Spitball your ideal doujin/hanime/eroge concept! And discuss the fetishes behind it!This is a fetish discussion/creative writing focused thread for stories, novel concepts, power systems, worlds, and magic/tech/biology that accentuate your strongest fetish. This thread is meant for more digestible idea pitches and musings. Discussion of proper full-form literotica and it's resources goes here >>11255277If you have a full verbose work you want to discuss; summarize it in greentext, bullets, or a qrd.Post your ideas be they ideal doujins you want or sex games that don't exist. From whole sex-based fantastical worlds, to sex enhancing magic, to simple descriptive scenes featuring your fetish.I had considered making this thread ONLY tentacle/pregnancy as some of /d/'s more absurdist offerings put me off but I don't want to stifle discussion. Novel imaginativeness can be appreciated no matter one's tastes. Feel free to take elements of anons' ideas and rework them into your fetish, and give (You)s as people like their ideas being considered.I for instance love pregnant sex but dislike humanoid birth. I instead love tentacle birth but actually prefer humanoid sex slightly over tentacle sex. These contradict each other but I can integrate them into one fucking hot concept by simply giving the tentacle swarm a humanoid transformation. Add my love of sex magic and temp-futanarization and we're off to the races.If you have significant writeups reply them to the Idea Anchor post.I'm also making a "(You) Anchor" after it. See the post for details.Previous thread: https://desuarchive.org/d/thread/11254542/First thread: https://desuarchive.org/d/thread/11131196/
+++++++++Idea Anchor+++++++++++_______________________________There should be two types of posts itt. Discussion that proceeds along with the thread and "significant writeups". Significant writeups do not necessarily need to be long posts but lengthy effortposts will be appreciatedAnchor all significant writeups here. Chain your posts (p1/3 ect) if they exceed the character limit so that 1 reply to this anchor=1 idea. (Refer to the previous thread's anchor post if you want)Previous Anchor: >>11195660
+++++++++(You) Anchor+++++++++++_______________________________This thread I'm making this (You) anchor. Reply to this if you want to review/comment on an anon's post and receive (You)s in turn.Reason: people always are posting their ideas hoping THEY will be the thread darling and get the juicy (You)s and not replying to others. (I just saw it on an /a/ writefag thread)If you aren't getting the eyeballs you want consider reviewing an anon's/clutches of anons' ideas while mentioning you hope for the same for your post(s). Consider namefagging as your post number if you wish to mass review mutiple times and/or if you don't want to load your own posts up with self-replies.
OP here, I've written 3 pretty robust tentacle story ideas, all with different approaches though all are rough outlines and none of them properly verbose literotica. All 3 are under the "Tentacle-men have pregnant sex with girls" theme. 2 are about tentacle monsters gaining handsome masculine transformations, and 1 is about a human mage king who can summon and use tentacles.I call them:[p1/2]
>>113143061. Laboratory Atop the King's Bed-about an alchemist king who uses the wombs of his harem to brew potions, assisted by his tentacle magic. All on his huge bed he never leaves-in episodic format where 2 posts are a preamble and the 20 2000-character long 'scenes' are like anime episodes that explore various aspects of his sexual/research escapades. 22 4chan posts long.-inspired by this single doujin page: https://exhentai.org/s/88db91e9b3/2192337-112. Tentacleman x Anti-Tentacle Corps-about a seedbed nest that mutates into a species that can inherit the powers of the Magical Girls they impregnate. They become a Tentacle-man who conquers the Corps and make them his harem. Features a "Self Genesis" power where he liquefies into a single conscious sperm that impregnates girls with himself. Features a unique form of Futanari.-in a format where I make a character card portion listing the girls' powers, then a big bullet points/greentext that describes the story beats and general progression with pornographic bonus scenes from beginning to end. 14 posts long-inspired by https://exhentai.org/g/3010152/7f01e3d4cd/3. Super Sentai Tentacle Armor-Heavily borrows from 2 in that the Tentacle-men and Self Genesis concepts are present but in a far happier upbeat tone. There are multiple tentacle-men but they are all the good guys that team up with Sentai girls that they impregnate and form armor around. Human spirit and cheesy sentai shit abound, but powered by sex. Pregnant sex specifically. Sex around the world works like the Spirit Bomb and empowers our heroes with the Indomitable Human Spirit™.-in a very short qrd format that synopsizes the idea quickly. 3 posts long-inspired by https://exhentai.org/g/844218/1fa372cf78/, Symphogear, and tokusatsu in generalI posted 2 in "commission proposal" form but remade it into a greentext story from start to finish. I just finished it so I'll post it first. [p2/2]
>>11314296This doujin is really incredible: https://exhentai.org/g/3010152/7f01e3d4cd/In the doujin the girl Kuon, member of the Anti-Tentacle Corps, has the [Time Stop] ability which can also do accel and slow-down. Yadda yadda she gets seedbed'd and her first eight offspring inherit Timestop who immediately use it on her freshly creampied womb to accelerate the gestation of their next siblings. Kuon is made to rapidly get fully pregnant again after just giving birth. The ability inheritance thing is such a novel idea and has tons of potential. So here's a continuation of the concept.(The story proper will be on rentry, otherwise it would be 15 posts long)
>>11314313Imagine sequel doujins with more Corps Magical Girls with more powers which are put to more erotic uses by the tentacles. Tentacles who rise in power and intelligence from amassing these abilities before the nest uses them to fuse into one being, a handsome manly tentacle monsterboy. "Tentacleman" is the working name, Tman for short. A form with tons of sexual powers and an alluring masculine voice and form that make females' very femininity throb. I'll call the special tentacle breed before they become Tman "Xtypes".The swarm, later Tman, captures more and more of the Corps and gains more and more of their powers and uses their wombs to crossbreed into perfection. And uses their powers to intensify sex to greater and greater heights. The story is primarily for my pregnancy and tentacle birth fetishes, with some futa I use in a unique way I came up with. I generally only like futa of the temporary ball-less sort, sometimes merely ultra-clit futa, but that sort of thing doesn't fit for these breeding purposes. So I thought up an AMAZING futa concept one day:A futanarization that cannot cum on its own but instead connects the womb to the dick and uses the cum of the male to ejaculate with. The girl can only cum when semen blasts into her. Cascading orgasm from the pussy to the cock. Fucking hot. The tentacles use this to further boost crossbreeding efforts. I really don't like tentacle mouths sucking futanaris off (like in his previous work), I much prefer them shoving it into another girl. The tentacles gain the ability to futanarize girls by using a girl with the [Transform] ability.I wrote a quick character power table section then a section of the rough progression of events in simple digestible bullet points. I call girls by their power like "Time-chan" so I don't have to make the reader reference the table and remember names or tell an AI to shit out generic Japanese names for me.
>>11314317>>>Magical Girl Powers<<<The way this will work is I give the power a separate erotic name for when the tentacles steal it and repurpose it. Ie [Time Stop]'s corrupted form is called {Rapid Pregnancy}. But in truth the Tentacles HAVE [Ability] and can use it in the more generalist ways just like the girls can, but {Corrupted Power} is their prime use of it, and so it gets the name. When the tentacles make other uses of a power I'll just say "they're using time stop to do x."Here is a list of the Powers I thought up:>[Time Stop]Accel, Slow, and Stop Time for one target.>{Rapid Pregnancy}Used to make fertilized eggs rapidly develop and tummies quickly grow into heavily pregnant bellies in the span of 2 minutes. The tentacles' numbers eliminate the one-target weakness. Tentacleman can multicast it.>[Command Seal?]Placeholder, as I didn't make this power. BY's upcoming doujin's girl is seen with levitating blades with her crest on them, then another picture with her putting the crest over her own womb that seals her pussy from being penetrated. Idk if I'm understanding the nature of the power right.>{Marionette? I guess}I guess the tentacles might use it for body control? I don't like mind or body control most of the time. I guess one might come up with soft uses of it. Like how a power in this list is a very soft kind of mind control.>[Vital Bond]Synchronizes the vitality and stamina of teammates, sharing strength and buffs. And gives allies a sense of the health of the team.>{Fertilization Orgasm}Mothers feel every egg being fertilized, and also the strength of their tentacle babies as they grow and are born. Tentacleman's powers and sperm are sensed as a lewd thrill.>[Aura Fist]Fighting spirit aura, amplifies physical attacks and reinforces the body.>{Masculine Essence}Exudes a powerful, alluring manly aura that makes girls’ bodies ache and crave to be bred. Even makes lesbians not so lesbian. Like an erotic spiritual pressure.
>>11314320>[Transform]Can morph body parts into weapons, tools, or animal claws. Arm-blades and such.>{Futanarization}Tentacles use this to grow girls temporary, ball-less futa cocks, which only cum when their womb, connected to the dick by a special organ, is filled and triggered by tentacle semen. For making girls crossbreed. (No tentacles sucking cocks off)>[ESP]Telekinesis, danger sense, and weak low level telepathy>{Shared Orgasm}Tentacles and girls feel each other’s pleasure, everyone involved in sex feels the pleasure of the others. Tentacles orgasm by the act of being born. Bonus effect is that it generally increases the swarm's intelligence more and more>[Confusion]Disorients enemies, causes hallucinations, can cause temporary amnesia>{Synesthesia}Sexual sense-crossing. Pussy walls taste fluids and find them delicious, same for cocks and tentacles. Tongues orgasm from flavor. Lactation feels like ejaculation and nipples taste their own milk. Music and voices feel physically pleasurable. Smells carry flavor and feel colorful>[Spirit Fusion]Summons and fuses familiars and spirits to fight wit>{Ideal Form}Once enough intelligence has been amassed, tentacles combine and fuse into their ultimate form; Tentacleman. Can separate back into a swarm, or produce tentacles from the main body>[Siren Song]Buffs allies and debuffs enemies with singing and magical music>{Arousing Voice}Tentacleman speaks in an otherworldly, arousing voice that makes girls blush and ovulate. Can speak erotic commands like "Sleep", "Lactate", "Birth" and such. That or maybe I give any "Command" magic to [Command Seal], idk>[Heal]Mends wounds and restores stamina>{Erotic Vitality}Girls’ bodies become perpetually healthy and ready for sex. Hymens and tightness regenerate>[Thunderstrike]Channels electricity into attacks>{Electrostimulation}Tentacles use electricity for pleasure, teasing tingles, and electrocuting orgasms. Makes pleasure more visibly visceral
>>11314321>[Alchemy]Brews potions and elixirs, and transmutes materials.>{Aphrodisiac Generation}Tentacles secrete aphrodisiac fluids and mists, driving girls wild with lust. Semen becomes intoxicating when ingested. Tentalces always smell extremely good; girls pant heavily as they sniff Tman's armpits.>[Dream Walker]Gives therapeutic good dreams. The team psychiatrist.>{Fantasies Manifest}Tentacles force girls to dream positive, erotic dreams about their captors. Even stubborn girls will dream absurd dreams about having romantic dates or painting together with Tentacleman, who they hate when awake.>[Teleport]Short-range teleportation>{Tentacle Portals}Portals open in wombs, teleporting tentacle fetuses between mothers for crossbreeding or kink. Or used by tentacles to portal out the back of the vagina, just to bite their own tail and endlessly insert. Portals around limbs for pseudo-amputee sex, or around dicks into pussies for surprise sex.>{{{Self Genesis}}}A special power which is the combined use of Transformation, Spirit Fusion, and Vital Bond.Tentacleman usually just impregnates girls with more tentacles which combine into him and grow his energy. He eventually becomes able to melt into a semen-slime as he ejaculates, condenses into a single supercharged sperm that carries all his powers and consciousness, and impregnates a girl with himself. Vital Bond makes it so the girls sense the sheer potent virility of him as his conscious seed goes into their pussies, or through their cocks, or into their eggs. Self Genesis pregnancies make girls lose their minds with horniness and they either constantly masturbate to it or molest other girls begging for sex.Tman will do this for: a lewd comfy place to sleep, infiltration, powering up/gestating/genecrafting, telepathically teasing/sweet talking his "motherwife" as he calls them, or making a girl futa-impregnate another girl with his seed for fun.Here is the full plot: https://rentry.co/syv3q7vs
btw don't be intimidated by my autism anons: you don't have to post as much as me to have your ideas responded to.
we're back? basedwomb worm anon here, i made some more additions to the lore and story, i could post it if you want
>>11314626What's its title?
