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Nanachi...

Chapter 73, still WIP!
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The translation google doc https://docs.google.com/document/d/14ull8F8zdmk9heZrF9Biraa4bI8YTuszxwKt7TcHWyk/edit?tab=t.0
And archived dump with preliminary translation >>288652416
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Sou desu, watashi wa Fluffzen.
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>>288705018
ETA when?
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Ok, I finished the first pass of the TS, and redid the entire cleaning. Some SFX is missing, some bits I'm unsure how I chose, and well the translation chosen is just the one I put when I took it from the google doc, I'm not particularly invested in whatever's chosen.

It's now late in the night, and tomorrow I'll be relatively busy.
Should I just post the psd files so ther other TSer/TLanon could at to it? Or just dump a draft of what's currently on it? (I feel that will just lead to a shitstorm compared to anons actually focusing on the normal bits?)
Usually I'd work more by it myself before posting anything, but given that haven't really shared much I can get why some people wouldn't want that
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>>288705018
Nanachi is agender and their pronouns are they/them, anyone who disagrees or calls Nanachi a boy or a girl is a fucking fascist chud
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>>288705634
Sorry retard but Nanachi is a girl and her bunny cunny smells like a pecan sundae
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>>288705018
I over sleep from a nap and all that happens...
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would the bnuy fit in a randoseru?
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>>288705564
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>>288705651
In the manga and anime Nanachi has genderless pronouns so they/them is canonically correct. Even Tsukushi says Nanachi is agender. You're a fascist
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>>288705715
do our threads really need this low quality bait anon-kun
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/a/ has spoken. Nanachi is a she.
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>>288705908
The fact we even needed to do a poll disgusts me.
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So are the only they/thems left the page 1 "*They were coughing blood..*" and the page 35 "I can kinda feel them wriggling around."?
For the former, I don't think there's any conceivable way to reword it other than "Nanachi was coughing blood". It does sound a bit redundant with Riko's "Nanachi… being in danger?" But I think it's less bad since it's seemingly not being spoken (it's not in a bubble).
For the latter, is Reg even talking about Nanachi, or about her legs/feet/tail? Because if it's the latter then "them" would be fine.
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>>288705613
Well, just gonna post it here. This will mostly be for the other TSer, I did bundle a JPG export of it but set too high, most images above 4mb. doing in Photoshop Scripts to Image Processor and setting it to a lower value should do it, and lead to a dumpable thread.
I recommend first looking over it, (still some SFX missing, sorry too tired to list exact ones), but if willing to take time I'll be up in like 7 hours ish and can give some thoughts.
And yeah, it's a gofile link, fuck are .psd bloated on newer versions, the images themselves were the ones I used to post on 4chan.
https://gofile.io/d/Let3aT
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>>288706097
I think he's talking about her feet and tail
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>>288706075
oh how the mightey have falling
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>>288706097
Yeah I don't know any solutions to those two that don't sound clunkier. I've more or less done all the changes I can right now. However, if anyone's got any more suggestions the doc remains open. There'll probably be more once the first TL dump is done anyways. I'll be chilling until then.
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I love my wife Nanachi!
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>>288705018
Nanachi has been made even more molestable now that she can't run
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>>288706533
But now you have to get passed Reg.
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>>288706619
Call him a faggot and make him cry, tell him it's his fault everyone keeps getting hurt
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What the hell have you done in the previous thread?
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>>288706832
One faggot imposed his homosexuality on everyone and called the entire thread samefag while projecting his tourism on everyone. In other words, it was the usual for new chapter threads
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>>288705908
Aww man, I was team "Nanachi", but we made a good showing, boys.
>>288706097
"Nanachi was coughing up blood"
"Nanachi is in danger?"
"I can feel movement!"
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>>288705908
he(1)
Based homo shitposter
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>>288707280
Tlanon might be a bit of a progfag, but that doesn't mean you should insult him like that and disrespect his vision
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>>288706134
I'm just posting to say that I've seen your posts. But I have hada many drinks with my friends so it will take me a while to get acclimatized tomorrow. I would prefer if we could all just get along. Goodnight friends.
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>>288707730
I'm a shotakon first and foremost so if I get to choose of course I will choose boy over girl
More like based Tsukushi for bringing us extremely precious and molestable little boys!
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>>288706639
You are evil.
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>>288708977
Gotta do what I gotta do to get a little bunny cunny
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>>288705908
I see different result.
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>>288709063
>after the botting
sure anon
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>>288709073
I wonder where he reposted the poll to get that result kekekek
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>>288709237
probably some discord or reddit hellhole
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>>288709073
>We must stop the count at this arbitrary point, otherwise the result will become invalid
I see.
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>>288709342
>We must stop the count at the point just before the obvious botting
Yes
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>>288709342
>3 hours
><20 total votes
>thread dies
>6 hours later
>51 total votes
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SEX WITH LYZA
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>>288709458
Or just Europoors/Asians went to sleep and woke up later.
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>>288709509
Get off the computer, Ozen! The guild is waiting for your visit.
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>>288709529
And everyone just decided to look in the dead thread for the poll link they cant even know exist if said people where sleeping, yeah no.
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>>288709529
I'm in CEST, I had plenty of time to vote before it closed. If anything it's the burgers who needed time to wake up
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>>288709572
Why even entertain the lie? Anon clearly reposted the link to troll. We all knew it would happen
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>>288709599
Noo you can vote only until I say!
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>>288709612
Nooo, how dare you notice the obvious botting/reposting
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imagine how torn Torka's dick must have been
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>>288709555
>everyone just decided to look in the dead thread
Yes. People keep the tab open and check back after they wake up ir just simply have freetime again. If the thread dies midtime they still can read the unread posts for a while.
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>>288709529
There definitely won't be 50 posters here, I'm not even sure there'll be 20
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>>288709638
we don't have 50 posters in these threads
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>>288709618
>obvious botting
Did you check the site every x mins to determine how many votes arrived?
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>>288709638
Sure anon, more than 20 people did that, fuck off, i dont believe 50 people use the MiA threads on the regular, at most its 20-30 during chapter releases and that may be too big still.
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>>288706097
>>288706141
I agree with anon here. I think it's best to keep it as "them" wriggeling, becsuse it's more than likely the legs that are being refered to
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>>288709659
>implying any retard just cant space the votes to make it less obvious
come on now, dont take me as a fool.
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This shit isnt one piece to have 50 posters, lmao
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>>288709647
>>288709657
>>288709661
I know it is irrelevant and not objective but I know 3 people "personally" (= I talk with them on other boards, forums, chatrooms no physically) who check these threads reguraly.
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>>288709703
ok?
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We barely had 50 posters back during the finale of layer 5 in the manga, we definitely do not have those numbers now
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>>288709696
Yep. Even on One Piece theads strawpolls are less voters in average.
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>>288709711
I guess he tried to project if 1 person knows 3 others, then others can have similar amounts of friends so 50 poster can be here...
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>>288709733
that still makes the pool irrelevant if you go around asking your butt buddies to vote to whatever you want.
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>>288707844
He has pretty consistently implement ESL ideas to "fix" grammar and ignored pretty reasonable suggests in the past.
I think there is a pretty good chance that he's malicious
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>>288709793
Not to mention that unfinished chapters have been uploaded twice and then refused to get reuploaded
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>>288709793
>>288709807
Would be better to have a better TLfag with less retarded ideas, a shame i dont speak jap.
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>>288709816
He's a fine translator as far as I can tell. The initial drafts are almost always better than how they end up after the docs have been up for a while.
The thing that bothers me is the fact that it seems like there is a consorted effort to enshitify the translation afterwards
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reminder that nanachi was born a male human
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>>288709717
He likely posted it on reddit or discord. I don't really care, though, because they have nothing to do with the /a/ discussion. /a/non is doing the translation, everyone else can fuck off.
inb4 let's post a strawpoll in the first comment once it's uploaded to dex
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>>288709844
>The thing that bothers me is the fact that it seems like there is a consorted effort to enshitify the translation afterwards
i see
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>>288709807
Why do you lie? He uploaded the corrected pages later.
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>>288709844
>The thing that bothers me is the fact that it seems like there is a consorted effort to enshitify the translation afterwards
Then contact him on google, show him your English grammar degree and tell him you suggest this is the best translation, the most accurate to the original Japanese.
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>>288709807
>>288709816
Do you want to make him and TSAnons to abandon these threads and quit?
As it was said numerous times, you can do your own translation anytime. Cannot upload to dex? Who cares. Dump it here, or upload on other site. If people will like it better then wooo hooo, you won!
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>>288709978
Whats the problem with pointing out problems? you are being weirdly defensible
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>>288709844
>better than how they end up after the docs have been up for a while
The problems are usually last minute "suggestions". Which is why they get through, because no one thinks to look back at parts that have already been settled for a while or were never in question to begin with. So I'm inclined to agree that it's intentional. Probably by this nigger >>288709939
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>>288709920
Not last I checked. It would have to have been done within the last month
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>>288709978
All I want is to have a decent translation, which is why I point the things I find wrong about the current way of doing things out.
If that results in them quiting, then that is a loss, but it's not like they're irreplaceable.
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>>288710019
Then tell him what to correct and he wil update it. I guess he won't check back every day for any new suggestion which comes after the dex upload. Address him in post like "TLANON ARE YOU HERE? PLEASE CHECK THIS" and he will notice it.
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>>288709939
I don't need to be a chef to tell you you shouldn't shit in the potatoes
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>>288710074
That was done in the threads following the chapter drop. I'm not going to send him the same feedback every day for a year.
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>>288710070
>All I want is to have a decent translation
Then do it by your own or ask/hire anyone who does better translation by your definition.
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>>288710100
Stop being a faggot, anon. We had enough of that in the previous thread
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>>288710091
And what was pointed out? Maybe he just does not want to do typesetting. Send him the corrected page(s) and he will update.
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>>288710105
I'm 85% sure that is the anon that was shitting up the last thread.
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>>288710105
Last thread was sperged full abour pronouns, this thead about TL quality.
Why can't we have fun time and comfy threads?...
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>>288710114
That's exactly what was done.
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>>288710132
Because these kinds of faggots always show up during a new chapter to try and force their agendas on us. They're gone after the fact
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>>288710124
>people start to ovecriticize a TL what somebody does in his freetime for free and fun and joy
>it is pointed out the critical users csn do their own TL then
Noooo, you are a faggot, the same one who is arguing about the pronouns!
Ok.
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>>288710158
We never had these problems or people complaining about our methods before you people arrived
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>>288710114
>Maybe he just does not want to do typesetting.
That can be the case. I remember some Anon constantly pointed about missing capitalizations but nothing happaned.
Then this
>Send him the corrected page(s) and he will update.
was done. After someone posted the corrected capitalized pages, TLAnon updated them on dex.
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>>288710017
It seems like it, yes
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>>288710017
>The problems are usually last minute "suggestions".
Maybe these people are not satisfied with google docs and checks the translations only after the typesetter dumps and wants to give advices in these threads on /a/ not on an outer site.
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>>288705908
>Why can't we just call Nanachi however we want?!
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Well I woke up, look like the other TS was missing
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>>288710485
I call her my wife
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>>288710518
what does the back of that dress look like?
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Should I then dump the WIP chapter? T speed up suggestions.

