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I’ve been thinking for a while that I am retarded. I probably I’m not, although I do feel that way. I'd like to change that.
Dad’s been nothing but a nagging peanut. I wish I could reduce him to the size of one.
He succeeded in making me cry but I mean I cry at the slightest shi so that isn’t much of an achievement.
I have a lot of work piling on my neck and might as well slit it.
I’ve gotten my draft already sent it through gmail to my system (I just wanted to do so) I keep on forgetting how actually wide my laptop screen is (holy ahh asus; I want an asus laptop I don’t have one mine is SHITTY; it’s just old the macbook neo release’s got my head spiraling)
End of diary-ahh log.
Btw the sulphuric acid shi is a joke I just wanted to sound a bit like Sam Pink.
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Most dads are faggots dw about their dumb old gay opinions. I always had my suspicions but I knew when I found dildoes in mines closet. Look around and see if you find yours
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Definetly taking your advice for a run. I also started about my work why's writing so friggin stressful. Also to whoever comes across this I'd would like you to read this uncompleted pretty short story thing I have going on.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTpmgVxElvMMYI-QMYpLiDmU-pqKA1TzXC-SKdxdVXqSDzL9ShgCUmHvAqdOuef0FsUBnwNJsp63-Bj/pub
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>>34334560
It's cringe but mainly because there's no context. You're overly describing a cringe process that you haven't explained the purpose or context of. Why is kelper doing all this weird shit? Is he trying to summon a fog woman or is he tripping on some drug? If he's summoning a fog woman then you need to make it more grim and serious. If he's tripping on some drug then you need to give us the empathetic trigger for him wanting to get blasted.



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