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The End of Alife
https://buttsmithy.com/archives/comic/epilogue-1

36 epilogue pages just dropped. There's some fucking and Alfie will be fucking her step-mother. Sorry incestbros but we were denied the ultimate prize.
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>>152789956
a ruined climax
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>>152789956
>Alife
Now there's going to be more threads of this made because I fucked up the name and they won't find this thread because of it.
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>>152789968
It's a survival tactic at this point. Posting completely fictional incest on the internet will either make you a target for hordes of discord shartly schizo kids or fined/arrested by your own government.
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>>152789956
Might check later but is the mom still with the dude she was travelling with?
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>>152790020
Yes. Alfie even walks in on her going down on him. Mother also gets some snake action.
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>>152790078
Is snek stepmom?
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>>152789956
Is now the right time to start reading Alfie?
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>>152790124
No.
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I misspoke. Alfie gets snaked. Next page. Can't post that here.
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>>152790194
Nah I checked it out and it reminded that Incase never had a problem drawing sexy ladies getting fucked sexily.
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>>152789956
I'll have to check it out when not at work.

I know it seemed like he was ready to finish the story for a few chapters now so I am glad there is SOME kind of ending.

Know a lot of people ranted and dropped it around the Snake lady backstory but still far from the worst porncomic.
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>Bernard is just happy to play babysitter for a buch of multiracial bastards
aight
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>>152789956
>Alfie walking in on Vera and Cil but not the other way around
boring
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>>152789956
Where's the goblin fucking, you said there would be goblin fucking
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>>152790194
>Tortured by Vera reading her poems
>gets immediate revenge by fucking her Daughter
SNEK NEVER PUNISHED
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>>152790176
Incase find new ways to be a total degenerate, the dick girls and gay shit barely even qualify anymore.
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>>152789956
>Seven Years Later
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>Mel gets impregnated by Alfie's dad and his gay lover
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>>152790889
Its transactional, he just needs a beard
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>>152789956
I can't believe that Alfie found her true calling.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QLO4tg0ubXc
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>>152790957
Yep. He needs a beard, and she needs someone who won't care or ask questions about how many other people she is fucking.
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>No final dicking for Alfie not even some flirting
Making Alfie ""bi""" was a mistake especially since incase committed to making all the lesbians fucking horrible. Ozge was immature and judgemental, Lydia was a hypocrite and a bitch, Mel is now banging Alfie's dad. Rug was ok but she barely a character. It's like he wanted to make sure neither side was happy.
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>>152791065
Mel was never a lesbian, she was always just a total slut. Her very first appearance is banging a human dude despite being married.
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>>152791079
yeah, I should probably say female romantic options. Since technically isn't just lesbian either since she is with Marco and even did it with a male goat person.
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>in a world with Giants, orcs, pig men, dragons, and lanky goat people, Alfie never touches a larger than human dick in this size difference porn comic
>The giant snake woman only got one panel with Alfie and the Ozge scene was worst sex scene in the comic, somehow most Alfie's lez scenes are with women of equal size
Incase is an idiot and wasted the entire premise of the comic
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>>152789987
Don't worry anon you said her name in the post so it can still be found
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>>152790176
After seven years of boning each other, how have they not learned to get along?
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i chuckled
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>>152791292
The entire comic never should have gone beyond the initial setup of "halfling girl decides to lewd with a traveling human". Just 20ish pages and done. The fact that Incase has burned 13 years on this shit is ridiculous.
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>>152791622
According to the end it was 3 chapters and the earlier alfie chapters were only a few pages
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Final words
Somewhere around late 2013 I’ve read a good chunk of the Superior Spider-Man comic run. It’s about Otto Octavius becoming Spider-man, and trying to do his best to fill Peter Parker’s shoes. I honestly don’t remember if the story was any good, but I do remember that one of the characters in it had a pretty major impact on my life: Anna Maria Marconi, his love interest. A woman with dwarfism.

Wanting to express my appreciation for the lady, I wanted to draw fanart of her. But, can a porn artist draw little people? I never considered the idea before, so I searched the internet for such works and oh boy, have I found them. That’s how I discovered shortstacks and thus began my couple year long interest in them.

