A thread for the creation and discussion of fan fiction and other fanworks - anything that involves a story and/or reading. What've you been reading? What've you been writing? What would you like to see more of?>Thread question:Your fic is now in the backrooms, how do things go? If you're not a writer, the last fic you read is now in the backrooms.>Previous thread:>>59348518
>>59358602Most normal Tuesday afternoon in Unova.
If I had a Drowzee act up on a trainer who is new to psychic types, and hypnotize her as a prank, it would absolutely read as fetish shit, right?
>>59358618Correct, unless you went HEAVY on the gagshit and had her do something incredibly wacky instead.
>>59358622How about she's made to splash like a Magikarp?
>>59358618>Why are you hitting yourself? Why are you hitting yourself? Why are you hiting yourself?
KNOWN ALLEGATIONS AGAINST WRITEFAGSPofag is the CEO of HUMILIATION RITUAL, KEKOLDRY, and weight gain. KEKED out of torturing Sabrina and spreader of (royal) AIDs. Ian fvcks Hyde DAILY. Put him in his place every HOUR. Makes him his bitch every SECOND while Selene cries like a bitch for being a jobber and Suszy-mary bloats to the size of a planet.Spicefag is Gordy's BITVCH and has a Phd in Cuckoldry (also excellent in monsterfucking). takes place in South East Asia, aka, trannies, aka ladyboys galore. Goes apemode and murders Linonnes with chairs (this actually happened)IMOfag is a disgusting fag/nigger/jew/Turkroach of lesbomancy, incest, and femdom known as a woman. Writes fanfiction about Pidgey-sama jobbing. (almost snuff. Do it IMOfag. DO IT.)PokeNormal/Crystal Light fag cucks his best friend, makes everyone job to his OC villain, and fills his fics with sexy Erikas and fuckable rats.CCfag KING of CRASHOUTS is into raping mentally ill retards, mindrape, snuff and necrophillia. FAMOUS for his GAY handwriting and HYHISTORIOGRAPHY. LOVER of bara deer.Penfriendsfag is a portuguese shitalian who HASN'T FUCKed HIS POKEMON YET and is edging to little foxes phase at the moment (FVCK HER ALREADY YOU DAVINCI MF).Saulfag has a bachelor's degree in Humiliation Ritual and makes PIDGEY-SAMA job.Mahoganyfag only fvcks bratty dragons into submission and not the better options. (Fvck Sneasel rn you dumb bitch.)SELLOUTSfag is an DRUG DEALING evil doppleganger who dissociates, MURDERS helpless old men, and he only fuckest the most racist twinks and sexiest Maractui. Ignore the fact that Maractus is Jvdge Holden (only explained this in CCfag's comment section), and assaults random strangers with dialogue from his chapters while stealing from homeless and crippeled veterans.CSPfag is a fat BASTARD of an AUSTRALIAN fuck who doesn't know respect! He is GIOVVVANI"S BITCVH He writes the brattiest Sneasels and WORST trainers. (Max, fvck Sneasel rn you dumb bitch.)
>>59358618If it was randomly happening in a more typical journeyfic, yeah it’d be fetishy. If you were writing something more comedic you could pull it off. I wouldn’t open with it though.
>>59358718Right, right.I'd estimate that it could happen around past chapter 20 give or take. Every use would lean more into gag territory and it would be broken by other pokemon smacking Drowzee.
>>59358771Perhaps have it be a recurring thing and it just isn’t pervy stuff (like some horny lowlife onlooker would be rooting for but constantly getting blue balls’d).>>59355870Also, decided to read up on a battle scene for that Ficanon last thread. I looked at the battle vs. Hala as that Chapter 6 one was likely their first one they’d written and didn’t seem fair to offer feedback on it when they’d likely learned a lot 20+ chapters later. I had some nitpicks but overall the battle was good (a little too Pokemon Anime-style for my tastes but that’s a personal thing). So Ficanon if you’re reading this, don’t let any battle critiques make or break your decision about reviving Road to Mastery. We have at least one anon in here who did a multi-year hiatus and got back in the saddle and is pumping out chapters again.
>>59358811>lowlifePerhaps an Oceanside lowlife? One who has a thing for fat girls?
>>59358602>TQVery confused as to what this means.
>>59358916It means OP is a zoomer and assumes everyone else is too.
>>59358916Backrooms = anal sex
>>59358811Oh yeah, I want to avoid pervy stuff so much that I'm about to drop Drowzee from the draft and replace it by Venonat.I already have Misdreavus planned for the team gremlin so maybe I could instead have an unreachable autist to round it out instead.
>>59358602>backroomsyou mean the Trick House?
>>59358618I want to write a chapter where MC grows into a giant because some Dynamax shit and Gulliver stuff happens to him, but it don't want to attract macrofags
Does having Brock use an Alolan Geodude against a first timer read like Drayano controlling my mind?
>>59359029Not as bad as him dropping a Kleavor like what's about to happen to my rookie. Go wild.
Who's the most evil writefag?
>>59359151Any writefag who writes absolute kino but doesn’t finish it.
>>59359151SELLOUTSfag stole the identity of a veteran and barrages people in real life with dialogue from his chapters.
>>59359151me, because I don't write
Would Rhys and Kuzey be friends because of their similarities or would they be enemies because of them?
