Previous thread: >>152395307>What is this thread about?A /co/ project about a female fighting tournament hosted in Hell where demons of different tribes and organizations compete for pride. Two nuns named Maria and Joan have entered Pandemonium to become champions and prove spirituality is superior to material hedonism represented by Hell's contract business.
>>152425600Characters:>MariaAll loving nun with life-force aura powers.>JoanMaria's sidekick. A tall amazon who takes her duties as a holy warrior extremely seriously. She believes a good demon is a tamed demon.>Pai (Paimon)Tomboy succubus. Believes that her people should tone down the sex because it degrades their powers. Accuses the succubus queen of secretly being a virgin.>Kim (Kimaris)Runty succubus whose license was revoked for not being sexy enough. She seeks revenge with gauntlets that turn her anger into power.>Bo (Botis)Popular demon with magical charisma. She loves to put on a show. Her long bangs are cute as hell.>EMMAPrideful vampire. Vampires actually came from witches making deals with demons. EMMA wants to show the demons what a bad decision that was.>Grave BoundFemale Frankenstein. Her inventor obtained the knowledge through a demon contract and she fights to make sure that contract never has to be paid.>Loreen/LorA werewolf created from a meek and cowardly woman making a contract. The more reserve a meek a human, the stronger and more aggressive their werewolf is. Loreen's werewolf side, Lor, was a rising star in Pandemonium, but her pentagram sign was damaged by a rival, and now Loreen's brain controls Lor's body. She has to find the courage and the skill to avoid getting taken apart in the ring.>RinA kitsune miko in service of Inari. Though she claims to fight in Pandemonium to spread Buddhism to Hell's demons, she secretly made a contract with a demon to take out the nuns and Pai in exchange for getting nine tails without having to wait 900 years.
Kim, sans behemoth gauntlets.
>>152396264You forgot about this character.
Why change the /co/ount title? Pretty sure this place was supposed to be for everyone to drop ideas and make seperate series about wrestling?
>>152426423Sorry about that. What's Melira's backstory again?>>152426511You can share them fore sure, but the Heel on Earth stuff is the largest project, and I'm not sure there's anything else big enough.I guess a proper title would be "/Co/ wrestling project: Pandemonium: Heel on Earth" but that's getting kind of wordy.Could we call it "Cow?" Co wrestling? But then again, it's more like MMA than wrestling.I think we should call it Heel on Earth, but with the notice that all wrestling and fighting babe ideas are welcome. I'll make sure the next OP includes a note about that.
>>152426659Thanks for making the thread, at least when im gone for a bit I know some people will make the thread. Also heres her backstory: >>152396862. Since she is a random old oc we can use her for multiple projects and make her a antagonist or other stuff. >Co wrestling? Sure fine.
>>152425771Two things I want to see1. Pai vs Joan where Maria has to watch and raise the winner's hand.2. Bo vs Kim to decide who the resident jobber is.
>>152426806Besides her missing headtie and the bolt on her head we never got her wrestling get up for gravebound queen.Costume concept 1:https://files.catbox.moe/ogbi1o.webpCostume concept 2:https://files.catbox.moe/jms9pb.pngCostume 3: https://files.catbox.moe/600oz8.jpgMiscellaneous costume deagins:https://files.catbox.moe/2f3h6j.pngSo its up to you guys to decide which one would fit best for her. Also for the werewolf girl we never decided what she would be. Are we just making her a big buff werewolf woman like i showed here >>152396242 or are we just making her normal sized young girl like this? >>152399367Or maybe we can just make these two a seperate transformation.
>>152425771Quick minor thing.EMA got one "M". It's a abbreviation of her full name of Elizabeth Mireille Arkhon. Still very much pronounced as Emma, though....or e-ma if you're being like that.
>>152427013I'd go with normal sized for Loreen. She should look a little different when Lor takes over, but it should be expressed through her mannerisms and the way she carries herself, not through an overt physical change.
>>152427013I figure Loreen with be more around normal or somewhere in the middle between EMA and Gravebound in terms of a body. Really boils down you how juxtapose you want a mousey werewolf.
>>152427067>>152427283I think Loreen should be about Joan sized.
Joan is quite simply best girl.
Bump
>>152427013I think she's best in that mechanics uniform.
>>152427013Costume 1 or 2 could work but a basic singlet wouldn't hurt either.
