Pages 9-12 of Ren's Awakening Chapter 2 are up!Let me know what you think:https://rensawakening.com/chapters/2
>>7831595Is this a coming out of the closet story? Awakening what?
>black people
>>7831600I suppose you could say that>>7831609Yes
the art is gave me a visceral reaction of aversion. you should probably stick to tumblr.
Is this one of those threads where you want people to shit on artist you don't like by pretending to be them?
>>7831600a desire to read a different comic
>>7832249Is this solely from the first chapter? Is the second chapter any better? If not, how can I improve it?>>7832265No, I'm the artist. Please give insight.
I'm wondering if it's worth creating a TikTok account just to upload unedited time lapse footage. Do TikTokers even have the attention spans to read a comic?
>>7832478I just find the style extremely unappealing; the characters are lumpy and wobbly with huge, almost symbol drawn eyes and equally huge noses and the expressions they make just look dumb instead of making me empathize because they're so exagerrated. Personal style is not something you can easily fix, I'm aware, but it's my honest reaction. I'm not trying to shit on your stuff and I can tell you really are trying and you should never stop, but since you asked I'm being frank about what is ticking off a lot of my personal 'ick' factors when it comes to your art.
>>7832769I actually really appreciate input like that. It's why I go to 4chan. Mostly because there isn't an algorithm for content, but also because people are frank.Again, I hope this is better in recent chapters. I disagree with you on the noses, but I am trying to shrink the eyes. They have a tendency to be huge. I was trying to emulate the style of Samurai Jack, which didn't mesh with the more traditional figure drawing style. I'm really inspired my facial expressions. I like expressions that are nuanced, but I fail to emulate that too. Let me know if you have advice that can help some of these issues.
