tryin to redo a local gym's logo for the sake of learning but i've been staring at it for so long now idek what im looking at. any help and or advice is appreciated
>>463192
i think its pretty good brother but i think with the lightning bolt + subtitle on top it might look more like a sports drink logo than a gym logo on a glance
>>463193i like the overlapping and the stronger slant although i keepy getting worried about the lightning bolt not being able to be read as a Y enough and i think this makes it a bit more difficult. dunno how i feel about the tagline>>463194i did think it might read like that but im still thinking about how to remedy that desu.
>>463193ended up testing that and some other smaller stuff here. i don't hate it desu. it makes a lot of sense for the lightning bolt to enter from out of the box with the name as if it was striking it. im gonna end up pickin one of these i made and offer it up to the gym for free