>>152429061Maybe her creator likes changing up her outfit every fight like a giant doll?
Rin. She uses magic to make it look like she has three tails instead of one. Illusions are her power and one of her most annoying moves is to make it look like she's just a little distance away from where she actually is. It throws off the timing of her opponents.
>>152429375One more thing. I still think she'd look better if she ditched the sandals and fought in just stockings.
Might as well repost what I already reposted in the /coc/ thread.>The Amazon talent Agency is a company that provides many wrestling leagues with memorable characters, but behind the showmanship there is a dark secret.>Their wrestlers are actually people drowning in debt that are forced to wrestle to pay it off. Doesn’t matter if you don’t look the part, using their shady DNA scrambling tech they can turn anyone into a customized powerhouse overnight.>Need a badguy, a babyface a jobber or just cheesecake? the company can deliver them.>Alignments are not what they seem, you might see Mother Russia suplexing American Beauty in the ring, but off-stage they’re just two regular women working to clear their loans.>The real split is between the ones desperate to pay their debt and return to normal lives, versus those who have become addicted to the ring and find themselves much better after the company changed them.>Mother Russia: A huge wall of muscles that can suplex anyone in the ring, She wasn't always the blonde powerhouse you see today, she used to be the owner of creole restaurant until a fast food chain drove her out of business leaving her with hundred of thousand of dollars in debt she needed to pay fast. >Talibanna, A swift and acrobatic wrestler, and enemy of the west, she used to the average all american girl, top grades and captain of the cheerleding team, she join the agency to pay her student loans, She is suppose to play the part of a villain but she is too much of a sweetheart which often causes problems between her and the agency. >Omega Bitch: A fabulous and showy wrestler who causes as much drama in the ring as she does out of it, loves humiliating her opponents and taking selfies next to her defeated enemies. Unlike others she loves her role as the top bitch and all her new fans. She'll do anything to keep her contract including undermining other wrestlers.
Maria!
>>152427910Pai vs Joan is gong to be so hot.
Pai!
Here's a question: should every match end in a humiliation, and if so what's everyone's signature humiliation?
>>152431348No, but some characters should have there own way of finishing a matchYou can have Maria finish a match by excorsing the demon peacefully and gracefully while Joan could just flat out destroy and eradicate them.Emma can just finish her opponents off by sucking their blood and draining them.And can have grave bound either bearhugging her victim and electrocuting or have her do a bistin crab maneuver that breaks the opponents back.Kim can probably do that humiliation thing or whatever.
>>152431348>>152431494Maria does the gentle Michael pose. One foot on the opponent to show dominance and a prayer.Joan dog walks, though probably varies it up.Maria wagers her cross. Pai wagers her belt. Kim might wager her gauntlets in a major title fight. It's interesting to note that Joan doesn't have a cross. Maybe she lost it to a demon?Pai could wager her virginity with those interested in making that wager with her. The nuns certainly wouldn't be interested in that. Kim would. Bo might.
I like Kim and Pai, but we need a traditional kinky sex fiend succubus to balance them out.
What is each girl's sex life like?
>>152431854>Pai, Maria, JoanCanonical virgins>KimLots and lots and lots and lots of sex, but she believes (wrongly) that she's a high class succubus so you better make it worth her time.>RinIs supposed to be a consecrated, virginal miko. It's a lie. She has an intense and passionate romance with a guy and it's the underlying reason why she wants her nine tails now and not in 900 years. She wants to be her best for him, so she can use her powers to give them the perfect family.>Grave Bound?????>EMAMoves from one toy and then to the next when she gets bored of the last.>Loreen/LorLoreen is a virgin in spirit if not in body. Lor is sexually impulsive, but only wants to have sex with interesting people.>BoHonestly, I'm not so sure here. I doubt she's a virgin, but not sex crazed either. I see her as a hopeless romantic. She wants to find someone that loves her as she is, without charisma superpowers, but she's afraid of being that vulnerable around people.
>>152432026>StraightPai, Maria, Joan(?), Rin, EMA, Bo>Mostly into menLor, had sex with a woman just to try it and experiment, because she's a being of pure id and impulse.>Men and WomenKim
>>152432071I don't think Pai would actually be straight. She'd be a virgin because of what she believes about succubus powers, but she'd be into both genders like Kim.