My ideas and fantasies tend to revolve around 3 core things:>Huge-dick dominant femboy(s) (anywhere from 50% of population to me being the only one in a realm full of women)>Amazon sized women with massive tits 'n ass (they rarely start out this way cause expansion is one of my core kinks)>MonstergirlsFor the purpose of this thread, I'll detail one of my more-robust fantasies I made up (all kept in my head, cause I rarely write any of this down).>Some time in the future, humanity creates a device that, for lack of a better term, is capable of granting wishes, it is a device capable of taking any command and warping reality itself to make the command a reality>A group of 4 people were present at the machine's completion, a grand towering structure with a simple computer screen somewhere in the heart of it all, the 4 people stand around it, thinking about their wishes>I go first, my colleagues have known what I was gonna wish for for a while, so I don't have to hide it at all, I type in "Monstergirls are real" and hit shift-enter to start the next line item (enter works too, but I am a perpetually paranoid person, submit is an on-screen button that needs to be hit separately)>Currently unnamed colleague #1 (male) steps forward and types in "People can use magic," he does not hit enter>colleague #2 (female) approaches, slaps the enter key and types in "the world is a pangea," which has been a desire of hers for a long time, just so she can go anywhere by car/train.. we thought it was a little mundane justification, but we had no reason to stop her, another enter, and she looks at our last associate;>colleague #3 (nobody knows if they were a guy or a girl) lazily says "I wish we could live forever." Miss 2 types in "The people in this room become immortal," hits the enter key, unceremoniously mouses to the submit button, looks back at us, and clicks>The world is almost immediately engulfed in blinding light of all colors...1/2 for initial post.
>>11314694After this initial idea, my timeline in the story immediately jumps a few thousand years into the future with a selection of plots I want to include somewhere in it all, but mainly cause I want to explore it from a past-tense perspective as it is retold to someone. I'll probably post that later. For now, I'll just explain what actually happened.The machine itself CAN rewrite reality.However, bending the universe consumes untold amounts of energy from sources seemingly unknown.And in addition, the machine doing so is just that, a cold and calculating machine working on a scale that people can't really comprehend, both in terms of what it's actually doing, how it is doing it, and why it is doing it in the way it decides.It received a series of inputs to "make true" in reality.So to do so, it calculates the most efficient methods of actually fulfilling each wish in-order.>monstergirls are realThe machine spent quite a few milliseconds processing this one and finally arrived at the easiest conclusion: Transforming all non-insect and fish creatures into half-human half-creature humanoids. As an immediate result, this means there's no more livestock and now we have entire races of purely-carnivorous people...Wish granted. Next line.>people can use magicThe machine wasted no time on this one, cause the answer was obvious. The entire machine and most of the technology on earth were transported into a pocket dimension taking up the same space as part of earth, but in another plane of existence and repurposed much of the tech to render a form of "magic" that anyone could use by inputting the correct commands, commands "written/said" in what would eventually be known as Divine Verse and paired with appropriate reagents. A manual detailing much of it was provided to the 4 wishers.Next line.2/3 lol
>>11314708>the world is a pangea6 milliseconds passed in utter silence because the now godlike machine pondered why the user would want this, then digitally shrugged and did it, instantaneously regressing all the world's tectonic plates and forcing them all into one big continent, applying a few discreet items into the earth to help keep them from shifting much for a long time.Next line.>I wish we could live forever45 milliseconds passed as the divine device thought about the best way of doing this before finally settling on a simple world command which would automatically detect the location of the users as well as rewriting any decay or damage to their bodies and minds near-instantly. After all, if their go insane, are they really still themselves?The blinding lights faded in less than a second and the group found themselves standing on the ground, as if moved there so imperceptibly they couldn't even feel gravity. And looking around, it was obvious a lot of things had changed... For starters, a pile of 4 heavy books laid neatly on the grass next to them and the entire facility they were in was just gone...Bewildered, our newfound party discusses how to proceed before venturing off into the rolling plains around them.3/3I'll write more as my mood takes me. I can provide some "highlight events" I've come up with if anyone is interested.
Girl goes to anime convention with male friend. Talks him into cross-dressing cosplay. After a bit of getting used to it she starts getting him to go along with her to use their status as cute girls to cut in line and get first pick of things, free offerings in the artist alley ect. All the while she's teaching him to be more feminine and seductive. Eventually they get invited to a party and the two of them get a lot of sex.No overt femdom or humiliation. Just light peer pressure.
>>11314626Hey man I remember you. This thing'd probably be on #5 right now if not for the site going superkill. #3 was deleted when it came back
>>11314781Maybe thats something chipa could draw https://exhentai.org/tag/artist:chipaNot really one for dudes crossdressing but I make an exception for chads going stealth mode on the prowl for ass. Like how Ankoman does it in his Astolfo doujins.
I hope "Cheribus" guy shows up and continues his idea. I liked that one
>>11314306 (me)>I've written 3 pretty robust tentacle story ideasOh I just remembered that Majin Buu one I did in the previous threads. So it's 4.Counting the Pokemon Preg and Frostpunk ones I also did, which are non-tentacle, it's 6 ideas total.I am very autistic it appears4. Majin Buu Tentacle Pit-about Majin Buu's flesh (or Android 21 if you like) being powered by countless pairs of shrink-ray'd girls caught in the "birth engine" concept featured in #1. Different organs in his body use different races of girls. Girls go super saiyan when orgasming.-qrd format like 3. 2 posts long-inspired by Majin Buu in general and https://exhentai.org/g/1288751/d9c2069014/
>>11314694>>11314708>>11314709>Huge-dick dominant femboy(s)I'm not really one for femboys but this artist kinda made me understand the appeal. His Astolfo is a fucking chad. https://exhentai.org/g/2651677/7f06ad3a99/What exactly makes you choose "dominant femboy" as opposed to simply chad shotas?>Amazon sized women with massive tits 'n assLet me guess you like femboy/shota because of the juxtapostion huh? Getting lost in all that flesh? I get it.>expansionDon't hold the fetish myself. Mind explaining what makes it tic?>shift-enterlmao same, its AI chatbots that caused this in me. I didn't used to do it but now I find myself doing it all the time.>colleague #2 (female) approaches, slaps the enter key and types in "the world is a pangea,"She must have some more fundamental desire that she is better off wishing for instead, but I get that this is all set-up contrivance>"magic" that anyone could use by inputting the correct commands, commands "written/said" in what would eventually be known as Divine VerseReminds me a bit of the Word Arts from Ishura>paired with appropriate reagentsWtf do you mean by this? What are you picturing?Why THIS particular set-up for your fetishistic intent? What are you aiming for?
>>11315097>chad shotas?Those are fine too, I personally prefer femboys because then they can be tall enough to do stuff (generally speaking). I am very particular about my size difference (if I am 6 ft tall, my preferred female height range is 7-9 feet tall for example) and as I am personally 6ft tall, this leans more towards femboys than shotas.>juxtapositionThat is a notable part of it, yeah.I also have upper limit on T&A size comparable to each globulous mass being around as big as I am.>explaining expansionOkay, so.. A boob is nice.A bigger boob is nicer.But the prospect of watching a boob become a bigger boob is the best because you get to experience the improvement over time itself. And it leans into a bunch of side stuff like clothes tearing, varied emotional reactions, sensitivity enhancement (or reduction), lactation, etc.I am not exactly great at describing things that are rooted deep in me like this.>IshuraI still need to get around to season 2, but kind of yeah.>reagentsIn my head, it varies wildly from organic matter (plants, corpses, fish) to minerals like rocks, precious metals and gems, incredibly rare and specific substances, the differences will be all over the place depending on the spell itself, in some cases using the reagents as a reusable catalyst for the spells, other times as a sacrifice/fuel source for the spell.>Why THISOkay, so.. I have fantasized up thousands of stories. This is just one that happens to be in my mind fresher than a lot of others. This one has also withstood the inevitable "Okay, I'm done jacking off, let's imagine one of the characters getting unreasonably thick and me cuddling/banging them to finish" far longer than most.Perhaps you'd prefer the one about a gas station worker who works the night shift and deals with all the weirdos in town (most are monstergirls)?Or the immortal that sires lineages of pseudo-cannibal kitsune?
>>11315270>But the prospect of watching a boob become a bigger boob is the best because you get to experience the improvement over time itselfSo like you find it hot because the breast is being seized by lewd energy and expanding under it's power? I kinda get it.>Okay, so.. I have fantasized up thousands of stories.I meant by "why this" as in why the wishing machine rather than simply having another world of your desired details already existing? How do you intend to leverage the wish thing for erotic aims basically?
https://files.catbox.moe/plf888.zipNice. /ddg/ just fufilled my request so I'll post my Pokemon thing again.I've created a system where pregnant pokegirls wield the pokemon powers in their bellies to manhandle and dom boys. It started as indirect bestiality BUT I later had an idea for "pokemon bonded Z-crystal impregnation" instead if you hate nonhuman shit. I'm not much a bestiality guy anyway. Inspired by https://exhentai.org/?f_search=0k0j0+lotushttps://files.catbox.moe/p42pq6.png
>>11315785>ElectricShe electrostimulates the boy’s dick, balls, and prostate. Can send tingling pulses through his entire body or totally electrocute him.Her pussy shocks his cock so hard it feels like his balls are gonna explode.>GhostSoul bond. They feel each others pleasure. Her touch and pussy feels like being caressed by phantom hands.It’s like her pregnant pussy is haunted, jerking him off from the inside.>PsychicHypnotizes the boy into a trance and influences his thoughts. She can share vivid mental impressions.She brainfucks him so hard he can’t tell if he’s cumming in her or just imagining it.>FairyFeels euphoric. Heals and soothes the boy with a pussy that feels heavenly like silk.Her pussy’s so soft it feels like he’s fucking a cloud.>FireHer pussy is burning hot but doesn't harm. Perfect for blizzards, her body heat keeps them alive.It’s like sticking his dick in a furnace. Her swollen belly radiates heat and melts his brain with pleasure.>IceHer pussy is cold and refreshing, sending shivers of pleasure through his body. Feels like an icy onahole. Good for hot weather.Her frosty cunt makes him shiver so hard he can’t tell if he’s freezing or just cumming his soul out.>WaterHer drenched pussy controls his seminal fluids forcing him to ejaculate then sending it back in then roiling it around. She also grants water-breathing.She milks his cock dry, then slams the cum back in like she’s recycling it.>GrassSecretes medicinal nectar that's a powerful aphrodisiac. Turning him desperate and manic.Her pussy juice is basically liquid Viagra; one taste and he’s humping her like a feral animal.>PoisonHallucinogenic fluids that flood his senses. She is intoxicating like alcohol.Her toxic cunt makes him trip balls while she rides him.