Alfie, as a character was born in those early days. I’ve doodled a bunch of shorties, and one design kept coming back- a long haired, pointy eared kind of hobbit like girl with intense cuteness about her. I named her Alfie, because she’s short, hairy and likes pussy.

If you don’t get the joke, watch a couple of episodes of Alf.

Around the same time I’ve been psyching myself up to write and draw a longer porn comic, that attempts to marry plot and porn in a meaningful way. Alfie seemed like a good fit for the main character- just archetypical enough a character to draw the reader in without spending too much time on exposition.

Alfie was meant to be maybe three chapters long. Maybe ninety pages when it comes down to it. I did not want to get bogged down with a long story. I knew the perils of long form webcomics. I am no fool. But then, came Vera and my reason crumbled.
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I thought it was cute.
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>>152791736
Back then, I was terrified of my audience abandoning the story, the second the sex stops. Halfway through chapter one, I was becoming nervous about the distinct lack of fucking. Why, there’s been like seven pages since any porn happened! I decided that I needed some eye-candy to keep the reader’s attention. Originally, Alfie was meant to meet up with her cranky old father- a minor character that did not matter much- but in a spur of anxious fanservice, I’ve changed the character to Alfie’s mom, without even changing the dialogue.

The second I saw the two of them on the page, and the positive response from the readers at the time, I knew I had something here. Between chapter 1 and 2 I re-wrote the entire story to center around these two’s relationship and the way they both change over the course of the comic. Vera revealing the tender heart beneath the mean exterior, and Alfie revealing all the jagged edges hidden behind the cuteness.

That was the only part of the whole damn comic I had planned out. Everything else changed several dozen times over, but the relationship between the Tolman girls had always been my guiding star. No matter how much of a tangled mess the rest of the story was, I think that’s the one thing that kept the whole thing together.

It’s been around twelve years (I can’t be bothered to check, sorry) since I’ve begun this comic and I can not be objective about it. I love and hate it too much. I wanted to quit it too many times to count, but I always knew I could not, because then Alfie and Vera would not get a proper ending they deserved.

Let’s just say that the whole thing had been a labour of love, with all the good and terrible things that phrase entails.

I hope that it had been a good read for you and maybe you found it meaningful in some way.

-InCase
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>>152790176
i guess her dad's still in the closet huh
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>>152789956
>7 years later
>shes still waking up next to goblins after fucking them all night

Shes just like me.
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>>152791736
Amazing that Dan Slott of all people was responsible for inspiring this comic.
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>>152790957
I'd say people thinking you're a cuck is worse than people knowing you're gay
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>>152789956
Is it too late for Incase to draw some Alfie and Vera lesbian incest?
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>>152789956
that was nice
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So the big goblin secret isn't really something that would get them mobbed in itself, that generation was just excessively paranoid after the prior generation somehow sparked a pogrom?
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>>152791622
Presumably he was also doing other things.
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>>152792102
They just adapt to whatevers happening at the time

>first gens escaped nearly genocided and goes into hiding with total secrecy
>goblins are rarely scene and almost a fairy tale

>second generations after the total secrecy are loudmouthed sex addicts that increase their numbers
>goblins fucking everything that comes near their territory creating friendly ties with other races/factions/locations

>third generations are smarter and tired of the older gens being totally retarded sex addicts that get crushed by rocks
>focus on building up their society and industry now that they have a bigger population
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Alfie hardcover when?
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give me level headed and industrious gobbo wife
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>>152791997
In our society, maybe, but remember the not!Hobbits are super repressed and they will absolutely toss this dude out for buttfucking. That's kind of what the entire thing with her parents was about: Vera gave up and settled down, stewing because it was the only way to stay in that society. Her father was the same, wanting to keep up appearances and, even more than Vera, didn't want to deal with confrontation. With the cheating, people just whisper but because of their society they won't actually rock the boat. He'd much rather everyone know he's a cuckold, rather than them finding out he's gay and having to deal with the fall out of that.
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>>152792102
>>152792197

