One shot by Kawaguchi, and it got translated into English. https://mangadex.org/title/863617e5-4b1d-46fe-9f21-fbdfb2113fc2/nanafushigi-senpai-to-tetsujin-kun
Cute!
Nobody wants to see a kawagushit one shot translated by his low life fans. kys
Give up already dumping the trash you wasted your time translating, the rest of us have better things to do the than read kawaguslop
>>289829118>the thanLol, people don't even care enough about kekaguchi to even read over their own posts.
Fin~
Fucking garbage, this will obviously get rejected once Kekaguchi pitches it for serialization, and then he will have no were else to go other than serving riceballs.
>>289829007>>289829118>>289829168>>289829804Why are you like this?
>>289829702>>289829006she has extremely lewd eyes
>>289830000It's sexy eyes! Nice ququads btw!
>The action sequences still suckSome things never change.
>>289830070>MisspellIt's over....
>>289830070Kawagushitters think only an extremely ugly girl is waifu material after looking at muscle monstrosities for their entire lives.
I already read it but thanks for the dump
>>289830919You're welcome, anon.
>>289829555>>289829573cool sceneeven though its pretty much just danny phantom i think it could be a pretty fun read as a cool seriesmain girl is cute too>>289829755thanks for the dump im hoping this one will turn out well for him
why is there a dedicated schizo for Kawaguchi of all people?
fun oneshotI like this guy's ideas but man he's terrible at writing, you can see hints of it even in this short of a story. The art is great and the characters seem likable so hopefully he either figures out the writing part of just gets a writer.
>>289832304>why does the Mangaka behind Red Hood have schizosMight as well ask why water is wet. Everyone pretty much agrees Red Hood was a massive fumble because of that one Editor. His manga after Red Hood didn't have any luck either. I am gonna say third times the charm but I dunno. The author has this problem of getting too verbose.
>>289828809Hey that art...
>>289832420His writing is kinda boring
>>289832304See>>289829653>>289830151otr survived one more round than kaedegami. That's literally it.
>>289832420>he's terrible at writingElaborate on that.
>>289829281Jjkbros?
>>289832433>Everyone pretty much agrees Red Hood was a massive fumble because of that one Editor.KWABguchi fags still blaming Retard Hoods failure on the editor rather Kawagushit being a hack mangaka after half a decade of shit one shots and serializations, LMFAO
>>289832919No fagumi design so jjk"""bros""" won't care
>>289832754his characters have no character, his world building is a snore, and his writing has no creativity of his own and has to rely on plagiarizing shonen tropes without any thought or reason. there
>>289833021That's a rather terrible subjective opinion, isn't it? Worst part of it: nothing but schizo yapping nonsense.
does anyone else think the mc is ripping off yuji from jjk?i dont hate it though its better than the shota mc's he's done before.
>>289833484I-i like shota mc, as long as they look cute.
>>289829573>>289829630This kicks ass and I would read the fuck out of this if it went full on Danny Phantom with our MC getting various ghost powers.
>>289833918Trying to balance between battle shonen and romcom can be tough, but it works well for dandadan.
The feMC needed to have bigger tits.
>>289834016How big?
>>289828817Big guy.
>>289828839Neat reference.
>>289829027>>289829048>Big kouhai and smol senpaiMy favorite.
>>289829083Kek
>>289829163Poor lad. But at least he died at the peak.
>>289829338Juxtaposition of artstyles is always a cool trick in horror.
>>289828809>still being a kawaguchifag in 2026.Bokuben
>>289829720>"Mr. President, there was another seven mysteries."
>>289829755Thx buddy.Now that I read the TL, it's a good oneshot. The premise is basic but it can be extended and built upon. I thought it was going for something like Utsuranain desu but it seems to lean more into the action aspect. Characters got nice quirks and memorable designs. The art is fine and I love he is still sticking to out of border panelling.Overall, I can see myself enjoying if it got turned into a series. We will see how it go from here on out.
>>289830000Quads of sex!
>>289832999>I am desperate for validation and attentionGo back to do your homework little Timmy
>>289829237>>289829630>young tetsuhito, he was just 14 when his crush built a very strange machine.>>289829386>save the explanation for laterThis might be a jab at Red Hood being criticized for the mid battle exposition wolfonium>>289829483There's a batman beyond episode where that happens.>>289829755Thanks for the dump.It was ok, but nothing more, I did not feel for the characters besides liking the designs.He can't write very well and his action scenes are lacking.>>289832754NTA but the characters lack emotional core and investment in the story. Yes, he gives them token backstories but he fails at making them feel "real".See pic related, this one hits because it makes you understand what naruto is feeling without a single word.
>>289835356Well, to be fair, it's one shot, and it's not like he would rather not add another page of emotional moments, but I get where you're coming from. No mangka writing is perfect.
>>289835638It's a matter of pacing. Romance Dawn was a similar lenght and it hit every beat a one shot should hit.He could've used the earlier pages to better show why tetsuhito cares about being popular so much for example.
>>289835308You should be doing your homework little Timmy, as you aren't getting attention from anyone except your circlejerk of the other 4 kawagushitters. Nobody wants to read kwabguchi's one shot and your love of his slop will never be validated.
>>289835798His pacing writing is always his major weak point, and he has to sort it out by not stalling too much like in RH village and Otr training.
>>289835935End yourself, schizo.