And I'll say it here, I personally don't give a shit about the nanachi discussion, I just see it as somebody poisoining the well. I kept it as "she" since it was used before, but also had some stuff I just copied from the latest TL without paying it any mind. In my mind its less important than some off typesetting. It's not up to me since I won't be the one publishing the chapter, I'm just a typesetter which cares about typesetting quality
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>>288710553
Feel free to dump, it's a whole lot better than the shitposting going on lately
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>>288709237
This makes me wonder where the google doc is being posted.
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>>288710623
In chapter release day's threads.
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>>288710640
That's not what he meant anon
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>>288710553
That's a pretty good idea, yes
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>>288710645
People who do suggestions on google docs do not vote on strawpoll at European midnight-dawn time.
Oh wow, how is that possible?!
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>>288710755
Also not what he meant. Are you slow?
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>>288710755
Where else have you been posting it you little rat?
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Why did Prushka turn into a life reverberating stone and Mitty didn’t? Both bestowed the blessing of the abyss, but Mitty ended up as a Narehate and not as Nanachi’s white whistle. I don’t understand what was different.
>inb4 poor reading comprehension
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>>288710779
Mitty didn't die in the 5th layer
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>>288710788
This. The immortality cucked bun out of her white whistle
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>>288710771
I don't see any other suggested edits that are inflammatory or clearly pushing some agenda. Hopefully it remains that way, but I wouldn't put it past anyone to try it
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>>288710779
Because when Mitty died Tsukushi did not decide yet what life reverberation stone is. To be it human he made it only during Ido Front arc.
It was always strange that Ozen stated she does not deceive children, told everything (even Riko and Reg confirmed she REALLY DID NOT HOLD BACK ANYTHING at the end of chapter monologue/inner tought), spoke about the pivotal ring, etc. but she somehow forgot to mention that white whistle is made from human.
It was a retcon by Tsukushi.
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>>288705582
pic related would work too if you want to go nightmare fuel but what's gonna happen is Lyza will be Irumyuui 2.0 and created a village/megacity full of people who look variously like Riko or the people she loved but they are real with souls not just meat puppets, that's my head cannon
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Ok will dump the WIP chapter. And for context, here >>288710553 Feedback would be appreciated, just if it's something that was beaten to death last thread there's no point in bringing it up again here.
Also, I'm going through this chapter again looking at what I did, and maybe for the other TS to say if there are any issues or not.

First page, I'm slightly unsure if I should use janitor instead of augie for the light speech outside the bubble. the SFX gasp I added but unsure about placement

As for she see my earlier post, idc about it either way
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>>288710893
>*pic related would work too
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And here comes first inconcistency, handling "". Here left it untouched, other pages didn't give me feedback on which works best, personally I feel a mix could work.
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>>288710893
Nah. Lyza will still be human, I guarantee it
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Nnaaa (might've made it too small)
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Struggled a bit with the typesetting for the "thing that" speech bubble, it ok?

