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>>8839299Someone who had never read ntr before could see this image and think it's just a page from a harem series.
>>8839307because reverse "ntr" is just thinly veiled harem shit, that's why OP has to keep making threads on page 6 to force his autism
>Laliberte actually delivered kinoSo...what know? Whats next to look after?
>>8839343Potential what-if scenario where MC didn't kill Kuroda.
>some people are saying it ended with everyone miserableHow? His mom and Ryoko are not miserable, they actually ended up in arguably better situations after their betrayal. Misaki might not be the happiest wife in the world but she looks genuinely happy with the kids when she welcomes Yuuto home and he gives her a pass to cheat.This is indeed a brutal ending for our boy though.
>>8839353>Misaki might not be the happiest wife in the worldOnly when Yuuto is fucking her, she's living her best life aside from that, raising the kids of her lover and getting dicked left and right. Plus she's flush with money thanks to daddy.
>>8839353not outright killed himself with the baby like Idol so at least he still has hope.
>>8839357Hope for what. He can't leave Misaki, cause she's the one wearing the pants in their marriage and could easily ruin his life with her father's wealth. She's basically forcing him to accept that she cheats on him and he's going to raise up his own brother and his wife's kid as if they were his own children. He escaped the island, but he's still a prisoner in the end. He ironically probably would have had a happier ending if he let Kuroda live. At least then when they got rescued the next day, he could fuck right off once they get back to society instead of being stuck with a woman that's gassing him up to kill himself for choosing to kill the guy she felt more compatible with.
>>8839358>He ironically probably would have had a happier ending if he let Kuroda live.That's what I like about the ending. It may seem that the cuck "won" in th end because he killed the blond guy, but the story show that he's still mentally in that island and never managed to get past it.
>>8839353imagine being such a huge cuck that some baby dick manlet kills you and steals your kids
>>8839362His sons will avenge him.
>>8839362His sons can get her nipples out, the cuck cant. Bull still wins.
>>8839358In NTRverse where dick is the only thing that matters, what can the cuck even do? With the way she is now though, I guess it didn't really matter if it was Kuroda, she just needs big strong cocks. In terms of corruption, Bitchmom > Misaki > Tomboy. The tomboy at least still has a certain amount of decency after apparently. It's possible that she chose her husband based on his dick though.
I'm losing my fucking mind.
>>8839358Lol you guys are forgetting that Yuuto is a murderer who killed Kuroda and both women know about his crime, he can't just go around doing whatever. Nonetheless that, I doubt that that doesn't haunt him somehow.
Where do you guys draw the line in NTR? FemMC spits on MC's face and tell him to go away? Tells him to kill himself? Abort his baby? Actually kills him? Allows herself to be groped by bully in his MC's funeral?
>>8839358idk he's still living and he only has to take care of some kids? He also can enjoy father's wife money while working himself so idk what's bad about that.Cuck's life sucks but it's still better than killing himself.In Netorare Jukubo Natsuko the son's life sucks too and all he has is just trauma as he still can goes out there and lives his life, granted his mother is ruined now.The real brutal is when the cuck is suffering with no escape ever (financially, socially, even his privacy)
still the hottest page in the whole story
I think my biggest problem with Paradise is that the art (or rather, the sex position?) is just not as good despite being a 4P work. The very best part is when Kuroda first entered Misaki's pussy. Ratatatat still runs the same plots or so but at least the art is fresh enough. Paradise feels like "damn I think I've seen enough of the sex already by this point" if you read from the beginning.Really tell a lot when you look at recently releases of Fence14 (230 pages) and Anon 2-okunen (121 pages) and Sadao (119 pages) lol. And that's not talking about sakai...
The best part in Paradise, art wise, is the part where Ryoko got fucked the first few times.
>>8839491>is that the art (or rather, the sex position?) is just not as goodWhat are you saying? The best part for me is when Kuroda starts corrupting Misaki, specially this page, she seems like she's being fucked by a beast, hot as fuck.
>>8839491It's not bad per se, just convoluted I don't think laliberte has done 3 girls at once before when it's just one or two girls it's fine
>>8839414it has been too long that it will be disappointing no matter what
Any NTR stories about the girl having some kind of supernatural trait/curse that prevents her from having a normal life with regular people but the bull is immune to it and therefore a perfect match for her over the guy she's in love with? Best example would be the girl being unable to touch or be touched by regular people (like the cuck) but the bull can touch her normally.
>>8839519I mean it still has some parts that are good but as a 4P work I don't think the sex are that good, especially when you look at the part where kuroda are serviced by all the girls. At one point I thought "the childhood friend is riding the cuck, the mother is licking desperately, and the girlfriend is pound like crazy" repeat for another pages. >>8839562 explains better.The next threesome/foursome works I'm looking forward are from sakai and airandou where 1/3 of the doujin I thought this is the best shit ever and then realize there is even more
>>8839491>damn I think I've seen enough of the sex already by this pointI can see that it does end up feeling like the same thing over and over again.sounds weird but I think it works better if the parts were split by defined chapters in a volume as opposed to how it is now. consequence of the business model I guess?
nigga terasu be looking at this and said, yep I'm gonna make a whole NTR saga out of this
enari makes the best ntr hands down
>>8839491>Paradise feels like "damn I think I've seen enough of the sex already by this point" if you read from the beginning.I haven't read any of Laliberte's other stories so maybe this is just his style but what didn't help that feeling was how boring the context of the sex quickly became. I don't think he used the island setting to its full potential when it came to them surviving and needing to work together. Some of it was there with the mom secretly fucking him, but having something more overt like Misaki having to reluctantly give him a bj in front of Yuuto in exchange for a few days worth of food would have been kino. Instead it was pretty much just your typical NTR mindbreaking sex on the beach the whole time while Yuuto watched, which is hot but also gets old.
>>8839476>He also can enjoy father's wife moneyYou imply it like Misaki would let him enjoy those benefits. I'd bet she'd go on fancy vacations and get fucked by thundercocks and leave Yuuto at home to take care of the kids.
It's just shit writing, the man is known as a hero, he's rich, he's famous, he killed his nemesis before he could be rescued but he still can't get over a cheating whore? Come on now, that's genuinely pathetic on visceral level and not only that it's highly unrealistic. At some point person detaches themselves but the author can't into character development so we are left with a bullshit ending. I read Laliberte for the art but his writing is godawful, if it was just cuckshit I wouldn't care but he tries and fails at being serious Spiritually it should've gone more like this: https://youtu.be/qMtYd1o6jRo