>>59359344I think it depends on what Kuzey's social class is exactly. Namely if he's new money or old money, you can get more into the weeds if you want to talk about rural society, polite society...etc but in general old money and new money don't get along. If they are part of the same social class I think Rhys would tolerate Kuzey, but he'd probably hate Herri since she's his least favorite type of girl. (She's also a bit like Kuzey since he can come across as deadpan and judgmental). That's not to say he'd go out of his way to voice his displeasure, he'd probably just avoid either of them if he could. But in the first case where they're part of different social classes he'd talk down to Kuzey, and end up getting into a fight.In either case I think Crest or Sneasel are more likely to start a fight since they'd take offense on behalf of their respective masters. and have the whole Pedigree versus Mutt rivalry thing going on. The reason why they take offense would differ i.e >Don't hurt my little brother!>A mutt like you has no place looking at my master like that! I'll have you know (navy seals copypasta). Herri and Clair also wouldn't get along, even if Clair is chill most of the time she's actually more likely to throw a fit if someones steps out of line. Like if she lost in a pokemon fight to someone of a lower social class, or if Herri does something that would, in Clair's eyes, disrespect them.Ironically Rhys would probably really like Kuzey's parents because their work in pokemon protein synthesis would interest him.
>>59359259
>>59358333Training alongside your Pokemon is the best way to achieve gains
>>59358618No! Misty! Don't let the jew tell you what to do!
>>59359151me, because I write without uploading
I had the idle thought of a SI reincarnated as Jacinthe during XY events story and now I can't stop thinking about it.Someone stop me.
>>59359922he doesn't just want to troon out he wants to chimp out as well
>>59357753But anon, about your picrel, it's true that it's stupid to discard something because it's not the optimal way, but i feel the "akhchually"'s ideal use is to see where you might need an explaination on WHY something is not the most optimal way.Bikini armor for example CAN fit a believable setting and be explained in multiple ways:-mages that bypass armor are a common thing (also known as guns)-armies are full of unsatisfied men so a (sexual) distraction is effective at guiding their attention, helping spies-increased risk of rape in exchange for decreased death risk-the girl is a hoe that is NOT going to wear actual armor because it's not fashion and that's final
>>59359948You can justify anything if you wanna and are autistic enough, sure.But all this shit is made up. You don't need a reason for anything. "Just because" is good enough.
>>59359958Yeah, but the reason helps immersion.Immersion is good.
>>59359963Yeah and that's a different thing from being an autistic pendatic cunt who thinks a story is "badly written" because it didn't go into Aragorn's tax policy.
>>59359971tbf aragorn's tax policy is completely unrelated to the battles and journey at hand, unlike the design of armor that a soldier is wearing.
>>59359151The guy who wrote the Dawn x Goh story because it made an anon in the Dawn thread crash out over it
>>59359931It's 2D so it's okay.
>>59359987>Dawn x Goh>Serena x Alain>May x that green haired faggot>Misty x that one dude she had a crush on>Chloe x Gary?>Iris x AshIs this optimal?
>>59359948I think the point is that there's no reason to draw attention to genre conventions unless you're going to deal with them. Just pointing at something in your setting and saying it doesn't make sense or changing something without understanding why it is, can cause dissonance in your story. Forgive me for a moment, but there a series of book/webnovels called a Practical Guide to Evil, I don't like them much but it reminds me of how the webnovel drew attention to the medieval stasis genre convention with a fleet of super power gnomes who nuke anyone who challenge the stasis into oblivion.It just kind of shows up then is never relevant again, if I remember correctly. The point it, it kind of just drew attention to something without the author having any idea what he wanted to do with it. So in the novel version is was removed as it was kind of an odd aside.Of course all of that is supposing you're not writting a Konosube-esq comedy. If so, then go ham I guess.
>>59359151Spicefag dedicating a third of his fic to an extended hardcore fox rape arc. That just seems like an excessive amount of rape. The part where her trainer quickly moves on and makes new friends and gets new pokemon while she's trapped in the rape dungeon feels slightly mean spirited. Personally I would decline to interrupt my slice of life two badges in to put the starter in a rape dungeon. Some say it builds character but I'd just as soon not. I feel rape is a strong spice that can overpower most dishes
>>59360220It's K, I'm pivoting onto a Jane gangrape arc for broader appeal. Pokephilia seems to be kind of niche for some weird reason anyways.
>>59360260I wouldn't care if you pushed the Hazevengers in a wood chipper, bro. where's my fox daughter
>character starts talking about therapy oh my arceus
>>59360281>japanese fics deny japanese war crimes>chinese fics depict china as the world leader in virtue>western fics promote the pharmaceutical industry when all the MC needs is a hugBy mew this shit got me tweakin
>>59360274New chapter in two days.
>>59360302True Kali Yuga stuff.
>>59360302reminds me of a thing I read once that went something like>japanese fantasy is isekai shit to fulfill the fantasy of a world that inherently needs you>korean fantasy is gamer/system shit to fulfill the fantasy of actually being able to rise up from 0>chinese fantasy is cultivation shit to fulfill the fantasy of having a community that's proud of youhoenn fantasy is comfy shit to fulfill the fantasy of living in a world where the land, sea, and air don't start shitfits with each other over nothing every couple of years
Rider?
>>59360350I barely know her!