And, here we see the other way I handled quotes, slight bold and text change

also also goofy idea but was thinking of different font for stinky, to like show the stink. Might be a bit too much lol
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>>288710896
I think it looks fine. Good job.
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Two undone SFX

The text exiting the bubble is intentional for the srajo text, is it a bit much? As for font chose ash since goofy srajo face, wanted to emphasize that
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I uh just put (srajo) smaller undearneath it, again another thing trying out unsure.
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>>288705908
Time to generate /a/ccurate nanachi lewd then.
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>>288710788
>>288710795
Basically the abyss also ā€œblessedā€ Mitty in a fucked up way and that’s why Bondrewd’s other cartridges turn into sludge instead of blobs of meat like Mitty huh
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another two undone SFX. I actually tried figuring out what the 2nd stretched one is but couldn't tell
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>>288710909
the Nnaaa being tiny fits because it's a very small bun.
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Here the 2nd sfx was easy to tell though

Font in bubble to the right might be a tad too big. Also, general thoughts on font size?
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>>288710909
It looks good to me
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>>288710788
Mitty didn't die at all
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>>288710902
I guess blessing between "" goes well here.
It is not a relic description just a quote of how her papa named that form.
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>>288710914
should we move the thing into the first bubble?
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From what anons said, broke up the Ring of Essence, but also made it much bigger to emphasize. Should I have kept it just a bit smaller?

Also now used janitor for the font outside, idk.
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biiig text
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Most annoying part to clean, I kinda hid the worst bits with the text
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>>288710914
If there were no furiganas in the raw then this bold text is fine for me.
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>>288710892
Have you considered that it was not a retcon, and that she just omitted it?
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Got lazy with the SFX, and in general unsure how much I like doing it for everything how I handled the Mepuuu in bottom left. I'm a bit of a one trick pony with that kinda typesetting, gotta figure stuff out
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>>288710923
you could just put a note on the side instead if you don't like it being in the bubble
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General thing, I like the high resolution. Yeah posting on 4chan is a pain, but its nice to zoom in and finally see crisp lineart.
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>>288710923
It is good.
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>>288710788
All in all, maybe they should have gone in 5th layer with her and shot her once they got inside. The only question is, where would the whistle have come from, since all that was left of her was a smoking hole in the ground?
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>>288710962
Looks fine to me
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I think due too ultra high resolutions the white outlines I had as default are too thin, might need to tweak it
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SFX I like least how I handled top left, needs rework
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>>288710920
>>288710930
I guess TLAnon focused on texts so some unnoticed SFX is not a big deal. Someone will give translations/suggestions for sure.
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Now used Soliloquis for outside font, since it's I guess internal narration? Other TSer I'm rusty on this you can say how it is
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>>288710996
I think it looks good
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>>288710962
Looks good.
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>>288711008
He told me in an earlier dump that I can look them up myself, and for some I did do that. Others I either got lazy or genuinely couldn't tell. I know basic hiragana and katakana but when stylized warped sometimes unsure
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>>288710973
wasn't prushka saying oya in the first panel?
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>>288710958
>ahahaha
The first "a" should be capital maybe? But whatever is fine.
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>>288710975
swap the being and always in the first panel it reads a bit funny.
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Again, got tired of redrawing so just didn't touch SFX in the bottom. The top was kinda annoying to do.
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Great job, translators, you're the best of /a/nons
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>>288711018
No. She said ā€œiya iya iyaā€
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>>288710987
Prushka is the sunshine of made in abyss
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Crying nanachi, used augie. Thoughts? I think I waffled on this other times
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>>288710979
Why? She told everything but that?
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>>288710996
I like it.
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>>288710982
I always wondered when is it an SFX and when what a character "says".
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>>288711042
I've got no complaints so far
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>>288711059
I feel SFX describing an action ie rumbling are clearly different from what a sound of an animal says. In that way I think should've done the top one as well, but then again what gets typeset or not in earlier chapters was clear whatever the TS was bothered to do at the time
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Not much to say about these last few pages
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>>288710966
I don't think bubbles that directly continue a sentence in a previous bubble should start capitalized. Since you're actually using punctuation to end sentences unlike some other translations, that just makes the flow confusing.
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>>288711086
I basically haven't touched capitalizations and just went with what was in the google doc, but yeah, these are the kind of things that get tweaked. Same with fullstops.
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>>288711073
Nanachifags we're so back.
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I was thinking if I should make the bottom text even bigger, but think pushing it already. Unless I make it a shout. I gotta say I just like blahblah so much, it's a nice font.
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>>288711104
Is nanachi saying the same thing from the chapter way back in her hut when she's showing off the fog weave?
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>>288711010
Also whoops I keep forgetting to spoiler this page. I was thinking of doing SFX: Loli pissing, but decided to just go with what the TLanon put. Whoever dumps the chapter for the main thread (remember to add chapter name and signify its a dump) spioiler it
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End of Dump! Before you get your panties twisted, yeah it's a WIP version of the chapter. But don't chimp out either.

And, if ideal I'd like this to be the last thing I do for this chapter, I posted the .psd files earlier, the last round of tweaks and publishing can be done by somebody else. Sadly I now have to be extra busy again..
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>>288711127
Thank you, anon. Good job
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>>288711127
I personally don't see anything that really needs changing, aside from maybe any SFX that were lost along the way. good job anon
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>>288711120
you should make it loli pissing it'll make it even funnier
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>>288711080
Do you think Reg holds more affection now for Nanachi? More so than even Riko? I have to wonder how this ponkotsu feels
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Sherumena are going to have a fate worse than death because of Srajo. They’ll be sacrificed so she can go into the 7th layer and stay alive
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>>288711127
Thank you for the dump anon
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>>288711044
There are other things she neglected to mention, but I suppose that those were also all retconed acording to you
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>>288711175
If that happens she's going to get murdered by Reg.
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>>288710788
Why is Abyss such picky it accepts offering only at the 5th Layer?
Refusing Zoaholic Bondrewd is understandabpe because it is the same person or cheating. But if a person dies for the other at 3rd Layer why does Abyss refuse to turn that person into a white whistle?
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>>288710896
TLanon is definitely going to object to the shes. Just make this one "Nanachi was coughing blood"
>>288710909
"That one's special" and "Nanachi is already paired..."
>>288710914
Calamitous*
>>288710930
Within the lost parts of the hariyomari collection is written a way to reach the bottom of the netherword while still alive.
>>288710954
some existence that creeps even into our dreams
>>288710973
>over a basis that you shouldn't have
Sounds pretty awkward. Maybe "...get others fired up over a flimsy basis"
>>288710975
through always being
>>288711010
Drop the "a", just "Storage"
>>288711106
Are preparations ready?
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Okay Tsucc on to the next one now i'm expecting a chapter every damn month from now on ORA
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>>288711127
Thank you Anon! It looks good. I don't think a lot of polishing is needed. For me it looks like the chapter is 98%+ (just a silly number near 100) finished.
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>>288711369
Shouldn't it be "the preparation"?
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>>288711280
Then the death of twins would be meaningless.
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>>288711400
Yeah actually, "Are the preparations ready?" would sound better. I got a little tunnel visioned on how it was already worded.
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>>288711400
Yes it should
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>>288711351
It's more specifically the ritual site at Idofront rather than just "the 5th layer". This is mentioned in the manga, and I believe it might also be mentioned in the anime/movie
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>>288710954
Wouldn't it be more gramatical to say "an existence that even creeps into our dreams" considering the context?
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>>288705018
>wip
nm-
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>>288710975
wholesome :3
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>>288711369
>TLanon is definitely going to object to the shes
Will he? That was the first draft he made, with them
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>>288711073
Cute bun
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Nanachi's purpose is to be sniffed grabbed stroked hugged licked kissed and fucked by rugged and grizzled male black whistles.
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>>288710896
Hey other TS here. Awake and only slightly hungover. It's only 8:30am here so I think my tardiness can be forgiven. I'll have a look and let you know what I think.
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>>288711010
Holy
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>>288710908
maybe, but what if the shadow puppet all the way from Episode 2 is foreshadowing
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>>288711010
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>>288711033
>faputa is by reg's side
>riko gasps
>faputa is there before she can finish the gasp
hayai!
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>>288712371
trying to be funny?
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>>288709657
how would you know, the ip counter doesn't exist anymore. And you haven't taken lurkers into account.
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>>288710896
As I said before. I am in the female Nanachi camp so I'm not going to change the use of she here. If it changes that'll be on TLanon.
>>288710930
I don't really see anything I'd change here besides the missing SFX but as of right now they have not been added to TL doc. Personally I don't like the look of different sized fonts in conjoined speech bubbles, I'd aim for a middle ground that works on both sides, but that's a small nitpick.
>>288710923
(Srajo) is similar to what we did in the Tepaste chapter where the old hag corrects Tepaste when she used boku or ore instead of watashi. It looks fine.
>>288710973
The cleaning looks good.
>>288710982
This is the first time I'm seeing something I do want to change, the SFX in the first panel is Meinya "speaking" so it should be put into the panel, the other thing I like to do for the SFX notes is match their colors to what Tsukushi used in the panel so I'll update that here and whenever I see it going forward. What you did in the last panel looks good.
>>288710996
And then here "pat pat" is unspoken SFX so I wouldn't have cleaned it and put in the panel because I was under the impression we didn't do that. That's what I remember putting the guide anyways.
>>288710996
>I think due too ultra high resolutions the white outlines I had as default are too thin, might need to tweak it
At this higher resolution I think I had the white stroke up at like 8-10 pixels rather than the 3-5 we used to use. I can change this.
>>288711010
I wouldn't use soliloquies here as I wouldn't consider this narration. I'd just use italic ccwildwords lower, which I will change it to.
>>288711127
See what I mean when I said you don't need to second guess yourself too much? It's very small things that I want to change and it doesn't really need to be done but I'm going to do it anyways.

