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just did a quick sketch before bed

how are the proportions? are they that bad? sometimes i have trouble with putting the hair on the right height, i mean how much volume should it really have? i know its preference and style, but im unsure and give my characters way too much volume and it starts looking bad

its not my best work but id say it shows well where i currently stand, being safe

there is something about the eyes, hm are they too far apart?

i want to make it eventually but it feels so far away, idk if igmi
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>>7770500
i feel way safer working with pencil and paper, im way more confident using that and i usually nail the proportions pretty well, but with digital i’m still not confident
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>>7770500
do YOU like the proportions
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>>7770500
eye should be one eye apart.
mouth two far down
I illustrated it with my redline
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>>7770611
riiiight, thanks a lot, this was incredibly helpful
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>>7770522
i mean they do kinda work imo, but something is off…. but also it gives them a somewhat unique look
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>>7770500
>Not my best work
At least you have the guts to post shit unlike 90% of the fags on this board
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>>7770500
The proportions is wrong! You need to learn how the loomis method work or else that circle is just useless
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>>7770500
Uhm op why does this lovely young lady have a weird circle and cross on her face uhm humans don't look like that, silly. uhm
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>>7770500
As other anons have said, youre trying to use the loomis method without understanding why youre doing the things youre doing. Take a few days to really get the method down and then try drawing these anime characters again, I guarantee you there will be a night and day difference.



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