>>11315788>BugLife Drain. Drains the boy’s energy during sex then pours it all back in.She fucks him half to death, then her womb pumps his energy back just to make him beg for another draining.>FlyingLevitating powers where the girl manhandles the boy. Her pussy imparts an elated sense of lightness.She flips him around mid-air like a fuck doll while riding his dick so hard her bouncing pregnant belly brushes against his chest.>GroundShe and her pussy exerts a crushing gravitational pull. It pushes him down with pleasurable heaviness and compresses his dick.It feels like her preggo pussy is trying to crush his cock while pinning him to the ground.>RockShe repeatedly petrifies and unpetrifies them, grinding their intermittently rocky genitals together. The jagged slams feel rough and brutal but amazing.Her repetrifying pussy grinds his cock like he's fucking a lubbed up geode. He feels like they're rock monsters.>SteelVibrates like a high-tech sex toy. Every thrust feels mechanical yet wonderful.Her vibrating pussy makes his cock feel like it’s getting jackhammered into oblivion while her swollen belly quivers with every thrust.>FightingShe gets hype beyond all reason and monkey-fucks the boy. Her aura makes him feel stronger.She pounds him so hard with her preggo cunny that he feels like he just lost a wrestling match with his dick as the prize.>DarkFear sex. Gets all yandere and sadistic and casts a terror-inducing aura.Her crazy gaze makes his cock harder than steel while she fucks him like a psycho.>DragonHer pussy exudes a regal eminence. Feels like fucking pure power and makes every thrust feel monumental.She is smug as fuck, radiating sheer power that makes him feel like he’s being fucked by a living legend.>NormalHer belly emits an aura of balance, harmony, and perfection. Every touch feels "just right," bringing relaxation and calm.Her vagina is so perfectly average that it somehow makes every other fuck feel wrong by comparison.
>>11314301Hmm, thinking about it again I think I just should have made this a thread PSA rather than an Anchor to be replied to.
>>11315785 (me)>https://files.catbox.moe/plf888.zipHere, he did all 18: https://files.catbox.moe/zet8d6.zip
>>11315028I'm around still I've just been a bit busy with other stuff, I'm not really sure what would be left to flesh out since I think I've covered most of the bases of how they'd work in the previous thread outside of some smaller stuff and a tad bit more world building, I have considered sub-species which I might get into in a bit.here's a quick tl:dr for cheribus for anyone who doesn't know:>a cheribus is basically a succubus that feeds on positive emotion and actual love rather then pure lust>they are super sweet ladies who give people better lives rather then stealing souls>they have varying amounts of magic to make anything cutsy/sweet and can vary in power>they are extremely loyal and kind>personalities/looks/power can vary but generally have the same goals>they can be summoned via ritual, reading the romcominom or appear to those who's hearts are lonely
>>11318994Based. Post a link to your posts.
>>11318994Remember the first thread and my Bonnouji Yura autism? I've remade it into a full writeup in the rentry above. Feedback appreciated.
>>11319003most of the stuff is in this thread, it's easy enough to find if you search for cheribus.https://desuarchive.org/d/thread/11195657/I probably should stick all that stuff in a single note pad/pastebin for convenience sake.
>>11319009rentry as pastebin fucking censors shit nowadays
>>11319014I mean the stuff is that tame I could get away with it on pastebin technically, but yeah better to be safe then sorry.anyway, here's the sub-species of cheribus I've thought of.>standardthe most common, they tend to resemble succubus but they dress more casual/cozy, they aren't the most powerful but their reserved nature is appealing.>onithey more resemble oni, they have muscles and don't have much in the way of magic, they tend to be a bit spunky tomboyish but are very kind, their encouragement does have a strange power to make one more confident/willing to push through harder so they tend to be around those who want to become stronger not just physically but emotionally, in some cases they can share their strength and energy, your muscles and heart will become swole!>gremlith (germlin lilth)they tend to be powerful magic wise, they are very much the super cutsy girly lolita frilly dress doll types, their sweetness would make even the most stern serious guy melt into gushing, they can make anything sweet, they might seem childish but are emotionally/socially intelligent though they do tend to be a bit shorter then most (they still resemble adults, mind you)>gothitha variation of germith, only they are more goth girl then sweet, they are alot more reserved, despite their macabre appearance they have a uplifting aura about them, they tend to be for people who are seriously down in the dumps, they more feed on bitter-sweetness, like how you feel better after a good cry.>false succubusone that resembles the typical lusty scantally clad succubus, only instead of wanting to corrupt your soul to hell or whatever she wants to cuddle you and give you a choccy milk for being a good boy, they act like succubus by "tormenting" (spoiling) you with nice stuff "I'm gonna torture you with...A HOME COOKED MEAL AND A BACK RUB HAHAHA!" most people just play along and pretend they are being "tortured" by such acts.
here's a rentry link, it probably needs a bit of tiding up on the format of how stuff it written but it has all the content of my posts thus far and I've back it up locally just in case: https://rentry.co/t4kaiuko
>>11319031>gremlith>gothlithI love it lel>>11319040Rentry is cool because it greens greentext. I tried posting smut for the first time in years to pastebin and now they have this gay little bot that detects if your text is nono nauthty and forces it private
>>11319052Yeah that's pretty nifty, guess someone who developed that site had that in mind.here's a couple more sub-species, I also might flesh out what kind of magic/powers they are possible to possess, I should also mention they can cross-breed or develop new powers if enough positive energy is absorbed.>spookchibus (sometimes spookchibi)an odd ethereal spirit like one that lacks a physical form, they can appear as wisps they tend to look like shrine maidens, komono girls, ojou's and nerdy girls or anything cutsy Halloween fashion mostly and have typical ghost like abilities, they are very timid/tsundare and easy to scare, they "haunt" places or objects, they can only possess people if they give consent they do have some ghost powers other then that (floating objects, going through walls, some beetlejuice like things only not remotely scary)>vamprettysomewhat rare, they resemble old school vampires without the weaknesses (alot of them love garlic bread actually, some dress like nuns for the irony) they typically have crimson eyes and pale skin and can handle the sun just fine, they aren't too different then most cheribus only they do have hypnosis (though it works like it does in real life so your not about to become a mindless thrall...unless you are willing to do that in the first place) and can turn into teeny cute bat forms, their "bite" is more like a lipstick kiss mark that gives you the warm fuzzies you probably won't turn into one from that>circibusa rather silly clown like variety mostly at circuses and fairgrounds, they resemble clown girls, they tend to feed on laughter the most they are very honkable (I mean that literally) somehow even with some of the most lamest gags and jokes will get people busting their guts, they dress in brightly colored clown clothes, they can somehow fit into tiny cars and are very clumsy, you won't be able to resist giving one a creampie to the face (not that sort, silly dirty mind!)
>>11319031>>11319150>>standardmaybe you should make this type the most efficient at healing broken hearts. Or at the reality bending stuff. Something to differentiate them.>>oniMaybe you could give each of these types a preferred "prey". For oni it can be 90 pound weaklings that want to get strong/play a sport but are too lazy to try.>>gremlithYou could have these ones target workaholics.>>gothithThis one is cool, you already talk about their preferred prey here.>>false succubusMy favorite, this one is a stand out. In fact maybe you should make this the "standard" type actually.>>spookchibusEasily scared girls but are ghosts themselves? Cute.>>vamprettyI'd lean into the vampire aspect a little harder. Having them bite but weakly and with dull rounded teeth so that they ineffectually fail to pierce the skin is a bit cuter than a neck kiss imo. They go "nom" every time. Like they actually say it.>>circibusI like this one too. Balatro has given rise to a resurgence of clussy porn I notice.
>>11314296I like the tentacke stuff where they suck out testicles.... that is all not enough of that content wise
>>11319501>tentacke stuff where they suck out testiclesWhat do you mean by this?
concept:>a disease affecting females>they can only survive by ingesting semen every hours1st scene :>a girl faint and collapse in the street>3 guys comes in and start gangbanging her to revive her, they are herossociety adapt:>its normal anywhere to casually receive blowjobs or having intercourses>girls carry used condoms like mandatory medication
>>11319585Hmm, surely you could spice this up with some magical flair?
>>11319491I've updated the retry text a bit, I'll add a section on what emotions they go for and a few more sub-species
>>11319631Nice, feed back on Tentacleman would be appreciated.Unless you don't like that sort of thing, then don't bother.If not my Super Sentai one is kinda sorta thematically similar to your good emotions thing.
>>11319645Yeah that's not my cup of tea, I'm not one for tentacles or tentacle adjacent things.
>>11319955Fair. Of my 6 ideas posted to these threads so far, 4 are tentacle. All 6 pregnant.Do you remember ever seeing the one about Frostpunk and Fire Elementals? That was mine.also the pokemon one
I just want a softcore scat game where CGs don't end with the turd flying at your face, and it's more based on you being in a relationship with a girl that's either partially incontinent, or has IBS, and is embarrassed about it. The different scenarios will all involve her having an accident while you need to comfort her. As these accidents keep happening, the protag realizes he gets excited by it, and as their relationship advances, eventually we get sex scenes where she ends up making a mess during the act. It can even end up where she goes from being reserved and shy about it, to realizing how much you like it and purposely does stuff like stuff herself the night before. It could really lean into the more subtle aspects of the fetish that are semi-related: belly-stuffing, facesitting, spanking, feeding, etc.As far as I know there isn't an H-game, or story really, that's focused on the less extreme side of scat like this.
>>11320495Scatfags are always a fascinating find in the wild. So do you like just the vulnerability aspect or do you also envisage the guy/you actually physically touching the shit?I just can't wrap my head around scat. But I'm an anti-analfag so..
>https://rentry.co/t4kaiukoI like the cheribus additions anon
>>11320941Thanks, I am going to add more sections eventually I just have to decide what more I'd want to cover, I'm pretty happy with the power section as is, a ritual and summoning section is a given I think but beyond that I'll have to think up some.
>>11320495Love this idea!
added some more stuff to the cheribus text, some meaty world building stuff mostly, not sure what else to add honestly.
>>11321931I'll review it if you do the last 2 of >>11320229Unless you don't like preg either, then its fine. I'll still do yours.
>>11321936eh pregnancy I'm indifferent to so I'd probably not be the best judge for that kind of thing.
>>11321963Damn, ok. I'll do it later tomorrow so don't wait up
>>11319585I think I wrote a premise like this, or maybe it was a draft of a first chapter, a few years ago. The difference was they didn't die they just lost their minds and became mindless, horny animals if starved of cum for too longIn the story it was some scientist woman working on studying the phenomenon, but got so caught up she didn't realise she was getting cum starved. She had to quickly rush to a glory hole booth and suck some cock (keeping condoms would have made sense, but I guess you could say she was out). There she ravenously sucks cock after cock, nearly succumbing to the permanent effects of cum starvation but ultimately managing to regain her faculties from shear amount of cum (or horny pleas for cock attracting the attention of good samaritans who were happy to donate their cum to a woman in need).She ends up staying there longer than needed, collecting as much cum as she could. It's a rather grueling task once she's regained her senses and she has come to hate sex and the stench of cum. It's then revealed she does this to feed to her sister who she keeps locked in her apartment in an attempt to treat her. (I don't think I ever came up with what they do to the women who have changed beyond fixing. Presumably it would have to be euthanasia because they wouldn't want these unsalvageable women competing with the supply of cum for healthy women)
Had this idea. Guy finds a magical divination spell that works. It lets him know exactly what he has to do to fuck a girl. But if he actually does, the next time he sleeps, he re-lives the sexual encounter from the girl's point of view.Spell is a training aid to teach men how to be better lovers. Experiencing it from their partner's side afterward lets them know what they did right and what they did wrong.So over the story this neet becomes a casanova.
>>11322102That has potential, maybe another hook to make it more interesting like if the neet doesn't succeed within a certain time frame or has sex too much something bad would happen.