I wonder if the generation before the secrecy adapted in a way that made them hostile or otherwise dangerous, prompting the extermination campaign against them.
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>>152792267
Gobbo Gyatt
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I hope this frees Incase up to do some different stuff. I don't like shortstacks or plot-heavy porn, so it's been a bummer watching him put do much time into this
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>>152789956
>Alfie will be fucking her step-mother
>step
And dropped.
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>>152791736
>This whole porn comic was inspired by Otto Octavius in Peter Parker's body fucking a midget woman he met at work
>dedicates 13 years to it
my fucking sides
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>>152792364
I'd kill to be able to draw well. I've wanted to do a plot-heavy porn comic for ages. I spoke about it on /sp/ yesterday, at least a part of it, they told me to write it and find an artist to do it for me because they'd read it.
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>>152792323
The generation before was probably doing typical goblin shit and pissed off the wrong king/city. Too much robbing and pillaging of the local area. Maybe they even had a decent goblin city built up like the new generations trying to do, but got their asses kicked back into the stone age.
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13 years and he still didn't learn the difference between a futanari and a shemale. Not that it is particularly unique for western artists.
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>>152789956
good finale. Good comic, good times.
Like the goblin lady said; it's in the past. It's dead and done. Live in the present.
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>>152792197
Where will they go from here?
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>>152792398
Should’ve been Vera
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>>152792688
Probably a somewhat normal fantasy society focused around building things for other races, like Dwarves. But all lesbian goblins.

They have no males, so they still need to fuck other races to get pregnant and reproduce, but we can already see their leader whos banging Alfie is kind of uptight and serious. And the young goblin girls in white dresses are very friendly and peaceful. Totally opposite from the previous generation of goblins. If they all end up more like their current leader the whole society will probably get along just fine.
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>>152792747
They won't. The goblins cannot choose what their generational adaptation is. Its emergent, not intentional. We have already seen what the next generation of goblins is, and they are hippie peace lovers. This isn't a negative thing, but it might also lack the intellectual pragmatism of Bits generation that built this successful goblin society in the first place.

Unfortunately, what the goblins need is to be farmed. Cultivated. Intentionally bred and maintained in a useful, successful balance of their natural inclinations and specific adaptations. This means they need an overseer that has the foresight and will to manage such a race for both their own good and the elves own profit.