So my plan is to make these changes and post a link to PSDs containing just the pages I have tweaked for TLanon.
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>>288710914
>Struggled a bit with the typesetting for the "thing that" speech bubble, it ok?
why not add a linejump between "thing" and "that", so the text is more elliptical
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>>288710923
not saying this should be changed but in general I think it looks better if you cover the text with the bubble that is covering the same bubble, like with the Nishagora and Srajo bit. Instead of leaving the text on top of a bubble boundary.
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>>288711351
That refusal is not for the white whistle, it is a refusal for taking the curse in place of someone. Cartridges were not whistles aside Prushka.
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>>288710930
the first one is
>buwaah
can be like "whooosh" like suddenly appearing
and the bottom one is
>Shupa
it's similar, as if the map of the abyss was extruding from the pendant in a fast movement.
Could be "fwush"
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>>288710930
Did Riko's breasts grow?
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>>288711006
I guess the color of the sfx translations should be swapped here, they don't match their respective sfx, the "squeeze" whould be black and the "open" should be light
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>>288711127
Thank you for everyone who participated in the translation!
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>>288713688
Just a little bit.
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>>288711006
Heh, she immediately tried to shatter the real one.
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>>288714099
Thats our leader
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>>288710996
What I also find with the Augie font is I'm almost always bolding it to make it a little less dainty and more legible. This was part of the better readability feedback we had gotten in previous threads.

>>288713582
>>288713845
I am working on cleaning up some of the SFX stuff at the moment.
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>>288711127
Thank you for the dump!
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>>288711127
Damnit, I am not prepared for the death of the puppies...
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>>288710896
>she
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>>288705634
>>288705651
>>288705715
>>288705802
Not again.. you faggots need to neck yourself
>Nanachi is a girl btw
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>>288712353
ozen already shows that being human wont stop her from being a monster.
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>>288709458
>>288709529
>>288709555
I was drunk as a skunk yesterday and went to bed early. Had the thread already open in my phone though. Just checked it and voted this morning. In eastern USA.
>Nanachi is a girl btw.
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I’m not ready to see the carnage that awaits at the 7th layer
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>>288715152
I want to see it. If Nanachi getting squished is only the intro to that carnage, I cannot wait to see how eldritch and sinister the 7th really is.
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Then, in the next chapter, 74, the twins will use their power to make preparations for the wish Srajo mentioned. But another group from the priestess's group may appear with the intention of preventing this, and the mission of the Hello Abyss and Hail Hex squads will be to protect Sherumi and Menae while they carry out the process.
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>>288715435
>get to 7th layer
>its just a normal cave
>but there are landmines, automated turrets, booby traps, and saw style muder puzzles everywhere
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>>288715763
thats too easy, reg can facetank all of that
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>>288713582
Can you do the SFX for this >>288710920 page too? I think that is the ones that are missing now.
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>>288716149
The only ones that are missing now
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>>288710914
>Struggled a bit with the typesetting for the "thing that" speech bubble, it ok?
no, it reads weird in english. "that thing" is is the noun of the sentence, and breaking it into 2 separate panels doesn't feel like a natural way to read or write it. it should be more like:
>Re-
>member
>
>...that
>thing
next bubble
>that
>makes your
>heart feel
>prickly
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>>288715763
I know some guys for the job
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>>288715435
I'm expecting more bio-weapons
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>>288716046
That's what he'll think too before the automatic GBE cannons start up
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>>288716627
I hope the other TSAnon reads this because the one you answered wrote he does not really want to do the corrections, he will be really busy from now, so he hopes the other typesetter will do the suggestions.
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>>288716857
I'm working on it and I can make this >>288716627 change here. Just taking a little break.
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>>288717092
Take your break anon. I know everyone is working involved is working hard on this, and we all appreciate it
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>>288717216
I miss maa-san.
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>>288710920
>>288716149
first one
>popon
like a stronf *puff*
and
>Gowawa
to be consistent this could be like *prickle* or *prickly*
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>>288711073
Backpackchi
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>>288717788
Bunpack.
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>>288711127
thanks to everyone who worked on this.
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>>288717452
I will add these, then do my own last round of self-checking and proof-reading and then upload the changes to hand them off to TLanon.
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>>288717788
bagachi
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Nanapsack.
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>>288710982
>Minya is a they
Please...
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chapter 74 predictions
>riko gets her period
>the squads have an encounter with the priestess' team
>tepaste is in grave danger
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>>288711077
>feel them wiggling around
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>>288719044
her feet and tail
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>>288718415
otsukaresamadesu
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>>288718907
it's end of volume, a new character might appear but what about Rimeyo and dickcheese?
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chapter when?
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>>288711095
>best think of it as an allowance from me
What does that mean?
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>>288719152
The twins only have 5 days left to live, Nanachi risked life and limb to get those few days for the two and they feel super guilty so Nanachi is talking like she gave them a bit of pocket money to make them feel better.
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Riko just did the same during her dream
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>>288719130
5 more days
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>>288719330
maybe this means she's planning on going to the bottom as well
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>>288718896
Anon...
Not again.
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>>288710935
is
is that a
oh no
advertiser-sama, please, look away
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>>288719285
It was heartwarming and tearsome in these recent chapters that the twins felt very guilty.
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>>288719285
That was not clear at all. Nanachi gives zero context as to what she's referring to. When I hear allowance I think of a physical items, or a literal "allowance" as in permission.
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>>288719403
People don't refer to their pets as "they". Fags here were right, if it were up to the translator half the characters in the manga would be "they".
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>>288719515
then it's a bad translation, what do you suggest is better?
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>>288719547
so should "It" be used here? Or has either he or she been used for meinya?
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>>288719647
"it" is correct
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>>288715152
>>288715763
They are already in the 7th layer.
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>>288719547
>pets
This is just a pet, an animal! Fuck off!
Meinya is Prushka's childhood friend and Riko considers them more than just a pet too.
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>>288719569
I don't know the original Jap, but if Nanachi is talking about gifting them more time (and it's clear to Jap readers that she is), then it should be explicit mentioned that's what she's referring to.
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>>288719547
Every character in the crew who isn't Reg = she, simple as
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>>288719647
>>288719728
People refer to beloved pets either by explicit gender or as "it". Nobody in the history of the universe refers to a single pet as "them". "It" is perfectly fine in this context.
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>>288719129
probably got fucked by the miko's minions
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>>288719739
Allowance and pocket money mean the same thing in the King's english I speak. Money a parent gives to their children for doing chores around the house so they can go to the shop to buy sweets or trading cards or whatever. This translation does not need to change.
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>>288719739
Nanachi literally says allowance ćŠå°é£ć„. And how is the context removed when this is the first time the twins have spoken to Nanachi after she recovered fully? you just need to think a little bit more
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>>288719515
>When I hear allowance I think of a physical items, or a literal "allowance" as in permission.
Come on now. Everyone knows what allowance means when the talk about value.
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>>288719771
>by explicit gender
unknown
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>>288717389
I don't really, because seeing him just makes me picture Meinya's prolapsed asshole
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>>288719958
>>288719964
>>288720028
It's not the word that's the problem but the phrasing. I know Japanese is an indirect language, but Nanachi gives zero context as to what she's talking about. I thought I missed a panel where she handed them an item.
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>>288718896
>>288719547
>>288719647
>>288719671
I had already changed the line to "Meinya pooped..." before you guys brought this up as part of my editing. It would be very odd to use they or it for Meinya, being a pet. Nobody does that.
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>>288719964
I guess he speaks about when Srajo said "buying a fight". Probably Anon tought Nanachi's "I gave you this" is a similar Japanese term, cuultural thing again.
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>>288720054
Does not matter. People either use it or a gender.
People call their bird he and if suddenly that "rooster" starts to lay egg, then they change the pronoun to she.
The animal will not be mad about she was "misgendered" before.
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>>288720113
Oh I was wondering if you were gonna be doing the edits or were going to be busy. I'll wait until you finish the edits on your side and for you to post the psds then. I plan to upload tonight and will try not to take any random last minute suggestions unless they're pointing out real mistranslations or the suggestion is just that much better than what was there.
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>>288719647
>>288719671
>>288720113
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>>288720275
>will try not to take any random last minute suggestions unless they're pointing out real mistranslations or the suggestion is just that much better than what was there.
Good. After another proofread please wait some hours before the chapter is uploaded to dex. It doesn't really matter if it is Monday morning or "just" afternoon.
If no real last minute suggestion then it is safe to upload. Waiting some more extra hours does not hurt anyone.
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>>288720275
Ah but you see it is I, the other TS guy. I have posted a few times in this thread but yeah I got the PSDs from the other guy this morning and I have been editing. It's over half the pages so far, though some are literally just bolding the Augie font any time it has been used. I have made some grammatical changes and fixed some typos pointed out in this thread. The only time I changed TL was switching "they pooped" to "Meinya pooped" and the first guy used she for Nanachi mulitple times, I'm going to leave it like that because that's also how I want it but you can do what you will. You can absolve yourself of whatever guilt you may have and place the blame on us if you choose to leave it like that. Regardless, I respect your decision.