Had this story floating around in my mind for the longest time. Posted some of it in sph threads a while ago.Anon posts in a virgin thread on soc. Against all odds, he's contacted by Diana, a girl who lives nearby and wants to take his virginity. Diana is actually in an open relationship, but she likes taking guys' virginities. Long story short, it turns out to be a lie: Diana starts endlessly teasing anon and grooming him into more and more submissive stuff, while teaching him that only big dicked men (anon is 4") get to be dominant and fuck women. The story includes elements of femdom, soh, cuckold, chastity, denial, cum eating, pegging and cock sleeves.Gradually the dynamic evolves, as Chad (Diana 's big dicked bf, who thinks himself an alpha male) and Stacy (Chad's fuck buddy, who's a pro domme cuckong her husband with Chad for content) are introduced in the story.Stacy slowly starts low key dominating Chad as well and taking him away from Diana, while Diana and Anon grow closer. How exactly it ends tmdepends on my mood at the moment kekThanks for reading my blog
>>11321931>https://rentry.co/t4kaiukoOk I read it. I really recommend putting this through an LLM and asking it to point out the poor grammar, typos, run on sentences, lack of punctuation, awkward phrasing, and poor flow.I like the ideas bro but this is hard to digest. I would've full reviewed this if you had done this properly.The greentext is fine as is but the whitetext really should start with capitalization, for flow and digestibility.Your readers are not mindreaders: they need grammar and punctuation to grasp your intended rhythm.To be fair one of my rentrys doesn't even use perfect grammar all the time, but I ameliorate this by using bullet points style instead. Bullet points are digestible. Get it?
>>11314301I'm new to this shit, idk whether to post this here or in the other thread.I'm making my first attempt to write fat fetish erotica. It's not finished yet, and I haven't even gotten to the spicy parts, but I'd love it if anyone could look through it and tell me if it's workable at all. Specifically looking for feedback on the characterization and dialogue, as I'm really new to doing this much of those two things.The story's about two girls who have a chance encounter at a country fair they both work at. They're both sort of bored and both sort of lonely and both sort of into women and one of them is roughly thrice as heavy as the other. I'm trying to keep it realistic, so there's no rapid gain or anything, just a lot of snacking.https://pastesio.com/sf-14293-1 Password is "summerfair"
>>11322614>passwordHave you heard of rentry? You might like it better. It displays greentext.You'll need to save the edit code. Me I bookmark the url and rename it to the code. EZ
>>11322586Yeah that's something I've have had trouble with over the years, it is still a rough draft for the most part since I wanted to figure out what sections to come up with first then tidy it up.
>>11322890>>11322586What I like to do on the final pass of editing is listen to it through text-to-speech to catch any errors that it's easy to read over. Obviously doesn't help with punctuationI've not tried using an LLM, but it feels like it would miss a lot of things.
Just bit of a spin on energy/level drain.I can understand if to some people the whole point is that the succubus w/e doing the draining doesn't necessarily even need the stuff she drains (or even wastes it?) but I crave efficiency.>be a promising young mage>captured by mana-draining succubi>they forcibly "respec" you from the regular mage stuff to only have things that increase maximum mana, passive mana regenarion, ways to actively raise your mana reserve>only way your mana can even be used is if someone drains it from you
>>11323101you could add on to this with prestige as well, with each respec you also get to add extra goodies to that kinda like how most idle games reset your progress but you get more benefits in the long term for doing that.
>>11322890>>11323087>I've not tried using an LLM, but it feels like it would miss a lot of things.Not really. Just start a preamble on your intentions/ the aim of the thread. LLMs are getting really good. Try perplexity.ai for something with a high character limit and weak guard rails.
I have a weird fetish in that I like detachable heads in general, but I also really like to lose my own head and I end up writing or coming up with a ton of ideas since that's really the only outlet for it. I'm into a lot of weird ways to lose my head but here's the most re-occurring one:>I'm walking through a forest a night>See someone in the shadows, she steps forward to reveal a busty, mostly nude woman with no head, just a skin-covered neck stump>She has a massive sword in one hand>Before I can do anything she closes the gap between us and swings her sword through my neck>It actually feels pleasing as she separates my head and body>Her sword swings out and my vision spins as my head is sent flying off my neck>I, now just a head, land in the grass, rolling to a stop to see my headless body standing there, feeling around for his missing head>I can't feel anything below my neck aside from the wind against the stump. My body has a mind of his own>The headless woman picks me up and carries me deeper into the woods to her cabin>She sets me on a shelf on display, where she keeps me as her trophy>Meanwhile my headless body returns home, startling everyone with his lack of a head>My body simply assumes my old life as everyone starts to get used to him as the main "me" and his lack of a headThere are more details and such, but that's a frequent one. Doubt anyone cares, but I've got a ton of others
>>11320507Just returned to the thread now and want to respond to this! It's actually something about the sharp contrast of a girl I find attractive, doing such a disgusting thing from their own body, even though it's natural. Not a fan of the shit itself, but the action of it. The loss of control, the embarrassment of the girl, even the smell while not being pleasant, further creates this contrast that just flips the horny switch in my mind. I also find girls attempting to purposely gross people out with their bodies hot too, and that route goes strongly into Femdom. If, for example, in the game idea I had, there was a route where she becomes okay with her condition, and likes the fact that the guy likes it, she might decide to tie him up for a facesitting session and then during that session, start telling him how badly she needs to take a massive shit. The threat that she might just do it, and use his face as a toilet if he doesn't do exactly what she says--something like that is hot as fuck. Women making guys that lust over their body, be subjected to the grossest parts of it against their will and having an attitude of "what's the matter? I thought you liked my ass?". Umfph. Hoping that can explain at least a bit of what goes on in scatfags heads. It's literally just another form of Masochism, but for scent instead of touch.
>>11323366you want to become a dulihan? that's certainly unique
Oh this is a perfect thread to share something I have never otherwise had means to sayI have inoculated for far too long a doujin of sex based on the anglerfish. Naked dude with his big ol schlong floating through a void battered by a relentless, aching need to come. He spots the giantess kahuna with fat tits & cheeks that eclipse his vision, races over urgently ready to explode, scrabbles up her leg & fucks her massive pussy til he finally ejaculates in her. He enters into an endless haze of fucking, nutting & zoning out, with his body mass steadily shifting into his dick until hes half the size he was and the dick is double, and that body besides his dick fuses gradually about halfway into her flesh. Through his transformation, a couple other men join him and all of them lose themselves in this haze. The giantess doesnt acknowledge them whatsoever, but is experiencing sexual pleasure and gushing and coming from it herself.If anything like this exists I have not had much of a thorough searchAnother one with less pages to it is the termite - massive woman queen endlessly laying fat eggs and coming in a big hall, with her maids dutifully lifting away the soaked eggs and wiping up her mess as she pants and shakes, and soldiers and other workers just carrying on at the outskirts.I am extremely capable of drawing these but kind of dont want to be the one to do so
I've had an idea for a game for a bit, it's not the most fetishy thing ever but it'd might activate some almonds.>platformer with a focus on combat>maybe a metroid-vania but it doesn't have to be>you play as some girl who got magic hair because reasons>you can't really use hands or legs to attack but you use hair to attack things>due to the hair being magic, it can transform into different styles>each style attacks differently and can be used to solve puzzles>example: twin tails and cling to roofs, mohawks detach as boomerangs, pony tails can grab onto hooks, drills that actually drill the ground, that sort of thing>each hair style would come with a matching outfit>bad guys/antagonist want to cause everyone to have a bad hair dayit's very much inspired by shantae with maybe a dash of wonder boy and Kirby
The cheribus text has been cleaned up a bit I'd say it's much more readable/digestible now.I probably should add a table of contents too but I'm still am going to be adding more stuff sooner or later.
>>11323515Yeah, essentially. It started as a fetish for dullahan/detachable head girls, but I eventually read a story similar to that idea (where a dullahan steals the reader's head) and I started to like the idea of my own head coming off. There's lots of ways for it to happen/aftermath that I can really get into. Most of the time I imagine I am my head and my headless body has a mind of his own, but I'll also play with being my body or having control over it.
>>11315785>>11315788>>11315789Good work, that's is really hot. I think I'd go with Grass as my favorite, but I like all of them.
>>11324281>that's isoops
>>11324281Thanks. I can't choose between Ghost, Poison, and Dragon myself
>>11323965the girl who collects heads, would she give you different bodies to try out as if their your own?
>>11324295Nah, just keep me as a head. Toy, decoration piece, etc
>>11323965Well that is how the original myth of the dullahan goes, I'm fairly sureI had a premise for a story where a group of nerdy/unpopular girls sell their bodies (in a literal sense) to purchase a perfect venus body which they take turns using and enjoying.It'd either be sci-fi where they have collars that keep their heads alive and lock into the neck collar of the body which was made through genetic engineering to be naturally perfect, or magic where it's some sort of ritual that repurposes their bodies.
>>11323745Reading it
>>11324464I like that idea in the fact too that not all of them get to have a body at once having to share it
Would anyone be interested in reading a Human x Judy Hopps story?
>>11314296Posting story #1 of >>11314309I've posted this before and it's largely complete so I'll just post it all in a pastebin. But I'm still adding more "episodes" once my intermitent writer's block lifts. I have two ideas I'm chewing on for parts 21 and 22.>21I've recently completed Bookworm's LN and nobles worrying about their and their children's mana capacities is a feature of the series. So I'm taking that and making it a feature of this kingdom. The queen births royals but the mistreses in the harem birth the future lesser nobles of the kingdom. I made being pregnant with potions and tentacles a focus earlier but didn't ever mention normal pregnant sex yet, so this one is about those special precious pregnancies where the girls vie for the king's cock and mana, trying to get as much mana coloring their wombs as they can for their children's future status.>22About a kind of lewd sporting event. Basically a irl video/board game, Balatro-like specifically, played by the harem where all the participants sense the details and requirments of the game as they play it. TLDR: orgasms and magical glimmers are the mult-jingles. Sex positions, races of girls, and magic bullshit are the Jokers and hands.Here it is:~Laboratory Atop the King's Bed~https://rentry.co/atbzzxu5for you /b/ anon
>>11325554Go for it. Also who?
>>11325579>>11325581haha better to delete again and post these together. also /r/ing to reply to the idea anchor >11314296Good for the thread and for you
>>11325554that's probably not a good idea since she's a furry>>11325565the rabbit cop from zootopia
Judyanon I'm sorry I think I got you banned. Durr I'm a retard. I just up and forgot you can't post furry on /d/.You can post the fic again without the image once the bans lifts. My bad dude.
"accidentally"
>>11325875it's generally a good idea to read the rules of a website before using it.
>>11323366im curious more about your body returning without you. so what, your body is like a different person getting it on without you?
>>11325912I mean, kind of. I think of my headless body as "me" but without a head holding him back, more impulsive, instinct-driven, etc.Unable to feel or control my body at all, it does become something of a separate entity. I enjoy the idea of thinking about what my body would get up to without me, people being attracted to him, getting it on, etc. It's weirdly enjoyable being just a head knowing people are getting enjoyment out of my body or seeing/talking to him as if he were "me".
>guy has an odd power/curse>any time he plays with his nipples/has them played with girls, the nearest girls breast increase in size dramatically>the downside is that the pleasure of their nipples all goes to him (but not the breasts, so he isn't a busty boy or anything)>people find out so naturally girls get very touchy with him>they get so sensitive that it's basically 24/7 pleasure even without being touched by hands, it becomes an addiction>starts using nipple vibrators because that's the only way he can keep he's hands off of them now>literally every women in town has massive tits because of him
>>11325757Yep... 3 day ban. :(
>>11314296tldr;You have a daughter who professes to be a lesbian, and has a dominant older girlfriend. But unknown to you at the start of the story the girlfriend has a huge Dad fetish. So, she conspires with you to try and push your daughter into also tasting forbidden fruits. As of now the story is unfinished; but, there's still plenty of exciting scenes to read and I would enjoy feedback and suggestions as to how things should go forward.https://rentry.co/9re3m2e5Hopefully I don't get banned for this one. No furry inside I swear.