What I'm saying is, Alduin or someone like him is essentially going to have to shadow-lead the goblins to keep them from accidentally going down a bad evolutionary reaction path and fucking the whole thing up.
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>>152791292
It is pretty fucking disappointing the potential this comic wasted. The hot redhead goblin never fucks, the whole time I was waiting for Alfie to get completely tailed and it never happened, just an all around major shortage of porn in this porn comic
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>>152791292
Personally I'd have Alfie get a stable relationship with a human guy and then fuck exotic bitches with him, but that's cause I like self-insert ffmslop.
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>>152789956
Will he finish the Nun and Witch comic now?
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>>152792188
Metric shit-tons of futa garbage
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>>152792267
Fuck elves
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>>152791736
You left out the part where you drew Anna-Maria for us, InCase
https://the-collection.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=25734
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>>152790176
Does this page confirm that Incase knew about the Alfie/Vera incest some people wanted?
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>>152793097
Of course he knew. No one was keeping that shit secret, anon.
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>>152793131
Now that it’s over, do you think he’ll finally do it?
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>>152793192
No he'll put dicks on them
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Show me spider sex Incase, you bi-bastard!
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>>152793245
Disappointing, but I’ll take what I can get
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>>152789956
I'm glad it's finally over so he can do something else. Another demon sex thing maybe
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>>152793097
Half the epilogue was crowd pleasing anon. Plus he is known to browse /co/
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>>152793403
Yeah, but I was hoping for something more overt when it came to Alfie/Vera, you know?
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>>152793425
Sorry, but thats the one thing you were never going to get.
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>>152790194
I still hate the snake bitches
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>>152793399
>>152792364
Incase draws stuff all the time and has spent the last 4 years drawing everything EXCEPT Alfie. Between his injury and how draining Alfie could he is never doing another long comic and barely anything longer than 3 pages now. Also he hasn't drawn a single havling, shortstack, or goblin outside this comic in god knows how long
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>>152792487
Actually, all those dicked women in his comics/art are trans women, straight from the word of god himself
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>>152791292
>>152791622
>>152791680
>>152793016
This was the cheesiest, most hippie-ish comic I've ever read. Hentai is miles ahead of this, and I mean it. In case was far too ambitious for its own good, more concerned with writing a melodrama with a few sex scenes than a cohesive story with actions and consequences. Our protagonist never grew up or matured; on the contrary, she accepted that she's a walking, lustful mess who answers to no one. It's the typical feminist story we see everywhere, and making Alfie a lesbian only reaffirms that, in case she is a woman, since she glorifies lesbian sex and the idea that there's no such thing as love. If your heart gets broken, you'll eventually find someone, so there's no rush!
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>>152793438
Well, it’s okay. Maybe another time.
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Is Lydia pregnant or fat in this
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>>152793503
Pregnant
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Alfie is a piece of shit XD
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>>152793464
Nope, it's gonna be dickgirls until the end of time.
Gonna assume all his pitches to Image, animation companies, etc. were rejected and gushing lady weiners are his future.
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>Marco impregnated his lesbian (?) best friend
>multiple times
Dude's is living the dream. Needs to get on working out his problems, though, his funk is still funking up the place.
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>>152793483
She figured out how to be a bad person successfully, that's a story.
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why does alfie's have billie eilish hair
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>>152793561
Alfie said they have three kids already but I only caught two.
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>>152793561
is that a c section scar
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Why can't this strip be about my fetishes for once
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>>152793097
Maybe he'll do a non-canon spin off where that happens, he can't just tease us forever
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>>152791754
>That was the only part of the whole damn comic I had planned out. Everything else changed several dozen times over,
I think this was biggest issue and probably why it took so long. A lot plot showed up just to never be mentioned again
>the red woods
>Hannah helping Alfie resolve things with the camp
>goblins having some big secret that would get them killed( I refuse to believe the needing non gob males to reproduce was the original Idea)
>Alfie becoming Alduin's personal smith (done entirely offscreen because Incase got cold feet on alfie banging him)
>Ozge being alfie's girlfriend (It was entire reason her girl preference was introduced and the only time she was open to Romance)
Though that died because nobody wanted Alfie to have Oneitis for anyone and Ozge was kinda ugly and more boring than watching grass grow
Probably a bunch more I'm missing. Plus little things like going back rewriting Vera's scenes to make her more of a bitch because was clearly right about Pickering and her husband.
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>>152793666
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Linea_nigra
Vertical C-section cuts are barbaric
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>>152793666
no it's probably the linea nigra which only becomes visible during pregnancy. iirc nobody really knows what it's for.
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>>152793666
That's nowhere near where a c section takes place anon, that's the line some pregnant women get on their bellies from how rapidly their skin stretches during pregnancy
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>>152793673
Even just a short two or three pages will be enough for me
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>>152791754
>I can not be objective about it.
I wish he'd left the original art at the beginning alone instead of wasting time redrawing it
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>>152793674
He also wanted to give Alfie a bad end at one point. But probably felt it wouldn't be good to have a mean spirited end after all this time. Plus there were a lot of Alfie apologist.
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>>152793709
>mean spirited
Go and stay go Mr. Enter
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>>152793709
What would the bad ending have been, did he ever say
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>>152789956
Based snake slut hater
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>>152793679
>>152793677
interesting
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>>152793767
Everyone hates the snake sluts
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>>152793731
Not that I know of. He only mentioned it on his livestreams years ago.
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>Sees barefoot girl
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>>152793073
DON'T MIND IF I DO!
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>>152793924
Alfie doesn't
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>Alfie
Christ, how long has it been?
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>>152794511
She's just begging for it.
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>>152794511
Them not fucking while throwing passive aggressive jabs at each other is a crime and making retroactively dislike this comic. We were so close too, he literally had her make him a strap on.
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>>152793631
What a shame, honestly, only males can get development and punishment! Well, I'm going to read Goblin Treasure! Way better!
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>>152789956
What am I supposed to jerk off to for the plot now?
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>>152795247
https://www.irovedout.com
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>>152795247
Alfie, but actually good!
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>>152795334
I've been reading this for years and still don't understand the plot at all.
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>>152795516
me neither. But it's mostly porn.
art's really good though.
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>>152791736
I can not believe Otto's dwarf girlfriend was the inspiration for Alfie.
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>>152795553
>>152791986
>>152792418
Superior Spider-man confirmed to be an Influential masterpiece
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>>152789956
wait why is the gay guy married to the slut girl
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>>152791292
Wasn't there also cute af Rat/Mouse people? Shame dude never settled or hooked up with them. Bro is right; lot of wasted potential.
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>>152795758
Beard
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>>152795880
huh
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>>152795334
The art is 10/10 but trying to follow the plot always feels like jumping into the middle of a story with no context. Its not like his english is bad, dude just needs to put a lore primer or something on the site.
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>>152790176
>Alfie hates her stepmom and refuses to socialize with her (step)siblings
That's sad :(
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>>152795894
Beard.
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>>152795758
She's his beard, I guess he didn't get to go on a journey of sexual self-discovery
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>>152790176
How do they explain the one with Benard's hair color?
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>>152796056
recessive genes
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EVERYONE'S HAVING BABIES