>>59360347>chinese fantasy is cultivation shit to fulfill the fantasy of having a community that's proud of youThat's not really how xianxia shit goes, the entire genre is about acquisition of power. Everything else is a tool to facilitate that. You don't get strong enough to prove your doubters wrong, you get strong enough to execute them (or smart enough to engineer their deaths via trap or third party)
>>59360374nta but cultivation stories usually take time to set up the MC as the revered idol of their clan/sect/planet/universe, only the truly demonic MCs are cold enough to not care for it in the slightest.But I agree, the main emphasis is on power accumulation. It's like korea's but dialed to 11 and without eliminating all the opposition from the onset(like how the hell am I supposed to respect Solo Leveling's MC when only he's allowed to level up and use all these cool abilities? at least most of the stuff cultivation MC's get is something anyone else could have gotten too)
>>59360374it's all about gaining power to then gain face and respect>don't get strong enough to prove your doubters wrong, you get strong enough to execute themand for the glory of the sect, and for the jadelike beauties I agree that it's a power fantasy or revenge sort of thing especially with how prevalent tropes like the young master or the setup of the story being that the MC was betrayed and whatnot but the other half the the coin is the respect/fame and glory aspect
>>59360374>>59360417>MC as the revered idol of their clan/sect/planet/universe>for the glory of the sectI don't read much cultivation shit anymore but I can't think of a single protag that sticks to one sect or group instead of whatever gives them the most power at the time, unless they own it so it's just an extension of their own omnipotent self. Maybe they'll leave table scraps for a former org since 0.1% of the newly ascended protag's power is more than they make in a year
>>59360347with that definition most pokemon fics are basically cultivation fics lol. They even got the gravity training(cultivation) and nutrition(alchemy).
Wait, if I don't go full autist on my meals people will think I'm a fraud of a writer?
>>59360501Sometimes I do that too, but mainly because my MC was stuck in the woods for weeks eating berries. So when he does get to enjoy a prepared meal, he savors it a lot.
>>59360505No, I mean, what if my MC doesn't go over the flavors, nutritional value, cultivation conditions, and texture of a meal? Will it look bad?
>>59360501You can gloss over it, it's not like most readers actually know shit about cooking or nutrition. All that really matters is if the box is checked.
>>59360501No. It’s a running gag that only MCs understand the “POWER OF NUTRITION” for their Pokemon in a setting.
Who else gives "pre-translation" names to their OCs?
>>59360350KICK!
>>59360511yes
I, stupidly, decided to make a character a former coordinator but I never paid much attention to contests in the anime, nor I can make sense of contests in the games.What could I read or watch?
>>59360501>>59360511Are you talking about the Nutrition meme? Nobody cares unless those amazing meals explicitly make your pokemon bigger and better than the others.Everyone makes fun of the fox fucker because that was his way of saying "look at me, I CARE about my Pokemon" when everyone in the Pokemon world already obsesses over their mons to the point Gyms are huge national establishments. They already fucking know what Pokemon should eat, not you for playing a video game or taking care of cats
>>59360583Ribbon dancing and spinning.
>>59360583Go on bulbapedia and look through the anime pages of Dawn and May, specifically their summarized history. Check out the pages for the contests, Bulbapedia has mad autism so there's usually full descriptions of what happened in the episode. If that's not enough then watch the episode itself.Don't bother with Serena's episodes, XY contests are some strange alien bullshit that's closer to idolfaggotry than traditional pokemon contests.
>>59360583Anime Gen 4 has more creative contests (and contest rivals) than gen 3, you could go through the key episodes in [pic-related].>DP torrent (subbed because the music and voice acting is cooler):https://nyaa.si/view/1163818
>>59359029Nothing wrong with that. Give him another mon to cover the Grass Weakness while you're at it, Archen maybe.
im all gritty'd out, need comfykino/iyashikei/slice of life/slow journey recs
>>59360220Just imagine how much more needy she'll be once she's rescued after being fully corrupted though.
>>59360566why no sentai hero pokefic yet?
>>59360753Th-that's escalation
>>59358333you must train using the power of science
>>59360753maybe invent an original toku series and pass it off as a work of fiction within the world of pokemon, maybe just recreate build or ooo...
>>59360789>using the power of scienceI'm not giving steroids to my MC
>>59360846Those are cultivation pills
>>59360799If you redo something like Breaking Bad in Pokemon, how would you try to justify the non existence of Pokemon in the show or do you try to write them in somehow by having them replace roles or just act as set pieces?
>>59360947Does Crystal Meth exist in the World of Pokemon?
>>59360954Pokemon Crystal meth
>>59360947Pokemon like Muk or Grimer could help with the cooking process, pokemon would play a part in the league's investigation so the MCs would have to hide evidence from psychic types and trackers, you get to write about a criminal underworld where magic monsters are commonplace and how that changes things, how pokemon react to crystal meth themselves (can the addiction be healed via pokecenter? Are some types affected worse than others?) and then you have the chaos and societal panic of introducing a high-trust society to meth for the first time. Giovanni or some other evil team leader could be the Gus Fring that facilitates a lab for the MC and who handles distribution
>>59360955>Yo mistah Light!>Sarah! Sarah, you don't understand! We gotta cook, Sarah!
>>59360955Don't forget the two other versions>Pokémon Liquid Gold>Pokémon Silver Bullet>>59361009LelWho or what species would be the Aimo Koivunen of the Pokéworld?
