I'm going to continue storytiming my fantasy webcomic series Oi! Tales of Bardic Fury. It's set in 360 AD Ireland and follows the story of a bard-in-training who gets sent to a tiny village by the sea called Oi that never heard music before. This thread is chapter 28 and the epilogue chapter, from Oi volume 3- BURN YOUR IDOLS.Enjoy!Previous thread->>150928932
Chapter 28>bump if you're reading
>>151066063Dabump
It's Aideen’s mom! I'll write a summary of her deepest lore backstory I never got to draw at the end of storytiming this chapter.
End of Chapter 28>>151066362I don't actually have time atm, I'll have to write up the Aideen’s mom lore dump later.
>>151066063>>151066105>>151066125>>151066239>>151066254>>151066270Sinners, Irish version.
>>151065999What's the lore of that Skeleton girl? Why is she so bubbly?
>>151067304Dana is best girl
>>151065999Started reading this after seeing it in the catalog a few times, seems neat. Just read the solstice chapter and since you actually wrote lyrics I was wondering if you've done music to accompany the comic?
>>151065999Is this the thread?
Epilogue >>151067125Isn't that about vampires in the South?>>151067760My friend's ex boyfriend insisted he make a song. I used to have it uploaded on YouTube, I'll see if I could find it (it wasn't that good). I play saxophone and not Irish trad so anything I made wouldn't really fit the comic.>>151067856Yep, it's a storytime thread.
>>151067304>>151067734>What's the lore of that Skeleton girl? Why is she so bubbly?Basically a coping mechanism to deal with early ritual mind trauma.>childhood best friend of the male MC>won a junior music competition at age 7 with MC, ran by local druids>drugged up and taken to secret Moloch worship ritual>twin baby brothers are burned in front of her (those are the skulls she wears on her head)>Ritual interrupted by a witch who kills the moloch worshipers and rescues Dana, but not before the druids escape with the MC>spends her next years apprenticing as a witch, with motivation to save male MC, her best friend>now she's living her best life as a blood witch and likes fucking with people for fun, especially her female rival Aideen from the village of Oi, and her younger sister Rhiannon, the male MC's current girlfriend >does witchy shit and causes mischief
DUN DUN DUN
>>151065999Love this naked skeleton girl dearly
>>151068417She's the best.
>>151068459She's such a cutie with a nice and big booty
End of volume 3.Thank you for reading!>>151068555Aye. Bryan is a lucky bard.
>>151068267>>151068299lol
>>151068058>anything I made wouldn't really fit the comic.Fair, still interested in hearing what you and your friends made. Anything you've heard that does fit the comic, be it instrumentation or vibes? A few years ago someone storytimed It Hurts!! and included songs at specific points in the story and I found it really elevated the experience.
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>>151068640Selkie cake
>>151068941Ok, I unrivaled the video. I took it down originally because the guy who made it is a huge dickhead. I wrote the lyrics, it was meant to go to the tune of the will griggs on fire chant, but the who insisted on changing it up and being "unique" and imo it sounds like a SpongeBob Squarepants singalong, not at all the vibe I envisioned.https://youtu.be/9Bp0YWXP0JI?si=J3SOUffOyFvh4iOnI used to play in orchestra and go to competitions in middle school, that's why I'm always making stories about musicians and why Your Lie in April is my favorite comic, I relate so much to it.For music, I recommend the Pogues and Dubliners and Sinead O Connor's Irish trad music. I also like Enya. Luke Kelly is like a Star Seal in real life. If Oi was a cartoon, I'd want an upbeat celtic punk cover of the rocks of bawn to be the OP and pogues cover of dirty old town to be the end credits theme. I got to see the Pogues Christmas shows two years in a row in Brixton academy back when Shane was alive, they were the best concerts I've ever been too and I'm eternally grateful I got to see the legends in action.
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>>151071506I wouldn't say it sounds like Spongebob so much as it sounds like a mashup of a sea shanty and a football chant, which I think is mostly attributable to the vocals bearing an uncanny resemblance to Patchy the Pirate. Still I kinda like it, probably partly since I just read that bit, but aside from the mixing sounding off I kinda like the "drunk dude with gravelly voice tries to get the crowd hyped" vibe, shame it's not what you were going for. Nice recommendations, more than I was expecting desu. I checked out the Pogues a bit and was reminded that a lot rural American folk music/Bluegrass is derived from traditional Irish folk. Dirty Old Town was nice, though I'd use a modified version of it for the credits since it mentions some non period appropriate stuff like trains.
>>151065999I bump for she
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Just started reading, your paneling is very creative
>>151065999Nice trips. What's Dana's canon catfight record? Is she a jobber?