IS INCASE HAVING A BABY TOO? (if he hasn't already)
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>>152795900
He needed a clear, coherent plot. A simple goal for the heroes to pursue in between fucking. The characters are nice but it's never clear what's going on. I kinda like his new comic better in this regard but he still doesn't explain shit as well as I'd like.
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>>152796010
>>152795943
Oh. was it ever implied tho?
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I'm enjoying Warden.
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>>152796449
That she's openly screwing and chasing after other guys and he's not the father of any of her kids. It's a marriage of mutual convenience.
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>>152796449
No, they hooked up over the timeskip.
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>>152796449
>Oh. was it ever implied tho?
You don't have to be aware to be someone's beard. That said I figure he knows the kids aren't his but doesn't mind because they help uphold the image he's trying to project.
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>>152796393
Why arent you having babies?
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>>152796560
3D is icky.
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>>152796532
>>152796544
>>152796545
oh a lavender marriage
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>>152789956
The snake lady doesn't deserve the hate
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>>152797412
Nah she kinda did
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>>152789956
Do my eyes deceive me or is he sorta kinda drawing normally again? Not quite up to full speed maybe but a lot less streamlined?
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>>152796560
jews
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>>152797412
she do
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>>152789956
It feels bittersweet.
I'll miss her adventures sexing all the creatures she met.
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>>152793731
Pregnant prostitute with substance abuse
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>>152793468
haha really? if that's true it's fucking ridiculous if they think anybody would believe it. I've enjoyed a lot of their stuff in the past(although stopped following when they started posting more cuck themed stuff) and never did any of the dickgirls ever come off as trans, hell they even draw traps too so it's not like the dickgirls having masculine features would be crossing a line for them. Just silly.
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>>152795334
>high fantasy porn
oh neat
>immediate black guy
ah nevermind
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>>152793468
>They're all men with tits
Ted was right
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Maybe instead of dumbass drama noone cares about they can go back to drawing the horny aliens again.
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>>152789956
Never understood why people got obsessed about this series, the written was never good and it was full of magical porn logic.
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>>152799936
Shortstack art used to be rarer, much less actual hobbit art. Incase is a hero, and you better respect him anon.

Also it was pretty funny.
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>>152793468
When did he ever say that? Far as I've seen it's just the common thing western artist not putting vagina's on their "futas". He has stories with futas and they are treated as a naturally occurring thing instead of someone transitioning
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>>152799936
The fact that he had any plot at all had people riding the writing. We use to have big threads over the updates.
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>>152793625
It's far too hard to keep a Lydia. Sometimes she doesn't want kids and sometimes she needs to move for no good reason and you can't have a career and sometimes you just have no hobbies in common. And sometimes she's just a piece of shit. The sexual promiscuity isn't even a requirement.

Marco really is living the dream. She loves him because he loves her, which doesn't sound like a lot but it's enough. You also don't get to work with a Lydia for years like Marco does, you get a few dates/months. You have to fight for a Lydia if you find one.
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>>152793625
Lydia, please don't neglect doing parenting things after giving birth.
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>>152800086
>naturally occurring thing instead of someone transitioning
I think he is wisely avoiding any of the godawful issues of transition. There is simply no good of it. InCase isn't a stupid or immoral person, he isn't an asshole, he knows how shitty people can be. Look at all the people who dragged him because he had Lydia fuck Marco - he knows that some people are just insane and don't care about love and that those fanatics obviously exist among the people who make their sexuality and transition a defining part of their character the same way other people do with race, religion, and gender.

