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So is this the right thread?
Update, I couldn't finish the first part in time so it got scrapped and I had to turn this in before I was fully happy w/ it
>>7711499Since no answer was providedI'll use both of the threads
>>7711795yeah i'll use this thread as welldon't know why there are 2 of them.Anyway this is what polishing a turd looks like.Needed to bend that perspective and anatomy really hard to pretend like it fits...
Sketch
>>7711795Update
>>7712706How did you achieve the aged, grainy look on this? I like it
>>7712713Are youhttps://x.com/USA37107692/status/1962467612719546666Or is this a study done of them?
>>7711385I'm honored! Thank you! Got this sketched up, but majority the day was wasted on it being too hot to really function. Still need to do all the color fills on all the sketched pages I have.
>>7712812Study
Oh god, finally, a read thread. Be blessed, op.
>>7712810I think he used some kind of gauze effectLike a traditional canvas has
I've just been informed that this character always has clunge out, without exception, and I'm disappointed. I wanted fupa bulge against the undies.>>7711742This came out great. What's the meaning behind 66, am I missing a trick?>>7712822Can I ask what brush and what software you're using?
>>7713171They can't be upset with an alt for their troubles. Slip it in as a little treat since you've already done it.Have you returned to nsfw fully or are you splitting the difference with going up to spicy pinups?The 66 is in reference to the female character being a One Piece fandom OC and they're a vinsmoke sibling from a kingdom called Germa whose army is referred to as the Germa 66. All that to say, she is a true patriot >>7712706My only gripe is the lack of skeletal landmarks with the musculature of his arms, so they come off more as more balloons, but it could also be an intentional cartoony stylistic choice. Overall I still like it and great job with that battering ram, it's got genuine aesthetic appeal. The vintage anime fell is also pretty nice, did you apply a noise layer over the whole thing to get grains?
Fuck you you fucking niggers first you shit talk me and now you don’t include my drawing in your fucking dumbass op collage Jesus is going to fuck you to death in hell
>>7713347Which was yours?
>>7712567very hot. the moving table is a nice touch.
>>7713171CSP and here you go https://files.catbox.moe/7p5uvx.sut
>>7713347It's ok manI had four images on the previous thread
>>7713416Thanks you. Glad someone liked it!
>>7711385A proper op image, good job.
>>7712706nice, I like the grainy magazine look
any advice x2?
>>7714379Head too big.
>>7714379I did a quick rework of your lines, it's probably just faster that way than typing.
>>7714430Oh sorry, just realised I forgot to draw back in the underside of her right cheb. You get the idea though.
>>7711385Stop being so fucking autistic jfc. This is now the 3rd time IN A ROW, that you create a duplicate days after a new thread is aleady up.You wre even called out in the old thread where people were WAITING for you to make a new thread in order to avoid another duplcate fuckup from you.Now I'm convinced you do this on purpose because you want to shit up the board or create drama.
meh...Why do I get bored so fast.
>>7714430>>7714474Hey, thank you very much. I wanted to change and improve the hips - legs and the foreshortening in the forearms but I didn't know how to do it. Although I will continue with a larger head size, the mouth greatly improves the expression, so I will work on that as well.
I haven't done this kind of thing in a while but I'd like to get back to it
>>7714741why do I care what you're convinced of? Use the thread or don't.
>>7715630NTA but how do I know which thread to use ?
>>7715630Honestly I just enjoy the personalization of this thread. It did take a small while to show up, but I appreciate the effort (Vs none at all I guess) to create the collage in the first place feels like a small crumb of community kinda like the /ALT/ Threads
>>7715665I prefer it too. The other thread used one of the worst examples submitted and then didn't even link back to the previous thread in their op. The collage adds a touch of continuity and community, and I love waiting to see whose art got included.
>>7715697You sound like a gay faggot.
Knees hard.
>>7715764I am a gay little faggot. I'm gonna fuck your dad and make you my stepson.
>>7715630Of course you don't care, you do this crap on purpose, you fucking piece of shit.
how does one gain traction if I immediately get shadow banned on all my twitter accounts ?I don't even go past 3 likes and they're usually from other friends I've made on this forum.