>>11314296https://rentry.co/6wszpwbtThis is the OTHER STORY, that got me banned. -_-u
>>11328270No the PIC got you banned don't say that lmao
>>11314296I did a write up for a reality alteration thread a year ago that I liked, so I figured I'd rehash something similar here.https://rentry.co/mh8ovzwa
>long time married couple are having issues>fighting all the time, constant snide remarks, no real time for one another>relationship is near it's breaking point>still they do care about one another so they decide to go to couples therapy to see if they can salvage it>therapist gets them to try some basic bonding stuff at first but to no avail>it's not going well but they still want to try>so the therapist tries a different approach>she wheels out an old school TV on cart with a dusty VHS and tells them to watch, it has that vapor-wave quality>it's some old ass educational video made for schools>they both think it's stupid but then they can't take their eyes off it.>it has them utterly enthralled>the video ends with only the memory of watching it remains rather then the content>both of them start getting along a bit better so they keep asking for the tape each time they go for a session, their relationship has been resparked>they notice they are acting...younger>at first it's just small things like picking up old habits>but it gets worse when they start acting like kids then snapping out of it after a moment>they think it's the tape since no matter how hard they try they can't remember any of the content just the fact they watched an old tape>they go to their therapist about it and get told the tape is used for getting in touch with your inner child via regression hypnosis>they debate if they want to continue with the tape but ultimately decide to keep doing it since they are much more happy with it then without>the therapist gives them a copy for home and tells them to watch it once a day until they feel like they are content>they end up getting it stuck on loop for a few days>end up as a ABDL couple but they are madly in love like, sweet lovey dovey cheesy romance kind of love>therapist has to become their care taker since it's partially her fault for making them baby brained
a small one>cheat day chocolate:>if you eat it you gain back any weight you lost and become even fatter if you eat it on a non-cheat day in an instant so it becomes that much harder to keep it off>however if you manage to reach your goal you'll stay thin no matter what you eat>but if you do cheat the chocolate is highly addictive/makes one extremely horny, just one is enough to make you a land whale
>>11330021Perfect for my fetish
>>11314294Nice I'm glad this general is still alive
need more ballpregnation
>>11314296I wrote this last winter:The cold weather and has me thinking about a Frostpunk type story. This could either be a game or an anime/doujin.A world similar to Frostpunk where an apocalyptic frost has swept the world but the generators that keep humanity alive are powered by fire elemental monster boys. With the frost came a deadly disease that killed only men. These men would spontaneously combust before dying. When every 2,000 men die though their essences would coalesce under the influence the mysterious "Phlogiston Factor" and be reborn as sapient fire elementals. These fire elementals eat wood, coal, oil, gasoline, ect and can power generators or, failing that, huddle together with throngs of women to keep them alive. The are able to burn very hot but their touch does not harm flesh. They can have sex and cum a special fluid called "Phlogistasm" (get it, phlogiston + orgasm har har). This glowing red-pink liquid carries vast biological energy and heat and in the bellies of women it vastly increases the efficiency of heat transference. Which increases even more whenever they orgasm.Women power industrial machines and factories by fucking mechanical dildos attached to generators. More advanced ones have two girls lez out on each other inside an oven or with another fire elemental. The central generator basically has an orgy of the "Fire Avatar" and his harem of the day fucking 24/7. Girls are baptized from a very young age by losing their virginity as soon as they hit puberty. Anyone that wants to do anything productive basically has to get in line to fuck the the big man and get some Phlogistasm. In addition to the Fire Avatars the Automatons from frostpunk are instead mechanical robot boys that need energy transferred to them by sex.
>>11333812>>11216340 2/2The rare pregnancies boost fire energy even more. Fire elementals can actually impregnate women with normal (female) children but their fertility is greatly reduced to offset the gargantuan amount of fucking going on all the time. The rate of pregnancy is healthily above replacement levels, allowing for gradual expansion of population rather than humanity breeding like rabbits. Rarer still is that every 1/1000 pregnancies a new Fire Elemental is born, which is seen as a momentous occasion. Such a pregnancy is of course ridiculously superpowered, exceeding even the direct heat output of an actual Fire Elemental. Women need to adopt half the diet of a Fire Elemental during these pregnancies and can drink gasoline and such. Fire Elemental cuisine is actually a thing in this world, basically the food ingredients of fine dining are replaced by anything flammable but are prepared with same level of ingenuity, like robot food form Futurama.Without a generator out in the Frostlands women travel with a fire elemental. They prepare bedding every night and feed him flammables before having a quick orgy and cozying up to survive the freezing nights. Little generator-less frostland communites do the same thing on a bigger village-sized scale.Think of anime Frostpunk with girls in cute fur heavy Siberian/Steampunk fashion with glowing bellies.
>>11333030I had an idea for an animation (I'm not an artist so it does me no good) where it's cock TF into hyper spermThat is, it's a futa/man fucking a futa/woman and when they merge the balls and ovaries fuse to become some sort of self-impregnating organ where the result is an actual organism that just looks like a bigger version of a spermThey get agitated in the presence of women and will force the host to cum even if they don't want to. Then they slither into woman's wombs to either turn them into some creature or to merge with the womb so she is perpetually birthing some creatures (like the sperm is a male angler fish in a way, the sperm is impregnating her with its own sperm)If you wanted to have ball impregnation, it could also be that the sperm can invade peoples balls so they too produce these sperm like creatures
Here's mine:A reversal of sorts of the typical H-Game/Doujin setup involving a faceless protagonist, this one has the protag being the only character with a face and all the girls are faceless, in a literal fashion even! Generally I imagine the reason for the girls' facelessness being supernatural, so they can still see, talk etc despite their state. Regardless of the general nature of the settng (transfering into a school for the faceless, moving into a town with no faces, getting isekai'd into a world where eyes, noses and mouths are foreign concepts and so on), the extra things on the protagonist's face stick out like a sore thumb to everyone else, as faccelessness is considered the norm. If it somehow ends up being a yuri game the main girl could end up losing her face in at least one ending.
In the future, when humas populate lots of different worlds, we as a species will need high birth rates. For this, our genome is changed, such that 9/10 people born will be female. also once they reach 18 years, they get a mix of drugs and hormones making them hyper fertile and developing theri breast to continuously produce milk and get wide child bearing hips. the ones selsected for this procedure will be super submissive and sec craving, having multiples at once and being almost perpetually pregnant.
I have a funny idea that would probably make for a short doujin.>Company decides to go wacky with advertising>Hires "marketing" to go around and aggressively fuck potential customers>not like, business office stuff, just regular people>ywn be aggressively cowgirled while she fills your ears about the newest washing machine or whatever
>>11336765I love it. Great funny potential, also hot
>post scarcity future utopia>gov program uses time travel tech to give people from the past, from more "unfortunate" times, a new life>the mind is uploaded in the moment of the person death, as to not influence the past>in the future, the person is given a new body>AI analyses the past of the person to determine her new body and role in the new society>beta boys who failed at their gender roles are given sissy bodies>bio engineered feminine bodies from the scratch>tiny dicks don't work, increased prostate sensitivity, anal lubrication, pregnancy, weak and small bodies>girls who failed at their gender roles in their original lives are given fit futa bodies>for a price, people can further change their bodies, get animal features and so on>these new people are assigned to an artificial space colony as their new home >while work is no needed for production, is believed that is needed to keep people busy and society from degenerating in to bunch of mindless animals>every person needs to pick a job and earn a quota of credits each week/month, or they get punished or even executed>access to certain luxuries and products are locked behind a paywall, people need to spend credits to get it, again to further incentive productive lives>each person is told they are in a probatory period in the first few years in their new life>during the first year, a handler/coach is assigned to the person, to ease her in the new life>during the probatory period, the person can't make meaningful changes to her body, can't change sex>also can't move to another colony>turns out the utopia is somewhat of an authoritarian dystopia run by AIs, or a loosh farm, or both
>>11314321>(No tentacles sucking cocks off)That's actually hot. Picrel has a character fertilizing some illegal magical beasts for information from a succubus.
idea I hope to one day make into a game/comic>(You) the big brother character>Have a sister (They're a futa)>You guys actually get along really well and like each other, though she has become a hikimori and won't leave the house without (You).>Futas are an uncommon thing in this world but aren't considered strange>Most futas are the stereotypical super high sexual needs/urges types, your sister included though she tries to hide it from you. >To help your sister you deal with her urges you decide to go out and find girls either by tricking them into thinking they're going to date you only to then hand them over to your sister to be her "onaholes" or have them know from the start.I know it's basically the getting cucked by your futa sister storyline, but I always kinda felt like a weird satisfaction in the idea of if I had a futa sister helping her get girls to fuck and that it was an "inside job" all along, I never had any intentions of dating the girl that sister "stole" from me and futa sister was in the know as well with only the girlfriend not knowing brother and futa sister were accomplices all along.also futa sis is a brocon but hides it and wants to get fucked/impregnated by (You)
I got a story idea.>Hermaphodite anthro ant aliens come in contact with not-star trek humans>the ant aliens are a genetic assimilation empire (think something like endless space horatio)>the humans offer to send "voluntaries" for assimilation to the ant aliens in exchange for resources and recruits>the human mc is one of these living samples, sent to paid for his minor crimes>the ant mc is one of the princesses of her race>as the cross-breeding project has been going for some years now, she has undeveloped human features she isnt aware off>primarily her hybrid breasts and humanized genitalia>the general idea is that she starts as a literal bugman alien and she ends as a curvy ant headed futa married to MC>sidestories about how the spread of human genes affects the ant people society>altenative ant mc could be the queen of a colony, and the gene therapy could be more agressive as shes older.
A duo of friends consisting of a fiery muscle girl and shy but super horny futa. The muscle girl loves to pin guys into compromising positions and encouraging her friend to rape them.
>>11322297>The story includes elements of femdom, soh, cSOH CAH TOA
>>11338942SINEOPPOSITEHYPOTENUSECOSINEADJACENTHYPOTENUSETANGENTOPPOSITEADJACENT
>>11338255I would love to play this, especially if your sister rapes the girls you bring.
>>11338443I'd watch this
>>11314296I have a huge thing for voluntary incubation/impregnation involving tentacles/eggs/aliens/etc in the context of a controlled laboratory trial/experiment. Attitudes ranging from bubbly and gung-ho to apprehensive and "I'm just here for the money," gradually shifting toward "actually this is a great time" in the case of the latter.Mild-to-moderate TF and body modification involved in the process is neat, even better when it's reversible but the test subject is having a fun with it and doesn't mind being altered a little longer. The holy grail of it for me is all that plus mpreg, but this is such a vanishingly rare niche that I'm pretty sure I've seen all of it. The primary reason I am learning to draw is to make more of this.
>>11323101>>11323143>be me>born in a world that operates with RPG mechanics>base stats, level-ups, skill points to assign>high mana but other spellcasting stats kind of mid>doable with proper equipment/training>let people to cast mana-draining spells on me in exchange for money>succubus offers to pay extra if she can drain it via my semen>iseethisasanabsolutewin.webp>instead of seeking the career of a Wizard, retire as a max-level Prostitute
>>11338255What if you are pimping your futa sister because there's genuine female demand for futa cock? It could be a scheme you two came up together, to simultaneously get her laid and provide household income. (The "transaction" would take place in a Love Hotel and not in her neetcave.)
>>11333812>>11333813Comfy
Judyanon you here?