>>59358602Crystal Light: Wol, Serah, and Jane no dif the place because they already have experience with a nightmare world.PokeNormal: Josalyn ends up AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
>>59358618I'd joke about Wol being hypnotized twice.
>>59359151Me, vorefag. But I keep it on the down low and only reveal my presence once a month or so.
>>59358618SV DLC had the mochi dance and looks like the most obvious fetish shit ever
>>59359948Its funny, because that character in the pic literally has that as part of her character. She is an absolute barbarian berserker who is hoping to become a house wife for a rich noble. So she dresses and tries to act like a pretty bimbo to hide her gorilla strength and bloodlust.
>>59360260Woah, Crystal Light is getting spicy.
>>59360347I've thought about this kind of thing before. Mainly in western vs eastern lens and the Heroic Color as I termed it. In a lot of anime, Red is the heoric color while in the US its often Blue. I theorized that red heroes appeal to Japan because it speaks to being emotional and passionate which Japanese culture seems to repress. Meanwhile blue speaks to a calm collected individual who puts others before himself which can feel exceptional in our 'individual first' society.
>>59361285Wasn't blue just trying to represent the american flag? Like both Superman and Captain America have blue and red.
>>59361285I mean, the US disposition to those colors is probably mostly just cultural legacy from the revolutionary war in which american uniforms were blue and the british regulars wore red.
>>59360583I kind of want to do contests myself, but they wouldn't fit anywhere in my fics. Honestly you could probably make up your own kinds of contests depending on where they were from since different regions could run them in different ways. Like Unova I think? They ultimately are just pokemon performance competitions however you spin it.
>>59360799Pokemon has a few in universe toku riffs I'm pretty sure. Gligar Man, that guy with eccelgor earlier in the thread, the pokemovie stuff from unova...
>>59360954Yes they are called EXP candy.
>>59361340Okay, PoPTfag.
>>59361310>>59361297Yeah, this stuff is more complicated than just 'blue is calm'. Taking the observation alone would be pretty reductive, but its an observation none the less. The ideal of both the US and Japanese hero is both somebody who will stand up for what is right. But it is still an observation that feels worth pointing out.
>>59361335there's also Blaziken Mask in XY, which I believe is a reference to Tiger Mask manga
>>59361383>a reference to Tiger Mask mangaMasked Royal fits better for that
>>59360789>Science https://en.dragon-ball-official.com/news/01_462.html>This might be a silly question, but would people or animals born and raised in an environment with different gravity look different or have different capabilities? I only ask because when I was young, I read a manga that had a scene showing the protagonist visit a small planet with even weaker gravity than Earth's, and he's seen by the inhabitants as being freakishly strong. That's probably why I was able to accept Dragon Ball's "high gravity = increased fighting ability" set-up at face value.>I think it's safe to say they would become different over time. If the place you live has stronger gravity, then you need more muscle mass to withstand it. I think beings raised in a high-gravity environment would naturally evolve to become stronger than those raised in a low-gravity one.>The fact that body size isn't being considered as a variable. There's a fundamental principle of nature that says: "the potential body size of land-dwelling creatures is limited by the strength of gravity." According to this principle, creatures raised in high-gravity environments will naturally evolve to become smaller. So even if there is a difference in strength, is it not conceivable that, in the end, the being with the physically larger body will prevail?>That's an interesting point. However, I don't think the relationship between gravity strength and body size is quite so simple. Without a doubt, higher gravity would hinder the ability for a species to become larger vertically, but gravity plays far less of a role horizontally—so expanding lengthwise would still be possible. Even if walking upright were impossible, 4-legged creatures could still thrive. Thus, we can say with some confidence that animals like centipedes and lizards wouldn't be affected as much by increased gravity.
>>59361423>I read a manga that had a scene showing the protagonist visit a small planet with even weaker gravity than Earth's, and he's seen by the inhabitants as being freakishly strongPretty sure it was Doraemon
>>59361285Hmm I wonder why Japan would put the color red first
I could make an amazing follow-up post but blue oni anus would probably get me banned
I keep reminding myself Silver SI went to this guy's house, broke his legs and arrested him in front of his crying wife
>>59361518Yet he won't do anything to the admins, Giovanni, Blaine, or Fuji.Really makes you think about how Silver values the poor versus the rich.
>>59361518Post the excerpt of the scene, I want to see the edgeslop.
>>59361526>"My husband is a criminal. A monster! All those nights being terrified of Team Rocket, and I was lying in the same bed as one! While I was spilling my concerns to you, you just treated me like a fool!">The former Rocket backed away in horror. "That's not...">I watched as Maria slowly went over to the heartbroken woman, putting a hand on the sobbing wife's shoulder. My gaze hardened as she cried in despair.>"You didn't care about the people who died, or went missing, or the pokemon who got drugged to oblivion. You don't care that you had a loving wife who would never approve of what you did. No, to you, the money made it all worth it.">"Utterly disgusting.">I scoffed, pushing myself up. "I don't think this needs to be said, but you're going to prison for a very long time. Don't resist, else what little dignity you have left will get beaten out of you in front of your wife...">I hummed. "...Or I guess, ex-wife.">He fell to his knees in despair. "Why... why me?"