>>152432026Gravebound is straight. Since is based off on both Frankenstein and Frankensteins bride. Usually thinks about finding a man when she is relaxing or bored.
>>152426423And for Melira she would most likely have a boyfriend or two and had sex before.
>>152429385why don't you like the sandals? I think they make her look more shrine maiden-y
So that’s a lot of pages for my own thread huh. I know you guys will be posting your own threads in the future, and I hope to see all of them!If anyone wants me to write any more backstory or plot ideas just ask! Now that the thread is up, it’s time for some wrestling.
>>152429375So, colors for Rin, what do we think? Obviously red and white is a must for the outfit, in order for her to be a miko. But when it comes to the hair it's another issue. Should we go with black, the default asian hair color? Or something like an red/orange? White is a possibility but might make her colors too similar to Kim who already has white and red for her hair.
>>152432026>Rin wants to be her best for him, so she can use her powers to give them the perfect family.That's fucking adorable
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>>152432734They just look kind of awkward to me, but if people like them people like them.>>152432794Sure post all the ideas you have.
>>152433931I would make black the default, but since she casts illusions, she can change her hair color on a whim.
>>152433931>>152436353Maybe red and black? Somehow?
>>152425600What would her role be?
>>152436667Got to be 18+ to get inside the arena with all the topless succubus ring girls.
>>152433931Is this Dynamo Anon?
>>152433931Can we make rin have the ability to transform and change into a anthro white fox that access ancient fire abilities and having multiple tails to throw projectiles and grapple enemies? Or should she be a seperate character that belongs in the same faction as rin?
>>152436927This wouldn't be a bad idea to give Rin a super-mode where she looks foxier. It makes her stronger, maybe even strong enough to take down Maria, but it's at the cost of dropping her tail illusion, so everyone will know she really only has one tail.It's something she'll only activate if she's losing and knows her boyfriend is watching the fight.
>>152427910I ship them.
>>152437522Toxic doomed yuri?
>>152437651Yep.
>>152433931Have you ever drawn Bo?
>>152437716Or... can Kim be redeemed?
>>152437947>Dominated so hard she becomes a demon nunJoan's goal for all demons, really. She shatters their egos so they can be put back together.
I'm thinking about an announcer/commentator who will play as the one playing on the crowd's feelings and hype; however, they are neutral and just want to make a good show
>>152438264Any idea of what they could look like? Maybe base it off the seven deadly sins called mammon the greed.
>>152438133A dominatrix nun? Sounds to me like Maria wouldn't be all too happy about that...
>>152438264Perhaps a Siren. A retired fighter turned commentator.Instead of luring sailors to their death, she just uses her voice to sell the match. Because she loves the sport.Or maybe a Banshee.
>>152438264it seems that i upoladed the wrong pic>>152436716>Is this Dynamo Anon?no he isn't, that will be me>>152438378hmm i'm thinking about making them a fallen angel that, yeah, even though they were kicked out of heaven, they don't like hell, which makes them in the center.As for their look i'm thinking their face is hidden as their real form is scary (however, they don't fight)something like this? https://files.catbox.moe/94z0xo.jpgalso here's my first attempt for the werewolf girl, I'm still working on it so feel free to suggest
>>152438264Bo already kind of does that, though she's also a fighter. Maybe they're from the same tribe? Their sin theme could be pride, like how the sin theme of succubi is wrath. Her pride is all in the show, so she's normally very humble but will do anything possible to destroy anyone that insults Pandemonium.>>152438378I remember someone mentioned Mammon having a body made of precious metals and fighting in a bikini colored like dollars.
>>152438666No snout, looks too anthro. She should be more Lon Chaney Jr with a flatter face
>>152438505They butt heads over how into Joan gets over matches with humiliation stakes. If Joan goes too far. Maria might have to take her down in the arena.>>152438630I want a siren as a succubus fighter. She lulls her opponents into gentle submission. She has a rivalry with a dominatrix succubus who likes rough submission.
>>152438863Speaking of humiliation, I'd like to reiterate an idea for a match I previously shared:>Before the match, both fighters have to put in buttplugs. Afterwards, the loser gets into downward dog, and the winner manually removes their bottom and their buttplug right there in the middle of the ring.Is that too much? Or is it delightfully devilish?