On that note, I was half in the bag yesterday when I posted yesterday but as I said I would be willing to split the burden of the upload permissions with you if you don't like being THE guy with all the burden of responsibility. That way I could fix small typos that others will fixate on in the following days and weeks after upload and stuff like that too without you needing to be shackled to it. I'm not aiming to usurp you nor do I intend to change anything that has already been done, I'm just asking because you seemed to suggest you don't like being in this position alone. I want you involved in this just as much as you already have been, you make this whole thing possible.
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>>288720063
>him
Anon...
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>>288720275
As for the editing progress I'm basically done, I'm just doing a final self-QA pass on it.
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>>288711351
Well, it's mentioned multiple times that the lower you go, the higher grade relics you find. And relics are often made from people. It might have something to do with the curse becoming stronger, warping people more the closer to the bottom you get
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>>288719515
It was plainly clear to me she meant their remaining time
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>>288719515
I understood it.
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>>288720999
It has a penis hand and is penis shaped. Don't play your gender mind games with me.
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>>288721698
Maa-san is canonically female, openly mentioned as female
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>>288721729
>Gender mind games

It's a cock
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>>288720443
This is the only valid response
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>>288720999
my point about Meinya's anus stands
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>>288721801
The only valid response is the Japanese raw.
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>>288714099
So she can remember the Prushka dreams.
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>>288721918
learn japanese then
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>>288705018
>her smile and optimism: restored!
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>>288722020
I asked papa about that. His answer:
>ćŖć‚“ć‹ć‚ć‚“ć¾ć‚Šč¦šćˆć¦ćŖć•ćć†ć ć‚ˆć­ 恠恋悉72話でやってんのか å¤¢ććć¼ć‚“ć‚„ć‚Šć—ć‹č¦šćˆć¦ć‚‰ć‚“ćŖć„ć‚ˆć­
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>>288722085
Warms my heart
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>>288722131
Makes sense to me. She doesn't remember the dreams like a memory, but still retains some information from them like you would waking from a dream that slips from your mind. Seeing something relevant might make you think "Oh! I had a dream about this I think."
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>>288722131
he likes being vague as fuck dont he
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>>288722140
I thanked Papa for that, but he said that Nanachi was still not safe.
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>>288720275
https://gofile.io/d/VN0SnK

Here are the edits I did. If any pages aren't there it means I didn't do anything to them and they can be downloaded here >>288706134