>>7716223you should be famous if you want to post on Twitter
>>7716223Build your following in DA and Pixiv. Once you get enough people there, promote your Twitter. Similar accounts pick you up and the algorithm learns that people into same subjects and genres you draw are good audience to push your content.
>>7711385
>>7716319Another one. I can’t really do anything but simple little drawings like this. I hate how limited I am.
>>7716223pyw, "shadowban" is just a cope
Does the anatomy/pose make sense here?
>>7716394Well she has six fingers and I don’t think it would be comfortable to stretch the waistband between the pinky and ring finger. The right hand might be better placed on the hip. The right leg could be thicker up to, the inner thigh angling so that the top is behind her crotch and left thigh. Otherwise I like it.
>>7716403Thicker up top *
>>7716403Thanks
>>7716321What makes you think you can't? For me, it's always been a case of just planning out a drawing ahead of time. And beyond that, there's nothing wrong with the simple elegance of a pinup.
>>7716223Deviantart is a shithole, don't listen to that guy.Hentai Foundry is the best place to farm community and potential commission requests.You have to have at least decent art though, since your stuff has to be approved in order to be posted.
>>7716708>hentai foundry>you have to have decent art to get approvedi mean, what type of decent are we talking about?Anything with two tits and pillow shading gets approved.
>>7716578Idk it just feels like when I deviate from my typical supposes I end up with shoddy anatomy and awkward weighting in posture
I'm gonna draw a car speeding towards her in the background lmao>>7715831Agreed :(
sketch
Tried to do a coloured digital drawing which is something i barely ever do. First time using multiply layer for shading
I only draw women because drawing men is for faggots. God I hate faggots. Why can’t they look more like women.
shaking off some rust, and testing out changing to a textured screen protector.
Which titty coloring technique do you prefer, anons?
>>7718543Breasts usually aren't red unless they're literally infected or inflamed so left for sure.
not sure which thread is the right threadsome rushed sloppy drawings >>7717216gorgeous
Tablet: Kamvas 13Software: Sai2
sketch before bed :3 no time for the hair
>>7711385who made this cringe ass OP?
lazy sketch
>>7720871Jealous?
First time I tried doing NSFW. What can I improve? Am I polishing a turd?
>>7721411I'm a dumbass and resized it too much lol
>>7721411>>7721413Form and gesture. Now this looks like a female FOTM characer with big ass is sitting on a guy. It does decipt sex but it's missing the erotica. It's too sterile, it doesn't invoke lust. The female's hand and wrist show some appeal, it tells something about her mood and what's going on. But the bodies and heads, they don't tell anything other than it's an intercourse. When you draw erotica, convey what makes it erotic to you. What do you vision the characters feeling, how their bodies should curve, arch and be to convey the sexual setting.
>>7721411>>7721413Couple of notes, as another anon has said, form and gesture.I can tell you're looking at a reference for this, and that's very good. A lot of anons try to draw straight from imagination and then are surprised when their figures come out looking like mashed potatoes. On the flipside, there are plenty of elements that can actually appear visually unappealing when converted to illustration, so it's not such a terrible idea to push the anatomy in slightly unrealistic directions in order to achieve an appealing silhouette. The bend on that wrist is spectacular. You want to be really leaning into elements exactly like that. If you're aiming for the sloppy mom bod type don't be afraid to really push the weight of her body, the snap of her waist as it dips, and then pushes out again with the mass of her lower body.On a personal note, eveeeerybody forgets about the line at the bottom of the arm where the radius pushes through the skin and it's pet peeve of mine if you're aiming for realism lol, but this is just personal preference.
>>7721433>>7721453Thank you very very much. Yeah, gesture is something I neglected for a long time. I'm using reference for this piece and I was afraid of pushing too far and looking unappealing, turns out it had the opposite effect.Also that paintover is incredible, thank you again, that rendering is amazing, do you have any tips on achieving it? I've been only using a square opacity brush and I think it might actually be handicapping me right now.
>>7720078
>>7716394Try turning your head that far around.
>>7721433>>7721453>>7721477I have improved it I think. I guess I have to work on stylization as well, exaggerating the gesture and such.