We all think they are naturally occurring because he has deftly avoided canonically saying it is or isn't. The guy is smart - he's making his art and Alfie all about the sex and plot not the unholy conversations about identity.
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>>152789956
>turn character gay
>comic goes to shit
many such cases
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>>152800199
Me see girls kiss, me happy
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>>152800155
She will ignore 99% of parenting duties, and leave it all to Marco. That caravans going to be a fucked up place to raise a kid. Its just nonstop debauchery.
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>>152800180
Incase is literally a fag enabler. I get a boner from Cillian.
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>>152789956
It's crazy remembering the hype this shit had in fucking 2010 and how far it fell.
Nearly 20 years and Vera only had 1 sex scene, BEYOND GAY
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Incase joked about Alfie/Vera but it did more damage than he obviously could've expected.
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>>152793468
>straight from the word of god himself
Sounds like you can link a quote
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>>152800327
>Characters introduced as dykes
Fine, can be interesting even e.g. DTWOF, Maggie Sawyer, etc.
>Shitty attempt at character development by turning straight character lesbian with no foreshadowing in early years, relationshit written like bad yuri, writer has XY chromosomes every single time no exceptions
Annoying garbage, drop comic because everything else is going to have the same sloppy melodrama now.
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>>152801512
Real talk, western oyakodon is such a small niche that outside of Will/Susan Vandom or the occasional Kim/Ann Possible no one cares and those two are over a decade old.
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>>152801702
It's not like it's the entire comic but would've been the cherry on top.
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>>152801512
How so?
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We needed more scenes of Gobbed Alfie
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>>152802140
He joked about it while interest in the comic was waning. Turns out there were a number of people that were hoping it would happen. It was also when he said he was going to focus more on story and less on porn and he would later get a hand injury which would hurt his progress and he experimented with less detail. It was all bad timing.
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>>152791754
>I was terrified of my audience abandoning the story, the second the sex stops. Halfway through chapter one, I was becoming nervous about the distinct lack of fucking. Why, there’s been like seven pages since any porn happened!
I wish he kept that mentality before wasting so pages on the caravan ""hating""" alfie and having the last non epilogue chapter have no sex at all.
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>>152791754
>Vera revealing the tender heart beneath the mean exterior, and Alfie revealing all the jagged edges hidden behind the cuteness.
And sadly the Alfie part completely flew over people's head. Despite how she was a bitch to Marco for trying to protect her. A bitch Hannah whenever she tried to be nice. Rude to everyone in her narration because she thought she was smarter than them because a lot of the caravan were illiterate.
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>>152802182
>a hand injury which would hurt his progress and he experimented with less detail
At this point I want to see doctors' letters when this kind of this is claimed.
>>152802305
If you're going to make your MC a rotten person, narrative implies either a change of heart or a comeuppance by the end (even if it's nothing more than regret) unless their role in the story is punishing even worse people (e.g. Constantine). If you're going to be pretentious enough to claim you're a real storyteller now, you accept some basic rules. Especially if you've been doing it for over a decade at which point you have no excuse not to have a general idea where the story's headed and what it's trying to say. Fiction is only linear to the reader.
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>>152802182
So is it happening?
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>>152802361
There are a number of stories about bad people who never receive a comeuppance or are against worse people. There is no rule here.
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Literally Me should've stepped up and put a baby in Ms Darby
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what happened to the hot elf twink?
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>>152802361
>At this point I want to see doctors' letters when this kind of this is claimed.
https://x.com/InCaseArt/status/1780921221028204751
>>152802422
No but here's Alfie and Cillian.
https://x.com/InCaseArt/status/1859933439639921084
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>>152802464
Outside of American Psycho name 5
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>>152802560
Well that's egg on my face now isn't it. And he didn't even stab it.
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>>152792326
>fucking her step-dad's old flame
>only gets one frame as a punchline
>>152792345
>fucking her goblin friend's strict daughter
>one full shot of naked Bit, but the sex was off screen
>>152790176
>fucking her new gold digger step-mom
>comic ends before it happens
>yes I know they already fucked before, it's one of the hottest scenes in the comic, but the dynamic between the two has completely changed into prime hate sex territory now
INCASE, YOU BROKEN WRISTED HACK! RELEASE THE FULL CROSS GENERATIONAL SEX SCENES!