This site our other colleague found is nice for these massive files. I don't know how they get so big. Let me know what you think about what I said before. I'll be in the thread but I'm gonna slink back to bed and continue being hungover now.
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>>288722304
No one is safe. We'll appreciate a happy Nana for as long as we can
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>>288705564
Soft...
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>>288717216
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>>288711127
Reg better fuck Menae before his time's up... would be a waste otherwise
Perhaps fucking him would actually save him even, I have a theory that Reg's cummies have such a power
Sherumi too I guess but I'm more interested in boy onahole
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>>288723019
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>>288723019
Anon Reg can't make semen yet
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>>288722319
thank you fo your work
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>>288723101
The moment he puts his dick inside boypussy he will automatically become a grown up man, anon.
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>>288722140
what is this from?
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>>288723175
that arts on the inside of the dawn of the deep soul BD
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>>288716697
Unironically a better MIA game than the official one.
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>>288723501
rainworld?
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>>288723537
Casualties Unknown
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>>288723545
i see, never played it, is it similar? rainworld i think fits well for the survival part of something like MiA.
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>>288723568
It's an indie project. It's similar to rain world but plays more like noita with a super indepth injury/first aid system. Basically
>humans mass produce cute furry creatures then throw them into a murder hole to recover lost technology.
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>>288723220
oh never seen it. Riko's tits look cute.
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>>288723629
interesting, may give it a try later, rainworld is a masterpiece in making you feel like the bottom of the food chain, wonder how it compares.
Wish my pc could run Noita decently too
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>>288722299
Impossible to find a plot hole when your entire plot is just vague BS and the artist's barely disguised fetishes
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>>288723647
Riko's cute tits are cute
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>>288723742
still more consistent than the nasuverse
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if life reverberating stones are created only at the altar when someone takes the full force of the curse over another person, it means that Ozen and the others have been to the altar and have simultaneously gone upwards and faced the curse, right? why was Prushka the only one able to bestow the blessing AND keep sort of existing in the form of the life reverberating stone? I'm really not understanding the requirements of getting a white whistle vs getting the blessing vs getting both vs getting cursed
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>>288724048
>AND keep sort of existing in the form of the life reverberating stone
we dont know if the other white whistles also cant do the same or similar, its something that Ozen would consider too personal to share imo.
The blessing and becoming a white whistle are different rituals, prushka just did both one after the other.
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>>288723501
I am honestly surprised no ones made a MIA mod for it yet. The whole game is basically just exploring the abyss as riko without reg.
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>>288724048
>when someone takes the full force of the curse over another person
No, that's just the blessing. Life reverberating stones only require someone sacrifice their life for another's dream at the altar. Or at least near it. It's not clear if whistle formation just naturally occurs in that area and the altar was built around it or if it is a function of the altar itself.
The blessing is the thing that is about taking on someone else's curse. And I don't think there has been any indication that it requires the altar. It probably does require the 6th layer's curse, though. Higher layers don't kill you to begin with, so taking on the burden of the curse, while certainly unpleasant, wouldn't be on the same level of sacrifice as double blobification. And the 7th may be too harsh for someone to survive even a single curse long enough for the blessing to take place.
The fact that the blessing requires a relic to perform, the elevator or the cartridges, makes me think the altar is likewise a relic that in some way facilitates the formation of life reverberating stones. That would make the necessity of that specific location make a lot more sense.
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>>288724327
>Life reverberating stones only require someone sacrifice their life for another's dream at the altar
that's not what happened with Prushka
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>>288724418
yes it was, prushka was still alive after she helped the blessing, she still had desires and wanted to go with riko on her adventure
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>>288724418
Yes it is. The abyss is pretty lenient on the "sacrifice their life" part. If a person is dying, for any reason, and in their death they dedicate their life and soul to the fulfillment of another's dream, they become that person's life reverberating stone. Assuming they are in the right location.
Major binary star spoilers. In the game you and Tiare fight to the death with the understanding that whoever loses will become the other's white whistle.
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>>288711010
>no sfx translation of *loli frying chicken*
Made in /a/byss has fallen...
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>>288711073
how did nanachi go from basically a corpse to fine. She wasn't even responsive 30 hours ago. I will look over it becase the plot is moving forward finally and we'd be stuck on the "nanachi is out of commission" for too long subplot again
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>>288724949
i think she was just very fucking inflated because of the medicine
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>>288724949
I'd like to think she whipped up some kind of drug or stimulant to make herself look better than she is. Nanachi does have expertise in that field.
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>>288725001
could be, idk what they gave her maybe the 7th layer has morphine plants growing who knows.
>>288725026
wasn't most of the healing done by Srajo's companion juusou?
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>>288724949
The swelling was exaggerated inflammation from the Frapam's time acceleration. Which, according to Nanachi's estimate of how it felt for her, caused her to experience ~10 days of time while everyone else experienced 30 hours. Given that her wounds aren't even fully closed, I'd say it's appropriate. She's just doing a really good job of putting up a tough front. Reg and Yata are both surprised at how energetic she is.
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>>288725001
It was mentioned that the accelerated time caused the inflammation to build up exponentially. Do you people even read this manga?
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>>288725132
I do wonder what drug she used on herself, though. No doubt something synthesized with Mitty's help, but damn, what a wonderdrug
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>>288725252
its been literal months
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>>288725295
Memory is the first thing to go with age, huh?
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>>288724947
the typesetter wanted to put it but it seems he got self conscious

if tl anon doesn't do it now no one will
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>>288725295
it's one of the smallest waits we've had to endure in years
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>>288725295
Learn patience
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>>288725295
and re-read the fucking manga
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>>288724947
That would be a very nice addition next to *loli struggling to poop quietly*
https://files.catbox.moe/64bpqf.mp4
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This looks suspiciously like the tip of the star compass. An older version of it
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>>288725562
christ, that animation reminds me of old newgrounds flash ones, even the voice and movement, nostalgic.
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>>288715763
We are in the seventh layer and i can confirm it's almost as the same level of bullshit wich you are describing (in a good way)
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>>288725585
how does tsukushi draw structures that don't look like anything in particular. That looks to me like a strange looking naked tent or maybe some skeletal structure with cables but that's a stretch on both options.
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This shit caused Faputa to become a bubble sosu.
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>>288726262
She was normal to pages earlier, but never again after that.
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Sex with Nanachi (inside the backpack)
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>>288726262
I hope the movie adds a flash back scene of the Story Time with Nanachi. Seems like something that would be fairly easy to animate. Just a couple clips on Nanachi turning a page and maybe looking over, and the rest can just be panning across the still frames of pages with the voice over
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>>288726262
I still think it's Srajo specifically. The stinky hairs seem to have more to do with when the hariyomari collection and things related to the pendant and getting to the bottom are mentioned. Faputa glares at Srajo even when that isn't happening. And she's noticeably more comfortable around other Hail Hex members. I agree with the theory that anons had a thread or two ago that the whistles are not just for show and the soul erasure is not as straightforward as it seems.
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>>288726818
Yeah, Srajo sucks up souls of innocent red whistles into herself. That's the only explanation.
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>>288726818
but it also happened when Tepaste mentioned the calamituous writings
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>>288726940
The stinky hairs have been triggered by Srajo because she is the one talking about the hariyomari collection the most. But the recording of Cravali did it too. So it's more tied to certain information. How exactly, who knows. It only affects Riko and Prushka, so it isn't a universal thing. Maybe Doni is doing it?
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What if the prickly stuff is Wakuna
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>>288726914
Wasn't it stated that Nishi had multiple souls within her?
>>288727168
I think it's Doni trying to warn them
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what were the effects of the 5th layer ascension strain on Lyza?
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>>288727317
The same as anyone else would experience, why do you ask?
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>>288727317
Same as anyone. Loss of senses. If you're talking about stuff like Ozen's scarring or the weird hair people get, that doesn't happen every time. Riko got hit by every layer's curse until the 6th and she never developed anything like that. It seems to come from repeated (Ozen) or particularly intense (Prushka) exposure to the curse. Lyza was so young it may have never had time to develop.
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>>288727396
Lyza has the swirls in her long hair
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>>288727403
She could have got those from the lower layers but she had them when she was only a black whistle so they could just be natural too.
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>>288727403
looks like normal hair to me
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>>288727403
>>288727459
Didn't she have those when she was still a red whistle?
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>>288727475
Nope, straight spikes of blonde as a kid
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>>288727475
Her hair isn't really long enough to curl like that when we see her as a red whistle.
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>>288727396
highly doubt Lyza didn't go back and forth from the 5th layer multiple times
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>>288727475
>>288727493
short and curly. Not long enough for full curls, but it's definitely not straight
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>>288727493
>>288727499
Oh yea, you're right. I was mixing up scenes. In that case, the hair curls probably are her version of curse after effects.
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juusou and narehate are still human
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>>288727031
My idea is that through the pendant, either the Miko or entity known as Gronze are indeed sending a message to Riko or even stopping her from knowing something.
It could also be due to the soul she now has after being revived at birth.
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>>288727579
I think the dawn of the deep soul blu-ray pamphlet has a quip about her curls being from the abyss, I'll have to check.
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>>288727757
But if fap puta can escape the abyss, how would you categorize her in a single word?
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>>288711042
>>288711061
>they now need Srajo to survive delving lower
>but Srajo doesn’t need them
got a bad feeling about this
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>>288728006
relic, chatGPT-kun
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>>288727403
>>288727461
>>288727925
it was s1 bluray, and it's no confirmation but the fact there's a section about it is not nothing
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>>288728291
She's too pretty.
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>>288725562
I see your *loli struggling to poop quietly* and raise you *loli pissing loudly*
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>>288709717
I'm actually two people
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>>288705634
It's funny that this is treated as contentious to the mouthbreathers on this board.

