i made something https://voca.ro/1fJsrp1cCziAYour fortune: Excellent Luck
>>944940159it's good but shorten the loop that ends at 0:33 seconds to maybe 25 seconds, that went on just long enough i thought that's all there was to it
>>944940389i made a bigger version but it's worsewish i had the attention span to watch a tutorial on how to make a songhttps://voca.ro/1lvpk9ZGyDtf
>>944940744what're the inspirations for this? it's good and has a specific vibe i can't put my finger on
>>944941604its an aero Frutiger early 2000s windows xp/playstation etc vibe, or at least, presumably a late zoomers/early alpha's take on it
>>944940744bro the bigger version is good, the beginning sounds like pseudoregalia then it switches to sounding like turok 2 then goes back to pseudo
>>944940159i like it... i also liked that other one you posted a few days agohttps://vocaroo.com/15bnuXzHkllothat one, you got anything else? please keep going
>>944941604i was just doing things>>944941713yeh i'm a 18yo zoomeri wish i could make a song like this https://youtu.be/YfMWLnziKE0 but idk how i'll keep trying>>944941754it's soulless trash >>944941966damn wild u saw me on /bant/idk everything i make is horrible trash
>>944942005grow up
>>944942052true thank u
>>944942005keep making music. ur doing good for ur age. reminds me a lil of trndytrndy
>>944940159Sounds good.Criticisms: 1) The start up takes too long to start, one too many verses. 2) Needs a main melody doing something. It all sounds like background music at the moment.3) Because there is no melody, it feels like there is not much happening.Other than that, I think you chose the right instruments and the right tone and key,Good luck.