>>11333013Same. It's so fun
>>11342861What's up? Did you get to the Judy story, then I take it?
>>11344158The incest one rather. I'm loving the concept but I have a bit of an issue with one writing technique you are using.I'll post the review I started real quick and then tell you my overall point after.
waitin on a reply btw
>>11344165Cool. Thanks. Ah that's the GF Corruption story. I haven't been back to it in about a month. But when inspiration hits I'll write more. And yes, I did end up getting called away to shop.
>>11344239Ok
>>11344242I'll come back to this thread later tonight. Hoping for good feedback. Did you complete the story? Or just slogging through it.
>>11344239 1/3I'll start with a small cricitism: you did first second and third person statements in rapid succesion for one scene. Did you do that on purpose? Whether or not you did: I wouldn't say that is advisableVery cool premise. Girl has a lesbian girlfriend but tells that girlfriend the INSTANT she finds her dad masturbating to her and is aroused herself? Father-daughter incest and lez-turned-bi? Very hot.>"Reading accurately that she requires permission Jen encourages Stephanie to climax by normalizing her arousal at the sight of a cock"This line is awkward though in a multitude of ways, this line begs expansion ang tweaking.The phone sex that follows is sexy as fuck, though I find it a little odd that it's "John" and not "Dad", but I guess thats by design?>You twitch in just that cute way you do. I wish you were here sucking on my tits.Fuck yeah. The "just" here is awkward though. Needs a slight rephrase. Try light use of gpt for things like this.I fucking love Jen. Great character, excited where this goes....yeah this is great stuff, this conversation is so fucking cute. Jen's what-ifs are hot. Little minx has and imagination on her. Love the dynamic of these two.>but that direct order strikes something repressed in her mindGreat line.>She feels like she's right there in the bathroom with you, feeling your cock slide in and out of her mouth.Whoops you said this already bro. Also the 2nd person "your" is weird after the third person that just happened.
>>113442452/3>From the door to her room I lean against the wall, looking in at the girl under the covers. I listen to her conversation without her noticing me at all.Hype. But now your doing first person perspective. You need to stop switching. At least in one scene like this.This 3-person scene is otheriwse genius though. Realistic emotions man at play too.>Now to move to the next stepOho so this bastard is planning shit huh? I forsaw this going somewhere else but I don't hate it.>It's for her mother, strong sleeping pills:/ Sleeping pills from her dad? Not what I expected but I'll see where this goes.>Can't have you going to sleep in those sex sweat soaked PJs.:O uh oh. I see she is so conked out it doesn't register>I lift up one leg and gently slide it to the side causing her lips to part with a quiet popHot line.>"I saw you watching me... in the bathroom. I know why you're so wet down thereSo you're not going the sleep sex route? Well good cause I am intensely bored by sleep sex, but I don't see why you needed the sleeping pills. But I'll keep reading.>"It's ok, you know. It's normal. To be curious about guys." I lean in and plant a kiss onto your mouth.Too fast to the kiss I'd say. Also "your"? Hard to read.>chip away at your drug addled willI see now.> and the intensity of my gaze seems to push through the haze of the drug on your mind."My" AND "your"?>Ask. You know you wanted to>it seems to say.Bad linebreak and idk what this means. Well I can guess but it's odd. Needs better flow.The concept of the scene itself is still hot as fuck though.>slowly sliding my finger up and down your folds. It's so much different than Jen's fingers. So much wider, rougher, harder.Nice visual>Remembering your orders Stephanie keeps her jaw relaxedBack to third person>Unconsciously she associates the sensation of your cock inside of her mouth and the pleasure of orgasm..Great stuff.Neat that she might think this was just a dream
>>113442463/3>I lie in bed watching asThis is steph now so I would quad linebreak here or something.>I watch from the shadows as Stephanie slowly comes toWhat the fuck? This goober stayed up all night in the room? Shouldn't he just retire and let events play out a little first?>"You know I wanted to stay mad at you after last night.... but... when I got into the shower I couldn't help bur remember our fantasy we made up before things to out of hand. It was so fucking hot, I just had to touch myself again. I cam SO hard. So... all is forgiven, love."Jen is peak. I want to see him fuck them both. She has the cocklust too.>You wanna come over in a few?Too fast maybe. I think it's more advisable to have Steph go to Jen's instead?Amneisa huh? Don't like it myself but maybe you're about to leverage it well.>It's well intended but all it does is make you remember me in the bathroomOk I'm gonna have to stop here for now. This 1rst 2nd 3rd perosn writing oscilating is fucking with my head.I'll keep going but I want to ask you a few questions first.>>11344244I've only read 1/4th BUT I really like it and plan on reading more. But for the reasons you can see I want to ask a few questions first and have you talk me through the next bits.
>>11344247So there is a POV character, usually. Whoever the "Me" is, is who the current scene is following. I usually TRY to keep it just as the male character being "me". But, when it's the girls together it gets more confusing.Go ahead and ask. I'll try and get back to it when I'm home later tonight.Glad that you're enjoying the story. :D
>>11344252What was your intention with this? The rapidly oscilating between 1rst, 2nd, and 3rd person is very bizarre and nigh unreadable. I'll keep going but I'll need your help.How does the next part after the point I stopped proceed?Some of the phonesex you write is pretty damn good so it's a shame.You really need to stick with one of these for longer. You can style shift if you want but it needs to happen during a scene shift or chapter break. The way it is now is highly confusing
While not intended specifically for hentai I'm keen on a story in which a woman wakes up seemingly in her own bedroom but her body shifted to a much more sexed up from. She finds she isn't alone her female neighbors , the local news anchor everyone female shifted. After a day of exploring this world where people treat pawing over her as normal as scratching ones chin she manages to get some sleep and wakes up back in her world.
>>11344278She brushes it off as a wild dream until the next day she awakens in that world again , every night she awakens in the other world wherever she fell asleep in the last. After some further investigation she learns this alternate world is actually only a few years in the future and more alarming things are starting to fall into place to make this bad future. Now she's on a quest to figure out how this happened and hopefully save the future.Kinks would involve free use ,public exhibition, free use and some bimbofication.
>>11344247Reading it over there are a couple "you"s in there. Those are... odd. That's fair. I'd have to go over it and smooth down those inconsistencies. I suggest you just keep going. I think things settle down later on. Thanks for reading it. Hopefully you were able to "enjoy" it. ;)
>>11344494It's not just a few "you"s though. The rapid perspective switching between the dad and the daughter in the same room is odd.Do you stick to Third Person-limited at least at somepoint?You may want to rewrite this under Third Person-omniscient if you really intend to get the fathers and the daughters headspaces at once Does your Judy fic do this?
>>11344502No the Judy one is pretty firmly just in Judy's head.The weirdness is because I usually write just from an semi omniscient perspective with access to the male's thoughts. When he's out of the room and I'm in her head instead stuff gets wonky. IF I do end up doing a rewrite I'll smooth it out.
>>11344505Consider having an LLM do it for you. Just tell it you fucked up grammar and swtiched 1/2/3rd person language up a bunch.
>>11344508Ah... what? This is all hand written on notepad my dude. Stream of consciousness type writing. With occasional pauses to one handed exercises. :P
>>11344509LLM=AIIt's important to make your writing digestible, your fellow men aren't mind readers
>>11344515I can honestly just fix it at some point. (probably)Should I commit the time to fix the text and re-up it. Or will you finish the work as written first?
Lore : CUM = MANATitle: Cum WitchesTags: gokkun, cumflation, excessive semen, fantasy
>>11344560>Incredibly powerful>But one-pump chumps who dump all their accumulated cum at once>Require days of "charging" beforehand
>>11344560Hi AssJim
>>11344518Well how fast can you touch it up? I may just wait then. Hows the Judy story btw? Do you do it in it too or actually stick to 3rd person?>re-up itYou can edit rentrys yknow. I hope you saved the edit code it gave you. I bookmark mine and name them the edit code. EZ
>>11345123The Judy story is recent so it SHOULD be more well written. I certainly didn't keep the code, I have a hard copy of the original text file. A re-write insofar as fixing the POV stuff shouldn't take TOO long. Just a matter of motivation, honestly.The Judy text is also shorter. And for the record I give you a wave in the genner threads cause it's a nice way to see you're on, and not fill this thread with just our precise back and forth.
>>11344560Strike Witches? More like Stroke Bitches amrite
>>11345141Yeah save the edit code next time. Upper left of the screen. Refreshing the page (and presumably waiting too long) loses it forever.I would really recommend finding an uncensored chatbot of your choice and just telling it:"Hey I fucked up and mixed 1rst 2nd and 3rd person style writing and I want you to help edit my writing"It will really save time, BUT granted nothing beats the feel of doing it yourself.Test it by asking it to write a big portion in "3rd person - omniscient" then again in "3rd person - limited"If you want to intersperse 1rst person or god forbid 2nd person a little ask it if that is advisable. YOu can carry on a whole conversation along those lines.Ask /g/ for a good chatbot.
>>11345151I'm old. There's nothing wrong with doing something by hand. I'll just copy the text of the original post, delete it, and repost it with a new link after I finish editing.
>>11345160It can be fulfilling to just back and forth with a chatbot over the topic of your own writing just fyi.Recommend giving it a try. Try Perplexity.ai
>>11345161So much rewriting. Gah I hate working on my own stories again. But the second pass should be cleaner.
>>11345161There... buncha work put into this one. This is like 40% of the overall story.Give it a read from the top and see if it's better,https://rentry.co/i5pmaq2y
>>11345208Before I read it I ask my model to compare them. It spat this back:Where is it still imperfect? Occasional present-tense slips: There are points where the narration switches tenses or briefly adopts a “you”/“I” mode, especially when the father narrates: e.g., “I drop the strips onto a waiting plate...” shifts to a direct first-person, but it almost always happens in blocks where John is the clear narrator. Internal monologue formatting: There’s some inconsistency in the formatting of thoughts (sometimes quoted, sometimes not, sometimes italicized), but this is a much, much smaller issue than POV.Biggest improvement: Whereas previously a single scene (“I observe as Stephanie does X, she feels Y, you watch her do Z...”) jolted between viewpoints, now the POV remains steady for long stretches, and only shifts exceptionally when switching to John as narrator/focalizer—and those segments read more like intentional cut-aways.Summary Verdict:Yes, this is a substantial and successful fix: The writer has stabilized the story’s viewpoint. Scenes stay in either Stephanie’s or John’s head for several paragraphs at a time, rarely blurring boundaries (and usually just for flavor or drama). The disorienting “You/She/I” mix from before is almost eliminated. Dialogue and internal thoughts are cleanly separated from narration.Room for further polish: Tighter control of tense changes (present/past) More consistent formatting for thoughts (either always using quotation marks, italics, or tags, not a mix)
>>11345216I tried to catch all of those you/I slips. That's the majority of the work. I thought I got them all. Darn it.All the internal thoughts are supposed to be italicized. But can't be done in notepad sadly. Glad you were able to enjoy it more... I think?
>>11345223I'll read it when you do the whole thing (I didn't yet, I told and LLM to)I REALLY like where the story is going though. Very hot.
>>11345239Boo. :(
>>11345241Heh sorry but the 1/2/3rd person jumps were nign unreadable.
>>11345242I'm pretty sure I fixed those. I got to the part where the GF visits her in person for the first time. So much work.
>>11345245Hench my suggestion to use an AI.
>>11345252*old man yells at cloud*
>>11345254KEK
hey do any of you have any ideas about powers that can be used sexually? Or powers that are simply sexual in nature? I feel like i never see enough of this type of stuff.
