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Hey /ic/, what do you think of these construction lines vs the finished product? Rate it.
https://north-park-creations.fandom.com/wiki/Danny_Thompson

More art below
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Thoughts?
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>>7806766
My thought is that it would be really awesome if you killed yourself.
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>>7806714
why do you need construction lines for symbol drawing?
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>>7806714
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>>7806766
Why are you overly drawing the arms when you don't really put any details in? do you just enjoy how it feels?
It looks like somebody using a ballpoint pen and scribbling and texturing exclusively using a ballpoint pen during working hours, but you're using digital so I don't see the point.
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>>7806714
Are you a programmer by any chance?
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>>7806714
For the characters you're drawing you don't need construction lines when the shapes themselves are supposed to be construction lines, also why does it look like you don't draw half the circles by hand, namely the heads and eyes?
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>>7806905
Lmfao
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>>7806714
This is grim to look at
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I'm going to say that you simply lack effort since anyone can draw better than you in your current state if they simply want to. You never drew when you were a kid, did you? I'll say you lack good references since it seems you did bother drawing something resembling a sphere but you don't put it to good use. Right now you draw worse than Jim Davis' Garfield and any newspaper comic for that matter. Seems more like not giving a shit rather than anything else.
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>>7806714
Why are you scribbling so much when your final result looks like this? >>7806716
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>>7806714
What the fuck am I seeing?
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>>7806714
Seems like you instantly give up when you get to bodies and use flat shapes to construct your characters. Learn actual three-dimensional construction, that's what construction lines are for. Study why Adventure Time's art style works and yours doesn't. Also get a better inspiration source.
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>>7806714
Lack of talent or lack of effort? you decide.
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>>7806766
Stop pretending you're drawing on real paper. 8 year old me and artists before Photoshop would fucking kill to have all the digital tools and infinite ink and brushes we have now and you're trying to emulate the cheapest pen and cheapest crayons possible, are you for real?
That kind of shitty ass pen is for grading school papers. Your art teacher would fucking kill you if he saw all those unfinished sketches and weird ass facial features.
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>>7806714
Those aren't construction lines.
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>>7806714
Your art looks creepy.
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do dynamic sketching or even draw a box
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Why would you need construction lines are you a babby? Draw it or don’t.
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/ic/ how much would you commission this art for?
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>>7811418
-$20 you owe me money. A 15 year old can draw better than this.
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And I thought /ic/ couldn't draw worth a shit. Where are you from?
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>>7806714
This is sad. How can adults not be able to draw?
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>>7806714
I refuse to believe in anti talent, you're just not trying at all.
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>>7806766
Is this a joke? Why are they at different perspectives? Why are they so stiff? Like use a reference or something my god

It would have probably just been better if this was freehanded…
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These aren't construction lines. You aren't constructing anything, just sketching a cross on the head of what amounts to a stick figure.

Go to /beg/ and actually learn to draw. It seems more like you are assuming you know what you are supposed to be doing instead of actually trying to learn anything
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>>7814666
Damn Satan.
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This isn't this guy's art, he's using someone else's older art so he can be an ass to him.
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>>7814886
Because the actual drawfag didn't post it. lt is another anon
>>7811418
we get it, you dont draw, non drawfag should not be shaming anybody who draw.
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>>7806714
hey anon
gonna let you in on a secret
no one gives a fuck how you get from point a (blank page) to point b (finished product)
if it works for you, do it. simple as.
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Satan still says whoever drew these should learn to draw, he's below /beg/ tier.
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Going to be honest with you, if you can't even draw at this level then you don't belong in art. You really need better references and inspirations than fucking South Park and above all to actually bother following a guide.
These look worse than Cartoonnetwork and Nickledeon's bobbleheads on stick bodies.
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Why does your art look worse than this fly?
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>>7815912
tell me you dont draw without saying you dont draw
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>>7815909
>>7815912

The design of this character is simple, but there's obvious personality and understanding of gesture/form behind it (which OP's art doesn't have). That's how cartoons have been since the Mickey Mouse days.
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where brap art, I want brap art.
he stupid cause he supposed to make me brap art but they dont
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>>7815909
Toon styles are actually pretty hard to draw, I even found realism easier
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What? Wrong>>7806716
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>>7815912
seeing my flyday doodles outside of flyday feels strange. that is a ladybug not a fly.
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>>7817414
that is a sticcbug.
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maggie pesky spotted outside /co/
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>>7806714
I'm looking through the art gallery and I assume the top ones are you at the beginning and the bottom ones are what you've evolved. You really didn't improve at all neither regressed, you just don't seem to give a shit about drawing correctly and just draw however the fuck you want regardless of how unpleasant it looks and how geometrically wrong it is. You can't draw geometric shapes for starters, let alone biological things. Also I'm noticing some foreign artists in that gallery, but they're very few, barely 3 art pieces compared to your 200. They also have huge problems, but yours are worse because it's obvious you can't even draw shapes or just refuse to draw a simple cilinder correctly at all. Are you an accountant?
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chatgpt ahh thread
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It seems more like you are assuming you know what you are supposed to be doing instead of actually trying to learn anything



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