I personally think Nanachi is prob a girl. That said, the right English pronoun is obviously they, since there's no indication otherwise atp and they is the third person singular ungendered pronoun. Really simple stuff
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>>288730564
dude just give up, its so obvious its just you samefagging, again.
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>>288728028
I don't think relic. I think she's a beast originating from the abyss, and some of them can ascend (like the flying ones) with no problem. Whether she originated from a human, she's so far removed from it that it's hard to describe her as anything but a really smart creature, whereas Reg etc are (presumably) artificial, so they're relics
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>>288730589
faputa is the result of a wish, so there is some fuckery there, iru wanted her to be the perfect child and all
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>>288730589
You really didn't even read the manga, did you? Why are you talking like that when you know nothing? Go read the manga then come back
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*gurgles*
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>>288727757
Most narehate seem unaffected by the 6th layer curse. And that curse is specifically called "loss of humanity". Only the blessed and villagers are exceptions.
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>>288730672
Blessed narehates retain their humanity. The ones that were stripped of it by the curse are different. Nanachi is a blessed narehate from the old ritual site, so because she retained her humanity, the curse still affects her. She might be able to mitigate the 5th layer's curse a bit, but only from familiarity and understanding of its nature
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Is it just me or does it seem like there are bots in this thread?
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so Riko’s necklace one of the main things Srajo is looking for?
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>>288724048
Getting blessed/narehated is a Layer 6 curse. Turning into white whistle is a Layer 5 procedure. The White Whistles who still returned to Orth from time to time did not was at Layer 6 yet otherwise they would not be able to return. When they decide to go deeper that is the Last Dive.
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>>288724327
Why didn't Bondrewd tell Riko that the whistle needs to be sculpted for better efficieny? Wasn't his new goal to help them? Why did he let them go with an uncrafted whistle?
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>>288724949
Frapam accelerated time on the bun. From Nanachi's pov maybe weeks were passed.
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>>288725078
>wasn't most of the healing done by Srajo's companion juusou?
Yes + the magic medicine from Irubruu, put by Majikaja and Moogie inside Riko's backpack.
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>>288730737
She may not even know it exists. But if she ever finds out Riko has it, she's definitely going to make the connection to the "treasure" and want to take it for herself.
>>288730788
Bondrewd loves using rules and procedure an excuse to fuck with people. Riko isn't an official, guild recognized white whistle. So technically she is not privy to that particular secret. And he knows about the village. So he may have also figured that if she is unable to make her way into and out of the village without his instruction that she'll never make it to the bottom anyway.
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You guys are definitely talking to a bot
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>>288727271
>Wasn't it stated that Nishi had multiple souls within her?
Maybe narehatescans mistranslation.
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>>288731014
faputa notices something fucky about her soul iirc
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>>288730605
which part is wrong, rechard?
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Ok I'm done doing any remaining fixes. I'm uploading. I know an anon suggested another proofread should be done but I don't think it'll do much other than confuse me more, I feel like all productive suggestions have already been given.
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>>288731163
Thanks for your hard work, anon
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>>288731163
Thank you Anon. But be prepared for last last minute "suggestions" and crying over why the hell did you upload without other proofread shitstorm. Oh and the usual, this TL and translator is shit.
tl;dr: Thanks for everyone who participated.
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>>288731209
>>288731194
ok nvm, I fucked up the filesizes when rendering them and now they're bloated to shit, mangadex won't let me upload them because I'm going over total upload limit(300 when I have 431). I gotta go to bed now and don't have time to reprint them all since it usually takes my computer a few hours. Feel free to do the other proofread and I'll upload when I'm home tomorrow.
Here's the folder with my edits https://gofile.io/d/MZbFyV
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FUCK
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>>288731339
yeah I apologize. I fucked up here. See you all tomorrow.
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>>288731163
cute buns in bags be with you
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>>288711010
I think I just got the joke, she'd have a cloaca or something. ie. everything coming out of one hole.
Maybe this has already been referenced.
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When should I start reading Abyss again. I remember Nanachi getting injured and then it stopped for a while.
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>>288710896
Why is Riko's arm healed in the dreamworld? Shouldn't it be preciuos mark about how Reg cared about her?
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>>288731600
>When should I start reading Abyss again.
After the current arc ends? Unless you want to get caught up and wait.
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If the next thread doesn't start with a dump atleast say the chapters finished
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Why do the Russian and Brasilian translators hardtranslate the sfx?
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>>288711127
I feel this went from a month to five days just so Tsuk could speed things up and show how Srajo collects souls. Drawing two chapters a year is forcing him to up the pacing.
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>>288732351
Because they do not respect the author's art.
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>>288731809
The dreamworld likely represents the soul