>>11345559My stories here do it>>11314313>>11315785
I'm working on a fantasy setting that, on the surface, is not sexual at all but secretly has several of my kinks embedded within. My general approach is to start from a vaguely scientific or historical lens and work from there and that applies to kinky stuff too. I know it's annoying, but I like futas, specifically dickgirls but any female-with-dick thing gets my hot. I originally was just going to settle for pegging being a big thing culturally as, for non-kinky reasons (sort of), men and women are about the same size, have the same muscle density and there are far less mores about gender as a result. That is, until I remembered that I wanted shapeshifters to be a thing. They were created by a magically adept kingdom as spies and assassins, and their genetic structure (not a geneticist, so I haven't thought that far ahead) is highly adaptable. Well, at one point there was a king who crossed the wrong person from another kingdom, and had the guy killed. The shapeshifter took on the role of the king and just...hung out. He lived a great life, and was actually a more competent and fair ruler than the actual king would have been. To his surprise, the Queen one day revealed that she was pregnant (which he thought was impossible), and they had a daughter. She would go on to unite the kingdoms under a rejuvenated Empire. Secretly, she was a futa (need a better name) and spread her seed far and wide Ghengis Khan style. The DNA spread so far and wide that lots of birth defects and such are completely missing in the Empire even a thousand years later but something like 2% of female children have some form of futa-ism going on.
Wrong end enemas. You drink so much water that your stomach cant pass it all to your kidneys in time so your intestines get flushed out from the other side.
>>11344560>Cum = manaFunnily enough there is a game series that features exactly that, SEQUEL by Leaf Geometry (awake is the first in series). In universe men got captured and milked for their semen since it's a valuable resource. There's one bad end like that for protag, otherwise it's mostly reverse rape by monster girls.That aside there are some magic girl/mage/succubus protagonist games where they restore mana via sex. ex. 'Magical Princess Frika' by WAX-G2(Note to avoid disappointment; neither game I've mentioned includes the fetishes you want though, excessive cum, cumflation etc)
>>11345559There's a lots of fiction with sex powers (eg summoning tentacles, melting clothes, aphrodisiac aura, arousal curse) but it's true it's rare to see creative use of standard powers (telekinesis, flight, super strength) for sex.But honestly anything has potential to do interesting sexual acts with if you think about it, though the more flexible a power is, the more you can do with it. For example there's a Tatsumaki animation of her giving as telekinetic 'piss job' (literally masturbating someone's dick with her pee). Inversely something flight seems a bit limited imo, it just enables some unusual sex positions (ex. standing 69), makes it easier for a normal human have sex with a muscular/big superhuman (wont get crushed under them and lets the human act more dominant, like 'throw' them around assuming they can make themselves lighter/weightless), exhibitionism (sky sex).Is there any specific kind of power/s you're thinking about? Could try and brainstorm it with you.Tatsumaki video for anyone interested; https://rule34video.com/video/3108314/tatsumaki-nakanocchi/
>>11345636thanks i'll check them out>>11345903yeah i was trying to think of ways more "normal" powers could be used sexually because i was listening to that one meme about reverse flash jerking off the flash at super speed. It's probably because i'm just uncreative but it's kinda hard to think of ways to fuck people with more common powers. like how am i supposed to do weird sex shit with laser eyes? or frost breath? or god forbid mind reading.
>>11346273You betcha, reviews even short ones appreciatedYou may also like >>11325562 but it's 20 full 4chan posts long just fyi.20 bite sized storyettes so highly digestible
>>11346273Well, frost breath could be used to freeze people into ice statues that are still fuckable, while mond readong could be useful for both flirting and extreme BDSM (the kind where your partner can't move or say the safeword). Don't know about laser sight, but Superman can use it to temporarily negate a villain's psychic powers by laser-ahicking his brain theough his retina, so you do have something to work with.Now imagine being the poor guy whose power is "make meteors fall towards the user's location".
>>11346273>laser eyes?Well if you assume they can control output to make it safe for anyone or their partner is superhuman/has regeneration, then it could be used for BDSM or ryona/guro assuming the partner is a hardcore masochist. There's some magic girl fiction that takes that direction (like they can be brutal tortured because body heals when they untransformed).>frost breathThere is temperature play, honestly dont know if people would enjoy it, but like switching between hot/cold on sensitive areas (Actually could be paired with above, freeze, then rapidly melt it with the laser). Or if it's supernaturally being partially frozen without affecting health, could be used for bondage, binding feet/hands to floor or preventing movement of most of body like petrification fetish.>mind readingSimple thing would be knowing exactly how to please their partner. I'm quite partial to the idea of a yandere cuckquean, so with mind reading they could figure out who their love interest likes and how to get them into harem. Aside from that, maybe expand the power to like sensory/emotion sharing as well, so sex where both sides can feel what the other does.Anyways, there's some quick ideas. Hope it helps.
>>11346279>make meteors fall towards the user's locationMassaging a giantess/kaiju, or having them ass up and using the meteors like improvised anal eggs.
I love the idea of a size queen somehow granting a guy a massive cock for her to enjoy. Then while she's on cloud nine, he realizes he's so hard he can't even cum. She continues riding him while hes suffering from the worst blue balls ever
>>11345208Not that anon and are you a retard? This story still has perspective language problems. You didn't fix shit. Who the hell writes like this.
>>11347723Yeah man. I don't know what the hell happened. The story I went through and fixed didn't get uploaded. It put up the original version. I did another pass through and fixed everything. I think. I would seriously appreciate it if you'd give it another shot, and know it's highly unlikely.https://rentry.co/idy4nkee
>>11347883Here I'll read this too>https://rentry.co/idy4nkee
>>11349093Thanks. I hope you find it enjoyable.
>>11314296We have a billion stories about evil creatures corrupting magical girls, but almost nothing about magical girls corrupting demons. I always wanted a story that flips the script around.__________________________________________________A powerful magical girl, tired of seeing their friends corrupted into monstrosities, develops a method to turn the tables and tame demons instead. By confining a demon within a room made from light, tying them up, and breaking their will through "loving" sexual torment, a magical girl can overpower a demon's darkness and turn them into their familiars. A familiar's will is subsumed by the magical girl's light; they gain a need to constantly please and be dominated by their magical girl mistress, and thus become genuinely submissive and obedient to them.The familiar turns into a cute, humanoid monster girl/boy (if they weren't before), and their power becomes shared with the magical girl they belong to. They gain a glowing womb tattoo engraved with a crest representing their mistress, and their bodies are changed to be more "light-ish" in theme, but otherwise keep their old abilities intact. For instance, a vampire with blood magic retains her blood magic, supernatural strength/agility, flight, and whatever else they had even after becoming a vampire. Taming demons does exhaust a magical girl's inner light, so their familiar harem is limited to the strength of their own light/will. More powerful magical girls can tame multiple demons, or more powerful demon lords, while less powerful ones might have to settle with a single normal succubus or whatnot.
>>11349792The discovery of demon taming changes the magical girl society practically overnight. Now, demons - especially ones with more popular powers like succubi that lets their masters be more popular in school - are actively hunted by magical girls. Demons are forced into hiding, doing their evil under utmost secrecy for fear that a magical girl shows up and turns them into a submissive minion. Even worse is the extra power that demon familiars grant to their masters. A magical girl with a high-level succubus familiar can enter the hearts and dreams of powerful politicians and cut off subtle demonic influence immediately. A magical girl with a demon general can command her subordinates, putting watchful eyes all over the city.Soon, with their new familiars and new abilities, the Magical Girl Association is founded - a secretive organization where magical girls of all kinds gather to share information, exchange magical artifacts, and help shroud themselves from the greater societal zeitgeist. Central to the association is the auction, where magical artifacts, potions, and even demon familiars are exchanged like some sort of slave trade.Most magical girls, being generally good people, will treat their familiars well, though bondage sex and domination are required to satisfy their familiars and help strength their connection. Since most magical girls are naive and not that worldly, their (usually more savvy) demons also tend to become their financial advisors, starting companies in their name and making their masters wealthy and powerful. Some magical girls have let their new powers go to their head, however, so the Association keeps itself busy hunting down rogue magical girls as well as evil creatures.
>>11349792ah the old hero fucks the villain into submission a rare classic that the world needs more of.
>>11339002Kek
>>11314294Great idea for a thread
>>11349792>>11349794I love this concept.
How do I maintain focus on a project?I have lots of ideas, but every time I've gone to try and write something or make something, I get to a good part, masturbate a few times, then kinda lose momentum.I've tried not masturbating to it, but then I masturbate to something else, and kinda lose momentum. What's a good way to keep working on something after I masturbate to the half baked idea?
>>11353759I just take breaks and come back when the idea feels like writing again. I've only posted two of my stories on here so far but I've written like... 12. MOST aren't finished. I'd say, if you do jerk it, try not to finish while you're writing until you reach a good breaking point of some kind.
Just something I've thought of. Take someone, ideally someone proud and haughty but anyone will do. Kidnap/imprison them, make a copy of their consciousness. It can just be a sufficiently realistic program or an actual fork of their identity but the point is it behaves exactly like they do.Then totally mindbreak the copy. Make them watch as their mind copy is reduced to a stupid slut constantly being used and filled with cock. Let them stare in disbelief and think "N-no way, that's just a simulation" "there's no way I'd actually do that!" etc etc.I'm not sure where to go from there. Either you then slowly introduce the same stuff that mindbroke them in real life, or you hook them up to the machine and slooooowwwly sync their personalities, giving them the same memories and mindbreak damage as their copy even as their original ego exists simultaneously, or just have the new one override the old one, but I like the former more where they know intellectually what happened to them but are helplessly to stop themselves from doing IRL what they did in the sim, as opposed to just identity death. Really just fuck them up.
>>11354466I had this thought once I think. Hot.