>try to make a comic>have no idea how to make sex last longer than a couple of panelsThe story and teasing are easy, but the actual penetration... I've been looking at how some hentai mango do it, and I guess it's just show dick-in-pussy over and over again from multiple angles? Feels more like filler rather than content. Same goes for blowjobs btw.I thought maybe it's the dialogue that carries it, but pic-related doesn't even use dialogue. Dude draws 20+ pages of pure sex-scenes. And he has dozens of mangas just like that. I can't imagine coming up with that many original drawings of the exact same action.Maybe there's something I'm missing. What do you guys think?
Wow I suck at this
>>7721886I'd draw her taking a cock (She's cute)
>>7721648Came out great, well done. r.e. my brush, it's a custom brush I use in Sai 2 called Knife Blend. It pushes pigment around and has pen pressure enabled, it's what allows me to get those really soft forms. You can probably make one easily yourself with an airbrush base and then fiddling around with blur, pressure, and opacity. I set mine to have a hard edge as well, circular.
>>7721648It's not you, anon. There's no way to make that face evoke arousal. Like WTF is that?
Welp. I know i'm /beg/ but /beg/int/ doesn't want my NSFW posts, so I'm kindly asking for critique here again. I've been copying poses/compositions from r34, no 3D this time. (1/2)
>>7722057(2/2)
an goblina to heal your wounds and suck your cock
>>7713171BLog?
still in progeress
>>7722268finally doing color? good.
>>7722277yeah, i've been playing a lot more with color this year
Caffeine addiction
>>7722034You been under a rock these last few weeks anon.
My Art is So Cool!
>>7722289Any followup images to this?
This is my level now, what should i learn?
>>7722268i fell like you're doing the same mistake i do.you put too many lines where they don't need to be be.there's no need for most of the lines on the knees or the shinsjust let your subtle shading define the shapes.
>>7722057they look alright but not really much to critique.you have a cartoony stile that looks ok but the sketches are too mess to really point any glaring mistakes.fairly dynamic so not bad overall.
>>7723069it's funny, i've been thinking this all day at worm so i'm about to do some big edits to it
Is the placement of her neck + head alright in this position? I feel like it's kinda off but also negligible
>>7723479It's negligible. If the guy is pushing her head down, the neck would be angled down instead of up and necks usually are wider than what your current pic convey. Also the leash(?) is too low when considering the the height of the collar, in reality it would be located at the middle point of the collar. But it's just one panel. You need to start prioritizing how much work and time you allocate to polishing a tiny turd the reader skims over in 0-2 seconds.
revised lines and progress on the shades and effects
>>7723517Right, just checking. In my defense it's not a full-fledged comic but instead an after panel, so I thought I'd have to give it some extra care but you might be right. I was thinking that the leash is being pulled harder than the hand is pushing down on her head, hence the angle
>>7723535It's alright. You do as you see the fit best. It's not bad, I was just nitpicking on what my eyes caught.
>>7714430Downgrade
>>7723534i meant more like this, but it's a style change so maybe not to your liking
I wonder how long I need to grind to able to draw this kind of stuff from head? Maybe 1000 hours or something?
>>7723658Let's drop those shitty lines you use to cover your shitty confidence and let's start using charcoal pencil brush for more breathing sketching lines and we'll be confident in drawing the big shapes and forms as they should be instead of repeating the lines all over the place and leaving the guess work for the next day and layer
>>7724062always enjoy your art.your perspective accuracy is pretty amazing
>>7724088<3
>>7723614ooooh, yeah no, sorry, something about the lack of lines just doesn't look right in my mind for my art, but i appreciate the example
>>7723082I forgot I posted here. Thanks.>but the sketches are too mess to really point any glaring mistakes.I guess that's fair. I'm quite proud of the colored piece but getting pwned on 4chan helps keep my ego in check.I'm glad its cartoony and dynamic. I just wish my process was faster..
>>7711385Hornet from Silksong.
>>7722131Needs stockings. But hot nonetheless.
a practice
Coomers are a lost cause.
>>7724719Why do you think we choose the coom?
>>7724723Being enslaved to your dick is the same as being enslaved to women. You let women rob you of your life.
>>7724725some people just have an addictive nature and coom is their drug of choice. Nothing wrong with finding inspiration through obsession.
Making a fanart of that red haired gal on xitter.
>>7721557I can, skill issue
>>7711385>interracial shitdick slopvile
....
