking noob

I am a healing class, saving my team from death
I am the one that they, want to kill off first
I’m got a super charge, to give you one more breath
I am the only one, yeah, the healer!

(not my fault you keep fucking dying)

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>>747916618
Not bad, some personal notes:

For the sake of flow, as written, N64 was meant to be read as "N-Six-Four"
It's a weird way of saying it, but it fits the flow of the song better, and it still gets the point across.

As for the bridge, a possible tweak
>It's life
>As you're getting older
>The world's weight makes you sweat
>But you're you
>You love playing vidya
>Please don't forget
How's that sound?

Also, your flow in general seems a little off in a lot of places. I might try to record a demo sometime this weekend just to give a rough draft of how it's supposed to flow. It's a bit too late at night now, though, and due to my current living arrangements I don't have a door, so I'll need some alone time to throw one together.

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>>747915951
Original: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TR3Vdo5etCQ
Instrumental:https://youtu.be/0aRXJ0uXct8
Lyrics: https://rentry.co/sv7i7ym4

Don't Leak

GTA, It used to be my favourite
Every day, I play it, always
I really feel that i'm losing my interest
I can't believe this could be the end
it looks as though, jeets leaked a build
Well if it's real, well, i don't want to know

Don't leak, I don't like what i'm seeing
and everyone's complaining
that it costs a hundred bucks
Don't leak, How can you all trust him?
he's shilling a shit coin
Don't show me cause it hurts

The old trilogy, well, they were never this hated
But some are altogether mighty dated
Now goodbye, GTA 5
With One thousand hours, i sit and sigh

Don't leak, this is no decpetion
it's red dead redemption
With a modern touch, oh, no no
Don't leak, don't you think it's crazy?
That game devs got this lazy?
Don't show me cause it hurts

It's not ending
Until we stop preordering
Modern slop
(SOLO)
Cyberleak
You don't have a full build
Do you?

Don't leak, I don't like what i'm seeing
and everyone's complaining
that it costs a hundred bucks
NO, NO, Don't leak, How can you all trust him?
he's selling a shit coin
Don't show me cause it hurts

Don't show me cause it hurts
this is such a pity
I miss old vice city
Don't leak, don't leak
don't leak. no
The game has no vision
jeeted animations
IT WILL BE GOOD, IT WILL BE GOOD
IT WILL BE REALLY GOOD, oh
LA LA LA LA
CANNOT HEAR YOU (sung to the second la la la la bit)
DON'T DON'T, ooh ooh
you're just jaded
you're just jaded
cope cope
Don't show me cause it hurts
you're just jaded
you're just jaded
cope cope
Don't show me cause it hurts
oh you're just jaded
you're just jaded

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>>747916663
Nigga I've been WAITING for this, good shit. Can't thank you enough. I have some other recordings that need to be prioritized at the moment but I'm reviewing the lyrics and everything's flowing perfectly so far. I've put a tentative recording deadline of 9/25 but I'm not totally confident I'll make that date. This WILL get sung, I can promise you that. A more lenient end date would be end of the month.

>>747916549
>writan
A starcadian parody. And since no one wrote an irish gaymen song last year I might give that a try too.
>singan
maybe later
>artan
>videofaggan
lol, lmao

>>747917968
>an irish gaymen song
let it die imo. they keep getting brought up and then not finished because every time it gets revived it either doesn't get finished because people don't actually care, or it turns out meh because people don't actually care. the first few are gold but chasing that high will just disappoint.

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>>747915951
>Title
Gamefreak's Drive

>Original Song
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VZhDs5yegkI

>Instrumental
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DEgqJ3Fwaqs

>Lyrics
Working fast to make me feel alive.
Instead comes shit to rate it five.
Do you think you won't buy?
Only if I cope.
Without Masuda there's no hope.

[Chorus]
I can hear you spergin'.
I can see you seethin'.
I can feel your wallet.
You're gonna buy it anyway.

"Muh open world" shitposting day by day.
Dex cut... It seems okay.

[Chorus]
I can hear you spergin'.
I can see you seethin'.
I can feel your wallet.
You're gonna buy it anyway.

Unfinished region.
Postgame doesn't exist.
Reminder: You'll also buy the DLC.

oof, finished the playlist I prepped for songs to consider writing for this year. picking them is hard as a fag that just listens to the same old music year after year.

Give me a pop song that isn't sung by a woman or an autotuned black man.

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>>747915951
Meccha Chameleon
(Karma Chameleon - Culture Club)
Original: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JmcA9LIIXWw
Instrumental: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c6GV-BkCPes
Need some thoughts on this one, the chorus parts specifically. Wasn't sure which of "go/we/you hide and seek" is better

Is that bulging on the painting a dude?
If you whistled just right now, are you screwed?
There's the guy who hides in pictures
There's the guy who tries to sneak
Pick a pose and paint your figures
Go hide and seek, go hide and seek

Meccha, meccha, meccha, meccha, meccha chameleon
Go hide and seek, go hide and seek
Hiding would be easy if you colored yourself (the) right [sheens/hues]
Red, gold, or [green/blue]

Feel your heartrate rising up when they pass
And you hope that they don't spot your painted ass
When you look just like a rainbow
Watching them seek up and down
Hoping they'll run out of ammo
Before you're found, before you're found

Meccha, meccha, meccha, meccha, meccha chameleon
Go hide and seek, go hide and seek
Hiding would be easy if you colored yourself (the) right [sheens/hues]
Red, gold, or [green/blue]

Paint yourself for your survival
Keep you covered from your rivals (x2)

There's the guy who hides in pictures
There's the guy who tries to sneak
Pick a pose and paint your figures
Go hide and seek, go hide and seek

Meccha, meccha, meccha, meccha, meccha chameleon
Go hide and seek, go hide and seek
Hiding would be easy if you colored yourself (the) right [sheens/hues]
Red, gold, or [green/blue]

>>747918718
seems pretty well done for me and this is a game that deserved a song this year so I'd say good job.

>>747917752
Oh yeah, vocaloid songs aren't easy. A demo would be the best bet on adressing the flow. I actually thought about saying n six four but everyone refers to the system as n sixty four so went with that. I prefer the mild rhyme of the bridge tweak I made if you don't mind. Lets reconvene tomorrow

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>>747915862
Every time I see this image I'm reminded the Keith Flint is dead and I get really depressed.

>>747918718
I like what you've got so far, though I've got two nitpicks:
>Some fags will probably get upset that meccha's actually pronounced as metcha rather than mecha which wouldn't work for the syllables
>It'd be fun to describe some random objects/things you can hide as like a plant or horse dick/etc rather than just as something in a painting
>>747919115
:(

what are the best ed sheeran songs to parody this year

Chain smoker cat OP doko

>>747918891
Thanks! Any thoughts on whether sheens or hues are the better option?
>>747919239
Doesn't seem to matter much since metcha's still two syllables and the stress is also the same desu, and I can change the bulging from a painting to a statue

>>747919564
nta but hues is much better, sheens refers to shine while hue is color

>>747919564
hue. what other anon said, but also now you're naming the 3 primary colors in the next line even if gold is only roughly yellow. bulging statue is a good call too imo.