Chapter 3 of SNEK
END OF SNEK/CARA
>>291252164is snek the main character?
Pretty good chapter. I still laugh at /a/nons treating "snek" as the focal point of the manga because she's the only girl though
>>291252258extremely cute snek
>>291252846didn't expect him to be a spider lmao>>291252620cute owl>>291253641co-protagonist at most. she's cute but the manga seems like a walking axebait.i'll keep reading because it looks fun, but there's too many red flags.
>>291253051>I'm mortified you witnessed such a shameful display!He said it, he said the thing.
>>291253641>>291253775She's the POV character.
>>291253105Thanks!>>291253641She reminds me of Lucy from Fairy Tail, both are mcs but Lucy was the one introducing the story. Let's hope this fantasy one survives SAITO I'M WATCHING YOU
>>291253051Fujokino
This manga is scratching my extremely specific itch for fantasy with spooky elements that doesn't rely on misery to be creepy, and I'll be extremely pissed off if this gets axed.
>>291255139It has that old Tim Burton charm
>>291255186It has been ages since I last watched one of Burton's films, but the vibes are quite similarOne thing I like of this manga is how most magic beings follow a "fuck around and find out" principle instead of being plain evil (there are exceptions, like the shelves, but it could be that they are trying to protect the books in a twisted way). A lot of old folklore is just like this, which is why it's so spooky. Also their designs are 10/10 in terms of being cool, eerie and just the right amount of edgy.
>>291253967>the manga seems like a walking axebaitIt kind of is but he's got a decently imaginative mind. His design and drawing skills still aren't to par but he comes up with interesting concept for his characters (the reaper lady last chapter and the spider librarian without a face).He should work harder on his writing and pacing on top of the design issues, so far it had some cool moments but there's no wow, money shot page. For example if they showed a cool, maybe gigantic spider at the bottom of the library it would have served as a money shot double spread and then it would've been great misdirection for the librarian himself also being a spider for the chapter climax.I still think it's gonna get axed in 2 or 3 volumes, the MC is getting a little better characterisation but it's still far from good and early chapters need to establish a plot hook and a character hook really fast, while Hokami here is taking his time. That's a real gamble there.
>>291252846Nice chapter. I would've liked the spider design to be a little more creative than "He's a big spider" though.
LIVE, DARLINGLIVE
I wonder if the Grand Grimoire, Voynich Manuscript and Abramelin are also in this library, heh.>>291252958The conscript used in this page looks kind of like Elhanin (https://omniglot.com/conscripts/elhanin.php) but then it becomes standard vertical right on the next page. What a letdown.
>>291253105Thanks for the dump
>>291257529Very interesting
>>291253051Creepy spider
>>291257529Will we see the necronomicon?
>>291255837The assistant is the worst part here, boring personality and bad design, he could easily be ignored or replaced. The best the manga can do is recruit more characters and add your usual big(ger) organization
>>291255837>early chapters need to establish a plot hook and a character hook really fastthis is what killed AH and it's why i don't see this live either despite liking the burton-esque vibes. ura also lost me pretty fast. what else can i read in this magazine? i already read roku and kgb.
>>291260063Yeah, you could remove him here and nothing would change, if you want someone to change the candles last chapter just use another familiar or fairyHe also acts as a third wheel in a potential romance
>>291260472He is also ugly to look at and not in a funny way. Editors really are not doing their job
>>291260356>kgbFuck off totofag, we don't want you here.
>>291260513Editors are all newbies that get trained by the veteran mangakaExcept these veterans needed good editors to do well so they cant teach them anything
>>291260990Hey totofag, can you post the date of the pic you just stole?
>>291253105Thanks for the bump.
Bump.
>>291260990What? I'm not the totofag, calm down.
>>291260356Can you post the date of this pic too?
>>291262230He is a falseflagger, he can't imitate you anymore I guess t. Actual dumper
>more exorcist slopkimetsu ended in 2020... when will we move on to something else...
>>291262544Its this, hitman, romance or SoL
>>291262479I'm not the sukunafujo either (if that's who you're referring to).>>291262544Is it exorcism if we're in a post unification world? Wait a moment, is this a bone collection sequel?
>>291262660My bad I thought you were that one
>>291262997That's another Sachiko anonMine are these>>291254173>>291255186Luckily that puritan thing never guessed my codes so I at least managed to protect other Sachikos. Do the same if that bothers you>>291255752Yeah, we need more like that. Give me some Sleepy Hollow like chapter
I can already see this going down the path Kinato of introducing new characters every chapter without further moving the plot or creating any long term goal.
>>291263656Those two are on so many levels of falseflag that you can't tell who is who, they are not above doing their usual shtick and then call themselves out saying it was the other doing it.
>>291259381No, that went to NoiseRing.
When will these fantasy authors learn that you have to have charming characters if you want anyone to care about what is happening? And no the girl is not charming at all, she's only being gassed up by waifufags. Also learn how to draw fights
>>291265192At this point I'm convinced editors are on it to make sure One Piece shines more, since kids are not reading that. Any new cool male and a potential sakuga anime can make kids spam tiktoks about it over gear 5 Luffy and his awful fights
>>291252164Thanks
>>291252214>random guy: fucking dies in fiery agony>Graykeith and friends: "lol he died"
>>291265118kek
>>291265192Doing fights literally kills your ToC in modern jump, the EiC is a romcom fag
>>291265241The assistant will kill this
Hal and Cannon Master will get axe soon, and Sakamoto will end soonSo at least this will survive this round
>>291271658Sakamoto has been ending for how many months now
>>291271658It wouldn't have chapters to be axed retardo. The moment its eligible its axed.
>>291265192>fightsNOT ON MY WATCH DESU!!!
>>291268503But...he is blind...
>>291252375He is fat
>>291252846Kino
>>291268503I love Noise Ring.
>>291276305It's NOISERING
>>291252214LMAO
>>291271898at least two years
>>291253105Thank you for posting!
>>291278473why the necrobump?