Yesterday I drew this for someone on r9k. I feel like the character doesn’t look attractive enough, and the liquid on the chest looks kind of off. Do you have any opinions or advice? it shoulf be Nessa from Pokémon
>>7725637It's not bad, but since she is on the beach, shouldn't there be some kind of highlights on her skin? Especially on her tits. The shading isn't bad, a bit too low in saturation but adding some highlights would truly make this piece shine.
>>7721648I have done another painting of the flavor of the month character.How is it looking? Decided to do thumbnailing as a way to achieve some better gesture,
>>7725674Good point about the highlights i totaly forgor. I tought the bigger issue was the shading of the arm that it makes the arm look blocky and how blocky the hand feals
>>7725757Better than your previous. Keep at it.
>>7725637The liquid is not following the shape and form of her body.Also pay attention to your line works. Lines don't just show the outline of the character. lines are supposed to show the form, volume, depth and angle. You do vary the lines, that is good. But pay attention to their relation and how clean they are.
>>7716394This is what that ended up as. Idk how to colour skin good but this isn’t that bad
>>7726303Regular white people's skin tints more to red than yellow. Shades also should convey sense of warmth instead of dark if you want the viewer to feel they want to touch the skin. The face and hands are the things that express the character's inner-state most so pay attention to them. The hair is messy, the neck is stick, the hair needs to be shown behind her head too.It has charcm but you need to learn how to convey the shapes and forms in more alluring way and learn how to produce beatiful faces, breasts, butts and hands. Don't be discouraged. Instead be encouraged to learn and improve.
>>7724062cute wiener
I felt I should say this.I wanted to draw a hot woman and then make her say something, but I didn't want to make her say stupid gooner bullshit anymore, so I made her say my opinions instead.My opinion is that people should be treated with respect, care, kindness, and dignity, regardless of who they are, what they are, or how they present themselvesThe combination of drawing hot women and simultaneously expressing my opinion sparked an unexpected fire.A lot of people revealed themselves to be cruel, bitter, and dehumanizing, and that was disappointing to watch.It also gave me a glimpse of what many women go through almost every day, every week, every year of their lives.It makes me sad. It disgusts me.Let me be absolutely clear.It is not hypocritical to create or consume NSFW and still respect women at the same time.The idea that NSFW *is* objectification, and inherently dehumanizing, speaks more of the viewer than it does about the artist.No one in porn is telling you to devalue women or to disregard their feelings, thoughts, opinions, hopes, dreams, or humanity.So you can't absolve yourself of responsibility by trying to make the point of "You made porn" or "she dressed a certain way" so clearly she WANTS to be devalued and treated unkindly and disrespectfully.NO ONE wants to be treated unkindly or disrespectfully.Not even you.I will not apologize.I stand firm in this position.If it makes you angry, I invite you to ask yourself why.
>>7726318that telepurto thing was stupid.
>>7726306True, i made the shading more red and added hair, its better.
new to this board but have something quick I did recently
>>7726318Doodled Tifa with someone's OC because the person got mad of OCs being used without the owner's permission in art
>>7726330the dick under the mask is hot
making some sprites for a personal project
>>7724114May not look right in your mind, but certainly makes it a lot more appealing. Your hyper focus on defining everything with hard lines has been your biggest problem for years and makes every piece hard to look at. It makes them look like pose-able dolls with flesh attached in a very segmented way. It's distracting. Like you understand anatomy to a degree, but hyper focus on it and instantly ruin the final product by not cutting back a bit. The anons example actually looks good and shows you have something, but you are seemingly incapable of seeing that somehow.
>>7726756>trying to talk sense to Gains Goblinwhy do you think we call him that
>>7725757Nice lady dimitrescu
>>7726950Yeah I used that video as reference, did not trace. Would that count as plagiarizing? Should I limit myself to using real life as a reference? Quite new to this whole thing, have been doing studies for years.
>>7726957if i could tell at first glance, it depends on whether the animator of that video has something against it and if you're selling that pictureotherwise it's nothing
>>7726957if you use it for practice then it's not an issue.if you copy someone else's work and your work goes viral people might complain and label you as someone who steals other's work. It doesn't matter if it's true or not. so just keep that in mind.
>>7726962>>7726965I see, thanks for the notifying.I'm not planning on selling anything, might take me a couple years until I'm at that level.Is it safer to stick to actual pictures then? Like the ones in the websites on OP.