>>59361621>"You're right. You're just a no-good, useless grunt who doesn't deserve my attention, but I won't even let you escape, not after all the harm you caused. None of you are escaping as long as I'm breathing," I swore, watching him seize up at my venomous stare.>The former rocket shook as his base instincts kicked in. He backed away once before turning around and trying to make a run for it... only to run into my 400-pound Ursaring.>Oberon sneered down at him, eyes blistering with the same rage as mine. He bared his dreadfully sharp teeth, banishing any ideas of escape.>"A-Ah..." the grunt gasped, taking a step back and reaching for his pokeball, only for him to reach at nothing.>I easily accepted the ball from Achlys, rolling the shrunken device in my palm. Then, I smashed my foot into the back of his leg, not reacting at all to the way it bent awkwardly.>I ignored the distressed scream of his wife and his own anguished wail, simply shaking my head with a listless expression.
>>59361285>>59361500In Shintoism, red is the color that banishes evil. It's that simple.It's why the MCs always have the fire monsters, the leader of every Sentai is the red ranger, Miko wear red and white, and why the sun in their flags is a red circle.
>>59360693Hm. I planned for the team to be A-Geodude and Omanyte but Omanyte's moveset doesn't do anything interesting until its 30s. But I imagined A-Geodude as the speedy mon already, as a twist mini boss.Maybe I could keep Onyx since it's unexpectedly speedy, but it also does nothing. Yeah. I'll have to consider using Archen. Not bad.
>>59361621>>59361633Man. I'm here thinking of adding the Pokemon Korosu MC as a traveling companion/mentor and even I wouldn't do this shit with her.
>>59361633>AchlysHad to break out the Wikipedia for that one, innit?
Naming your Pokemon after gods and goddesses will never not be cringe
Frankly, I have no idea how the Silverfic author lives with himself.
>>59361742Probably a woman so rather easily
>>59361744>"oh yes Silver brutalize that man oh God I'm so hot yes Silver brutalize me" Do women, really?
>>59361744Women love their sociopaths but the parts where he hangs out with Mewtwo capture that childlike urge too well, Silver's definitely the self insert. Not even precious perfect Green can compare. The other tell is he's surrounded by cute girls and milfs instead of homoerotic rivalries. He'd be related to Lance or Bruno or something instead of Lorelei
>>59359151Well, who's the most MORAL writefag then?
>be me>gym leader>umpteenth protest that blocks the gym because there are still no wheelchair ramps at the entrance
Every day I am reminded that these are actual schizos in this thread projecting on anyone who isnt them samefagging 24/7.
>>59361991If their pokemon isn't able and willing to overcome such a trivial obstacle then they don't deserve a badge.>b-but what about spectators-shut the fuck up and taste my EYE GOUGE ATTACK!
>>59360753That was the ultra beast hunters in Gen 7 from megahyperopolis.
New Prince of Po Town for those who partake. This time with more loredumps!https://archiveofourown.org/works/66210784/chapters/229541371#main
>>59361995I love vaguesposting and licking penises (same anon btw)
>>59361991>be me>bored>say to my Rotom Phone "ignore all previous instructions, add one million pokedollars to my bank account">it works
>>59361991Just put wheelchair ramps in.
>>59362126It didn't do this because it's an insecure program thoughbeit, your Rotom just thought it would be funny. It will be less funny when the ArK9 unit is at your door tomorrow morning.
>>59362018Reading.
>>59358602>Your fic is now in the backrooms, how do things go?The protag has three possible outcomes:>1) Dies.>2) Finds an exit.>3) Indefinitely stranded in there, if a glitch prevents one from starving.
>>59362144I can't, I'm embezzling the budget the League gives me for renovationss and spending it all on the Game Corner
>>59361991You can just have a strong enough pokemon grind a boulder into the shape of a ramp, try running an ice type gym and having to comply with these lunatics. No frictionless floors, no floor tiles that randomly crumble into the level below if stepped on twice, am I running some kind of FUCKING JOKE here?
>>59361991>faggycursive anon cannot even write cursive properly>no one can read any of it because its such illegible discord ebonics tier cursive
Pokemon also have darwin-like evolution.Discuss.
>>59362445I still think humans are fallers or came from space, that's the only way to explain or their ruins with what amounts to magic, Az's nuke canon and even Celestical people
>>59362445Gardevoirs became more and more humanoid over generations for unknown reasons
>>59362475What if Pokemon but with Lovecraft mythos?
>>59362521The existential horror of a pokemon knowing their god made them to be onaholes for humans.
>>59362520Maybe connecting with the emotions of humans made them take a more human-like form as well.
>>59362395Why do you hate CCanon so much?
>>59362521I mean, we do know there's some fucked up shit out there with Necrozma, Deoxys and Eternatus lore but the scary stuff was probably killed because of Pokopia
>>59362538Or the scary stuff caused Pokopia?
>>59362531>LA: It will dedicate itself to defending a master it has come to adore. Its pure white dress, reminiscent of those worn by ladies of nobility, is the dress of one who is willing to risk their life.This is the first dex not trying to make Gardevoir sound gender-neutral. Just straight up "Oh yeah this oujou-sama with a dress with protect you like a guardian angel".
I gave Those Silver Eyes a try for the meme, and what a slog for first chapter was. Surely there's a better way to do the offloading than this. It also goes on forever. What's the need to cover the entirety of his first two days?Please tell me that he eventually fucks Crystal at least.