>>152438666Hey Dynamo anon. Good to see you.>LoreenLove the glove and wrist wraps. I agree with the other anon, no snout, more like Universal's Larry Talbot.Her expression is good for Lor being in control, but she should look nervous when she's Loreen.Wrestling singlet looks a little plain on her. Maybe something more ripped up and wild? Is that belt supposed to be a champion belt of some kind?I wouldn't have her wear a collar unless this is her after losing a bet match (did she fight Joan?)
>>152438913That sounds a bit much for the setting. I think everyone is aiming for Rumble Roses, not Ultimate Surrender.
>>152438913Really living up to your name there.
>>152438666Who should Loreen fight first?
>>152438666Don't forget a damaged pentagram somewhere on her body. Maybe she could wear a two-piece with the pentagram on her stomach?
>>152438666Looks good. Love the snout as well.. personally think she should have some scars and sharp fangs.
>>152438924Yeah, the first time I brought up the idea, someone also said it was a bit much. But I do think something like that would make sense for, say, a secret underground wrestling ring of demons who are just a bit too kinky for the regular leagues.>>152438955I like big butts and I cannot lie.
>>152438666>666 A highly appropriate post. Does this mean Loreen is going to clean up in the rankings, or will she fall into loser purgatory?>>152438799A vote no snout.>>152438863Joan doesn't believe she's doing anything wrong. The stakes of the match are the stakes of the match. She's only doing what's agreed upon. Maria doesn't see it that way. She sees Joan is reveling in the humiliations, and her revelry is not reflective of their mission.Maria might have to show Joan why she's the sidekick.
>>152438666>666This means Loreen is Hell's champion, destined to fight Maria for the title of Queen of Pandemonium.>>152438969I want to see her fight Pai. Wild strength against martial arts skill.>>152439010This for sure. The pentagram ties her into the Hell lore and it being damaged is why she has the Lor/Loreen problem.>>152439025She's already got a fang. Scars? I'm not sure. They would look cool on her, but how does a shapeshifter get scars? Her body should recover every time she switches back to human.Hold on. I think I got an idea.What if one of her rivals had claws enchanted to give her wounds that either couldn't heal or heal very slowly? Her goal was to scratch out the pentagram and prevent Loreen the human from ever changing to Lor the wolf, but they only scratched it a little, which is why Loreen is in the wolf body and Lor is in the human body. It didn't destroy the enchantment, but it warped it.So I would say some claw marks around the belly.
>>152438666What's her fur and hair color?
>>152438666Once you get Loreen's look down, how about another fight?
>>152433931>>152438666Rin vs Loreen?
>>152438666>666nice
>>152440526That sounds like a good match.
Has all the story and character info been compiled into a single doc yet?
>>152438264To throw in some other ideas:A Lamia being more of technical analyst. She knows holds, being a snake and all.Or a Cyclops. Who's eye is always on the action.
>>152443083I'll try and write a setting introduction and a few character bios.
kim licking joan's abs
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Pai vs Joan pleae
>>152444476>>152446339The winner of Joan vs Pai has to kneel down and kiss the winner's abs.
We need a sexy siren succubus submissionists. I like Kim and Pai, but there needs to be a succubus who looks like a traditional succubus. >>152443133Love the cyclops idea. Maybe she's an oni?
>>152447145I'd love to see a trad succubus.
Here's a little lore note on succubus life drain power.The magic behind the life drain is based on dominance and submission. When succubi are in a dominant position, either in grappling or sexual terms, energy flows from their opponent into them. The more dominant the position, the stronger the drain. Knee on belly drains a little strength slowly. Shoulders pinned drains a greater amount faster. A submission hold perfectly locked in drains the opponent dry in seconds. A foot on a beaten opponent's face drains the opponent instantly.There is a downside. If the succubus is in a submissive position, the drain works in reverse, and power flows from the succubus into their opponent. Succubus learn how to block this flow with training, but never completely.It's risky to grapple with a succubus because once they lock in a submission hold, the fight's over in seconds, but a trained grappler can turn the tables on them.>About sex vs exerciseSuccubus have long believed that the key to power is having lots and lots and lots of sex. Sex stresses the power drain magic to its utmost. Energy bounces from the succubus to her partner and back again until it crashes into her being. A succubus feels like an invincible goddess after sex, and their partners often have to nap for days. The problem is while it feels great, it doesn't actually increase a succubus' power. It's all placebo, and too much sex actually wears down the power. The myth of sex=power was propagated by Ashley (Asmodeus) the succubus queen to prevent any succubus from challenging her because she's secretly a virgin.