Why do almost no artists do NSFW but in a painterly, non-linear style?
>>7726967it's really not that much of an issueif it's referenced just say it is when you post it.
>>7726967You should learn how to use references to do actual works.That picture is an example on how not to reference, because it became a copy with a different coat of paint on top and as that other anon said; people could take issues with it because of the glaring similarities.Also teaches bad habits like relying too much on copying because it's easier.This is a more advanced subject thofor now, focus on drawing
>>7726756it's also a thing with me cause sometimes as i'm putting down the lines i realize something looks wrong and make some changes on the fly, so i leave those lines in as guides now for shading cause the 'sketch' folder will just have certain parts be wrong after that if i'm trying to use it as a guide for shades
>>7726969My guess is that many people who draw nsfw also make comics or doujins, so they are more used to working with linesAlso, people usually start with drawing rather than painting when they enter the arts, as it is simpler and cheaper.If you want to see some nice painterly boobs check this dudehttps://danbooru.donmai.us/posts?tags=npa_%28sirokurokuma%29&z=1also, something I did during this week
>>7726969Mind posting an example?
These threads have convinced me that giving an entire generation access to infinite porn but no way to actually relieve sexual frustration is a form of psychological torture the long-term social effects of which will be studied for centuries.
>>7726969people don't like painterly stuff
>>7727157bro i just nut and get it over withall the people getting frustrated with not getting sex weren't right in the head in the first place
>>7726507gem
>>7726507Nice forms.
>>7726469Your art reflects your personality.
was doing some studies of beamerbruhs style last night and drew this up
>>7727106Crown SEX.
>>7727378he doesn't respect women
had to make a few changes cause i thought of some better positions
This is supposed to be Tae from Persona 5, but something's off about the face.
This thread is gross because coomers always take it too far. They're just too deep in their own heads to realize how unsexy their extreme ideas are.
>>7728389Nice Houshou
>>7728424Do you enjoy every piece of porn or erotica in thexworld or only the ones that appeal to you personally?
>>7728422Look at size of her hips/ass and compare it to the size of her head. Notice the head is even farther away from camera. Do people have bigger head or ass?About her face, do you remember how her character is in the game? Is that normal expression and mood for her? Even in her relationship scenes she's reserved and gives off colder vibes that create nice contrast to her loving attitude that she has problems to convey abd comes of insecure and embarrased.
>>7728389Marine SEX.
>>7728436Thanks. Is this good, or should the head be smaller?
>>7711385some sketches
>>7728504Where she looking? if she looking at us, bring the eye circle lower to her bottom of eye so that we see white above it meaning she's looking lower. If she is intentionally looking to our upper left, then those eyes make sense.The head-body-ass ration is ok. I dunno about the pixel brush and if you can make the lines thicker on the bigger parts and parts closer to us. But that is improvement.
I'm really trying to figure out a style that looks ok and is fast to do. I think instead of just cell shading it would probably be better to quickly cell shade and then apply some soft brushes.Just sticking to cell shading on soft things like clothing can be really hard and time consuming.
Big ass
Can't wait to never finish this.
>>7728857A sad day for futa enjoyers
ngl i avoided the nsfw space. but i notice a lot of the better artists do make nsfw art. there is something worth learning from them.
>>7729002What the fuck this is amazing. Can I have your socials? I can't stop grinning.
I'm way too slow at drawing...
>>7729330Quality work, though. Keep it up
What does IC think of this? Critique? Seems to have underperformed.
First time drawing NSFW and I hate it
Any advice ? i feel the arms looks weird, she is supposed to be on the floor
>>7729859i want to make the ass more big or more focused but i dont want to increase the size of the foots too -.-
>>7729860You know you can do a wide angle shot? you are not obligated to stick to limited angles. Just move the viewpoint so its closer to the ass than the feet.
>>7729859Her breast Is clipping through her arm.
>>7728857at least you get to a semi finished state. I have hundreds of these "ideas".
>>7728545does the empty space has any purpose? otherwise overlapping the two images might have a more appealing effect.
>>7729592The animation looks like an afterthought and detracts from the image to me. It'd've been better if it were static.
>>7730297They are just individual sprites for a rpg maker game i'm making. It's not supposed to be a composition thing. I included the woman to just show which character it is.
