by me
Not fat enough, missing a bukkake necklace, too much clothing.
>>7724537bruh
its a good start. my general critique is She's a bit LONG. shoulders to chest to stomach. bt keep it up its all there just needs a tiny bit more proportion work.
>>7724576yeah anatomy is so hard man
>>7724535the face is VERY good but your torso and arms need work. she has no structure, no bones to giver her shape which is why her arms are lumpy and her tummy is stiff.i'm guessing you just drew the arms and torso as-is? you need to see the body as a collection of simple 3D shapes and then draw on top of that. i recommend avoiding complex asymmetrical poses like this until you can master the shape of the body. try drawing the full human body at 90 degree angles, static pose. doing a front/side/back is really helpful. you are hurting yourself by cropping out the legs and hands.
why isn't she chubbier? pedo shit
>>7724622yeah fair point man, i REALLY struggled with anatomy so i kinda gave up those areas, i cant do anatomy at all :(face wie i got it tho but i cant seem to bridge the 2
>>7724535>shouldersfucked>handshidden>lower bodygone>hotelfuck youpick up an anatomy book
Here’s what I would change
>>7724823yeah :(
