previous thread >>11303306Only 6 more pages till the chapter is finished, he's drawn a crapton of Funou/AV mini mangas. Do you think we're going to get a Funou/AV schooldays flashback arc?
i want a pregnant futa elf
Tansho next letsgooo
>>11381983Never ever, only anal, every chapter, indefinitely.
>>11382162I get the kawakami likes butts, but holy jeez i'd wish he'd tone down the butthole spam a little.
>>11382162that's exactly what i want
>>11382162Fuck no!
>>11382162Hatred wells within me if this becomes our future
>>11381983Every girls impregnated by schneenis
>>11382162I am only following at this point for the hope that Umanami will savagely sodomize Yuri for once
Mara is gonna be the biggest elf one day, Funou's reign is coming to an end.
>>11381983Endgame is clearly building up to Yuri getting knocked up by someone, since the seal on her only blocks getting pregnant if both parties involved don't think about wanting a kid in the heat of the moment.It's just the question of which of the Elves is gonna get the Lucky Number there
With anal being introduced in av chapter it also builds up to a double penetration scene either funou + umanami being a obvious for that one as they had a scene together and might do so in the future or else something new like mara + funou , av + tansho ect
>>11383767either mara or some fuckery where all of them will at the same time, and yuri will end up with quadruplets.
What is he gonna do with Tansho next chapter?I just hope insanely huge amounts of cum are involved
Tansho need’s to cumflate Yuri or get fucked by someone soon
Could be hot if tansho fucks yuri as tansho in turn gets fucked by some other futa
Tansho should fuck Umami's urethra.
>>11383035Uma will on day surpass and avenge her mother.
where's the anon that said this page was a bad idea
>>11384974It is kinda dumb desu. The previous two pages we're god tier, this is meh. Reminds me of that butt bashing anime.
>>11384974futanari no elves' dicks must be very bending.
>>11384974Not much to see on that page ngl feel like previous pages here were better legit if you didn't know the elf was a futa all you saw here was just 2 chicks banging their asses
>>11384974I think he's over doing it with the ass.
>>11385028It's been years since he drew an appealing ass.
I dunno how much I'm going to mess around with this, but I wanted opinions and criticism.Does anything not read well?More stars, less stars? (they'll twinkle in the final animation)Any colors that could be swayed in a direction?Should it have more highlights on the skin and outlines?The entirely overambitious idea is to add some steam to the sauna, sweat drops on Funou, dick throbs, chest rising with breaths, some stars twinkling with lil' coronas, and her blinking.There's also a very tiny niggling idea to have Yuri pop over the wall and stare at her occasionally, maybe once per four loops.But before that, how's it look so far?
>>11385361OH HEY LOOK WHO JUST NOTICED HE FORGOT TO GIVE HER EYEBROWS AND AT LEAST A HINT OF HAVING TWO EYES?ONE HINT: HE'S A FUCKING GROGNARD!DAMMIT!>or maybe she looked better without i dunno man im my own worst critic
I'm sure there something wrong with it that i didn't find yet, but this'll do until I notice something a week down the road and redo the entire thing at the cost of my sleep and sanity.Have a Funou under a magical night sky.
>>11386046looks nice
>>11384974ASS TO ASS
>>11386046Dick throbs look weird, head maybe a bit too small? The base of the dick looks like it's on her navel, it's very hard to see it as between the legs. The hand looks very bizarre, I don't know how to explain it but it looks like it's not attached to her body.Sorry if the above doesn't help much, can't give you an artist perspective unfortunately.
A new possible futanari
>>11386771Big areolas are good but the rest is pretty generic
>>11386771Feel like it would be better if kawakami focuses on current futa's and maybe futa on futa action would be more hype then just more new futa's
>>11385366Eyebrows are goid. The semi visible eye lash is fine.Looks like a good start.Yuri should peak sneak every 3 loops just to save a bit of work.Stars look fine but maybe add a moon?
>>11386775I kinda feel like everyone already has massive areolas, not that I'm complaining. Mara basically already has 70%+ coverage, so I don't know what this other elf will be like.
So he belatedly realized he had one too many darkies and hastily stuffed Kasei in for parity. I remember when she was a silver haired tomboy. She had a good scene but I think there was a missed opportunity for double paizuri.
>>11386782All I want is cute and canon Mara x Tansho.
>changed the page where Mara was cumming on a passed out YuriNah Ass2Ass was a mistake
>>11387232Mara needed some fullbody ass focus. Eventually, she will mark Yuri as her own.
>>11387257>Mara needed some fullbody ass focusThat is a lie every character has an over abundance of ass focus. Thanks to the Butt plug, the spanking, doggy style, DOG style, this chapter is like 80% Mara's ass.
>>11387268Compared to the rest of the cast, she sort of needed this level of focus it feels? From the onset this one was about her butt and asshole.Tansho also needs that attention.
Dead ass this chapter went from like a solid 7-8 at early stages to just a 4-5 at the end due to the changes that were made cause of those 2 clowns. Hope kawakami can realise it and doesnt listen to people in his chat again and just sticks to the shit he makes himself
I would love to see a futaxfuta chapter where Yuri doesn't get any for a night. The elves are already busy for a night with Tansho x Mara, and Umanami x Funou scenes.
>>11387487>and Umanami x Funou scenes.Probably won't get that since Pateron doesn't allow incest content.
>>11387450I agree. The lasts pages was such a disapointment
I'd love to see a dickgirl elf
>>11387535Then tell him that? He's willing to listen to other opinions. Too late for it now but for future chapters he is willing to think about things. Coolman and Kurohime have offered ideas he's ignored multiple times. He just picks the ideas he likes.
>>11384974Do dogs really fuck like that? Never seen them mate.
>>11387805No, dogs erections involve growing a knot at the base so they don't slip out because they have no thumbs to hold on. Sometimes when they are done the knot hasn't gone down but male dog still wants to attempt leaving. Somehow people saw this and it got memed into porn as something dogs do on purpose.
>>11387534Perfect time for the "she's adopted" plot twist
>>11387858Interesting, it must suck being a dog
>>11387487He already said he wasn't allowing NTR, and the slutty protagonist getting her just desserts is the only possible case where it would have teeth when the elves have already accepted her sleeping around.
If elves cam orgasm from both their vagina and penis at once, does that mean they can urinate from both?