>>7729592She looks like she's tuning in to AM radiohttps://m.youtube.com/watch?v=NCblaS-IH6s
meh... boring
First lewd try. From a /beg obviously
can I get some feedback on how to make this more erotic
>>7731432Are they supposed to be not fucking? Her pelvis and his doesn't seem to line up at all
>>7731480yeah I think I might've fucked up lining them properly
>>7711385Michigan bros....
>>7713171Man, you actually made the character look actually good, not jap-appeal ugly.Amazing work.
>>7731572It could still be erotic if you exaggerate their size difference, but I'm not an expert at that nor do I know if that's what you're into
Any tips or tutorials on drawing pubes? Bonus points for pube peeks
>>7731367Very nice, what a climax.You've actually inspired me to make something like this
>>7731807yo hell yeah, glad to hear it!
>>7731622Still haven't reached the paragraph on kneecaps?
>>7731622Those circle highlights would imply a concaved dent would it not?
>>7731622Do you guys like fat women or not? I still can't tell.
>>7731945Nobody with a functional adult brain cares.
>>7731942I've noticed that they're just the outcome of internet whores using ring lights to post their booty pics and subsequently artists taking up the glow's shape with hardly any rhyme nor reason behind it
>>7728545its too much detail like you said. your workload increases exponentially if you factor in different poses for expressions or scenes, and forget about if you want different outfits or clothing items thats like another 50+ drawings you should probably just start with base colors for now and sketch out how many unique poses and CG you want as a goal, then work up from there once you get a better sense of total workloadmaybe you could ask for help in /hgg2d/ on /vg/ or /h/
>>7731945i'm unsure of what this question means, especially directed at me>>7731925lol i did actually and had erased the lines on her knees specifically to give a less detailed design a shot, but i forgot to erase them from the overlay layer as well it looks like, i should go back and redo that
>>7729592boob motion is a bit lazy and the motion is too jumpy. considering its the focal point you needed to put more time into that, everything else is fine
>>7732088why do you draw such ugly obese women? it's a monster
>>7731432The pose suggests that they're supposed to be having sex, but their positions make that impossible. This could work if you instead focused on the act of kissing, in which case I suggest you pull their bodies closer. The space between them feels a bit impersonal.
>>7732090well this one specifically is from UQ holder, and 'monster' is a more apt description than you perhaps intended
Been trying to add shadowing/indent weight to the foot but isnt coming out right and I'm not posting it. Need it? Suggestions? Thinking of adding highlight to the metal ring of the bottoms, or skin indentation/strap strain but feeling like it may push too far away from the style (too much detail?), and im not really sure where beyond shoulders. Up for any advice at all. Usually dont detail this much.
>>7732110Also hopefully cameltoe doesn't feel drawn on but that its underneath?
>>7732088>lol i did actually and had erased the lines on her knees specifically to give a less detailed design a shot, but i forgot to erase them from the overlay layer as well it looks like, i should go back and redo thatOk, I'm really glad about this. Thanks for replying.You are improving a lot. Especially now that you jumped into coloring your stuff I can really praise you on that. Usually people struggle a lot with moving into coloring lineart, but it seems it's going quite nice for you.The "lack of kneecaps" in your anatomy is something that was bothering me as of late. I'm glad you've come to notice this flaw as well.
>>7711385Any redlines or tips to make the BG perspective of the table/room consistent with the figures would be appreciated before I go ahead and finish this
>>7732085Thanks I actually will check that out.Didn't know those threads existed, I was planning to ask on /v/ eventually but /hgg2d/ looks much more appropriate.Hopefully they'll also give me feedback if something needs improving
>>7732357no problem, I've played a lot of RPGmaker games and follow JP dev progress on Ci-en sometimes so I know how much work it can beyou could also check out reddit /r/nsfwdev or /r/lewdgames for help or self promotion
>>7732292>Classic "DAMN I did a great face but UGH I have to do everything else too"Proportions. The man's perspective is fucked too, You're drawing at the corner of the canvas. His abs look like rolls. Dont go crazy on lining details. Either draw less of a line (more of a dot) or just do it with shadow alone.Colors are good though. Nice.