>>152448249How long does the drain last?
>>152437522>>152439065>>152437651>>152437716"y'all need Jesus in your lives!"
>>152449399I want to see her make her opponent bow like that.
What's the best Joan ship? Maria? Kim? Pai?
>>152450145I vote for Pai.
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I wonder what the first demon vs demon fight will be?
>>152448249Cool ideas.
>>152452417I'd like to see Bo win a match.
>>152453590She doesn't seem like a favorite, but she's my favorite. I love the long bangs.
Decided to come up with another OC.For this one her name is is Beezette. She is insect wrestler with a bee motif. For this project she woukd be based off beezlebub and would base around her moveset of severe sting and powerful attacks that lead into devestating suplex and other insect abilties she has.For her backstory in this specific story it can go two ways.For the this one she is one of beezlebubs soldier/ daughter that helps her father control hell and earn her right as a queen by destroying all of her enemies alongside the holy warriors as weapon.The second idea is her being beezebub herself. A powerful She is a 7ft lightweight wrestler who rules hell and destroys all in her wake. Her main goal to expand her influence across the world by destroying humans and eliminating all the other high ranking demons like her. Just like the seven demons like her she is one ofmthe strongest in this world and manages some control of heel on earth wrestling and maintains a specific center of hell. Heres a design that she would mostly be based on.
>>152454268Heres some more examples of what she can look based off the first design and some more ideas like, color and adding fake wings as a cape and some fuzz on her cape.Her main personality would be simple. An strict a and prideful woman who will fight anyone to maintain her power as a ruler and showing her dominance in a fight and her rule and is incredibly stubborn to ever admit defeat.She yearns and hungers to fight strong opponents to he point that it almost consumes her. She has an addiction to control and take things through force and consumes defeated fighters life force in order to gain strength at a fast rate and maintain her body. Despite being a demon she plays by the book and fights fair and refueses to use cheap tactics. She is willing to to do anything to win a fight. If she ever loses she gives respect towards the Victor and admire their strength. Even if she wins she will always admire a strong opponent that pushes her to try.
>>152454554Also think we should focus more. On the seven deadly sins and see what we can do with them and what they control specifically and make up their relationship with each other. Like rivalries or hatred with each other.
>>152454554>An strict a and prideful woman who will fight anyone to maintain her power as a ruler and showing her dominance in a fight and her rule and is incredibly stubborn to ever admit defeat.vs. EMA it'll the the unstoppable haughtiness vs the immovable ego.
>>152454739More like unstoppable hotness, am I right?
>>152454581There's Mammon (Mamie?) for Greed and Ashley for Lust. Bo might be part of a race of demons based on pride.
>>152453590the demons in general could use some more wins
>>152425600fucking lold did your local church come up with the idea?
>>152456295if your local church supports nuns in sexy wrestling costumes
>>152454268Her movset?
>>152455459Initially misread Mamie as Marnie, and wow. Remember her? What happened to her?
how often should threads be, weekly? monthly?
Most likely weekly. Every tuesday at least.
I was kind of hoping the old name, Submission Queens, would stick, so we could have threads every Sat/Sun and call them "Submission Sat/Sun"
>>152458445That sounds way better honestly
>>152459149Weekly might be for the best.
i tried to combine my Fallen Angel and Anon's Cyclop idea to make this.Feel free to do whatever you want with her, but personally, I see her as a neutral entity who just wants to entertain herself.I've also been busy with work lately, but I will try to finish the Loreen art I started.
>>152461109Nice anon, you also wanna try making this guy's idea as well? >>152454554>>152454268
>>152461109I love her! I like the idea of her being neutral. She's someone that can be a boss battle for demon characters and holy warriors.
>>152461109Does she wrestle in her suit? Because that's kind of hot.
>>152461109Was she always neutral? Took no side during the rebellion of angels?
>>152454268>alongside the holy warriors as weaponDoes she pretend to be their ally?