Seriously though, it's fine for the story to end as it clearly spiralled long past it's original scope and from the post that went with it it's clear this has been a mental drag. But I really do hope Incase will revisit the setting and side characters some more for short one-offs now that he's not beholden to Alfie and Vera's perspectives. It's the short stories where Incase really shines. At least give me something with the trio of rat girls who only appeared for a single page.
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>>152802598
Yeah Incase is fucking garbage for skipping over such content.
And seconding the rat girls
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>>152795247
This Romantic World
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>>152802644
Is complete shit
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>>152802361
The caravan all turning on her and Alduin wanting to kick her out was supposed to be that comeuppance but it was poorly handled. It didn't really make sense for the caravan to ostracize her sleeping with marko and lydia all but like five characters are sluts. The Alduin thing kinda solved itself. If the story went on longer I think it would have been neat idea if actually left her with the goblins before Vera caught up. That being said the story seem to be not alfie changing her was but actually being upfront about them. Instead of pretending be a cute, nice shy girl, she is the slutty bitch she was always hiding in pickering.
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>>152802644
I would appreciate it if Reinbach wrote characters who are adults and don't make Archie look nuanced, because he keeps dropping hints he knows how to. Someone with his chops should be writing actual slow burn sexual slavery/domination comics not mental teenagers jealously pouting at each other in-between oral, and no Switch doesn't fix that.bSquandered potential.
Also you know he won't follow through with the pregnancy stuff.
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>>152802659
>neat idea if actually left her with the goblins
Imagine if Sabu left us blueballed like that.
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>>152802564
The Cask of Amontillado, Wuthering Heights, The Player, The Usual Suspects, Natural Born Killers.
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>>152801667
>turn straight character 'bisexual' (lesbian), never have them with dudes ever again
why is this the case? at least when they make dudes into fags they occasionally get women
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>>152802644
Wasn't Reinbach making a spin-off WEG? What happened to that?
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>>152803021
Odd how most of these are films from the last 30 years made by burnouts rather than plays or novels
>Cask of Amontillado
Horror where the narrator is insane, Montresor may as well be John Kramer from Saw
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>>152803200
I'm still puzzling out why he got cold feet about explicit sex considering no one reads this for the plot or characters and his style as much as promises explicit sex.
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>>152803021
>The Cask of Amontillado
was he a bad guy though
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>>152802629
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>>152803463
Same author as "Tell-Tale Heart," he absolutely wrote stories from the villain's perspective.
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>>152803468
So rats live under government enforced cuckoldry here
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>>152802284
He was right to have that worry. The story was dogshit and the sex was the only thing to look forward to
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>>152803463
Good guys don't jump right to walling a dude up in their basement.
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>>152804209
But the guy he walked up insulted him once. Clearly it was deserved.
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>>152803200
I thought he already made that
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>draws nothing but dudes with tits, occasionally women
>now wants to draw more zipper-tits getting fucked by dickgirls
He's always been weird, but I genuinely believe he's losing his mind chasing a high forever beyond reach. I'm actually a little surprised he hasn't trooned out himself yet. Is this a legitimate case of porn rotting a brain, or just plain ol' mentally disturbed?
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Can someone bring me up to speed on everything that has happened since the mom made bondage gear for that twink elf prince? I think that's when I stopped reading.
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>>152804656
He has a wife you know.

You know what she's called?
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>>152804934
Lots of mtf lesbian worshipping troons have wives.
Doesn't stop them
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>>152804934
Incontinentia Buttocks?
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>>152791622
>13 years
What?
WHAT?!
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>>152804934
A Royale with cheese?
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>>152804934
A beard
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>>152804209
>>152803584
I read the previous post wrong, I thought you meant the guy that got walled in was the bad guy
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>>152791622
>15.010 € /month
yeah dude he toootally wasted 10 years of his life lol



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