I'm going to continue storytiming my fantasy webcomic series Oi! Tales of Bardic Fury. It's set in 360 AD Ireland and follows the story of a bard-in-training who gets sent to a tiny village by the sea called Oi that never heard music before. This thread is chapters 20 and 21, from Oi volume 3- BURN YOUR IDOLS.Enjoy!Previous thread->>150723337
>>150738121Chapter 20>bump if you're reading
End of Chapter 20
Chapter 21
>>150738919Sheep World's song was inspired by Ed from Goodburger
>>150738919In the original draft "there will be death on the fields of Oi" referred to Queen Fionna the orca, leader of the White Eyes clan. Cory Seacrow and the bunnies were going to slice Fionna open and drag her on to the fields of Oi, while leaving a bunch of false evidence around the corpse framing Dana and Banshee Vale for the crime. This would lead star seal declaring war on Banshee Vale and marching the entire village there. I changed it up because the story was dark enough as is and drawing a dead pregnant orca was too fucked up.
I really like your coloring.It makes me wish everything in color.
>>150739140Thank you. I like it too but I've realized doing it all in full color burns me out. I tried to do it with the oi beach episode ova special and my newest comic cosmic crush but doing the line work + full color every page takes me way too long to do.
End of Chapter 21Stay tuned for next time. Thank you for reading!
>Bonus Oi sisters
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>>150739221OMG are you tracing from Jojo's Bizarre Adventures too? Such dishonesty!
>>150740085No lol that's basic cartoon eyes sir. Araki himself however traces/heavily references photos from fashion magazines, as does my hero Tagashi.
>>150738121I was looking for the first chapter of this comic and to my surprise, one can read it on mangadex
>>150740085Now that I think about it, there is a clear Jojo reference in the beach episode and Star Seal does the Giorno at some point. So fairplay to you sir.>>150740240Yes the whole thing is uncensored on mangadex, namicomi and tapas. It's also on webtoon and mangaplus but I had to censor a bunch of panels.
>>150740213>Araki himself however traces/heavily references photos from fashion magazines, as does my hero Tagashi.Prove it.
>>150740403Man, the guy's style is such a ripoff, i always thought Jojo was a Fist of the Northstar spinoff or sequel until the Dreamcast game came out.
>>150739357Thank you for the storytime. Wasn't able to post in the other thread, but, >>150728744 sexooooooo
>>150740403Eh ok.>>150740464That's a fair opinion. imo he's transforming it in to something new. Similar to how we tangled clan early albums would sample beats, choruses and soundbites from other artists and media then transform it in to something completely new.
>>150740542>we tangled claWu Tang Clan
>>150740542>picDamn, my hero is dead. ripping off like that is normal for artists/manga makers?
>>150740614Basically. Tezuka and Araki recommend it. Greg Land made an entire career of it.
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>>150740529Np thanks for reading. Glad some anon appreciated the new Dana.Next chapter Aideen vs Dana is in full color.
>>150740661>>150740678And people say AI isn't the future.
>>150740853I like that you draw her with huge tits now
>>150741628From what I remember of a HYWC thread that had a pic comparing sizes of a bunch of different characters, I think Dana had the biggest cup size out of all the Oi! girls? Unfortunately I didn't save the whole thing but either way yeah Dana booba is nice
>>150742047I thought of Oi! girls Rhiannon or shark tits had bigger booba. Dana has atleast DDs now, guess she leveled up and evolved.
>>150740542>he's transforming it in to something new.yeah, took him a while to get his own thing going.It's pretty good and a lot of people are ripping him off now.>>150742047big booba girl distracts from the main characters so much that big booba girls should be the main characters.
>>150742630>big booba girl distracts from the main characters so much that big booba girls should be the main characters.Agree with this. Series would be better if she >>150742047 was the MC.
Bard Bump
>>150740853>>150742047moar
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>>150738121Reading bump
>>150744255Les be friends
>>150741163As long as it looks shit and costs billions then no, it's not the future
>>150744255>cave sex with Aideen
>>150746258>cave sex with Dana
>>150747239she probably has 5 million STDs>>150746258Best girl
>>150746258>>150747239>>150747466Having read only these storytimes, here's my analysis:>Rhiannon- starfish virgin sex. She would cry afterwards and demand endless cuddling. High maintenance, not worth it.>Aideen- submissive pillow princess sex. Tough girl act is a front, you'd have to do all the work. Also high maintenance.>Spidergirl- freaky traumatizing hard-core kinky shit. Solid lay if you're in to what she likes.>Sharkboobs- solid and experienced, in to tittyfucking and anal. Probably offers the best sex in her village.>Dana- S-tier best sex you ever had BPD dommy mommy. Terrible and psychotic in a relationship, but perfect in bed.Out of all of them, I'd choose Dana. I'm only reading this comic for the cute girls.
>>150738121Neat comic. Thanks for storytiming
>>150744255>>150749084Don't do this. You're essentially poisoning this series with a secondary audience of coomers with terrible taste. No real good comes of this. The only series immune to this are the ones that are super popular.
>>150749772These are old commissions. You're probably right. The comic now essentially acts as an advertisement for lewd commissions of the Oi girls, it is what it is. With my current comic Cosmic Crush, I have a no lewding the characters rule, I learned what happens first hand when I cross the line lol
>>150739279>>150739287>>150739357Hoping Aideen pushes her shit in
>>150749772I read for the hot girls AND the plot
>>150751562I only read it for ass.
>>150751562I only read it for TTRPG character ideas.
>>150752222>quadsLike what?
>>150752575Right now in a Pathfinder game I'm playing an insane masked paladin for a church that basically doesn't exist anymore in the setting. Grandeur Champion with Oracle stuff, mostly fights unarmed and occasionally does magic shit. Funnily enough no Bard feats or Performance training, but Poxface was definitely an inspiration.
>>150752850Awesome! The spirit of Poxface lives on!
Bumping for Dana Bas