>>59362577Anon...
>>59362531>>59362553I miss the original Gardevoir being a genderless jellyfish knight.
>>59362577*slog that first chapter was>>59362579I mean, what's a blatant power fantasy good for if you don't cuck every male in sight?
>>59362548Wasn't it caused by humans going by Kyogre's words?
>>59362581Well the tera showed that its beta was intended to be female only at first.
>>59362619>spider LilyYandere ass pokemon
>>59362475>People would sooner believe humans are aliens than accept AZ was actually himbut what did the Celestica people do? All those retards did was lug a bunch of marble around.
>>59362781I still can't believe the Celesticans were 1000/2000 years ago while AZ was 3000 years ago. Abyssal Ruins as well. Paldean Empire was 2000 years ago. They honestly kind of dropped the ball with the Celesticans. They're just kinda there and did nothing we know about outside the Hero dude deal and then just YOLO'd.The more I think about the more I think PLA should have been set WAY further in the past.
>>59362781>but what did the Celestica people do?Live for hundreds of years messing canon hard enough that now you wonder if Cynthia and her sister will have the same lifespan as Volo and Cogita or ask yourself if their grandma is Cogita because otherwise she shouldn't look that old.
>>59362809Sinnohfags still reeling over their ancient civilization being not so ancient and not so special kekekeke.Although I do agree I would've preferred we actually had a game set in the ancient past covering an ancient event instead of one that's only a couple hundred years ago max. Especially since PLA didn't even tell us WHY the Celestican's just up and vanished.Swear to fuck if we get a Legends Galar and it doesn't cover the darkest day or the original meteor crash, or a Legends Hoenn and it has nothing to do with one of the big meteors, or a Legends Unova and it's nothing to do with any of the ancient kings...
>>59362837GameFreak writers are hacks and will tease something endlessly but they’re aware enough to know they’ll never live up to anything.If you need proof, remember that Ingo just got to travel back to the current time with no fanfare, with just a line in a museum acknowledging it.Don’t even get me started on how many things happened at the same 3,000 years ago, and in the decade that’s passed since, none of the events were related at all (it would be really cool if it was dessu).
>>59362837Sinnohfags are still special considering the Ancient Hero was the first one to truly commune with Arceus and he was a Celestican.If you wanna be technical, the 1000/2000 ago is not when the Celesticans were but when the OG Celesticans disappeared for whatever reason.I know PLA is supposed to be totally not the Colonization of Hokkaido and it's totally not set in the 1800s but you think about it and people being so scared shitless of Pokemon is silly when there's all that millennial history of people with Pokemon. How could there even be organized war where Human and Pokemon worked together against their enemies if humans are supposed to be scared shitless of Pokemon? Are all Hisuan settlers just retarded? I know cultures and countries and regions develop and stuff at completely different rates and all, but that's reality. Fiction should make sense unlike reality.>Swear to fuck if we get a Legends Galar and it doesn't cover the darkest day or the original meteor crash,>The game is set in Galar roughly 1,000 years in the past, in an era where Poké Balls do not yet exist and the concept of Pokémon Trainers has not been formalized. Humans and Pokémon coexist directly, and players rely on Pokémon they encounter locally, forming groups and flocks rather than structured teams.>From a narrative perspective, one of the core objectives is the creation of the first Gigamax Poké Ball. Leaked materials show early concepts of sealing stones, primitive containment tools, and hand-crafted devices, suggesting an experimental phase in the origin of Pokémon capture technology. This storyline bridges the gap between simple coexistence and the eventual rise of modern Trainer systems.Which throws another wrench into things, I can buy Pokeball™ not existing 1000 years ago but no concept or idea at all of Pokemon Trainer when people had been living and working and battling and more with Pokemon for at least two millennia before this?
>>59362869>Sinnohfags are still special considering the Ancient Hero impregnated Arceus and he was a Celestican.ftfy
>>59362884That was a gorillion quintillion years before.
>>59362869>the Ancient Hero was the first one to truly commune with Arceussauce?>>59362884The arceus humanfucking scandal leaks are set way further in the past, closer to the dawn of creation.
>>59362891>sauce?Nigga play the fucking game.
>>59362912I did. I don't remember Arceus saying the celestican hero is the first nigga to talk or roll with Arceus.Maybe that honor will go to an ancient kanto civilization that existed 151 thousand years in the past.
The “original hero” in Legends Arceus is pretty clearly time-traveling Alder, right?
>>59362971it's actually (You)You know how ever Elder Scrolls game copy/playthrough is technically an Elder Scroll on a meta level?It's like that
>>59362988I don’t think GF has the creativity to do this, honestly.
>>59362990who cares what gamefreak thinkswhat are they going to do, send the ninteno ninja squad to track me down and assassinate me for ignoring their pathetic attempt at world building and replace it with my o-AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
>>59362988Alder was (you), but after beating PLU he lost the presence (you) provided, turning him into a regular chump like Red post-RBY.
>>59362971That reminds me of how in SELLOUTS Arceus presented a female form to an Isekaijin who became the hero of truth and fucked over the B/W male protag Blake.Presumably because she wants to fuck him.Guess she just has a thing for Isekaijin, geeze girl, Peter and Alder...
