>>944797323
I think that's genuinely really good. Keep going OP, never give up

idk except for around :30 and :40 it sounds pretty good to me
practice more bro, you gotta be patient!

>>944797323
>https://vocaroo.com/1o1tnZS0hcHp
I understand what you like and I understand why you're struggling, if you try to learn barbara's song by will ackerman I assure you that you will fly anything you're struggling with now, even if Barbara doesn't come out right for a couple of years, always get in your routine something that is "impossible" but with distinctive flow like Barbara and that you don't know by memory, so you can't tell if you make mistakes and you practice more chill a more difficult piece