I want to write more Spider-Man fanfics (considering the state of modern ASM), and I would like to see if I am writing them well. This one I wrote some time ago, my very first Spider-Man one, so I wanted to know what you guys think.
why didn't you post the ao3 link to start off the thread
>>150166757Cause 4chan keeps thinking it’s spam. I am trying to add spaces to the link yet it still thinks it’s spam
>>150166746https://archiveofourown.org|works|12134625Sorry this is the only way it will accept
It was nice but also
>>150166852Thanks. Yeah, I wrote it long ago, but I have been writing still.
>>150167095Anything you're currently getting ready to submit? What are your plans for the Spidey fic?
>>150167791Well I basically want to expand the other the Spider-Man fanfic I have written called “Swinging By The City On A Rainy Night” (https://archiveofourown.org|works/12157866/chapters/27590163) and which would feature Laura Kinney as a kind of deuteragonist. I want to protray a competent Spider-Man yet flawed Peter Parker. Show how being Spider-Man makes him very isolated which I think the comics kind of fail to show because of how rife Peter’s civilian life is with characters. I don’t want to take all of them away, but show that Peter is kind of fighting almost a losing battle to keep with with his peers. This is how I want to connect Spider-Man and X-23 in a way. I have thought of another connection which would help them grow together as better characters.
>>150167095Agreed, cute.The formatting is off, you should clean it up.$150 for personal photos is a lot.I think I would have had some more comedic villain (say Paste Pot Pete) attack the - what, apparently college stadium? - and have Pete come for a save, so Jonah gets one Spidey picture and the other three and then you can do the bonus.Also, it's more slice of life than humor.
>>150168509Thanks! I am not American, so I don’t know the currency too well. I will be sure to include more action scenes in the future.Btw, what formatting is off? I don’t see it on my end.
>>150166746No
>>150166798You're a lot more successful on AO3 than I've been so far but I've only been on there for a year and a half and I was even less successful on the site I was writing on before that.
>>150169476Luck’s involved in it I think. My other Spidey fic didn’t do as well as this one
>>150169745Luck is my middle name. Mind you, my first name is Bad.
>>150169811What's your last name?
>>150166746Sure, shoot
>>150170294https://archiveofourown.org|works/12134625
>>150166852lmao