So, Marnie Smith was originally an expy of Andi from Invincible Fight Girl, created when this series was little more than an IFG fanfic. However, I found her character concept interesting, and that got me thinking that maybe we can rework her and bring her back. Here's her original bio:>Marine Smith>Age 14>She was born in a peaceful small town where fighters are rare and fighting is looked down upon>Grew up mesmerized by an old UWF Grand Tournament reel she found in her attic >Especially a legendary young champion from the first GOF, not much older than herself>who fought with heart, humor, and unbreakable resolve >She saw a lot of her self in the petite old champion >She spent her childhood practicing with friends and makeshift Ref Bot toys, but most kids quit as they grew up. >She never did>Marine wants to become a real fighter so badly that her dream borders on obsession. >She believes deep down that she can be a fighter to reach the top and change the world
Also, her name was originally "Marine" which I misread as "Marnie" and suggested we name her that. Some other anons suggested that "Marine" could be her nickname, and she could be the youngest of a family of sailors, with a hairstyle reminiscent of a starfish, to boot. Also, someone said:>Marine uses her new skill, nautical nonsense, then super squirterWhich made me giggle. Someone else also had an idea for a potential "rivals to lovers" storyline:>older wrestlelady retired babyface who left after seeing how formulaic it is at the top, hates the establishment (UWF?)>finds bratty girl who doesn't know how to fight but knows how to play dirty to get out of situations >feeds the girl, raises her as if she was a daughter, trains her to fight and shows her some humility and respect>Trainee wants to go heel since it fits their personality better but conflicted because she doesn't want to disappoint her "mom">Trainee goes on the circuit, does pretty awful but builds some a loyal fanbase (think Maki Itoh), finds a rival in a nervous babyface girl who is scarily good at attacking weak points, becomes really good friends with her.>they both slowly rise up in their lower ranks and earn respect and skill >nervous girl gets new manager who is a fucked up heel from the dangerous ECW branch, has her put her life more on the line>Trainee gets decently popular and earns a title shot, this is her big chance to get more eyes on her and fight bigger matches etc>It's against the babyface rival who is now ruthless and bloodthirsty
>Trainee injures her foot in a fight, can't make it, rival's trainer makes joke about how they'll delay the fight if the retiree can last 10 minutes in the ring with the rival>Retiree takes the chance, and even has the upper hand at first until her weaknesses get exploited. She's on the floor and bleeding, very injured but keeps standing up>Rival goes hard each time thinking it'd be less cruel to knock her out and save the trainer from getting too hurt, but keeps escalating as the time gets closer to 10 minutes>retiree uses all her strength to get up from a sledge to the arm that shatters something, chair shot to the face and drops, at 10 minutes 12 seconds>rival sees the pool of blood and her mood changes completely, listens for a heartbeat and hears none. Ignores her own trainer to help bring the retiree to the medics, in tears>trainee is at home watching but rushes to the hospital to see that her coach is in critical condition but living (her heart is located on the other side, which is why the heartbeat seemed so faint), rival was by retiree's side for as long as she was allowed, slept in reception>trainee wants to get revenge but her coach grabs her arm with the bit of strength she has left, telling her that it was partially her own fault for not stopping but she couldn't let down her daughter or their dream to show up the establishment>trainee spends time training while retiree recovers at the hospital, rival and coach temporarily suspended for internal review>trainee sees rival come into the gym one day and is about to get upset but listens to her when she says she wants to have a secret fight away from everybody in which trainee can really let loose and get her revenge
>Rival feels guilty and realized she grew so distant from her friend, knows things won't ever go back to normal and asks if trainee can go all out, trainee agrees only if the same goes for the Rival>they have a bloody fight, use all the tricks they can, but Trainee just barely wins, knocking an exhausted rival down. Trainee lifts a chair about to bludgeon rival into a coma or worse, but tears stream from her eyes and she can't>Trainee hugs her Rival and each realizes without words the regret and care they each have. Rival asks if they can still hang out after the match and Trainee jokes and says they can have a coffee date if the Rival wins, but only if she wins. >Both train for their respective match and after a long time, they each return for the day of the match, coachless (retiree at the hospital, rival's trainer fired for endangering her talents and the rest)>it's a long fight and the crowd goes wild for the both of them, but the Rival lands her big move on the Trainee. Both topple but the trainee, like her coach did, stands up for a bit, screams into the air, before falling back down from exhaustion. Rival barely manages to stand up as she pins trainee for the win, as they both lie there tied. Ding ding ding>The match is over but trainee can't help but be okay knowing that she tried her best and was so close. >Retiree shows up out of the hospital, running as fast as she can with her cast on. She gets helped on by Rival as trainee hears her and drags herself over to her adopted mother to cry and hug her. Retiree stops Rival before she leaves the ring and holds the two of them, asking for the mic
>"I left wrestling long ago thinking it lost something, wasn't the same. I think it lost its spirit. Wrestling's spirit was stolen by boring, power-hungry fossils desperate to play kingmaker. Today though, I am proud to have witnessed with you all, its rebirth! These two girls, and many more who join them in the roster, they're the future! They'll prove to the UWF, they'll prove to the WORLD, what wrestling is all about!" >Queue all three hugging in the center of the ring.There was also talk of an epilogue of sorts, where the rival and trainee are on that date, and really hit it off, finding out they both really enjoy each other's company and making plans to get into more shenanigans.I really do wanna to see it fleshed out into a proper narrative, but NOT because I'm looking for characters to ship, and the coffee date epilouge sounds like it would be absolutely adorable if it were fleshed out. DEFINITELY not. Although, I'd write a more fleshed-out coffee date epilogue myself, should we do something with this.
