I'm going to continue storytiming my fantasy comic Oi! Tales of Bardic Fury, two chapters at a time. It's set in 360 AD Ireland and follows the story of a bard-in-training who gets sent to a tiny village by the sea called Oi that never heard music before. Enjoy!Previous thread- Chapters 1 & 2>>150452632
Chapter 3
looks gay
>>150500401wait you are of those hows your webcomic dudessince when you got good?
>>150501079This is old work. Not being humble but I still don't consider my art to be good, but maybe some anons will find the story interesting or learn from my mistakes.
End of Chapter 3.>Knowing what I know now about comics and in hindsight, I shouldn't have attempted to do the multiple protagonists, no real Main character, game of thrones/skins different POV thing. Though ambitious, it's hard to pull off and this comic and story in particular would have been better off with Bryan the bard as the clear main character and focus, especially in the opening chapters. Future comics I make will have clearer focus.
Chapter 4
>>150501742I also did way too much telling and not showing. These two pages would be better off as 4-6 pages with the salmon of knowledge story being illustrated.
End of Chapter 4
Chapter 5- If the Kids are United
Aengus was inspired by Bono
>>150500401Neat art, good character design and pretty waifus!
>>150502747Cheers bro.
Free Willy
End of Chapter 5. Thank you for reading!Next storytime is Chapter 6- the Winter Solstice special
When are we leaving the beach episode my mans?
>>150503224Not til chapter 8, sir. Father Ted was a major inspiration for this story.
I read this comic for the girls.
>>150501719O_O
>>150504526I read it for THE girl
>>150506623>5'3"never knew my wife was a womanlet.