That's why Prushka turned into a narahate as the dream faded away, and wasnt a bag of flesh containing a skull with some organs attached in the dream
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Nna-chan's ponytail
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>>288731809
It looks like it was the same way in the previous dream sequence, which makes me think it is deliberate and not something Tsukushi just forgot about.
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>>288732470
I doubt it. Due to time dilation, exactly how long things take has major ramifications. I think it's more likely he changed his mind on what he wanted to do with the nuggies than him changing his mind about in-universe timing like that. However long Hello Abyss are going to be in the 7th layer was likely decided a while ago to facilitate what he wants to do with the surface.
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>>288733170
Possibly. But I think he would have already taken the time dilation into account when he mentioned the month thing. It has been a major plot point since the sixth layer. The end result of them dying doesn't seem to have change just how long they have left. Plus I doubt they spent weeks in one spot with Frap speeding up Nanachi's healing and Miko gang already attacking them once.
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>>288733287
There's also the time solidifying thing Nishagora mentioned when Riko Squad first encountered her that we have yet to receive an explanation for. There was an implication that this phenomenon affects the flow of time in some way.
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I'm like 5 eps in and it still drags like ass, when does it get good?
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>>288733366
when they meet nanachi the plot starts to move a lot more
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>>288733287
>The end result of them dying doesn't seem to have change
That's what I'm suggesting has changed. We don't know the exact time dilation on the 7th layer. But just based off the 6th, it's enormous. It may have only been a month or two in 7th layer time since Lyza went on her last dive. I never expected they would spend a month down here. Especially when you consider how quickly they've gone through every other layer.
I figured the nuggies' lifespan served more as a way to give Hail Hex a sense of urgency and that if one or both of them died before the end of the journey, it would be from something else. But now it seems they are for sure both going to die, presumably from this.
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>>288733389
Okay thanks anon, I'll give it a spin further
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>>288733366
>when does it get good?
Episode 1
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>>288733443
think they're asking when action becomes a bit more faster paced and when the plot starts to pick up and form a bit more, at the start the first few layers are a bit slow tempo
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>>288733398
Almost completely baseless theory but I wonder if the twins deaths are tied to the abyss too. We know that somehow no matter what if twins are born in orth they get those names. What if their deaths are as locked in as their names.
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>>288733532
I was wondering the same thing. I'm torn on it, though. On one hand, them being able to give an exact number like 5 days is extremely weird. Reg has an ammo counter and even that is only good for a rough guess since no one can read it. But Srajo talks about them experiencing unexpected strain along the way, as though using their power accelerates their death. But then that's also kind of weird, because she initially acted like it was their prosthetics gnawing away at their lifespans.
I could see it going either way. If it is that their deaths are locked in then maybe it's sort of like Marulk. Shadow children die after a certain number of days' worth of sun exposure. So maybe the nuggies also have a clock and using their power moves it forward. Dunno how the prosthetics fit in with that, though.
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>>288728025
Actually, I'm surprised Srajo didn't insist on them coming along. Reg and Faputa, in particular, are a huge help in battle or other troubles. The rest of Riko's team is useful too, if only as lookouts.
Is she stupid or overly confident that she doesn’t care about having extra "bayonets" in a situation where they’re most likely going to have to fight those freaks from Miko?
Nanachi made a very good decision to go with them, but it’s strange that it isn’t obvious to the other side.
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>>288733618
overconfidence most likely, they see them as children and curiosities, they've survived so long without them so they don't believe they need them, you have to be quite self confident to delve that deep and if the results speak that you're capable group of delvers you are very likely to grow hubris and to overestimate your own chances of survival
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>>288733618
Riko and Nanachi should have some weapons, because they're the only members of the combined team (apart from the Whistles, of course) who don't have any
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>>288733618
Yata at least is not convinced that Nanachi is healthy enough to be doing this. They just don't want to pressure another squad into killing one of their members via overexertion. And while Hello Abyss are an obvious help (the nuggies and Srajo's plans would be dead without Nanachi), Srajo was already planning this expedition before meeting them. So she sees them more as a nice to have than something she is expecting to rely on.
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>>288733679
Actually, what's the deal with the twins, why are they so crucial?
I mean, their ability to shoot is really useful, but are they supposed to be some kind of key or something?
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>>288733714
Their eyes turn into a symbol similar to the inside of the pendant.
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>>288732910
>>288733151
Then why the puffed up Nanachi instead of a healed one?
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>>288733398
>how quickly they've gone through every other layer.
They spent weeks at Nanachi's hideout.
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>>288733532
I forgot how bad this scene was simplified in the anime.
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>>288734367
Probably because Nanachi isn't actually there.
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>>288734410
Right. In the 2nd layer they did a training arc and in the 4th Riko almost died. But in both cases they were there for less than the lifespan we were originally told for the nuggies. And they cleared every other layer even faster. It would be very odd for them to slow down that much and take a month in the 7th.
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>>288733618
Because they did not want to carry an injured person. They would leave a lot of suppliment for Nanachi's recovery. Srajo did not left them behind without any goodbye.
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>>288733618
Yeah Reg and Faputa alone are nearly necessary bc they can ascend at will, making them quite literally invaluable. Even Nanachi has the value of forcefield viewing. Riko is basically just an extension of Reg (really the opposite is more the case, but it's transitive), a relic and its user.

I imagine Srajo has a not-insignificant ace up her sleeve. We've still never seen her fight, but only lead like Riko. Gotta imagine she's every bit as tough as anyone else in Hex, if not significantly more so, making her cockiness a bit more understandable
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>>288735668
>Even Nanachi has the value of forcefield viewing
I don't think Srajo knows about that yet.
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>>288705018
Havent read in a while, how many new chaps since the one where Cravali and Titpaste were introduced?
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>>288735741
She probably suspects something. Her crew can see souls, and none of them saw the Tenmaku coming. But Nanachi did.
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>>288736011
it's been at least 2 or 3 whole volumes since then
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>>288734367
The real question is why blessed Mitty instead of rug.
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>>288736011
11 chapters
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>>288734367
It's not the real Nanch or her soul, or anything like that. It's just Riko's own mental projection of how she imagines Big Nanch. It's influenced by her most recent memories, so she's swollen and infantalized
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>>288733532
I still assume this birthday disease thing is the abyss reclaiming the souls invested in those who dwell within it. Maybe there's some 2000 year cycle of breathing where it 'exhales' and implants souls and then 'inhales' to hoover them back up again. If relics operate on the same energy wavelength then it'd make sense that you could sort of use them like batteries and implant them in a person's body to keep them going a little longer.
No clue what's up with the twins thing though, perhaps two people sharing one soul, japs do like to use that in their media on occasion.
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>>288738028
How can Prushka hold Nanachi?
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>>288738578
magic
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>>288711127
Not my nuggets...
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>>288738214
>hoover
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Why does Kirinia have a star compass also?
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>>288738782
It's not a star compass you blind retard. Maybe you are actually a bot.
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its a JO crystal
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>>288738782
that's not the star compass you dumbfuck
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>>288739177
Don't be rude it looks it at least
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>>288739211
No it doesn't. What the fuck is wrong with you?
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>>288738876
kek, Reg should have it then
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>>288733714
they pretty much have some sort of nasuverse-tier mystic eye shit, its quite op.
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>>288741051
>the ster
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>>288741476
average jap engrish
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>>288735668
>We've still never seen her fight
She shot Tenmaku with her gun
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>>288741825
Also swatted that flying thing out of the air with her shovel.
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I made it to the 4th layer and completed Riko's quest. I'm really liking this game so far. it's not perfect, but it feels immersive in a way few games have made me feel.
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>>288739211
I think you might have confused the pendant and the star compass. This is the star compass
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>>288741825
That was Tepaste's gun you fucking speed reader.
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>>288735668
she wacks you with a shovel
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>>288742987
Not anymore, prisoner.
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Hold off on making the next thread until the chapter dump happens, assuming that does happen tonight.
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>>288743539
the next chapter tonight??? Tsukushi might not even be finished with sketching chapter 74
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>>288743665
i would very much like to be wrong though. Am i wrong?
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What if
Instead of penis
Reg
had a second
smaller incinerator
in it's place
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>>288743806
No. His penis is more useful.
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>>288743665
nigga, the chapter just came released 4 days ago. Anon is talking about the final draft of the scanulation that others are doing >>288710896
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>>288743806
but then moth would never have children
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>>288743806
who says he doesn't?
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>>288743866
why would a robot be able to produce children
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>>288744051
How do you think robots get made retard?
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>>288743806
one of the early mia doujins has that happening yes
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Thread in Abyss
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Dump it.
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>>288743806
But anon... we all got confirmation of his little penis existence from the very start of the series.
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>>288743806
I think I'm starting to like cute boys
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>>288744516
>starting to
Then you've got a lot of catching up to do.
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this will be Faputa in 2027!
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>>288744715
yeah, I guess I do
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Did the chapter pages get fixed yet?
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Licking Nanachi's biscuit maker!
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>>288744983
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Cuddling with Nanachi after I mercilessly pounded her tiny bunholes!
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>>288733532
it's not baseless, the twins' names appear in the original scripts of hariyomari, and even in this chapter Srajo confesses she's gonna make use of them...



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