>>152463246>Age 14No man, no. Not for something like this.
>>152463350That was just part of the original post. I'm not claiming to have originally written any of this, but I do think making some changes, like aging her up and putting her on the side of either angels or demons, would be a good call.
>>152463371Maybe she's part sea demon? Part siren or something like that?
>>152463428Oh, that's a good idea. Maybe she has a special appreciation for sailors and fisherman?
>>152463458Maybe it's in her blood to want to perform for people since she's part siren? It's what attracts her to the spectacle of Pandemonium fighting.
>>152461109What's her name?
>>152464052Sounds like a cool idea!! Could she be half-human, half-siren? The lovechild of a siren and her prey, who she actually developed feelings for and wanted to start a life with.
>>152464530Yeah half human half siren.
>>152464799Alright, is her family supportive of her dreams, or do they want her to embrace her demon side and disavow humanity?
>>152464857Dad wants her to be more human, mom wants her to be more demon. It creates family strife.
>>152462441She just takes her heels off and steps on the mat. She's a bad bitch.
>>152464857Her being supported by her parents, even the fishing town she’s from, adds a fun layer to her. Everyone assumes she’s ensnared her town and other siren things, but she’s genuine in her desire to preform and to make her home proud, but she also can’t turn her siren voice off. So she enthralls people by accident.
>>152465226I'm imagining that she participates in wrestling as an escape what her family and her hometown expects of her. She loves both her parents, but she loves performing and entertaining people more, though she sometimes succeeds in enthralling people a little too much.
>>152461109How about an eye appearing instead of a seal or sigil whenever someone submits to her?
>>152465522Someone mentioned there being a siren succubus. It would be interesting for her to be Marnie's rival. Full siren vs half-siren.
>>152461109pretty neat design
>>152467565She left heaven to become a goddess in Mesopotamia mortals called Ishtar and Asherah. After millennia of laying low and watching humanity grow without guidance, she enters Pandemonium to rediscover the thrill of divine combat. There was a time when warriors and warrior maidens bowed to her and worshipped her as a war goddess. She would like to experience that again and thinks it would be fun to earn her worship by personally defeating every Pandemonium contestant worth fighting.She doesn't consider herself a demon, nor does she consider herself an angel. She simply is herself, and she likes it that way.
>>152461109She's the CEO of a major entertainment conglomerate. They produce gacha games so addictive the FDA is looking in to whether they can regulate them as drugs. The queens of Hell don't like her because she's competing with their own entertainment industries.She's a cool-headed CEO and dispatches her foes in the boardroom and ring with cold, haughty disdain, but she does show some emotion if her opponent puts up enough of a fight.>>152462441>>152465239She makes her opponents fetch her heels as part of their after match humiliation.>>152467756I like this.
>>152467756>>152468259>When she sees a classic in the ring.>When she sees that warrior spirit.
>>152468302She's got a complicated relationship with warriors as her history with Gilgamesh shows. She likes pushing them to their limits and subduing them, but she can be affectionate to those that give her a good fight. Warriors that submit to her after putting up a struggle are her worshippers, and she can be protective of her worshippers. She might even bless them.Here's another idea. What if she was secretly the angel that wrestled with Jacob? She's actually the one Pai wants to fight, she just doesn't know it yet.
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>>152466671Well, that just makes the "enemies to lovers" angle all the more interesting