I've been thinking about dungeons/prisons alot. The idea of imprisoning a bunch of people and tormenting, objectifying, and humiliating them sexually is pretty sexy. Especially in something like a super advance or fantasy world. My favorite type would most likely be a fantasy style dungeon. I would have my prisoners in sensory depravation pits leaving only their heads exposed having them violated and bred by tentacles i would then on random intervals turn of the sensory depravation forcing them and letting them know their entire bodies are being violated and theirs nothing they can do to stop it. that's all i have for now if you other gentlemen have any ideas please inform me as i would love hearing them
>>11357163Well if you want potential a motives for why (beyond simply lust):- Corrupting captured magical girls, with goal being turning them into loyal minions- Using them for breeding more monsters to expand army- Harvesting magical energy, so "living batteries" to power dungeon/facility- Criminal correctional facility, where purpose is to "fix" their mindset, like mesugaki correction (either state approved or vigilante managed)- Turning them into "products", like training sex slaves to sell to othersAs for things to do to captured victims, I'm a fan of manipulating them into corrupt themselves. So like futanarization, telling them the dick will be disappear if they do nothing, but if they cum it's permanent, then tempt them (edge them, force them to watch sex tapes, drug them with aphrodisiacs etc). You can take it further like, the more they cum the more their body transforms (dick/breasts grow etc), so it serves as proof of them loosing themselves to lust.Other fun stuff for capture scenarios would be capturing people connected to each other (squadmates, friends, family etc). Then you can do stuff like claiming if they accept what happens to them the other person will be left untouched, then of coarse at the end revealing both got messed with to completely break them mentally. Or tricking them into messing with each other, like futanarization + aphrodisiac then put in room with a wall butt (of someone they know).Also something related I find neat; https://rule34video.com/video/3358780/bremerton-vs-penis-sensory-cut-off-hole-for-endless-ejaculation-hell-eng-subs/ (This animator has done a bunch of videos about futa in ero dungeon where she has to complete tasks to escape rooms)
>>11314294A lot of mind-control tends to just be all-or-nothing affairs. You snap your fingers, and the girl is suddenly all over you and obeying your every command. There's very little spice in that imo; I want more slower burn mind control stories where the guy slowly add rules and limitations to a girl's life, where the girl's control over her life is slowly and methodically removed rather than "snap fingers, instant slave." As an example:MC likes the beautiful class rep, and starts off by using his mind control powers on her. Every day, she goes to school with a vibrator inside her, but doesn't remember ever putting it in. She also can't take it out, even though there's no locks or anything securing it in place. Every time she tried, she forgets how to do it and ends up masturbating with it instead. She can't go to a teacher or the cops; when she tries to do so, her programming makes her try to seduce them instead, so she has to pretend it's stress or something and run away. This continues on for days, with her not being able to do anything about it.The MC then makes other edits to her life. She becomes stressed if she goes outside in anything but cosplay. She tries to resist at first, but the stress buildup is too much that she'll end up cosplaying sometimes, then all the time, just to escape it. Maybe she'll get a job at a cosplay cafe just to have an excuse for her new compulsion, maybe she ends up going outside less, but eventually she starts liking it. Maybe every time she gets a high score on a test or does something she's proud of, she gets irresistibly horny for the day. She doesn't want to tarnish her reputation, so she ends up running away from her happy events just to relieve herself in private for the rest of the day. Maybe the MC even make her start picking up some of his interests, like video games and anime.(Continued in next post)
>>11358162Whenever she does something he doesn't like, he punishes her. Maybe she forgets how to walk and is forced to crawl for an entire day. She can't go outside like this, so she ends up having to call in sick and order delivery for her food that day. Maybe she is commanded to put on a ballgag, and has to cover it with a mask and pretend to have lost her voice. The MC doesn't take it too far - he likes the class rep, after all, and don't want to completely break her or ruin her reputation. But her mind is spiraling at these punishments that she tries her best to figure out what offended this mysterious force, just so that she doesn't have to endure these punishments anymore.Eventually, the MC reveals himself as her tormentor, but forbids her from thinking any negative thoughts about him. She also forbids her from being able to love or have sex with anyone else. She naturally wants to hate him, but can't due to his mind control. So, she tries to avoid him at first, but the MC finds ways to show up in her life. She's still horny all the time and has a vibrator in her the entire day, so eventually, she gives in and has sex with him to relieve her urges. She makes him promise to not ruin her reputation, and eventually, since she can't hate him, she ends up slowly falling in love.There could be a bonus scene of the new couple's mind control sex plays, with the same restrictions/mind control rules theme.
Gotta vent: Reading a Mahoako fanfic, Baiser can grow a dick and is continually referred to as futa, then several chapters later it's mentioned she has no vagina when in "futa form". Fucking author not knowing the difference between shemale and futanari. How the fuck do idiots still make this mistake? Even Wikipedia's futanari article has the correct definition.>>11358162The core issue is that most sites just have a 'mind-control' tag rather then more specific ones for different forms of hypnosis, which makes it difficult to find the more interesting stuff. You want to be searching for stuff with 'common sense manipulation' and 'triggers'. Some sites like hypnohub (images) & svengali (stories) have better tagging.
>>11314296i love this image
>>11358815This is why I require ball-less in my futa
>>11349794I was thinking about what would happen if a magical girl were able to tame a tentacle-based demon. At the lowest they would acquire tentacle "powers" which have some utility on their own, but it is hard to take away the inherent malevolence of an entity conceived of as basically a bunch of extremely long and maneuverable cocks. But still, fertile ground for development. Maybe it would carry some stigma to have a tentacle-based familiar, or be uncommon since trying to tame one runs the risk of being victimized in the usual fashion by one instead. On the higher tiers, thinking of tentacle pits/flesh cavern type situations, she could make entire areas that are "run" by tentacles, living quarters that have tentacles do and provide everything for their inhabitants, dispose of their waste, move them around as needed, etc. She could even create a kind of consentacle heaven, as opposed to the usual seedbed/prisoner arrangement, where the inhabited are deprived of all agency, where instead the tentacles help to heal and nourish their inhabitants instead of impregnate them.
>>11349792>>11349794I like this a lot, though I'd prefer if monsters are turned into cute mascots instead as a result of their purification. An ancient vampire might become a cute bat. A great serpent born from all the envy and mistrust that has rotted a city can be purified into a tiny tadpole or salamander. A wicked witch who has obtained immortality? A helpless kitten.I especially like the idea of the auction. I think it's best if the demons are sold before being purified. A magical girl who has a lot of familiars already can't afford to purify it herself even though she can capture it would be the most likely to sell a demon there. Sure, it's a little cruel to treat them like objects, but it's a demon, and it's evil needs to be purified. Not all magical girls are compatible with all demons, so despite how unsettling it is for most magical girls, the auction is important. Some of the new girls might act scared and horrified, placing bids with guilty expressions, while some gleefully bid like they're buying a new toy or taking home a pet. Some might feel sorry for the demons lashing out or acting dejected and bid on them to "save them", despite that being exactly what the demons are afraid of. The only hole in the concept is what the auction trades in, since I don't think magical girls would sell demons cold cash. Maybe the association mints it's own tokens, used only for trading in the association. The amount a magical girl can bid would then roughly reflect her veterancy and a history of heroic deeds. Of course it's still common for a new magical girl to have her more powerful friends buy her an expensive demon as her first familiar. Because of their tendency to share, weak demons with interesting abilities are priced higher than the seriously dangerous ones.
>>11363941>Since most magical girls are naive and not that worldly, their (usually more savvy) demons also tend to become their financial advisors, starting companies in their name and making their masters wealthy and powerful.I love this detail so much. It humiliates the demons to be controlled by a master so incapable at things other than wielding the power of hope and friendship, yet they're still so completely purified that the girls can trust them to handle that stuff without any protection against the demon betraying them. They're completely incapable of doing anything mean at all. Would be even better if it applies to more simple tasks too. A lot of magical girls might not know how to cook or clean, or may just not care for doing it, so why not have their familiar do it for them? Struggling with home work? Some demons make great tutors. The week before midterms is always scary for demons because so many magical girls go looking for a demon experienced at the subjects they are struggling in to purify.>>11362968Purified tentacle creatures would be really gentle and loving. Despite that, owning one would still be extremely embarrassing for a magical girl. They may be cute, but they're still slimy, gross, and any girl who likes touching them a lot is most likely a pervert.
>>11314296One doujin idea that i've had for a while is one about an aging Magical Girl has gotten older. Realized she's a bit over the hill, not like back in her teenage years when she was the veritable Sailor Moon. Beating bad guys and saving the world. It was great. And she REALLY misses those times. One of the things she secretly missed was the fact that she used to be a sex symbol. Of course, she'd deny this due to societal etiquette. But she decides she's gonna put the old costume back on and try to go back out there...Now, normally, in this kind of story, this is the part where she's captured and raped and blah blah blah, you know the story.Here's where it's different. She actually finds that she's still got it. If anything, she's even more powerful now. She easily 1-shots anything that she comes across... The problem is that, again, with her having recently grown past the age where men are looking at her, she's kinda sex-starved at this point and was hoping for the typical hentai scenario.After a lot of thinking, she remembers one of her old enemies. A deplorable little tentacle bastard who had a thing for older women. He's a shonen-style villain, very handsome and feminine, but that's just a human suit that hides the fact that he's a deplorable sack of slime, tentacles, parasites and all other nasties within. He specifically used to do the Inyouchuu style of utterly fucked-up hentai stuff to older ladies he'd kidnap. Now, he was sealed away by Magical Girl and her allies when they were young... But what if he was to somehow break loose? Hohoho, delightfully devilish Magical Girl.pt 1/2
>>11365444She goes to his prison and unseals him. As he makes his epic, grand entrance, preparing for his state to the world that he's back... Turns out that 25 years in a magical prison actually did the trick and he's not interested in raping girls anymore. He comes out begging for forgiveness and promises to be a good guy from now on. Although now he realizes just how much older she is and now she's grown into just his type of lady.So, the ongoing story now revolves around a Magical MILF and her Tentacle Shounen Sidekick stopping monster attacks and saving the world inbetween their utterly depraved slimy, tentacly, slamfuck sessions where she begs him to annihilate every last hole on her body in the name of getting them both off.Of course, there's the other Magical Girl allies who don't trust their old leaders new ally, but he definitely finds ways to win them over.I kinda like the idea of it ending with them getting married and handing the duties of saving the world off to their Magical Girl Tentacle Hybrid Daughter (Something along the lines of Mayu from Mahou Shoujo Ai)
>>11365444>>11365445utter garbage, kill yourself fucking retard
>>11365466>wheredoyouthinkweare.gif
>>11365445cute
>>11366297>samefag
>>11314301this is a simple idea, but I would like to see the following>straight and loving couple>average bodiesthey get a challenge: have sex for 24 hours.they decide not to do it actively so rules are only to keep the penetration and do not orgasm during the challange.so on weekend in the morning they getting naked and start, experiencing obvious difficulties on their way, such as:>figure out how to walk together keeping the penetration>how to cook>how to work on their computers>how not to cum during these actionsthen they realize that one of them(or both) need to pee, but they still have to keep penetration, so they have to go into the shower to avoid making a mess and sit on the floor, go through the embarassment of doing such thing together and cleanup afterwards. (no number 2 tho, it would be hella gross)in the end of the day they realize that to finish this challenge they will have to sleep like this to the morning, so they tie their hips together to avoid guy slipping out when he gets soft.then when they wake up they untie and have the hottest sex everthe end.
>>11333812that's hot(pun intended)the idea of so much many people have to do smth like that for a living, completely blurring the idea of privacy and intimacy. those women would probably nonchalantly talk to eachother while working.so those mechanical dildos are kinda like external dicks for elementals? can they feel all the women riding them at the same time?
>>11358815does these hypnosis types have names?I'd like to look for the 3rd, but idk how to search it
>>11367039Thanks.>so those mechanical dildos are kinda like external dicks for elementalsNo actually, the elementals just have fire dicks. The mechanical dicks thing was to add the idea of robot boys fucking the girls too. I probably didn't comunicate that too well.
>>11367041I'm fairly sure there aren't really universally accepted terms for them and sadly most sites (like SadPanda) only have a 'mind control'/'hypnosis' tag, so there's no way search for specific types (Unless you're lucky and it's part of title). Anyway, here's what they're sometimes referred to by;1st; body control, aware2nd; mindless, doll, unaware. Can tie to 'personality excretion' and 'robotization' fetishes3rd; common sense manipulation, altered common sense, pixiv tag is 常識改変4th; brainwashing, relates to corruption, bimbofication, slutificationFor the 3rd, if you're wanting eromanga like that take a look at Kakuninii's work
>>11365445Make it a Harem type where the Tentacle guy is "Recruiting" the other Magical MILFs and sounds hot.Although in that regard, kinda reminds me of a less rapey version of Fan No Hitori's "My Lady, My Master" but with tentacles. I'm ok with that, that story was hot.You got any idea's for what makes each of the Magical MILF's unique or just "Legally Not Sailor Moon"
>>11367727If you haven't read my "Tentacleman x Anti-Tentacle Corps" story above please do.
>>11367924I appreciate the idea, but honestly, i'm just burnt out on Rape stuff at the moment. It's just 90% of the whole medium. That guys story seemed mostly consensual so it piqued my interest.
>>11368093T rape that pivots into consentacles is my jam, sorry
Here's an idea and it's just a yuri doujin that only has inflation. About an inflation club for female inflation loving students, and the club president is a lewd inflation-holic with a club lab working on inflation fetish objects for women in the name of science like inflatable latexes, Wonka blueberry gum, and conditions to make certain female body part inflate. And for science, she wants to go bigger, and bigger, and hornier.
