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>I shouldn't be in charge of writing cartoons
>I never went to school, not even a writer's club.
Tough luck, kid.

Also you're not allowed new ideas, I saw what your "new, original, fresh" ideas were.
Pick a lesser known IP like Mao Mao, Dan Vs, Hanazuki and try to continue it, remake it or reboot it. I guess inspiring yourself from video game IPs is fine, but I want to see your script and pitch bible. Pitch me your idea in a way that doesn't make me barf or make me realize you have 0 experience as a writer.
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>>151832983
I love rodent women.
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New good cartoons is all about supply and demand, there simply isn't anymore due to the internet. Video game stole all the attention and video games started stealing attention from one another with 2000 games a month on Steam getting 0 reviews.
Gen-alphas don't buy toys, don't watch cartoons and don't read. They don't do anything but watch TikTok.
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I have a sweet cartoon concept. Itll never happen :T
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>>151832983
Animal Crossing gave us some nice waifurs.
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>>151833144
You have 0 writing experience.

>It will be like a bad cartoon or one of IDW's comics or Netflix's cartoons.
So it will be abysmal 14-year old autistic slop by any year's standards ... at least before every millennial dies and the jews wipe out the George Jetson archives and Skibidi Toilet is considered the first 3 Star Wars films.
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>>151832983
Ok OP
I wrote this 3 years ago in like a day so it's not very good but it's exactly what you're asking for so
https://litter.catbox.moe/l943b9.pdf
https://litter.catbox.moe/q0c26m.pdf
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>>151833275
45 minutes isn't a movie , it's a special.
Try to use references that actually match such as "Victor transforms into a giant megazord and uses a giant lazer as his final trick". You don't have to reference the show when you reference the original inspiration.

My sincerest apologies for thinking
you were a thief, and mistaking you
for a wolf. I would ask you what
brings you to the valley, but I am
bound by the laws of this labd to
urgently return this mirror to the
king.
Out of character/the wrong kind of dialogue and style which Parker Simmons never talks in. There's a grammar error there. Too much detail on insignificant stuff such as the motorbike requiring a modification when it can just break out of bad luck, but fine let's say Victor sabotaged it to make it make sense.

Please don't copy the industry without copying its pros.
Scripts are a very antiquated way of writing dialogue/voice acting and letting your storyboard artist know what the fuck is going on. Unless you're doing a Hannah Barbera/anime production and they're all just talking heads like in your favourite HBO movies and sitcoms.

Otherwise B+ for effort.
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>>151832983
Here you go:

https://jmassat.com/2024/08/05/every-cartoon-pitch-and-writers-bible-on-archive-org/
https://heyzine.com/flip-book/c197ade347.html
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FL3TVUe7UJ7t4DLBkpJF_GpVsX7RGYF7zwkTusGl1Dk/edit?tab=t.0
https://heyzine.com/flip-book/ccb46cb6cf.html
https://heyzine.com/flip-book/2d32aeed0a.html



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