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Ruru

can i show here my art? I want(...) 12/26/25(Fri)10:48:27 No.7837301

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can i show here my art? I want a subjective assessment that mentions all the mistakes Ruru 12/26/25(Fri)10:48:27 No.7837301 Archived

Anonymous
12/26/25(Fri)11:00:21 No.7837312

Anonymous 12/26/25(Fri)11:00:21 No.7837312

>>7837301
Some areas have no shadows despite being opposite of the light source. Wrong perspective.

Anonymous
12/26/25(Fri)11:02:46 No.7837313

Anonymous 12/26/25(Fri)11:02:46 No.7837313

>>7837301
bricks look strange

Anonymous
12/26/25(Fri)15:43:14 No.7837709

Anonymous 12/26/25(Fri)15:43:14 No.7837709

>>7837301
>gurofaggotry
Kys

Anonymous
12/26/25(Fri)15:44:01 No.7837713

Anonymous 12/26/25(Fri)15:44:01 No.7837713

>>7837301
Trash.
/thread

Anonymous
12/26/25(Fri)16:50:42 No.7837807

Anonymous 12/26/25(Fri)16:50:42 No.7837807

I don't really like the color palette. Greenish colors can work, but I feel like you put down the base colors first and then put the green over them, leading to an unplanned final color palette. The blond hair looks especialy a bit gross to me, the green and orange just look gross together. Also, I think you could benefit from pushing the shadows more, to add in some more contrast. In general, I suggest being more intentional with the colors you want to achieve maybe do a quick color sketch first and play around for a bit before committing.

Anonymous
12/27/25(Sat)00:25:45 No.7838232

Anonymous 12/27/25(Sat)00:25:45 No.7838232

>>7837301
I guess you referred an AI?