>>7732528I'll try and fix the body proportions, thanks anon. Bit unsure how to fix him and the girl to be honest since this is my first time doing this kind of angle/pose but worst comes to worse I'll just take the L if I can't figure it out. I appreciate it
>>7732292face is cute though even if perspective is wonky, not enough for normies to care or even notice
>>7732614Yeah I'll certainly try my best though, I wanna get better at making better goon art of my own OCs! :>
>>7718543I like the one with colour. They look mire feminine, especially if pink. It's almost like the boobs are blushing.
>>7721557I think you’re just fat
I got too much stuff on my hands at the moment
>>7711385sketch
>>7732752blog
>>7732739Proportions like the belly button and the nipples dont make much sense
>>7732931thank you for the critique>AEMG0
>>7732153alright, made the little change as the warmup today, took away the harder definition on the knees and the definition on the inner line so it matches the softness of the rest of her build, was this kinda what you were thinking?
can I get some feedback
>>7733061Yep, this is much better. The issue with that hard depression line on the knee makes it look like the kneecap is completely missing. I get it's a stylistic choice, but it's very confusing as it implies wrong anatomy.Good stuff lately btw. Keep it up.
¿drawing in right looks good?
>>7733663Damn, good stuff.
>>7733293The arms are too short and the girls expressions are absolutely fucking mid. They are not happy, angry, sad, nothing. Fucking robots and tin cans are more expressive. They are like Big Lebowsky "Well, that's just your dick, man".
>>7733695Neither of them look good. Why are their lips so big? They look like racist caricatures.
dude i have no idea how to fix this nor do i even think it's worth it desu.i think i know which artist you're referencing but i never liked that style
>>7733742Why is the shading style so inconsistent?
>>7721784Two weeks later and no response. I guess no one here has experience doing full comics.
>>7734212I draw comics. Your OG post showed that you don't understand erotic story telling so I'm not even going to bother helping you because it would be casting pearls before swines.
hi sex
>>7734165because im a dumb person
>>7734212Nobody cares about questions that clearly come form a retard that can't imagine how to make different sex poses.
>>7734383You aren't wrong. Good art requires intelligence.
>>7734231The point of the thread is to help each other get better. You're too good for it? Post you work.
>>7734408You reveal in the original post how you don't undestand hentai or erotic comics. You are confused of the erotic comics consisting of several pictures of intercourse.What there is to discuss?
>>7734423You lack reading comprehension. I know how to tease, to build up, to create creative situations to put the characters in. I was asking how to, at the climax of the story, do multiple pages of penetration while keeping the content fresh, without each new page feel like filler.Now post your work.
>>7733702I can't into expressions man why are they so hard
>>7734455>You lack reading comprehension. I know how to tease, to build up, to create creative situations to put the characters in.Yet at the same time you lack common knowledge of different sex poses?I call BS. You are either a shitposter or a delusional dunning kruger. Whatever the case is, talking to you would be a waste of time.
>>7711385I'm not an artist, but I'm collecting data for commissioning. Can you guys explain to what's going on with these two designs? Compare this pixiv dakimura art to this other oneDAhttps://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/135104059DBhttps://x.com/Guilty_WillPlus/status/1471828840301608961https://www.guilty-soft.com/goods/2021torikonoshimai_goods/(the cover where the blonde is holding her boobs together, and second link is the official site for those who don't care for twitter)Dakimura A looks so much longer than DB, but when I looked at the ratio of torso to the full body length, DA was 47% versus DB's 46%. So my question is, is it DB's sharper waist pinch and wider hips making the the torso look smaller? It also looks more appealing than DA's who I think has the more interesting and unique artstyle. Can someone chime in and explain the differences?And change of mind, I'll post the dakimura covers directly. This is DB I referenced.
>>7734530And DA
>>7734536I had to check over my math>>7734530counting from the base of the ahoge on her head to her toe from the pulled out sock, I got 585 pixels. From the base to her crotch I got 327 so 275/585 =~ 0.4701>>7734536Was 396/827 =~ 0.4799A ~0.1% difference can't matter that much, right?
>>7734516Coward.
>>7734618I'm not the anon you asked to post work.PYW, let's see how brave you are.Are you gonna do it, or chicken out?
>>7734649At this point I don't want you fags to find my socials, so I'm not gonna post my porn. Keep in mind, tho, I didn't claim to be better than anyone.