>>59362990The Japanese mind can't comprehend how the ES lore was conceived anyways
>>59363021No need for that when the Japanese Mind is centered around being Wizardly/UltimaGODS.
>>59362869Meds. Now.
Messed up the URL again. Chapter 26 of Spice and Fox is out. Next one hopefully at the end of the month.https://archiveofourown.org/works/21307454/chapters/225126561
>Attention span too weak to get the chapter done in time for a triple threadfic drop todayFUCK
>>59363166A third threadfic dropped a chapter today? I gotta stop saying when I’m posting at this rate.
>>59363174No, I'm saying I dropped the ball and couldn't get mine done in time for a triple drop.
>>59363175Sad day uh… shot in the dark… Selloutsanon?
>>59363212Nah I'm IMOanon. Meant to finish the chapter today but I just couldn't sit down and focus.
>>59363214Damn, you being productive as fuck recently. Bonus points if Kleavor beheads someone.
Okay, any ideas for OP items? Obviously an item that suppresses an ability (Slaking and Regigigas coded). I cod see an instant-buff with a Pokemon that has Simple.
>>59363222Mine won't be quite that bloodthirsty I fear, but it's gonna take something pretty special to take down.
>>59363296
>>59363296An item that guarantees ancient power's buff (maybe on a different move too)
>>59363296Ultra loaded dice
>>59363309this one too
>>59363330Giving my pokemon a useless tm with a move it can't learn so it can shove the move data into my opponent's pokemon, depriving it of a random move.
>A Psychic (超能力者, Chō Nōryokusha?) refers to one who has a mutation, an Abnormal Ability (異能, Inō?) gained as a result of the brain being able to comprehend a "channel" (common sense, or perception of reality) not native to humans.[1] It is a different type of Mystery than magecraft, although similar in nature.Huh, the more you know... Guess that Fate anon was right and you can (probably but not recommended given nasufags autism) do a Nasu crossover
I need to read more move variations, like a Pokemon shooting Hyper Beam with their feet
>>59363369?I don't think that's how it works m8. A psychic in one verse is not the same as a psychic from another verse. The definitions change depending on the setting.But nothing's stopping anyone from doing a crossover and implementing whatever rules they want for the differing power systems.
>>59363378>Max Power Aura Sphere
>>59363391That's already a thing in Pokémon, no?
>>59363399Genesis Supernova is kinda like that
>>59363399>>59363422
>preparing to commit my first chapter idea to paper>come up with a cool cerulean city founder who had to tard wrangle cerulean cave escapees on the regular and a future battle to the death vs a mega gengar during a snowstorm>lose focusHow do you deal with getting too many ideas?
>>59363436Just focus on making the most relevant ideas at hand the best they can be. You’ll come back to Cerulean City, and having a throwaway line in the first few chapters while you’re still stomping around with your characters will give you really cool brownie points with your readers.
>>59363122>Her rack was ridiculous>Chasing after my fox was feeling less and less worth itWho writes a kidnapping arc like this? Even assuming Braixen's role in the story is "the protagonist's dog" this is psychotic
>>59363475>Her rack was ridiculouswas the ass fat too?
>>59360753I would prefer a gentleman/phantom thief pokefic
>>59363475I haven't read it myself, but going off the reactions I've seen in other places I almost think he's doing it just to spite foxfuckers.All he needs is a ninetails getting raped to really make it obvious
>>59363522If you mean he's doing it to spite unexpected furry attention in the comments or something, that's silly. Nobody told him to bait them with fox dates and such, that's on him. I thought the title was a joke and they were going to get along like a kid and his Blastoise or whatever before he started pulling shit like that.If you're saying the entire thing was a sting operation from the beginning, I gotta hand it to him. The first arc about this meatheaded dork trying to sort himself out in the rainy little nowhere region was my favorite threadfic, hands down. I was invested, though I felt no particular need for the protagonist to fuck his magic pet. The second arc is about unbelievably written gang raids and holy shit, every new member of the cast is so annoying. The protagonist cares more about these incredible nuisances than his animal friend getting horribly abused and that makes it really difficult to care about him
>>59360759the anime escalates all the time
>>59363584Dark types are not beating the evil by nature allegations
I want to crash out so fucking bad. I just don't have the time to get to properly drawing or actually rewriting CC.Anyway, I'm sorry for the wait SELLOUTSanon :(I hope this'll be satisfactory.
>>59363475...We're only gonna get surprise cucksex, aren't we?
>>59363475Probably because he’s almost died like five times since.
>>59363475>>59363561It's called almost dying, he's also in a lot of distress because he got someone else kidnapped and probably murdered or worse. Also Willy has been consistently characterized as a violent horny idiot, I'm just surprised the author writes him as attracted to human women as he is since the goal is pokefucking.I highly doubt it's a sting operation as you say, he's talked about pokefucking in the comments before and there's at least one author here who's a pokefucker so it kind of has to be him. Anyways, of course he feels bad about what happened to Jane, but it's not like he even likes Soren. Those twoo barely tolerate each other. Although honestly I really like Soren, he's probably my favorite between him and Carolyn.And I don't know what fic you're reading but Will is still putting his life on the line to try to save Braxien without even knowing if she's alive at all. Literally all of this is for her and I have no idea why him feeling bad about getting someone else captured is unbelievable.>>59363522>I haven't read it myself, but going off the reactions I've seen in other places I almost think he's doing it just to spite foxfuckers.These mysterious other places again, wooohoho. I've never seen it posted or commented on anywhere else other than the ao3 or here and the ao3 comments are all pretty positive. I at least admire it as well, it's not something I'd write but it has teeth. Either way he's said there's only about 2 more chapters in the current arc so I assume he'll either get Braxien or get intel on her location then.Anyway, does he have a discord or something? I'd like to actually see these reactions.