>>151065999need Dana Bas to put me in a headscissor
>>151073351>>151073991>What's Dana's canon catfight record? Is she a jobber?I'd say 55% win record. Her losses come primarily from being too aggressive and risky or going too hard against opponents much stronger than her. This fight style also has gotten her som wins vs opponents she has no business beating on paper. She's not a jobber, she's a main eventer!>>151072676Thank you.
>>151074498How's her record against Aideen?
Happy Halloween you filthy animals.>>151072160>I think is mostly attributable to the vocals bearing an uncanny resemblance to Patchy the Pirate.That, the BPM and the kid party singalong aspect are why I dislike it so much. Still he insisted on doing it and did it for free, so can't complain too much.Here's the song it's based on. I wanted it to be same bpm and melody only done with trad instruments https://youtu.be/4Z_XyGD4tEM?si=Z7LKZAFupezG--m8That Irish flag pic is funny.
>>151075081Not sure based on how many catfight commissions I've done, I think she usually loses. Aideen is her kryptonite and beats her ass in a straight fight, that's why she has to use subversive tactics, cheating and mindfuckery vs Aideen if she wants to win, like she does in volume 2.
Oi! It's the Samhain special
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>>151075142What percent chance does she have of beating Aideen in a fight if she's allowed to cheat with dirty moves and use psychology smack talk?
>>151074498>>151075142Have you ever drawn Dana putting that tomboy through the wringer? Because I really want to see her kick her ass and do it in front of an audience.
>>151074498>>151075120More of her nice butt?
>>151075120>>151065999Wife
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>>151078419>>151078776Lol>>151078124Here's a nice one.
>>151077452Awakened Aideen with her Will o the wisp mode would wreck Dana in a magic fight. In straight hand to hand Aideen would also wreck her as she has a foot in height and a huge strength and technique advantage vs Dana. Using trash talk and psychology would only improve her chances about 20%. Aideen's biggest weaknesses are making dumb bets, especially when she's drunk, and being an adrenaline junkie, so that's what Dana would have to exploit if she wants a W. In a referee'd match she'd have to use every heel tactic in the book, from eye gorges, chair shots, taking out the ref and using the numbers game to defeat Aideen, the champion of Oi.
>>151078124Forgot about this recent one
>>151077485No, but it would be fun to draw. I can't even imagine how Dana would be able to win. I have drawn several different commissions of Noa from World of Waves by Gooddraws putting her through the wringer though. Poor Aideen.
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>>151079812Can't post the rest on a blue board.
>>151079035Could Aideen resist a lesbian pollen attack from Dana?
>>151065999nice tits
>>151080822Unfortunately, Aideen has a -3 resistance on saving throws against Danas.
>>151081898I knew it. That tomboy's a total fag.
>>151081898gaaay
>>151083076She's whatever the lesbian equivalent of GAR is for Dana
>>151085770She's Dana's bitch forever.
Hey Omeow I'm thinking of doing a storytime of my own for my webcomic. Could you tell me what the image limit is on /co/? Can't find a straight answer anywhere.
>>151079786>>151079812>>151079829Perfect. Love seeing her humbled.
>>151083076>>151084582>>151085770>>151086209Who are we to judge?>>151086551Dunno>>151086658For some reason everyone likes seeing her lose.
>>151086551Irrc it’s 250
>>151065999bump
>>151068146the food porn page
>>151086815>For some reason everyone likes seeing her lose.Me personally, I just want to see her lose to Dana because I also want to lose to Dana
>>151088738But then Dana would rape you
>>151088093I want to fuck that food.
I'm happy for you OP, good stuff.
>>151089365Thanks anon!
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Love your shit man. Still have all your work proudly hung on my walls.
>>151089688>4chan flips all my images.God damn it.
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>>151081898>>151088776I'd pay good money to get molested by Dana for a night
>>151088093At this point in drawing the comic, I was rushing to end the chapter so I could publish and ship the tankobon. In hindsight, I should have drawn a bigger spread and more detailed food shots.>>151089688>>151089697>>151089713Based king, thank you again. I made sure to send you one of my best pages, with Dana holding the kitty. Glad you still like it.Sorry anons, Dana isn't real but I'm glad you think she's hot.I'm pretty busy this weekend but if you have any questions about the comic, or want advice about making comics, I'll try to answer it in this thread or the upcoming storytime thread for the Oi! Beach Episode OVA+ bonus comics. Thank you for the bumps and reading the comic, have a great weekend!
>bonus Dana fanarts by @Soandnb
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>>151090060>>151090034>>151090068Pretty cool
>>151066774Get fecked.
>>151090018Dana wins again
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