>>7734668>At this point I don't want you fags to find my socialsNobody cares about you nor your socials. Especially after posting this crap.
>>7734668blog?
>>7734668Sounds like me before I realized that nobody likes me.
man this Magma is bussin
>>7734065i like big sucking lips>>7734098is from an ai generation i found months ago
>>7734884AI is infecting every general...
magma'ing
>>7735148Finally, some cultured art.
Trying out Procreates new brush set
>>7735979And another
>>7735979>>7736031Nice stuff, the fixation with filled up condoms is quite pleasing? Haha
Greetings, /sex/. Cocks are not my usual subject of interest but I felt like illustrating some a month or two ago. Spiked cocks are very hot and rad I I think
how do you guys construct asses n' tiddies on women? is there an optimal shape
>>7736802>is there an optimal shapebig
>>7736802>is there an optimal shapePersonal preference
>>7736802flat
>>7736909>>7736924>>7736946so just contrstruct it normally then add some tiddies on in whatever way I enjoy?
>>7736802The optimal one is the one that you like the most. If you have no idea what it is yet, start looking for inspirations to save.
>>7736031 >>7735979Rouge PLAP, draw more.
long time
>>7736962Yes, that's about 99% what artists do
>>7736962I mean if you're talking about the torso the boobs are appendages you add to your ribcages. That's how I break things down anyways, construct the ribcage then add the salty water balloons
>>7737170>>7737168got'cha, thanks anons
Hi, I wanted to make cute cave girl design. Wanted to keep it simple since I'm planning on drawing this character serval times. Any suggestions or changes?
>>7736802Describing the optimal shape of breasts and butts is difficult, but I can tell you where I find references for them. In general, /gif/ is a great resource for butts if you keep away from the fat fetish threads. For breasts, I prefer not using real-life references since real breasts are commonly misshapen. I have a list of hentai artists that draw appealing breasts and reference them when needed.
NEET girl
>>7737384Why does she look like a Cherrim
>>7737912neet girl with a futa dick is way hotter
>>7737464same, I actually prefer using other art as reference for tiddies n shit. most real boobs don't look as appealing as drawn ones
Having trouble with the shading here, any tips?
>>7738057shadow casts and does not magically disapper when it hits something
>>7738058well i worded it very poorlyit doesnt only affect surface where shadow starts but also where it ends, is what i meant
>>7738057Use excess shadow and erase it where needed. It's easier to trim shadow away than add it
>>7738040I like the way you think, son
I need a second opinion, I have no idea how to color and do lighting. Wanted the scene to be in an ambient dark green shadow surrounding with white light from a screen from the front and came up with this using random hard light filters and add layers. I also figured I needed some skin color showing through so I just used a normal layer of airbrushed skintone color.I don't know if this works for the mood I wanted and whether or not she just looks like a zombie instead of the lighting working. Any pointers?
>>7738087I think it looks fine, maybe try painting on fewer layers while you develop your eye for color. Also remember that "normal skin color" is entirely dependent on what light is hitting it
>>7738819Thanks, I wasn't sure if the light hitting it was too much or if I needed to add more pink to make the skin look more appealing. I guess it's fine for now
>>7711385I practiced hands today so I put them to work
What can I improve, /ic/?
>>7739779what's your end goal? cause that'll help narrow down where to focus, cause i'd say the first thing to focus on would be anatomy and placement of body parts, but after that there's a lot of different ways to go
>>7739815Unbelievably based. Doorman yume?
>>7739779facestorsos from behindforeshortened limbsmarkmaking
>>7739815maybe sth like this. guy has no volume and his torso is too long.
>>7739955Do you have any tips for drawing two bodies interacting/touching/hugging/etc? Most of my practice has gone to single bodies and I'm not confident in drawing them intertwining
>>7740018melting two bodies together is the ultimate achievement. i stuggle with this myself. use boxes to avoid volume and perspective mistakes. you don´t have to start with boxes but use them in the processes to check yourself. draw hands grabbing/holding sth everyday. to get the final touch look at your favourite artists and try to emulate the elements you like.
>>7736031I like your condom bat
>>7739841Yes, I'm obsessed with Doorman.. V_V>>7739955You are very talented, thank you. I think I might've messed the drawing up even more trying to correct it. . .
more yume U_U