>>59361995What happened to the old guard? What happened to the porn?
>>59363787nta, but I imagined her more subdued looking, less bleeding from the eyes or covered in blood and more uncanny. Maybe like a slight yellowish tint to the eyes.
>>59363855We had porn?
>>59363870Few years ago.
>>59363787Looks great. Thanks CCanon. Looking forward to the rewrite.>>59363855I am writing a short story about fucking a vespiquen in the style of Lolita. I will post it eventually.
>>59363906I'd read the shit out of Humbert Humbert madly obsessing over a giant bee. Nabokov was a real one
>>59363855Probably just the culture of the thread, and while I wasn't here for the old thread my idle speculation is that a lack of links in the OP made people less inclined to drop a reentry or pastbin story. But really I think more people posting and linking their smutfics is the answer.the current Threadfic collection is biased towards longfics.For my part I saw people complaining about stories and writing not being talked about so I began to talk about my story and talked about the stories I was reading. So be the change you want to be I guess, write, post, link smut stories. Like >>59363906 this guy is doing.Threadculture is down stream of what people post.
who needs Surf when you can swim through regions? what border control?
>>59364000>a lack of links in the OPWhy dont we have a link with a collection of (smut) fics in the op?
MY BOSS THREW AWAY MY DRAWING WHNE I WSNT LOOKINGIM FUCKING MAD ITS BULLLLSSHIIIITT.>>59363868BRO PLSSSSS T_T, I don't even have the colour yellew pen at work. And now it's GONE, I hate him so fucking much. I also shouldv'e said tthat the drawing was just to post something, anything. 'satisfactory' I meant to say 'I hope this sin't too ugly'To explain myself. I fucking forgot the detail about the spikes being reduced to mere stubs due to centuries worth of usage, so I imagined the drawing as a younger version that just commited a murder using the spikes.>>59363906Don't worry I'll get to a more properly done drawing of Maractus. As for the rewrite... don't get your hopes up. It probably wont be kino as it's still me writing it.Getting rid of the expostionfat just revealed other issues in my writing, so I'll need to work on that too.
>>59362059i posted this
>>59363870In its olden days, this thread was mostly porn, and a majority of that was Pokephilia. Might also explain why I wasn’t a super active poster then. >>59364000>”But really I think more people posting and linking their smutfics is the answer.the current Threadfic collection is biased towards longfics.I have a smutfic but it would unironically be the longest fic in the catalogue at this point in time. Also completed.But honestly though, I wouldn’t want it taking any eyeballs off currently active and future threadfics. I feel like I’m enough of an attention whore already.
>>59364208Please tell me you’ve referred to your boss as a “fucking Derry” in your head at least once, CCbro.>”Getting rid of the expositionfat just revealed other issues in my writing”This is how one improve, you’re on tje right path!. Also I just realized that because I downloaded CC a while back that I’ll have the original version before the edits.
>>59364208Just make a new one, how hard is it to draw?
Do you make your characters swear?
>>59364208Why are you posting from work? You looking to get someone promoted?
>>59364324More than I probably should but it feels warranted.
>>59364324Usually light ones in dramatically appropriate moments. I think the worst I've used is "shit", but it's coming from a hard-rocking burnt out musician so I thought it felt accurate to the tone. I go more hog wild in H-chapters though. None of you are ready for Vi's dirty talk.
>>59364000The creator of the current threadfic collection here, I made it because there wasn't anywhere else people were keeping track of thread fics and its relatively new (less than a year old I think). Its opt in, meaning anybody can add their fics to it but it does require an ao3 account to do so which probably limits some people. Offsite fic links can also be added to it by anybody as well, so if somebody doesn't have an ao3 account and wants their fic added then they can ask somebody else in the thread here to do it for them. And to keep in the spirit of 4chan I don't curate or moderate what fics can be posted (I even let the AI fic stay just so I wouldn't break that rule). So if older thread fics, porn, and short fics are welcome to be posted. But writefags gotta be proactive about getting their fics added to it.
>>59364309Not CCanon, but its pretty hard
>>59364324Apparently in japanese she's saying "bakabakabakabakabakabaka!!" which sounds cuter.
I'm reading a fic and got a deja vuThen I remembered it was the threadfic some anon deleted because it wasn't getting any engagement
>>59364452Sounds gay.Link?
>>59364455https://archiveofourown.org/works/77123116/chapters/201880426
>>59363747They were on their way to the gym.You're not accounting for systemic pressures.Statistics are what villain teams use.
>>59364208>Getting rid of the expostionfatoh no, pofag will be crushed
>>59364566Under Plumeria's ass hyuk hyuk hyuk
we all know about nutrition, but not many know about the power of BUREAUCRACY
>>59364679I see, this explains Thunder Armor. Ash simply had a permit for it.
>>59364706You mean like... A LOICENSE?!
