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how does my anatomy look?
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>>7773715
it looks soo fuckin sexy
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>>7773715
LONG LONG MAAA-AAAYAAAN
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>>7773715
I'm gay now
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depends on what youre going for. if youre going for realism, not bad, but needs work. too tall

if youre trying to be stylized, pretty damn nice, still needs work, but its pleasing to look at

in both cases it looks good
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>>7773715
it looks like your reference is an American superhero comic book character
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>>7773736
Thank you.
Here's one I did viewed from the back w no reference
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>>7773807
unfortunately it doesn't look like it matches the front view you did before
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>>7773807
lower half doesnt line up with the upper half at the front
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You should learn the body's correct proportions before the nitty gritty of anatomy.
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>>7773715
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=667s9MIafq0
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>>7773908
What part specifically isn’t correct?
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>>7774042

I just told you, anon. Your proportions are not correct, and they are not correct across the board. Most artists use head lengths as the unit to measure how tall a figure should be. Generally a figure is 8 heads tall, although some artists use 7,5, as that tends to be more true to life. 7,5 is a little less straightforward to use though, hence the 8. Loomis has a good schematic of how that works in one of his books, look into it. IMO Will Weston is the GOAT of teaching constructive figure drawing. He uses 8 heads as well, but in addition to that he uses a system of hand lengths which he explains in depth in his videos. He also teaches how to pad out those rudimentary figures he teaches you to draw with the correct musculature. You can find his courses floating around on the internet.
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>>7773715
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>>7773715
>>7773807
>>7773838
Good try, but it looks like you are winging it by drawing your idea of the muscles without considering that every muscle has a place where it starts and ends, usually on the skeleton. For example, in back, the deltoid should attach along the spine of the scapula almost to the inner margin of the bone (see picrel). In your drawing, you indicated the inner margin of the scapula but the deltoid barely covers the outer corner of the bone.
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>>7774075
hows this
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>>7773715
Man built like a Morrowind character
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>>7774827

A little better but still not correct. In this one the legs are too long in relation to the torso, as are the arms. The head is too big as well and the neck too long. These are the most blatant issues but hardly the only ones. I really want to stress that you should look into the teachers mentioned, because just flinging shit at the wall and try to see what sticks will never make for a convincing figure.



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